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作文中出現(xiàn)的好句1.部分倒裝NotonlycanEnglishbroadcasterhelpmeimprovemyEnglish,butalsoitcanhelpmeenrichmyknowledgeandexperience.2.比較及句型the+比較級(jí)，the+比較級(jí)越….就越….ThebetterIstudyEnglish,thebetterIwilldothisjob.3.定語(yǔ)從句IamgoodatEnglish,whichcontributestomyapplicationforthejob.

IhavetakenpartinmanyschoolstationactivitiesinwhichIperformedwellandIgainedrichexperience.

4.動(dòng)詞的現(xiàn)在分詞作主語(yǔ)BeinganEnglishbroadcasterismylongdream.

出現(xiàn)的問(wèn)題1.生搬硬套，刻意使用高級(jí)句型AsfarasIamconcerned,thisismygoodat.OnlyinthiswaycanItalkwithforeignpeople.AsfarasIamconcerned,thisiswhatIamgoodat,whichcontributestomyapplicationforthisjob.

2.口語(yǔ)化，漢化色彩濃烈Pleaselistentome.

HeresomereasonswhyIapplyforthisjob.3.句型結(jié)構(gòu)問(wèn)題（兩個(gè)單句放在一個(gè)句子中要有連詞或引導(dǎo)詞）Ihavebeenapart-timereporterofourschoolnewspaper,ithelpsmepracticeEnglish.3.無(wú)短語(yǔ)搭配意識(shí)Ireallyliketobroadcasting

aEnglishbroadcaster.Ireallylikebroadcasting.4.時(shí)態(tài)問(wèn)題IlovethisjobverymuchandIwoulddoitbetter.5.名詞單復(fù)數(shù)問(wèn)題Ihavetakenpartinsomeclub.5.用詞不當(dāng)IcanspeakEnglishfrequently.Ihopeyoucanconsidermyadvice.DearMyBrown,IamLiHua,astudentinClass8,Grade3.Fromthenoticeputuponthewallinourschool,IhavelearnedthatourschoolradiostationneedsanEnglishbroadcaster.AsfarIamconcerned,Iamqualifiedwithsuchkindofjob.ThereasonswhyIapplyforitareinthefollowing.

Ononehand,Itakegreatinterestinbroadcasting.Ontheotherhand,Ihavereceivedsomeprofessionaltrainingsduringthelasttwoyears,whichcontributestomyapplicationforthisjob.Besides,IamgoodatEnglishespeciallyhaveagiftforspokenEnglish.Moreover,HavingasweetvoiceisoneofthebiggestadvantagesIamcompetenttodothisjob.Iwouldappreciateitifyougiveachancetowor