2023學年完整公開課版短文改錯

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（短文改錯）Whattroubledoyouhaveindoingproofreading?Thelistofproblems:1.看不出句子有錯。2.看出句子出錯的地方,但答案不正確,或無法改正?！案腻e改錯，越改越錯”。因此了解改錯的題型特點，并在此基礎上加以一定分項訓練，掌握一些解題技巧就非常有必要。設錯方式1）錯詞2）多詞3）缺詞更正刪除補漏錯誤類型分析漏詞例Iwasmovedandmadeupmyminddosomethingforthem.^to2.多詞

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SuddenlyIcaughtasightofmyEnglishteacherinthecrowd.3.錯詞例Itisrealagoodchancetohavemetallofyouhere.___really注意：不規(guī)范答題,均不給分，不能手下留情學生答卷抽樣滿分答題模板如何突破高分瓶頸

專題分類突破短文改錯的錯誤類型雖然多種多樣，但是歸納起來主要有以下十個方面：一、動詞形

1.動詞的時態(tài)和語態(tài)錯誤.2.主、謂不一致的錯誤。

3.非謂語動詞的誤用

高考鏈接１1.Weweredrivinginthecountrywhenthecarstopworking.stoppedⅠ.從詞法和邏輯角度分析:2.Mary,aswellashersistersstudyChineseinChina.

studies3.IsawtheboysplayedgamesonthebankofthelakewhenIpassed.playing二、名詞數(shù)

1.可數(shù)與不可數(shù)名詞的混用。2.可數(shù)名詞的單復數(shù)的錯用。3.名詞的格的誤用高考鏈接2：

1.WecanfindalotofinformationsontheInternet.information2.Differentpeoplespeakdifferentlanguage.languages3.Themanisafriendofmyfather.father’s三、還要注意形和副1.形容詞和副詞的誤用2.原級，比較級和最高級的誤用。高考鏈接３：1.I’msurewe’llhaveawonderfullytimetogether.wonderful

3.Thisriverisn’taslongerasthatone.long2.Heknowsmesogoodthathecanrecognizemyfootsteps.well四、代詞格，細領悟

人稱代詞，物主代詞,反身代詞，

不定代詞的誤用及混用．

高考鏈接４：1.Therearetreesonallsidesoftheroad.both2.Ithinkimportanttolearnthecomputerwell.∧it五、介詞短語須關注，習慣用法要記?。饕疾榻樵~短語和習慣用法的搭配。1.Isawhimenterintotheclassroom.2.WhileIwaswalkinginmywaytoschool,Inoticedtwostreetcleanerssweepingthestreet.on１.冠詞a,an和the的錯用．２．連詞but，and，or,so和although的錯用．鏈接６：Whatalovelyweatherwearehavingtoday!六、冠詞,連詞常光顧2.Myparentsareverykindtome,becauseIdon’twanttoleavethem.so較好拿到的分數(shù)有：名詞單復數(shù)/形容詞副詞/冠詞/代詞.做題時應注意：敘事性文章首抓全文時態(tài)，以免理解有誤；論述性文章首抓名詞形容詞冠詞代詞錯誤小結(jié)1）定語從句2）名詞性從句3）狀語從句4)句式結(jié)構(gòu)Ⅱ.從句法角度去分析:1）定語從句（關系代詞和關系副詞的誤用）1.HeputitinasecretplacewhereIcouldn’tfind.which2.ThehousewhichLuXunoncelivedisbeingrepairednow.where3.I'llneverforgetthedaywhichIfirstwenttoschool.

when2）名詞性從句（連接代詞和連接副詞及從屬連詞的混用）1.Wewouldreturnatnighttohearthathe'dpickedupfromtheradiointheday.what2.Butitdidn’tmatterthatIwouldwinornot.whether3.Whenpeopleareplayinggames,theymovealot.

That

ishowsportsaregoodactivitiesfortheirhealth.why3）狀語從句（引導詞的誤用）1.Hegotupearly

inordertohecouldcatchthefirstthat2.Makeamarkwhichyouhaveanydoubtsorquestions.where4)句式結(jié)構(gòu)考察一個句子是否完整,是否存在否定誤用的問題,省略現(xiàn)象是否有誤,平行、并列關系是否混亂,強調(diào)句結(jié)構(gòu)是否完整等Asweclimbedthemountains,wefedmonkeys,visitingtemplesandtoldstories.2)Iparticularlyenjoyeddrivingthroughthecountrysidewithyouandsawthechangingcolorsoftheleavesonthetrees.visitedseeing3)Whyyouthinksomanypeoplestillsufferfrom

povertynow?do4）Hotwaterisprovidedfor24hours,butliftsworkdayandnight.5）Ithoughtitwasdulltowatchagameinwhichplayerskickedaballtoeachother.Therefore,myfatherlovesfootball.andHowever動詞形，名詞數(shù)

還要注意形和副

非謂語，細辨別

介詞、短語要牢記

代詞格，細領悟句子成分多分析冠詞連詞常光顧邏輯錯誤須關注短文改錯口訣1.以在有錯行改動一詞為原則.2.以改變實詞形式為原則.3.以單詞形式變化最小為原則.4.以添加或刪除虛詞為原則.5.以多“改正”少“添刪”為原則．６以保持原意不變?yōu)樵瓌t．1.通讀全文,理解文章.2.先易后難,找出明錯.3.對照考點,深入審讀.三歩六原則高考短文改錯應試策略及答題原則

四不改:

①標點符號不改。

②大小寫不改。③詞序錯誤不改。

④單詞拼寫不改

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文中出現(xiàn)帶漢語注釋的詞，在句中不可能用錯。

Don'tforget!Fourpointsthatwemustpayattentionto:Let’shaveatry!Practicemakesperfect.

單句改錯練習

:摘自同學的作業(yè)/作文.

1、Imetstudentyesterday.2、Heislookingamissingbook.a^for^3、Thebossmadeworkerstowork10hoursaday.

4、Hemarriedwithabeautifulgirl.

5、Itistimeofmetotakemydog.for

Mysistersawalovelycupwhenweareshoppingtheotherday.Shelikeditatonce.Thenshebentdownandpickeduptolookatapriceonit.Asshedidthis,lotsofteasplashedonhisT-shirt!Ihadtotryhardlynottolaughathershockedface!Mysisterwantedgetoutoftheshopasfastasshecouldwhenashopassistantcameovertous.Itwasturnedouttobeherowncup,thatshe’dleftontheshelfbymistake.Theassistantwasclearlyasembarrassingasmysister,forIthoughtitwasfunny!∧

ittheherhard∧towhichembarrassedbut/yet/while/andwereAPracticeTest

（實戰(zhàn)演練）Don'tmakethesamemistaketwice.不要重復犯同樣的錯誤。

Proverb高考短文改錯解題步驟

縱觀全文,理解大意逐句審讀,分行判斷先易后難,各個擊破還原檢查,規(guī)范答題返回OurEnglishteacherbegintoteachusin

September.ShehadbeenteachingEnglishformorethantwentyyear.Shelikeswe,andsheisverystrictinallofus.Althoughsheisabitoldandnotsobeautifully,butweconsiderhe