讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)熊出沒(méi)導(dǎo)學(xué)案高三英語(yǔ)一輪復(fù)習(xí)

Continuationpractice2 Takingpicturesofpolarbearsisamazingbutalsodangerous.Polarbears—likeallwildanimals—shouldbephotographedfromasafedistance.WhenI’mfacetofacewithapolarbear,Ilikeittobethroughacamerawithatelephotolens.Butsometimes,thatiseasiersaidthandone.Thiswasoneofthosetimes. AsElliandIcookeddinner,ayoungmalepolarbearwhowasplayinginanearbylakesniffed,andsmelledourgarlicbread. Thehungrybearfollowedhisnosetoourcamp,whichwassurroundedbyahighwirefence.Hepulledandbitthewire.Hestoodonhisbacklegsandpushedatthewoodenfenceposts. Terrified,ElliandItriedallthebeardefenseactionsweknew.Weyelledatthebear,hitpotshard,andfiredblankshotgunshellsintotheair.Sometimesloudnoiseslikethesewillscarebearsoff.Notthispolarbearthough—hejustkepttryingtoteardownthefencewithhismassivepaws(爪子). 相遇 ElliandIfearedthefencewouldn’tlastthrough30moreminutesofthebear’spunishment.ThecampmanagersuggestedIusepepperspray.Thesprayburnsthebears’eyes,butdoesn’thurtthem.SoIapproachedouruninvitedguestslowlyand,throughthefence,sprayedhimintheface.Withanangryroar(吼叫),thebearrantothelaketowashhiseyes.注意： 1.續(xù)寫(xiě)詞數(shù)應(yīng)為

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左右；2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。Afewminuteslater,thebearheadedbacktoourcamp.Atthatverymoment,thehelicopterarrived.一、文本分析1.故事人物：Elli—mywife,hadasinglegoalwithmetophotographpolarbearI—WhenI’mfacetofacewithapolarbear,Ilikeittobethroughacamerawithatelephonelens.2.故事主要情節(jié)：ElliandIwantedtophotographpolarbearsandstayedataresearchcampoutside“thepolarbearcapitaloftheworld”.→Ayoungmalepolarbearwasattractedbyourgarlicbreadwhenwewerecooking.→Wetriedallthebeardefenseactionsandhadtowaited30minutesfortherescuehelicopter.→Makingthebestofthiscloseencounter,Itooksomepicturesofthebear.→Weusedpepperspraytoburnthebear’seyesandthebearrantowashhiseyes.3.所給段首句關(guān)鍵詞：Afewminuteslater,thebearheadedbacktoourcamp.Atthatverymoment,thehelicopterarrived二、續(xù)寫(xiě)部分構(gòu)思：1.Whatistheconflict/probleminthestory?Whatisthepossibleendingofthestory?沖突/問(wèn)題：擺脫北極熊。故事結(jié)局：我們獲救了（不傷害北極熊）。2.Pleasefigureoutthepossibleplotsanddetails.Paragraph1:Afewminuteslater,thebearheadedbacktoourcamp.=1\*GB3①Howwasthebear?Angrier–actionsshowinghisrage.=2\*GB3②Howdidwereact?Wetriedhardtodefenseagainstthebear.(Frightened;ataloss/noidea…thegarlicbread!)=3\*GB3③Whatwas“thatverymoment”?Thefencewasdestroyedandthebearapproachedus.Paragraph2:.=1\*GB3①Howdidwefeelandwhatdidwedo?Relieved,delighted,excited…andtryinghardtogetintothehelicopter.=2\*GB3②Howaboutthebear?Frightened?Irritated?Intendingtoattackus?=3\*GB3③Finally,weweresafewithouthurtingthebear.三、語(yǔ)言積累1.Thatiseasiersaidthandone. 說(shuō)比做容易。2.followhisnosetoourcamp 順著味道來(lái)到我們的營(yíng)地3.pullandbitethewire 拉扯并咬鐵絲網(wǎng)4.standonhisbacklegs 用后腿站立5.pushatthewoodenfenceposts 推木柵欄的柱子6.teardownthefencewithhismassivepaws 用它巨大的爪子拆掉柵欄四、范文Afewminuteslater,thebearheadedbacktoourcamp.Eyesredandteethout,helookedangrierthanbefore,hisgiantclawssmashingthefencesmoreviolently.Seeingtheferociousbearlooming,wecouldn’thelptremblingwithhorror,atalosswhattodotobuytime.Wewerelikeacatonhotbricks.Suddenly,itstruckmethatwecouldthrowourgarlicbreadtothebeartodistracthim.Ifetchedthebread,yellingtoElli,“Thebread!”Innotimedidwehurlallthebreadwithourmight.However,nosoonerhadthebeargobbleddownthefoodinaninstantthanhestartedgrowlingagain,thenchargingfranticallyatus.Thistime,itseemedthatthefencecouldn’tholdhisweightanymore. Atthatverymoment,thehelicopterarrived.Overwhelmedwithreliefandjoy,wegrabbedourphotographicequipment.Asthehelicopterwasslowlydescending,itkickedupacloudofdustandastronggaleswirled.Envelopedinamixtureofwindanddirt,thebearroaredfiercelyandwriggledontheground.Weswiftlyclimbeduptheladderhangingdownfromthehelicopter,leavingthebearbehind.Wesucceededinclimbingintothehelicopter,heavingasighofrelief.Fromabovethebearstilllookedcuteasever.Cameraathand,Iseizedthechanceandsnappedsomepicturesofthebear.Istillthoughtitwouldbebettertoappreciatethecutebearthroughacamera. 這篇“熊出沒(méi)”的續(xù)寫(xiě)結(jié)局要注意不能以傷害熊為代價(jià)讓我們獲救了，要遵循“人與自然和諧共處”的價(jià)值觀。范文第一段使用了我們高中階段學(xué)的語(yǔ)法工具續(xù)寫(xiě)熊更加憤怒的表現(xiàn)，以及我們?nèi)绾瓮涎訒r(shí)間。比如獨(dú)立主格Eyesredandteethout,hisgiantclawssmashingthefencesmoreviolently;倒裝句Innotimedidwehurlallthebreadwithourmight.nosoonerhadthebeargob