2024屆高三英語二輪復習讀后續(xù)寫之情緒描寫課件

She_______thisbeautifulpresent.（看到）She____________________.（非常開心）Hersmile_____________theroom.（點亮）

主語相同省略一個，動詞變主語不同加個（with），動詞變Seeingthisbeautifulpresent,shewasextremelyjoyful,withhersmilelightinguptheroom.saw合并升級wasextremelyjoyfullightedupPractice1看到…SeeingHe_________（聽到了）whathismothersaid.He___________________________.（受到了深深的感動）Tears____________________downhisface.（淚如泉涌）主語相同省略一個，動詞變主語不同加個（with），動詞變__________whathismothersaid,he____________________,withtears___________downhisface.改錯：Hearingwhathismothersaid.Hewasdeeplytouched,withtearsstreamingdownhisface.heard合并升級wasdeeplymoved/touchedstreamed/rolledHearingwasdeeplymovedstreaming,heWarming

up

2聽到…HearingHe___________howtheytreatedhisfriend.（得知）He__________likeavolcano.（爆發(fā)）Hiseyes_________withrage.（燃著怒火）

主語相同省略一個，動詞變主語不同加個（with），動詞變Learninghowtheytreatedhisfriend,heeruptedlikeavolcano,withhiseyesburningwithrage.learned合并升級eruptedburnedPractice2得知…LearningHearing…,sb…..,with…Seeing…,sb….,with…Learning…,sb….,with…學以致用：1.Hearingthis,Ramufeltamazedandcarefullylookedattheplant.2.Seeinghissuccess,hewasfullofjoyandlearnt“Nomatterhowhardyoutryit,weshouldfaceitandtryourbest”.葉美鳳3.Seeingthattheteacherwalkedtothefrontofthedoor,Ramufollowed……4.HearingthattheRamuwasinterestedinit,theteacherwashappy……(陳燁）5.Hearingthewords,Ramu’sheartcalmeddownandthetearswasfullinhiseyes.(張譯升）6.Seeingthatavarietyofplantswerealive,hefeltastonishedandsaid,“……”.(周楚幸）Paragraph1:（十二周）

WhenDadandMomarrivedadayearlier,theywereamazedtofindeverythinginamess.Momwasangryandshouted,“Listentome,youngman-Ileftyouincharge.Wethoughtyouwouldactlikeanadult,butlookatthemess.ThemoneyforfoodhasbeenusedupbutwhydoesSpotstilllookhungry?Whatdidyoudowiththemoneyweleft?”Janeexplainedanxiously,“Mummy,Spotissick,sowespenttherestofthemoneytakingittothepetclinic.”Paragraph2:

Danielranintohisroom,withtearsinhiseyes,“Jane，thereisnoneedtoexplainandMomwon'ttrustmeanylonger.”

ComfortingMom,Dadsaidcalmly,“Thereisprobablyagoodexplanationforeverything.”Hearingthelittledaughter'swords,MomunderstoodthatthereasonwhytheyhadnotimetocleanthehousewasthattheywaitedforSpotattheclinicallday.MomregrettedactingsoangrilyandwassatisfiedthatDaniellearnttoberesponsibleforothers.SheapologizedtoDanielsincerelyandhuggedhiminherarms,sayingthat“Youarereallygrowingupintoayoungman."眼含淚水安慰聽到小女兒的話說Paragraph1:

（十四周）

Somethinginsidemewastellingmewhattodo.Iwantedtohelpthepoorboy.AlthoughIhadthreechildrenofmyownandamodestfamilyincome,Idecidedtoadopttheboy.ItoldmyhusbandwhatIthought,andheimmediatelyagreed,saying,“That'sexactlywhatIwantedtotellyou."Itoldtheboywouldgivehimahomeandtakecareofhimforhismother.Forafewminutestheboywasinshockedsilence,withtearsrunningdownhischeeks.Thenhenoddedand

huggedustightly.Paragraph2:

Finally,wetookhimhomewithus.WeintroducedStephentoourthreechildrenandtoldthemthathewouldlivewithusinthefuture.MychildrenhappilyacceptedandwarmlytookStephentovisithisnewhomeanddiscussedmakingroomforhim.KnowingthatmychildrenweresokindandwillingtoshareeverythingwithStephen,Ifeltsorelieved.Mostimportantly,MichaelandIhaveeveryconfidencethatStephenwillgrowuphealthilyandhappilyinourfamily說淚流滿面擁抱知道Paragraph1:

（第三周）

Sheledmetoaroomandreachedforherbaglyingonachair.Shehandedmesomemoney.“Pleasetakethismoneyandsubmityourfees,"shesaidinasoftvoice.Ihesitated,notknowingwhattodo.Butshesmiledwarmly,andplacedthemoneyinmyhandsfirmly.“Youreducationisveryimportant.Iamspendingthemoneyforagoodpurpose,"shesaid.

Movedbyherunexpectedgrace,Istoodthererootedtothespot.Paragraph2:

Iaskedthewomantogivemeheraddressandpromisedtoreturnitlater.“Thereisnoneedtoreturnit.You'dbettertakegoodcareofyourfather,andyoushouldstaystrong!"shedeclared,pattingmeontheshouldergentlyand

sayinggoodbyetome.Iconveyedthankstoheroverandoveragain.Inordertomeether,Iwenttothehospitalmanytimes,butitwasstrangethatInevermetheragain.Fromthenon,Istudiedharderandgaveothersahelpfulhandlikethatangelwoman.不知道做什么感動拍

讀后續(xù)寫微技能寫作指導

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情感描寫

教學目標:Bytheendoftheclass,studentswillbeableto:1.Mastersomewordsaboutemotions.2.Mastersomeofthewritingskills.3.Expressdifferentfeelingsinwritingproperly.emotion

happy,glad,delighted,excited,joyful,pleasedangry,annoyed,mad,crosssad,upset,depressed,sorrowfulsurprised,amazed,astonished,shockedfearful,frightened,scared

WhatdotheexpressionsmeanonWeChat?12345萬能句式一:adj.1andadj.2,sb.+did,doing觀察句子結構：Exhaustedandhopeless,Janedraggedherselfthroughthethickforest,hopingthehelicoptertocomebackagain.簡感到精疲力竭,亳無希望,吃力地穿過茂密的森林,希望直升飛機能再飛回來.示例: 1.他站起身來領獎。Hestooduptoaccepttheprize.升級:又意外又開心，他站起身來去領獎，感到非常自豪。Surprisedanddelighted,hestooduptoaccepttheprize,feelingproud.2.杰克低下頭回到座位上。Jackloweredhishead

andsteppedbacktohisseat.升級:杰克感到又羞愧又尷尬,他低下頭,一言不發(fā)地回到座位上Ashamedandembarrassed,Jackloweredhishead,steppingbacktohisseatwithout(saying)aword.3.我們早早就在校門口集合.Wegatheredattheschoolgateearly.句式升級:滿懷熱情和渴望，我們早早就在校門口集合，又說又笑。Eagerandenthusiastic,wegatheredattheschoolgateearly,chattingandlaughingallthetime.用法體驗:1.非常興奮，我們全神貫注地和同學商討著建議，希望能幫助解決這個問題。Excitedandwhole-hearted,wediscussed

suggestionswithourclassmates,hopingtohelpsolvetheproblem.2.他感到筋疲力盡,上床睡覺去了,希望睡個好覺。Tiredandexhausted,hewenttobed,hopingtohaveagoodsleep.3.心滿意足的，姐姐看了看這些花，認為它們是世界上最奇妙的作品。Satisfiedandcontent,mysisterstaredattheflowers,regardingthemasthemostmarvelousworkintheworld.萬能句式二:

doing...,sb.feltagreatsenseof+情緒名詞+wellingupinsb’sheartandsurgingthroughsb.

看/聽/知道，某人感到一股強烈的……在內心升騰、奔涌用法示例:1.Seeinghisdaughtersafeandsound,hefeltagreatsenseofreliefwellingupinhisheartandsurgingthroughhim.2.Seeinghishusbandchattingwithabeautifulgirl,Janefeltagreatsenseofjealousywellingupinherheartandsurgingthroughher.練習：1.當她知道考試結果時，她興奮極了。Whensheknewtheresultofthetest,shefeltexcited.句式升級:Knowingtheresultofthetest,shefeltagreatsenseofexcitementwellingupinherheartandsurgingthroughher.2.她傷心不已。Shefeltextremelysad.升級:Seeingthemarksonthetestpaper,she

feltagreatsenseofsadness

wellingupinherheartandsurgingthroughher.3.聽見他說的話，Alice笑了，一股幸福的浪潮涌上她的心頭。Hearingwhathesaid,Alicesmiledand

feltagreatsenseofhappinesswellingupinherheartandsurgingthroughher.

1.非常興奮，我們全神貫注地和同學商討著建議，希望能幫助解決這個問題。2.他感到筋疲力盡,上床睡覺去了,希望睡個好覺。3.心滿意足的，姐姐看了看這些花，認為它們是世界上最奇妙的作品。4.當她知道考試結果時，她興奮極了。5.她傷心不已。6.聽見他說的話，Alice笑了，一股幸福的浪潮涌上她的心頭。萬能句式一:adj.1andadj.2,sb.+did，doing...

萬能句式二:

doing...,sb.feltagreatsenseof+情緒名詞+wellingupinsb’sheartandsurgingthroughsb.

1.非常興奮，我們全神貫注地和同學商討著建議，希望能幫助解決這個問題。Excitedandwhole-hearted,wediscussed

suggestionswithourclassmates,hopingtohelpsolvetheproblem.2.他感到筋疲力盡,上床睡覺去了,希望睡個好覺。Tiredandexhausted,hewenttobed,hopingtohaveagoodsleep.3.心滿意足的，姐姐看了看這些花，認為它們是世界上最奇妙的作品。Satisfiedandcontent,mysisterstaredattheflowers,regardingthemasthemostmarvelousworkintheworld.4.當她知道考試結果時，她興奮極了。Knowingtheresultofthetest,shefeltagreatsenseofexcitementwellingupinherheartandsurgingthroughher.5.她傷心不已。Seeingthemarksonthetestpaper,shefeltagreatsenseofsadness

wellingupinherheartandsurgingthroughher.6.聽見他說的話，Alice笑了，一股幸福的浪潮涌上她的心頭。Hearingwhathesaid,Alicesmiledand

feltagreatsenseofhappinesswellingupinherheartandsurgingthroughher.《天天練》P72

Alilookedupandsawtheotherboysrushingahead.不愿放棄，他盡可能快地跑，希望贏得第三名.Hedashedacrossthefinishinglineandwonthefourthprize.想到他會讓他妹妹失望,Alicouldn'thelpsobbing.JustthenhesuddenlyheardtheannouncementfromthebroadcastthathewonthethirdprizeastherunnerwhocollidedwithAliwasdisqualifiedforbreakingtherule.拿著鞋子在胸前duringtheawardceremony,Ali感到很開心becauseheeventuallywontheshoesforhissister.

Filledwithpleasure,Aliwalkedhomequickly.Hecouldnotwaittoseehissister.Onhisarrival,AlifoundZahrawaswaitingoutside.緊張又焦急,Zahrawonderedwhetherherbrotherhadbroughtherwhatshewasexpecting.“Zahra，seewhatIhavegotforyou,"Alisaidexcitedly,從包里拿出獎品.TheinstantZahrasawtheshoes,herfacelitup.

SothrilledwasshethatshethrewherselfatAli.“Thankyou!Ali."開心又激動，兩兄妹緊緊擁抱在一起，笑著跳著?！短焯炀殹稰72

Alilookedupandsawtheotherboysrushingahead.Refusing/Unwillingtogiveup,heranasfastashecould,hopingtowinthethirdprize.Hedashedacrossthefinishinglineandwonthefourthprize.Thinking(that)hewouldlethissisterdown,Alicouldn'thelpsobbing.JustthenhesuddenlyheardtheannouncementfromthebroadcastthathewonthethirdprizeastherunnerwhocollidedwithAliwasdisqualifiedforbreakingtherule.Holdingtheshoesclosetohischestduringtheawardceremony,Alifeltagreatsenseofhappinesswellingup