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PARTFOUR:HANDBOOKOFSENTENCESKILLS

Chapter20:Fragments

Activity1onDependentWordGroups(407-408)

Note:Answerswillvary;examplesareshown.

UnlessIstartpracticingmore,Iamnotgoingtoperformverywellattherecital.

AlthoughIhadstudiedforseveralhours,Istilldidn’tpasstheexam.

BecauseIhadjustgottenpaid,Iwasabletobuyallmytextbooks.

Untilthenewmallopened,weshoppedintown.

ThecarthatIboughtturnedouttobealemon.

Activity2onDependent-WordFragments(page408)

1. WheneverIturnonthevacuum,mycatflattensherselfandtriestogetoutoftheroom.

…room,wheneverI….

2. PhiladelphiawasoriginallyaQuakercolony.ThatwasfoundedbyWilliamPennin1681.

…QuakercolonythatwasfoundedbyWilliamPennin1861.

3. Annaisthemanagerofthenewneighborhoodgarden.Thatwasstartedtoencouragepeopletogrowtheirownfood.

…gardenthatwasstartedtoencouragepeopletogrowtheirownfood.

4.SinceConnorfirstbeganwatchingNOVA.Hehasbeenfascinatedwithspace.

…NOVA,hehasbeen….

5.Romanlawwasfirstrecordedin450B.C.inwhatwasknownasthe“twelve

tablets.”Itlastedformanycenturies.UntilthefalloftheeasternRomanEmpirenearly2,000yearslater.

…formanycenturiesuntilthefallof…

Activity3on-ingFragments(page410)

1. RamsesIIruledoverEgyptfrom1279to1212B.C.,makinghiscountrystrongerthaneverbefore.

2. …street.Itcametoastopatmyhouse.

3. Thereasonforthiswasthataresearchpaperhadjustbeenassignedtostudentsinanancienthistoryclass.

Activity4on-ingandtoFragments(410-411)

Note:Answersmayvary.

1. Knowingshehadnotfinishedthebook,Madelynwasverynervousaboutgoingtoclass.

2. Ihiredaneighborboytomowmylawnandweedthegarden.

3. Searchingfortherightfilamentforhisincandescentlightbulb,ThomasEdison(1847-1931)foundthatastripofcarbonizedbamboocouldglowfor1,200hours.

4. CullenandBrysonhavebeenfriendssincefirstgrade.TheyaregraduatingfromhighschoolthisMay.

5. Togethiscompanytogrowrapidly,HarveyFirestonelaunchedavigorousmarketingcampaign.

Activity5onAdded-DetailFragments(page412)

1. [Forexample,purchasingclothesatadiscountedprice.]Forexample,shepurchasesclothesatadiscountedprice.

2. Severalnineteenth-centuryinventorshaddesignedself-propelledvehiclesliketheonethatranonhigh-pressuresteam.

3. Ilovetoeat“b”vegetablessuchasbroccoli,Brusselssprouts,andbeans,becausetheyarefullofvitamins.

Activity6onAdded-DetailFragments(413)

Note:Methodsofcorrectionmayvary.

1. Themusicfestivalhadanamazinglineup.Forexample,theBlackEyedPeas,Maroon5,andColdplayareallscheduledtoperform.

2. SomeEuropeancountries,suchasSwitzerlandandPortugal,remainedneutralduringWorldWarII.

3. Thehousewasoverrunwithcats.Atleasttwentyofthemlivedthere.

4. Chloelovestocollectrarepiecesofpotterylikejasperware.

5. IknowwhyIhadtolearncertainsubjectsinhighschool,suchasAmericanhistory.

Activity7onMissing-SubjectFragments(page414)

Note:Methodsofcorrectionmayvary.

1. Benlovestostudymathandscience,butherefusestostudyhistory.

2. Theyhaveanamazinggluten-freespinachpizzawithfreshnut-freepesto.

3. Kendallisallergictodairy.Shegoesintoanaphylacticshockandlosesherabilitytobreathe.

4. WhenwearrivedinChicago,wetookatrainfromtheairporttothecenterofthecity.Thenwewalkedafewblockstoourhotel.

5. Nextfall,Iplantotakeacourseincalculusandtojointhemathematicsclub.

ReviewTest1(415-416)

1. F 5. F 9. C 13. C 17. F

2. C 6. C 10. F 14 F 18. C

3. C 7. C 11. C 15. C 19. F

4. C 8. F 12. F 16. C 20. C

Corrections

Note:Methodsofcorrectionmayvary.

1. Forchildreninareasthatgetsnow,therearestagesofsnowdays.

5. Makingsnowmen,drinkinghotchocolate,andwatchingmoviesarefavoriteactivities.

8. …excitementofdayone,butoftenleadintocabinfever,boredom,andfrustration.

10. Althoughmoviesarestillanoption,parentsbegintofeelguiltythat…

12. Theysuggeststudying.

14. However,ifmoresnowdaysoccur,realitysetsinanddespondencygrows...

17. …tomaintainnormalcy,andtheystartbargainingwiththeschooldistrict….

19. Thefinalstageforparentsisdespair,asthekidsgrowmoreandmorerestless.

ReviewTest2(416-417)

1. Webothbegantotireaswepassedthehalfwaymarkintherace.ButwheneverI’dhearReggie’sfootstepsbehindme,Iwouldpumpmylegsalittlefaster.

2. TheAmericanSouthwestishometoseveralNativeAmericannations,suchastheNavajo,theApache,andthePueblo.TheEastisthelandoftheHuronandIroquois,alongwiththeDelawareandtheMohegan.

3. Punchingallthebuttonsontheradioinsequence,Philkeptlookingforagoodsong.Hewasinthemoodtocruisedownthehighwayandsingatthetopofhisvoice.

4. Mychildrenjokethatwecelebrate“Hanumas”withourJewishneighbors.WeshareHanukkahandChristmasactivities,includingmakingpotatopancakesattheirhouseanddecoratingourtree.

5. Popartistsgainedfameinthe1950s,reactingtothemoreestablishedartformslikeexpressionism,whichprecededthem.Theyportrayedcommonimagesfromeverydaylife,suchasCokebottlesandsoupcans.

6. Ourlandlordofteninviteshertenantstodinner,andallowsthemtouseherwasheranddryer.Bydoingsuchthings,shehasbecomeknownasthekindestpersoninourneighborhood.

7. Thealleybehindourhousewasflatexceptforawidegrooveinthecenter.Weusedtosailpaperboatsdownthegroovewheneveritrainedhardenoughtocreatea“river”there.

8. Donpassedthecomputerschool’saptitudetest.Thisqualifieshimforninemonthsoftraining.Donkiddedthatanyonecouldbeacceptedifheorshehad$4000.

ReviewTest3(page417)

Note:Answerswillvary;examplesaregiven.

…indebtasaresultof…

…managemoney,studentsshouldberequired...

…classesfromelementaryschool...

…tobudgetallowances,howtosave...

…getolder,classescouldbe…

…differentconceptslikecompoundinterest...

…h(huán)istoryofeconomics,howthegovernment…

…economicsevenfurther,explaininggeneralinterest…

…tointernatvariousbusinessestolearneconomics…

…poorspendingchoicesandenjoybetter…

Chapter21:Run-Ons

Activity1onPeriodandaCapitalLetter(420-421)

1. today.It 6. velocities.He

2. image.They 7. Zimbabwe.Then

3. friends.I 8. services.He

4. plant.It 9. Spanish.He

5. style.Her 10. mysteries.She

Activity2onCommaandaJoiningWord(page422)

1. and 6. but

2. and 7. and

3. but 8. so

4. but 9. but

5. for 10. so

Activity3onCommaandaJoiningWord(page423)

Note:Answerswillvary;examplesaregiven.

,butit’snotveryclean.

,forhehadadaytimejob.

,andafterdinnershewenttothelibrary.

,sosheenrolledinahistoryclass.

,butIwasn'thungry.

Activity4onPeriodandaCapitalLetterorCommaandaJoiningWord(423-424)

Note:Answersmayvary;examplesareshown.

1. Scheele,and 6. stiff,butsoaking

2. environment.They 7. work.Some

3. heat,soI 8. England,so

4. Russia.We 9. Correct

5. old,yet 10. city.We

Activity5onSemicolon(page425)

1. plates;they 6. Japan;it

2. America;it 7. window;Joey

3. immense;it’s 8. microscope;he

4. bacon;her 9. street;the

5. covers;she 10. 1948;later

Activity6onSemicolonwithaTransitionalWord(page426)

1. ;asaresult,(orthus,consequently,ortherefore)

2. ;ontheotherhand,(orhowever)

3. ;inaddition,(orfurthermore)

4. ;meanwhile,

5. ;consequently,(orthus,asaresult,ortherefore)

ReviewTest1(428)

Note:Someanswersmayvary.

1. Empire;it 7. WarI;Slovakia

2. countries.In 8. Communists,and

3. invaded.They 9. Correct

4. Turks;the 10. Republics.Prime

5. capital,and 11.countries;this

6. 1867.Franz 12. Correct

ReviewTest2(Page428)

Note:Answersmayvary.

1. brain;then Or:brain,andthen Or:brain.Then

2. heels,andthen Or:heels;then Or:heels.Then

3. diner,anda Or:diner.A Or:diner;a

4. occult.It Or:occult,forit Or:occult;it

5. parents,forthis Or:parents.This Or:parents;this

6. WorldWarII,but Or:WorldWarII.The Or:WorldWarII;the

7. deafness,sohe Or:deafness.He Or:deafness;he

8. far,solarger Or:far.Larger Or:far;larger

9. common.No Or:common,forno Or:common;no

10. world,so Or:world.I Or:world;I

Chapter22:MisplacedModifiers

Activity1onMisplacedModifiers(430-431)

Note: Theunderlinedpartineachofthecorrectionsbelowshowswhathadbeenamisplacedmodifier.

1. Thepatientonthepsychiatrist’scouchtalkedabouthischildhood.

Or:Onthepsychiatrist’scouch,thepatienttalkedabouthischildhood.

2. Withswivelingheads,thecrowdwatchedthetennisplayers.

3. Vonnieputfourhamburgerpatties,whichshewascookingfordinner,onthecounter.

4. Stevecarefullyhunginthebedroomclosetthenewsuitthathewouldweartohisfirstjobinterview.

5. ThenovelthatAnniehadborrowedfromhercousinwasaboutapioneerfamily.

6. ThelatestDenzelWashingtonmoviehasopenedinalmost2,200theatersacrossthecountry.

7. Thechefadvisedustoplacethecasseroleinapreheatedoventobecookedproperly.

8. Owingtwomonths’rent,thetenantslefttowninadilapidatedoldcar.

Or:Thetenants,owingtwomonths’rent,lefttowninadilapidatedoldcar.

Or:Thetenantswhoowedtwomonths’rentlefttowninadilapidatedoldcar.

9. Theplanwastoconstructachurchmadeofbrickandstoneonanacreofland.

10. Inthegreenhouse,Idiscoveredanunusualplantthatoozedamilkyjuice.

ReviewTest1(page431)

1. MM 6. C

2. C 7. MM

3. C 8. C

4. MM 9. MM

5. MM 10. C

ReviewTest2(page432)

Note: Theunderlinedpartineachofthecorrectionsbelowshowswhathadbeenamisplacedmodifier.

1. Apoetandprofessor,HenryWadsworthLongfellowwasbornin1907inPortland,Maine.

2. OneofLongfellow’smostfamouspoemsis“PaulRevere’sRide,”depictinganhistoricallyimportantnightduringtheRevolutionaryWar.

3. Inapoem,Longfellowwrotethatrainbowsareflowersthathavediedandgonetoheaven.Or:Longfellowwroteinapoemthatrainbowsareflowersthathavediedandgonetoheaven.

4. Longfellow’swife,Frannie,diedfromterribleburnswhenherdresscaughtfire.

5. Longfellowneverfullyrecoveredand,eighteenyearslater,hecommemoratedhiswife’sdeathinthesonnet,“TheCrossofSnow.”

Chapter23:DanglingModifiers

Activity1onDanglingModifiers(434-436)

Note:Answersmayvary.

WhenIappliedasalvetotheburnonmyleg,thepainsoonsubsided.

Marchingacrossthefield,thesoldierscouldseeadistantriver.

Onecanrelievestressbypracticingdailyrelaxationtechniques.

Avoidingfoodshighinfatandcalories,Pauldrasticallyimprovedhishealth.

5. Sinceitwaslitbyseveralfloodlights,thestagewasclearlyvisibletotheaudience.

6. AsIwasrunningthroughtherain,thepuddlessoakedmypants.

7. Becausesomanypeoplewerecrammedtightlyintheelevator,thedoorswouldn’tclose.

8. Hopingtomakehisemployeesmorecomfortable,thenewbosspurchasedadozennewchairs.

9. Afterthepotholeswerefixed,theroadwaywassmooth.

10. Screamingloudly,theyoungchildrenontherollercoasterwerescared.

ReviewTest1(page436)

1. DM 6. C

2. C 7. C

3. C 8. DM

4. DM 9. DM

5. DM 10. C

ReviewTest2(436-437)

1. Hopingtoachievehighertestscores,studentssometimeshaveonetop-performingstudenttaketheSATorotherstandardizedtestsforthem.

2. Embarrassedbythewidespreadcheating,thetestingcompanieshaveintroducedtighterrules.

3. RequiredtouploadverifiedphotoIDpictureswhentheyregisterandtaketheexam,studentsmustnowmeetstricteridentificationstandards.

4. Storedindatabases,thephotoscanbeaccessedbyhighschoolandcollegeadmissionspersonnel.

5. ThenewruleshavemadeitharderforstudentstocheatontheSATandACT.

ReviewTest3(page437)

Note:Answerswillvary;examplesareshown.

,Barryslowedthecardown.

,thevasebrokewhenIsetitdowntoohard.

,thekidsgotsoakingwet.

,RosaliewasadmittedtoHarvardLawSchool.

,Terryhadgloomythoughtsofdeath.

SectionII:Mechanics

Chapter24:ManuscriptForm

Activity1(440)

Note:Orderofanswersmayvary.

2. Right-handmarginshouldnotbecrowded.

3. Titleshouldnotbeinquotationmarks.

4. Intitle,theword“Alone”shouldbecapitalized.

5. Alineshouldbeskippedbelowthetitle.

6. Paragraphindentisneeded.

7. Thefirstsentenceshouldstandindependentofthetitle.(Here,themeaningof“This”dependsonthetitle.)

Chapter25:CapitalLetters

Activity1(443-444)

1. Orlando...Florida….Disney….World

2. Mcdonald’s…Quarter-Pounder…Big….Mac…Coke

3. Born…Raised…Shadow…Days

4. Brianna…July…Connor…Matteo…Campbell

5. The...Black…Eyed…Peas…Fergie’s

6. Rory...Maggie...Noah...Highlights

7. Vineyard…West…Chop

8. Daisy…Troop…Cedar…Creek…Elementary

9. Dr....Landown

10. Tuesday...Labor...Day...Moore...Hall

Activity2(page446)

1. Boston…Tea…Party…British…American

2. Korea...French...Swiss...Chinese

3. Uncle…Harvey

4. Introduction...Web…Design

5. Vietnamese

Activity3onUnnecessaryUseofCapitals(page447)

1. provinces…north…east…west

2. world's…continent…countries…nations

3. electron...microscope...television...atomic

4. poem...epic...poem...warrior

5. saga…rise…fall

ReviewTest1(447-448)

1. French…British

2. British…United…States…America…French…revolution

3. French...Third…Estate…they…First…Estate

4. July…Parisian…Bastille

5. Monarchy…the…Reign…Terror

6. A...France...Napoleon

7. Emperor...Napoleon...French...Russia

8. European...Alliance...Napoleon

9. nationalism...Europe

10. Congress...Vienna...monarchs...Europe...nineteenth...century

Chapter26:NumbersandAbbreviations

Activity1onNumbers(page451)

1. three-thirty3:30...one-sixteen116...Forty-Second42nd

2. fouro'clock4:00…twenty20

3. fifty50...tenth10(or10th)

Activity2onAbbreviations(451-452)

1. Nov.November...Jan.January...lbs.pounds

2. A.M.morning…cafcafeteria

3. p.o.postoffice...min.minutes...dol.dollars

ReviewTest1(page452)

1. S.Shive

2. Prof.Professor

3. four4

4. Prof.Professor

5. 3three

6. Psych.psychology

7. Sept.September

8. twenty20

9. Psych.drs.psychologists

10. exp. experimental

11. One1

12. &and

13. 3rdthird

14. 7seven

15. pg.page

16. fifty-six56

17. Hosp.Hospital

18. one-thirty1:30

19. ped.pediatric

20. psych.psychology

21. dept.department

22. Thx.Thankyou

23. TomThomasShive

SectionIII:Punctuation

Chapter27:Apostrophe

Activity1onApostropheinContractions(page455)

1. Aren't

2. they’re...don't

3. I’m...who’s

4. Who's…it's…We're

5. can’t...there’s

Activity2onApostrophetoShowOwnershiporPossession(page457)

1. GreatBritain'scapital 6. Libby’scar

2. OneofNewYorkCity'smajorattractions 7. Inthebakery’swindow

3. Switzerland'sthreeofficiallanguages 8. Caden’sapartment

4. ThePrevinfamily'spiano 9. Brock’stennisshoes

5. John’scomputer 10. WhitneyParker’shouse

Activity3onApostrophetoShowOwnershiporPossession(page458)

Note:Sentenceresponseswillvary;belowarethepossessiveformsofthegivenwords.

2. Thegovernment’s

3. Annalise’s

4. Thegrocerystore’s

5. Thegoldenretriever’s

6. Theskiresort’s

Activity4onApostropheversusSimplePlurals(page459)

1. Possessive:wife’sarm

Plural:skates

2. Possessive:Vonette’sdecision

Plurals:predictions...opportunities

3. Possessive:Picasso'spaintings

Plurals:paintings…museums

4. Possessive:doctor’srequest

Plural:scars

5. Possessive:people’snames,world’scountries

Plurals:names...countries

6. Possessive:Seville'smany

Plurals:attractions…Moors…centuries

7. Possessive:children’sshouts

Plurals:shouts...eggs...lightbulbs...items

8. Possessive:Tina’scampinghandbook

Plurals:tablets...ropes

9. Possessive:children'snovel

Plurals:readers…years

10. Possessive:rattlesnake’shead

Plural:eyes

Activity5onApostrophewithPluralsEndingin-s(page460)

1. campers’tents

2. Johnsons'daughters

3. cities'subwayandbussystems

4. twins’habit

5. cars’windshields

ReviewTest1(page460)

1. state’scorrectedtostates’

2. capital’scorrectedtocapitals

3. VirginiascorrectedtoVirginia’s

4. wouldntcorrectedtowouldn’t

5. lionscorrectedtolion’s

6. KentuckyscorrectedtoKentucky’s

7. boys’correctedtoboys

8. ConnecticutscorrectedtoConnecticut’s

9. Arkansas’correctedtoArkansas’s

10. rocks’correctedtorocks

11. StatescorrectedtoState’s

12. studentscorrectedtostudents’

Chapter28:QuotationMarks

Introductorytext(page462)

1. capital

2. new

3. Commas

4. inside

Activity1onSetOffWordsofaSpeakerorWriter(462-463)

1. Severalpeoplehavebeencreditedwithsaying,“ThemoreIseeofpeople,themoreIlikedogs.”

2. "Letnaturebeyourteacher,"advisedthepoetWilliamWordsworth.

3. AccordingtotheBible,"Thelaborerisworthyofhishire."

4. “Theballot,”saidAbrahamLincoln,“isstrongerthanthebullet.”

5. “Whenchefsgotogreatlengths,”thewomanatthedietcentersaid,“Igotogreatwidths.”

6. Myfriendsaidthatwhenshedies,shewantsherheadstonetoread,“Shelivedlifetothefullest!”

7. “Iapologizethatmyhomeworkistatteredandstained,”saidthechild,“butIdroppeditinamudpuddle.”

8. MarilynMonroesaid,“IrestoremyselfwhenI’malone.”

9. Thearticlewarnedresidents,“Severeweatherisexpectedtoarrivewithinthenexttwodays.”

10. Althoughheismostknownforbeingfunny,whenRobinWilliamssaid,“Nomatterwhatpeopletellyou,wordsandideascanchangetheworld,”hewasgivingseriousadvice.

Activity3onIndirectQuotations(page465)

2. Monicasaid,"Mygrandmotherhasbeentherolemodelforseveralwomeninmyfamily."

3. Angelosaid,“Iwantaboxoftheextra-crispychicken.”

4. Myhistoryprofessortoldus,"TomatoeswerefirstgrowninPeru."

5. Theinstructorannounced,“Thursday’stesthasbeencanceled.”

Activity4onTitles(page466)

1. Inhershortstory“ASeaWorry,”MaxineHongKingstondescribesagroupofteenagesurfersandamotherwhotriestounderstandthem.

2. TheJanuaryissueofDiscovermagazineincludedanarticleentitled"LostCitiesoftheAmazon."

3. Wereadthechapter“PullingUpRoots”inGailSheehy’sbookPassages.

4. Raymondgavemeacopyoflastmonth'sNationalGeographicmagazine,whichfeaturedastorycalled"SavingEnergy:ItStartsatHome."

5. ThemovieCasablanca,whichstarredHumphreyBogart,wasoriginallycastwithRonaldReaganintheleadingrole.

6. Oneofmygrandfather'sfavoriteoldTVshowswasThriller,ahorrorserieshostedbyBorisKarloff,themanwhostarredinthe1931movieFrankenstein.

7. WhentheBeatles’movieAHardDay’sNightwasfirstshown,fansscreamedsomuchthatnoonecouldhearthesongsorthedialogue.

8. PinnedonJeffery'swallisthecoverofarecentissueofRollingStone.ThecoverhasaphotooftheBritishrockgroupTheRollingStones.

9. Thesociologytestwillcoverthefirsttwochapters:“CultureandDiversity”and“SocialStratification.”

10. AnarticleinConsumerReportscalled“WhichCerealforBreakfast?”claimsthatchildrencanlearntolikelow-sugarcerealslikeCheeriosandWheaties.

ReviewTest1(467-468)

1. InMontyPythonandtheHolyGrail,JohnCleesefamouslysays,“Ifartinyourgeneraldirection.Yourmotherwasahamsterandyourfathersmeltofelderberries.”

2. InTheUsualSuspects,VerbalKint(KevinSpacey)claims,“Thegreatesttrickthedevileverpulledwasconvincingtheworldhedidn’texist.”

3. Intheshortstory,“TheDeathofIvanIlych,”LeoTolstoywrites,“Inplaceofdeaththerewaslight.”

4. “Remembertoletherintoyourheart,”isoneofthememorablelinesfromtheBeatles’song,“HeyJude.”

5. TomHanksplaysacoachinALeagueofTheirOwn,butitcertainlyisn’thisfinestmomentwhenheyellsatoneofhisplayers,“Areyoucrying?There’snocrying!There’snocryinginbaseball!”[Correct]

6. ForrestGumpincludesmanyquotablelines,suchas,“Run,Forrest,run.Run,Forrest!”and“Mamasays,‘Stupidisasstupiddoes.’”

7. RichardWilburopenshispoem,“TheWriter,”withtheselines,“Inherroomattheprowofthehouse/Wherelightbreaks,andthewindowsaretossedwithlinden,/Mydaughteriswritingastory.”

8. EmilyBlunt’scharacterinTheDevilWearsPradaexplains,“I’mjustonestomachfluawayfrommygoalweight.”

9. “Findatrulyoriginalidea.ItistheonlywayIwilleverdistinguishmyself.ItistheonlywayIwillevermatter,”JohnNashmoansinABeautifulMind.

10. RobinWilliamsinspireshisstudentsinDeadPoetsSocietywhenhesays,“…Butifyoulistenrealclose,youcanhearthemwhispertheirlegacytoyou.Goon,leanin.Listen,youhearit?Carpe,Carpediem.Seizetheday,boys.Makeyourlivesextraordinary.”

Chapter29:Comma

Activity1onCommaBetweenItemsinaSeries(page470)

1. southernswamps,streams,lakes,andother

2. hammock,poppedopenafrostycanofsoda,and

3. warm,deep,swirling

4. eyes,relaxedmanner,and

5. soft,warm

Activity2onCommaAfterIntroductoryMaterial(page471)

1. bacteria,penicillin

2. wildly,Jesse

3. states,theAppalachian

4. begin,theaudience

5. brook,wenoticed

Activity3onCommasAroundWordsInterruptingtheFlowofThought(page472)

1. largepines,swayinginthewind,

2. Hawaii,whichbecamethefiftiethstatein1959,

3. LiamBage,anavidfootballfan,

4. weather,windyandwild,

5. actress,whohasstarredinmanyplays,

Activity4onCommaBetweenCompleteThoughts(473-474)

1. bulletin,and 6. reruns,so

2. Correct 7. camera,or

3. parlor,for 8. Correct

4. trees,and 9. Correct

5. tissue,but 10. Correct

Activity5onCommawithDirectQuotations(page474)

1. whisper,“Ladybird

2. bursting,"said

3. announced,“Tomorrow

4. it,”thedetective….murderer,“andI…

5. gap,”theconductor

Activity6onCommawithEverydayMaterial(page475)

1. Dublin,Maggie,

2. July15,2009…WoodbridgeAvenue,FortMyers,Florida

3. 875,000...October16,1995

4. shows,Elaine,...1,231...Sarasota,Florida

5. Highway,GreatPlains,Minnesota

ReviewTest1(page476)

Note:Wordingofrulesmayvary.

1. tissues,”said...professor,“were

(commawithdirectquotation)

2. large,juicy…sweet,cold,andrefreshing

(commabetweenitemsinaseries)

3. theater,we

(commaafterintroductorymaterial)

4. counter,but

(commabetweentwocompletethoughts)

5. reading,“Humans

(commatosetoffadirectquotation)

6. plants,whichnowsellforveryhighprices,

(commaswithwordsinterruptingtheflowofthought)

7. twenty-one,Tiger

(commaafterintroductorymaterial)

8. Tucson,alargecityinArizona,

(commaswithwordsinterruptingtheflowofthought)

9. Tunisia,Libya,Niger,Mali,andMauritania

(commabetweenitemsinaseries)

10. dogs,likemostanimals,

(commaswithwordsinterruptingtheflowofthought)

ReviewTest2(page477)

1. gym,Nikki

2. said,“Golf

3. faculty,Jason's

4. highway,so

5. C

6. ceremony,studentsfannedthemselveswithcommencementprograms,

7. dead,thespaceshuttle...February1,2003.

8. little,”saidErnie,“my

9. medievalart,whichispartoftheNewYorkMetropolitanMuseumofArt,

10. June24,1948,theSovietUnion…However,this…May11,1949,when

ReviewTest3(477-478)

1. students,engenders

2. evaluation,she

3-4. students,excepttwo,

5. activity,and

6. students,“Either

7. activity,they

8. portfolios,and

9. portfolio,and

10. expository,and

Chapter30:OtherPunctuationMarks

Activity1onColon(page4800

1. speech:

2. used:

3. education:

Activity2onSemicolon(page480)

1. creates;Shiva…destroys;and

2. camera;mylast

3. $200;by...$100;and

Activity3onDash(page481)

1. leg—brokeninthreeplaces—lay

2. lives—they

3. thing—ahot

Activity4onParentheses(page481)

1. independent(thecountryhadbeenpartoftheSovietUnionsince1922),in

2. seasons(1984–1996).

3. Stone(Book1),I

Activity5onHyphen(page482)

1. blood-red...picture-perfect

2. lily-covered…sweet-smelling

3. well-written...nerve-racking

ReviewTest1(482-483)

1. nephew—it's

2. sister(whowillbesixnextweek)started

3. students:“Always

4. cherry-flavored

5. Fermium(namedaftertheItalianphysicistEnricoFermi,whohelpeddeveloptheatomicbomb)is

6. first-grader;...third-grader;

7. class—read

8. warm-hearted

9. groups;other

10. toilet:hire

SectionIV:WordUse

Chapter31:EffectiveWordChoice

Note:Answersmayvaryinallofthesentencesthatfollow.

Activity1onSlang(486-487)

1. Whenourcarbrokedown,thepolicewereveryhelpful;theycalledatowtruck,whichgotthereveryquickly.

2. Iwasasto