高考英語讀后續(xù)寫夢想故事類作家的夢想之路課件

高考英語讀后續(xù)寫語篇練習(xí)夢想故事——作家的夢想之路1題目分析讀后續(xù)寫題目再現(xiàn)范文呈現(xiàn)努力方向2Part1題目呈現(xiàn)3續(xù)寫原文MyfamilyimmigratedtoCanadawhenIwasaboutoneyearold.Inthoseearlyyears,wedidnothavemuchmoney.Ourhomewasasimplerentedapartment,whichwasratherpoorlyfurnished.Therecertainlywasnotenoughmoneyforexpensiveoutings.Asaresult,ourweekendswerefilledwithsimplepleasuresthatwecoulddoforfree,likepicnics,bikerides,andmyfavorite—tripstothelibrary.Thankstothelibrary’schildren’ssection,Ifellinlovewithstories—sillyones,movingones,andeveneducationalones.Iwouldhavemyparentsreadthebooksthatweborrowedoverandoveragainuntilweneededtoreturnthem,orIwouldpagethroughthemmyself,imaginingthestoriesinmyhead,eventhoughIwastooyoungtoreadthewords.4續(xù)寫原文5段首句Paragraph1：Asayoungchild,Ibeganwritingbymakingupstoriesaboutanimalsormytoys.Paragraph2：Afterafewyearsofconstantwritingpractice,myhardworkeventuallypaidoff.6Part2題目分析7點(diǎn)1：位于續(xù)寫第一段段首，流暢銜接前面的記敘文和第一段段首語；點(diǎn)2：位于續(xù)寫第一段段尾，流暢銜接第二段段首句；點(diǎn)3：位于續(xù)寫第二段段首，續(xù)寫銜接第二段段首語；點(diǎn)4：文章結(jié)尾升華，給予讀者正能量，揭示和強(qiáng)調(diào)主題。情節(jié)構(gòu)建的重點(diǎn)8續(xù)寫思路分析本文以人物的成長為線索展開，作者在很小的時(shí)候隨家人移民到加拿大，把去圖書館看書，去商店買書當(dāng)成快樂的事，作者創(chuàng)作故事，和世人分享，努力成為一名作家。9續(xù)寫思路分析Para1：Asayoungchild,Ibeganwritingbymakingupstoriesaboutanimalsormytoys.由第一段首句內(nèi)容“當(dāng)我還是個(gè)孩子的時(shí)候，我就開始寫關(guān)于動(dòng)物或玩具的故事?！笨芍谝欢慰擅鑼懽髡邔懼車l(fā)生的事，看到的事。10續(xù)寫思路分析Para2：Afterafewyearsofconstantwritingpractice,myhardworkeventuallypaidoff.由第二段首句內(nèi)容“經(jīng)過幾年不斷的寫作練習(xí)，我的努力終于得到了回報(bào)?！笨芍?，第二段可描寫作者的努力所得到的回報(bào)，夢想得以實(shí)現(xiàn)。11續(xù)寫思路分析續(xù)寫線索寫動(dòng)物、玩具——典型的人和事——回報(bào)——老師表揚(yáng)——獲獎(jiǎng)——作家12續(xù)寫素材13續(xù)寫素材14Part3范文呈現(xiàn)15范文呈現(xiàn)Asayoungchild,Ibeganwritingbymakingupstoriesaboutanimalsormytoys.IdescribedthecuteanimalsIsawandwrotethemintoshortstories.ThetoysIoftenplayedwitheverydayweresointerestingthatIwrotearticlesaboutthemandintroducedthemtopeople.Ishowedpeoplethepositiveenergyandpositivethingsinlifewithmysmallpen.16范文呈現(xiàn)17范文譯文當(dāng)我還是個(gè)孩子的時(shí)候，我就開始通過編關(guān)于動(dòng)物或我的玩具的故事來寫作。我描述了我看到的可愛的動(dòng)物，并把它們寫成了短篇小說。我每天經(jīng)常玩的玩具非常有趣，所以我寫了一些關(guān)于它們的文章，并將它們介紹給人們。我用我的小筆向人們展示了生活中的正能量和積極的事情。18范文譯