2023學(xué)年完整公開課版九上U8Task楊琦

Unit8

Detective

stories

TaskHowtoplanadetectivestoryAdetectivestoryWhenWhereWhoWhatWhyHow

victim,suspect,witnessclue…agoldnecklace

What

doyouknowfromthepicture?

Whatdoyouknowfromthepicture?

What

doyouknowfromthepicture?

Whatdoyouknowfromthepicture?AwitnesssawsomeonerunningintoBruce’sbuilding.Bruceplannedtotakethenecklacetothepolicestationthenextday.Oneday,Brucefoundagoldnecklaceoutsidehisdoor.Brucewaschargedwiththeft.Readandmatchc.Oneday,Brucefoundagoldnecklaceoutsidehisdoor.b.Bruceplannedtotakethenecklacetothepolicestationthenextday.AwitnesssawsomeonerunningintoBruce’sbuilding.d.Brucewaschargedwiththeft.cbad

HelpMilliecompletethesentences

BruceandthetheftBrucegetsalongwithallofhisneighboursexceptthemanwholivesnextdoor.Themanneverspeakstoanyone,andnooneknowswhathedoesforaliving.Oneday,whenBrucecamehomefromwork,hefounda__________outsidehis__________.Brucewonderedwhereitcamefrom.Brucethoughtthatperhapssomeonehaddroppedthenecklace.Heplannedtotakeittothe______________thenextday.Justthen,a___________cametoBruce’shomeandsawthenecklaceinhishand.Brucewasverysurprisedwhenhewaschargedwith_________.Thepolicemantoldhimthatsomevaluablejewelleryhadbeennecklacedoorpolicestationpolicemantheftstolen.A__________saidthatshehadseensomeonerunfromthejewelleryshopinto____________________rightafterthetheft.Brucewasnotguilty,butnowhowcouldheproveit?witnessBruce’sbuilding①Brucegetsalongwithallofhisneighboursexceptthemanwholivesnextdoor.Themanneverspeakdtoanyoneandnooneknowswhathedesforaliving.②Oneday,whenBrucecamehomefromwork,hefoundagoldnecklaceoutsidehisdoor.Brucewonderedwhereitcamefrom.③Brucethoughtthatperhapssomeonehaddroppedthenecklace.Heplannedtotakeittothepolicestationthenextday.Justthen,apolicemancametoBruce’shomeandsawthenecklaceinhishand.Brucewasverysurprisedwhenhewaschargedwiththeft.Thepolicemantoldhimthatsomevaluablejewelleryhadbeenstolen.AwitnesssaidthatshehadseensomeonerunfromthejewelleryshopintoBruce'sbuildingrightafterthe

theft.④Brucewasnotguilty…Youcanwriteastorylikethis!IntroductionMainbodyConclusionDiscussion:Waystosaveyourselfwhenyouarekidnapped.KeepcalmandrememberwhatyouhaveseenTrytofindchancestoescape.Ifpossible,runawayquietlywhenthekidnapperisasleep.TrytoleavesomecluesforotherstofindyouShoutloudlyforhelpwhensomeonecomecloseBrucewasnotguilty,buthowcouldheproveit?WorkingroupsoffourtofindawaytohelpBruce.Writeanendingtothestory.StorytimedcefabStepII:Findoutwhattheyaresaying!a.I’llhavetochecktheseforfingerprints.b.You’reunderarrestformurder.f.Wedidn’tseeorhearanything.Wewerehavingaparty.e.Idon’tknow.I’veneverseenhimbefore.d.We’dbettercallthepolice.c.Hewasmurdered.Startlookingforclues.Remembertoincludethefollowingpointsinyourstory.★Adescriptionofthecrime★Anyobjectsorcluesfoundatthesceneofthecrime★Adescriptionofthesuspect★HowthedetectivefindsthecriminalMrWanggotalongwithhisneighboursexceptthecookcalledNick.Oneday,MrandMrsZhangfoundthebodyofMrWang.Theygotveryscaredandcalledthepoliceassoonaspossible.DetectiveLicheckedthesceneofthecrimeafterarrivingthere.ThenheconfirmedthatMrWangwasmurdered.SoDetectiveListartedtolookformoreclues.WhenDetectiveLiaskedNickforsomeclues,NicksaidhehadnothingtodowithMrWangandthiscrime.MrandMrsZhanglookedworriedandsaidtheydidn’tseeorhearanythingbecausetheywerehavingapartywhenDetectiveLiaskedthem.Luckily,DetectiveLifoundaknifewhichwascoveredinbloodandagunfromrubbishbinnearby.AfterDetectiveLicheckedtheseforfingerprints,hewassurethatNickwasthemurderer.Finally,Nickwasunderarrestformurder.background

√time&characters

√Place?processresultcause√√?

MrsSunwasanoldladyShelivedaloneandwenttotheparkeverydaytopracticet’aichi.LastThursday，MrsSun’sneighbours，MrandMrsLi，noticedthattheyhadnotseenMrsSunthewholeday.shehadn’tgonetotheparkinthemorningasusualtoexercise.MrsLibecameworried.SoshewenttoknockatMrsSun’sdoorwithherhusband.Totheirgreatsurprise,MrsSunwasdeadonthefloor.Therewasbloodaroundher.

MrandMrsLicalledthepolice.DetectiveZhaoarrivedthereatonce.HeaskedtheLiwhethertheyhadfoundsomethingunusual

thenightbefore.Atthesceneofthecrime,DetectiveZhaofoundaknife.HecheckedtheknifeforthefingerprintsandfoundthefingerprintsbelongedtoLiangYong,ayoungmanwholivednotfarfromMrsSun.DetectiveZhaoarrestedLiangYongformurder,LiangYongadmittedthathekilledtheoldladysothathecouldsteal

about150.000yuanfromMrsSun.Outline:Background:Mainbody:Conclusion:timeplacecharacterscauseprocess(經(jīng)過)result1.CompleteContent(完整的內(nèi)容)2.Richdetaildescriptions豐富的細節(jié)描寫WritingtipsforyouUsethecorrecttense(時態(tài)).Atleast80words.Payattentiontoyourhandwriting.AdescriptionofthesceneofthecrimeDescriptionsofthevictim,witnessesandsuspectHowthedetectivefindsthecriminalAdescriptionofthetimeofthecrimeWhythemurdererkilledthevictimWhothemurde