主題08 校園生活-2021年中考英語(yǔ)作文素材大全

主題8

——校園生活

I.主題詞匯

校園活動(dòng)：acolourfulschoollife,allkindsofactivities,after-schoolactivities,takeanactivepartin,

haveasportsmeeting,haveabasketballmatchwith,goonaspringouting,takeatripto,bea

memberof,learnfromeachother,fillone'sheartwithhope,holdaneveningpartyjointheReading

Club,buildoneself/sb.up,havethechancetodosth.,helpeachother,improveone'sskills,winthe

firstprize,beattheotherplayer,losethegame,stepintosociety

校園人物：atopstudent,atruefriend,befulloflife,fairandhonest,befriendlytosb.,bepatient

withsb.,bereadytohelpothers,bestrictwithsb.,bewillingtodo,facedifficultiesbravely,havea

senseofhumor,haveastrongwill,havethesamerulesforeverybody,treateverybodyequally,keep

asecret,playdifferentroles,organizeclassactivities,speakhighlyofsb.（高度評(píng)價(jià)某人）,thinkof

othersfirst,shareone'sjoyandsadness

n常用句型

校園活動(dòng)

1.Themodernsocietyrequiresmanyqualitiesofyoungstudents,soonlylearningfromtextbooksis

notenough.（總起句，通常在第一段或段落的句首。）

2.Wecanlearnagreatdealfromotherstudentswemeetinactivities.

3.Afterlonghours'study,theycanrelaxthemselvesbytakingpartinschoolactivities.

4.SometimeswehaveclassmeetingsandEnglishfestivals.Theyareveryinteresting.

5.Wecantakepartindifferentactivitiesaccordingtoourpersonalhobbies.

6.Ifwelikemusic,wecanjointheMusicClubonThursday.

7.Ithinktheseactivitiescanmakeourschoolliferichandcolourful.

8.Ienjoymyschoollifeverymuch.

9.AtlastArtFestival,myclassmatesandIprovidedaprettygooddrama.Onaccountofthem,it

becamemygreatesthonorinmylife.

校園人物

1.Howtimeflies!Mycolourfulmiddleschoollifeisnearlyending.HereiswhatIthinkofabout

myself.

2.1wasproudofmyselfbecauseIgotonwellwithmyclassmatesandmygradesweregood.

3.Ihavegotmoreknowledgeandimprovedmylife.

4.Withherhelp,ImadegreatprogressinEnglish.Now,Icanevencommunicatewithforeigners.

5.ItwasMarywhogavemethegreatesthelpandmademyschoollifesowonderful.

6.Weshareourjoyandsadnessjustlikeabigfamily.

7.WhenIhadastomach,myclassmateslookedafterme.Itmadememoved.

8.Whenmyclassmatesmeetsometroublesthattheyareunabletoovercome,Iamreadyforgiving

themahandanytimeanywhere.Ihavehelpedthemalot,andIamalwayshappytodothat.

m.模擬試題

Beproudofmyschool

a.Whatdoesyourschoollooklike?

b.Whatfundoyouhaveatschool?

c.Whydoyoulikeyourschool?（Giveatleasttworeasons）

要點(diǎn)分析：

1.通過(guò)具體的活動(dòng)（如：興趣小組、體育活動(dòng)、與老師同學(xué)的相處、自己在學(xué)校生活中的收獲

等）來(lái)表達(dá)對(duì)學(xué)校的情感。

2.時(shí)態(tài)：一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。

3.文章結(jié)構(gòu)：略寫校園環(huán)境，詳寫校園生活和自己的成長(zhǎng)、收獲。

4.切忌：言之無(wú)物，只說(shuō)“熱愛(ài)”自己的學(xué)校，卻不說(shuō)為什么“熱愛(ài)

寫作思路：

I）總體概述“我為學(xué)校而驕傲”

1.1amproudofmyschoolbecauseitisbeautifulandwehavemanyinterestingschoolactivities.

2.Myschoolisverybig.Wehave...Thereare...（從建筑、設(shè)施、綠化的角度寫）

II）具體談?wù)勑@活動(dòng)和人物

1.Wehavelotsoffunatschool.Afterschoolweplay...Wedolotsofsportslike...Sometimeswe

have...（從體育活動(dòng)、課外活動(dòng)、主題活動(dòng)的角度寫）

2.Studentsinourschoolstudyhardanddowellintheirsubjects.

3.Eachstudentrespectshis/herteachersandispolitetoothers.

ni）從校園活動(dòng)和人物中得到的啟迪

1.Ilovemyschoolbecause...Ilearnalotfrom...Ireallyfeelproudofmyschool.

2.Ifeveryonemakesacontributiontoourschool,itwillbemorebeautiful.

范文點(diǎn)評(píng)

Iamproudofmyschoolbecauseitisbeautifulandwehavemanyinterestingschoolactivities.

Myschoolisverybigwithseveraltallbuildings.Wehaveabigplayground,andtherearelotsof

treesandflowerseverywhere.Besides,thereisabigfountaininourschoolgarden.Somestudents

usuallyplaytogetherafterclass.Othersappreciatethegoldfishinthelake.Italsogivesusmuch

happiness.

Wealsohavelotsoffunatschool.Afterclassweplaygamesanddolotsofsports,likeplaying

basketball,footballandtabletennis.SometimeswehaveclassmeetingsandEnglishfestivals.

Ilovemyschool.Theteachersareverykindandthestudentsarefriendlytoeachother.We

shareourjoyandsadnessjustlikeabigfamily.

范文選登

Myschoolverybigwithseveraltallbuildings.Thereare2,000studentsinmyschool.Wehave

abigplaygroundwithlotsoftreesaroundit.Therearealotofflowerseverywhere.

Wehavelotsoffunatschool.Afterclasswedolotsofsports,likeplayingbasketball,football

andtabletennis.Also,wechatwitheachotherunderthetreesandplaygamestogether.Howhappy

weare!

Ilovemyschoolbecauseit'slikeabigfamily.Theteachersinmyschoolareaskindtousas

ourparents.Ifeelproudofmyschoolanditisoneofthebestschoolsinmyheart.

范文鏈接

1.Myclassmatesandmyclass

MyschoollifeiswonderfulandIfeelproudtobeamemberofmyclass.Inmyclass,Iget

alongwellwithmyclassmates.Iusuallyreadbookswiththemandshareourthoughtstogether.

WhenIhaveaPElesson,Ialwaysplaybasketballwiththemandweallenjoyourselves.AndI

rememberonedaywhenIhadastomachache,myclassmateslookedafterme.Itmadememoved.So

inmyopinion,myclassmatesareveryfriendlyandkind.

Frommypointofview,myclassismysecondhomebecauseitalwaysgivesmewarmthand

love.If11bethemostvaluabletreasureinmymemory.

2.Studyisfun

Whydowecometoschool?Differentpeoplemayhavedifferentanswers.Somepeoplesay

thattheycometoschooltostudyjustbecausetheydreamofabetterjobandabetterfuture.Butin

mypointofview,studyisfun.

Itissaidthateveryonewhoisinterestedinstudymayfindpleasureinreading.Exactly!Study

cannotonlyenrichmyknowledgeandbroadenmymind,butalsobring

范文選登

Myschoolisverybigwithseveraltallbuildings.Thereare2000studentsinmyschool.We

haveabigplaygroundwithlotsoftreesaroundit.Therearealotofflowerseverywhere.

Wehavelotsoffunatschool.Afterclasswedolotsofsports,likeplayingbasketball,football

andtabletennis.Also,wechatwitheachotherunderthetreesandplaygamestogether.Howhappy

weare!

Ilovemyschoolbecauseit'slikeabigfamily.Theteachersinmyschoolareaskindtousasour

parents.Ifeelproudofmyschoolanditisoneofthebestschoolsinmyheart.

范文鏈接

l.Myclassmatesandmyclass

MyschoollifeiswonderfulandIfeelproudtobeamemberofmyclass.Inmyclass,Igetalong

verywellwithmyclassmates.Iusuallyreadbookswiththemandshareourthoughts.WhenIhavea

PElesson.Ialwaysplaybasketballwiththemandweallenjoyourselves.AndIrememberoneday,

whenIhadastomachache,myclassmateslookedafterme.Itmadememoved.Soinmyopinion,my

classmatesareveryfriendlyandkind.

Frommypointofview,myclassismysecondhomebecauseitalwaysgivesmewarmthandlove.

It'llbethemostvaluabletreasureinmymemory.

2.Studyisfun

Whydomecometoschool?Differentpeoplemayhavedifferentanswers.Somepeoplesaythat

theycometoschooltostudyjustbecausetheydreamofabetterjobandabetterfuture.Butinmy

viewpoint,studyisfun.

Itissaidthateveryonewhoisinterestedinfindpleasureinreading.Exactly!Studycannotonly

enrichmyknowledgeandbroadenmymind,butalsobringmelotsoffunaswell.What'smore、

studyalwaysteachesmehowtobehonest,confidentandknowledgeable.

Inaword,studyisfun.

3.Takingpartinschoolactivities

Manystudentsareveryinterestedinschoolactivities.Theyhavetheirreasons.Firstly,theythink

thatlearningfromtextbooksisnottheironlytask.Theybelievethattheyshouldtakeeverychanceto

getmorepracticalknowledge.Secondly,theythinkthatafterlonghoursofstudy,theycanrelax

themselvesbytakingpartinschoolactivities.

However,alargegroupofstudentshavelittleinterestinthemandspendmostoftheirtimeon

studies.First,theybelievethattheyshouldmakefulluseoftimetostudy.Second,theyfeelthat

schoolactivitieshavelittletodowiththeirfurtherdevelopment.

Inmyopinion,weshouldtakeanactivepartinschoolactivities.Ononehand,wecanlearna

greatdealfromotherstudentswemeetinactivities.Besides,themodemsocietydemandsthat

studentshavemanygoodqualities,soonlylearningfromtextbooksisnotenough.

4.Aletteraboutmyschoolactivities

DearTom,

Howareyou?NowIenjoymyschoollifeverymuch.Besideslearningmanysubjectsatschool,

wehaveallkindsofactivitiesafterclass.

Wecantakepartindifferentactivitiesaccordingtoourpersonalhobbies.Forexample,wecango

toourschoolscomputergrouponMondaytolearnmoreaboutcomputerscience.Wecanalso

improveourEnglishbyjoininEnglishCorneronTuesday.Ifwelikemusic,wecanalsoimprove

ourEnglishbyjoininginEnglishCorneronTuesday.Ifwelikemusic,wecanjointheMusicClub

onThursday.WecangotoplayballgamesonFridayinordertomakeourselvesstronger.

Ofalltheseactivities,Ilikeplayingballgamesbestbecausehealthisveryimportantforus

students.Ithinktheseactivitiescanmakeourschoolliferichandcolourful.Wealllikethese

activities.

5.Mymiddleschoollife

a.Howtimeflies!Mycolourfulmiddleschoollifeisnearlyending.HereiswhatIthinkofabout

myself.

Inthepastfouryears,IwasproudofmyselfbecauseIgotonwellwithmyclassmatesandmy

gradesweregood.Now,Ihavemanyinterestssuchasreadingbooks,playingsportsandsoon.In

thisway,Ihavegotmoreknowledgeandimprovedmylife.

Asforthefuture,Ihavetwodreams.Oneistobeateacher,andtheotheristobeavolunteer.

Helpingothersismygreatesthappiness.

AlthoughIhavemademuchprogress.Tiltrymybesttodoevenbetter.Believinginmyselfisthe

keytosuccess.

b.Howtimeflies!Mycolourfuljuniormiddleschoollifeiscomingtoanend.I'mgladtotellyou

somethingaboutmyschoollife.WhenIwassixyearsold,Istartedschool.SinceIbecameastudent,

Ihavebeenstudyingveryhard.Myparentsarequiteproudofme.Now,Istudyatakeymiddle

school,whichisnotonlymodembutalsobeautiful.Theteachersinmyschoolaresokindand

hard-workingthatIlovethemverymuch.All[heteachersregardusstudentsastheirownchildren.

Alsotheyarestrictwithusandstrictintheirwork.Iamgettingalongverywellwithmyclassmates.

Wheneverwehavedifficultiesinourstudy,wehelpeachother.Ihavemanyinterestssuchas

dancing,singing,readingbooksandplayingsports,andIespeciallyenjoyplayingbasketball,which

makesmesmarterandhelpsmelearnfasterandbetter.SoI'veimprovedmylifeinthisway.My

schoollifeisfullofhappinessandfun.AlthoughIhavesomenewchallengeseveryday,I'lltrymy

besttomeetthem.

6.AhappymemoryinmyJuniorHighSchool

a.Therearemanyunforgettablememoriesinmymind,andamongthemthehappiestmemoryisthes

portsmeetinginsummer.ltwasveryhot,thesunshonebrightlyandeveryonewassoexcited.BuyI

wasverynervousbecauseitwouldbemyturntorun.Withthesoundof'gonIbegantoenco

urageme.ThatsaidWewereallproudofyou."Ilearnedthatthemostimportantthingisthelove

betweenus.ThatisthehappiestmemoryinmyJuniorHighSchool.

b.AswewillgraduatefromJuniorHighSchool,thehappiestmemoryIwillneverforgettheex

perienceofaclassmeeting.Wehadthegroupofmeetingtoperformance.Wewrotethearticlesonit

andpracticedalotoftimes.Withthehelpofourclassteacherandthehardworkdayandnight,

wedidsowellintheperformance.FromthatIknewnopainsnogames.Itisthehappiestmemoryi

nmyJuniorHighSchool.

c.Schoollifeplaysanimportantroleinourdailylife.IhaveahappymemoryinmyJunior

HighSchool.Lastmonth,wehadaspringouting.WewenttoGangpingForestPark.Theweatherwa

ssocomfortablethatweallenjoyedourselves.Wehadapicnicundertheandsangtogether.Weshar

edourtootherpeople.Finally,weplayedagamewithteamwork.Itwassointerestingandweleame

dalot.WhatahappymemoryinJuniorHighSchool.

d.AsIamabouttograduate,IwouldliketotalkaboutahappymemoryinmyJuniorHighSchool.In

mymind,Ithinkthesportsmeetingisahappymemory.Wewereveryexcitedwhenthesportsmeeti

ngwasheld.Onthatdayallofustookonactivepartinit.Somejumpedropesomehadarunning

race,andothersplayedsomegames.Whenever.Someonewhowonaprize,

wecheeredforhim.Wehadsuchagreattimethatwewerealltriedafterthesportsmeeting.How

timeflieswhenwearehavingfun!ItwasahappyandmeaningfulmemorythatIwillalwaysre

member.

7.MyTV-tumoffweek

a.EveryonelikewatchingTVinourdailylife.SodoI.Butitisunhealthyforustowatchittoomu

ch.IhaveaTV-turnoffweek,assoonasIfindthatIamgettingmoreandmoreunhealthy.When

IhaveaTV-turnoffweek,IturnoffmyTVandhaveoutdooractivitiesregularity.Ialsochange

mybaddietinordertohaveastrongbody.WhatismoreIhelpmymotherdosomehousework.SoI

believe,Iwillhaveagoodandstrongbodysoonerorlater.

b.Asachild,everyonelikeswatchingTV.Sodoi.However,TdliketohaveaTV-turnoffweek.Th

eearewereasonsforit.First,itisgoodformyeyes.Second,I'lldothefollowingactivities.First,

Fillistentothemusicmoreoften.Next,I'lldosomesports,suchasrunningjumpingandplayingba

dminton.Icannotonlyrelaxmyselfbutalsomakemy

lifemuchstronger.Inconclusion,inordertomakemylifebetter,lamhappytohaveaTV-turnoffwe

ek.

c.llikewatchingTVverymuch,butIstillhaveaTV-turnoffweekinordertoprotectmyeyesandst

udyhabits.

DuringtheTV-turnoffweek,Iwillhelpmyparentsdosomehouseworkthanbefore.Iwillalso

gototheparkandenjoythefreshairaswellasthebeautifulview.Ontheotherhand,thisactivityca

nhelpmesaveelectricityandtheenvironment.Howmeaningful!1also

thinkIwillreadbooksinsteadofsittinginfrontoftheTVset.Let'shaveaTV-Turnoffweekrightno

w.

d.Asweallknow,TVbecomesanimportantpartinourdailylife.IlikewatchingTVbecauseI

canknowalotofnewsfromit.ButelectricityisrunningquicklywhilewearewatchingTV.SoIhav

eaTV-tumoffweektosaveelectricity.Iwillreadbooksandplaywithmyfriendsinsteadofwatchi

ngTVduringtheTV-turnoffweek.Ithinkitenablesmetogetonbetterwithothers.Anditcanprote

cttheenvironmentaswell.AsfarasIamconcerned,wealloughttoclosetheTVourselves.

e.It*scommonfbrteenagerstolikewatchingTV.Asamemberofthem.Sodo1.1wouldliketoha

veaTV-tumoffweek,Iwanttorestmyeyesandconcentrateonstudying,DuringtheTV-turnoffwee

k,

Iwillputmyheartintomystudying.Iwillenjoymyselfbydoingsomeindooractivitiessuchasdoi

ngapuzzle.TherearetworeasonsforwhyI

amgoingtodothesethings.First,Ineedtorelaxmyself.Astechnologydevelops,weareforcedtoli

veinaworldoffastpace.Sowhynotgetawayfromtechnologyandrelaxmyself?Second,

I'mastudentofGradeNine.Ihavetostudyhardinordertohaveabrightfuture.IbelieveIwillce

rtainlyenjoymyTV-turnoffweek.Itwillbehelptome.

8.MyfriendshipwithMary

Mary,a15-year-oldgirl,ismybestfriend.Sheistallwithbigbrighteyes.Whenwetalkaboutsomet

hing.Shealwayslooksatme.Smiling.Twoyearsago,Icametothisschool.Everythingwasstrang

etomeonmyfirstdayatschool.Ifeltverylonely.Justthen,Marycametome.Sheinvite

dmetoplaygameswithherhelp,ImadegreatprogressinEnglish,nowIcanevencommu

nicatewithforeigners!ItwasMarywhogavemethegreatesthelpandmademyschoollifesowo

nderful.Afriendinneedisafriendindeed.That'sreallytrue.

9.Schoolrules

Therearemanyrulesinourschool.Forexample,wemustwearschooluniformseverydayandwe

mustgettoschoolontime.Wemustn'tusemobilephonesinclass.IagreetosomeofthemFor

instance,weshouldbeinschoolontimeandnotusemobilephonesinclass.It*sourdutytoobey

suchrules.ButIdon*tagreethatwehavetowearschooluniformsallthetime,Ithinkouruniforms

areuglyandyoungpeoplewanttolooksmart.Wewanttowearourownclothestoschool,because

wefeelcomfortableinourownclothes.Iwouldliketheschoolleaderstoaskforouradvicewhen

theymakeschoolrules.

10.Myviewsonagoodstudent

Therearemanygoodstudentsinmyschool.They'reallgoodexamplesforme.Idon'tthinkhighmar

ksarethemostimportantthingtojudgesstudent.Inmypointofview,agoodstudentshouldbekin

dandandhelpfultoteachers,studentsandparentsaswell.Inaddition,weshouldbehard-wo

rkingonstudyandtrybesttogethighmarks.FmsureIwillbeagoodstudent.

11.Tobuildaharmoniouscampus

Ourschoolislikeourhome.Weshouldtrytobuildupaharmoniouscampus.Inmyopinion,oursc

hoollifenowisnotverygood.Thereisstillsomethingthatshouldbechanged.Forthetimebein

g,ourstudentsdon'thaveagoodmanner.Toimprovethesituation,Isuggestschooladdsomelesson

stohelpstudentsdobetter.Besides,wecanplantmoretreestoimprovetheenvironmentinorder

tokeepstudentsinagoodmood.Let*stryourbesttobuildaharmoniouscampus.

真題在現(xiàn)

Writeapassageofatleast60wordsonthetopicnChangesinmyschool.（以《學(xué)校發(fā)生的變化》

為題寫一篇不少于60個(gè)詞的短文，標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)不占格。）

Usethefollowingpointsasareference0（以下提示僅供參考）

Whatchangeshavetakenplaceinyourschool?

Whatdoyouthinkofthesechanges?

(注意：文中不得出現(xiàn)任何姓名，校名及其他相關(guān)信息，否則不予評(píng)分。)

★審(Read)的：簡(jiǎn)開(kāi)

從作文標(biāo)題“Changesinmyschool”中可得知，主要的寫作內(nèi)容應(yīng)為校園的變化，再根據(jù)題干

中所給提示：

1.Whatchangeshavetakenplaceinyourschool?2.Whatdoyouthinkofthesechanges?可將書(shū)寫

方向定為：1.校園發(fā)生的變化是？2.我對(duì)這些變化的看法是……然而，寫到這里，我們會(huì)發(fā)

現(xiàn)題干中并沒(méi)有之前所預(yù)想的第三點(diǎn)提示，在這種情況下，則要按照傳統(tǒng)寫作的三大段模式,

自行附加結(jié)尾，即：3.對(duì)校園生活進(jìn)行總結(jié)提出期望。

★寫(Write)

根據(jù)之前所講寫作步驟：作文題目一寫作框架一添加素材一初稿,

即可進(jìn)行如下書(shū)寫步驟的拆解:

1.Whatchangeshavetakenplaceinyour開(kāi)篇：Thechangeshavetakenplacein

school?myschoolare...

2.Whatdoyouthinkofthesechanges?中間：Ithinkthechangesare...

3.Conclusion./Hope.結(jié)尾：Inconclusion./Ihopemy

school...

接下來(lái)，我們需要思考，涉及到校園生活類話題時(shí)，可以應(yīng)用多少詞匯及句式，才會(huì)使文

章的內(nèi)容變得更加豐富。

★可用素材★

詞匯大搜羅

▲名詞：

1.environment2.health3.knowledge4.life

5.part6.playground7.rubbish8.school

9.student10.teacher11.thing12.time

13.year

▲動(dòng)詞：

1.believe2.can3.feel4.have

5.grow6.help7.love8.make

9.pollute10.protect11.say12.see

13.spend14.talk15.teach16.worry

▲形容詞

1.bad2.better3.clean4.great

5.important6.long

▲副詞

1.everywhere2.much3.seriously4.usually

連接詞及短語(yǔ)大搜羅

▲表時(shí)間

when,while,as

▲表轉(zhuǎn)折

but,yet,however

▲表因果

so,therefore,asaresult

常見(jiàn)句型大搜羅

1.Whenwe...,we...,當(dāng)我們.,我們...

2.Weallbelievethat…我們都相信..

3.Inrecentyears,…?在最近幾年里..

4.Asweknow...,眾所周知，..

5.Asstudents,...作為學(xué)生，..

運(yùn)用以上單詞、連接詞以及句式，就可以在已寫出的文章框架（開(kāi)篇、中間結(jié)尾）的中心句

的基礎(chǔ)上，添加必要的寫作素材，從而形成文章的初稿，如下：

初稿：

Changesinmyschool

Whenwetalkaboutourschool,weusuallyhavealottosay,includingtheteachers,thestudents

andsoonWeallbelievethattheschoolisanimportantpartinourlife.Itteachesusknowledgeand

helpsusgrowup.Weloveitsomuch.However,inrecentyears,theenvironmenttherehasbeen

seriouslypolluted,andwefeelworried.Wecouldseethecleanplaygroundinthepast,butnowit

becomesa"new"onewithrubbisheverywhere.Asweknow,thepollutedenvironmentisbadfbrour

health.Therefore,wemustdosomethingbeforethingsgetworse.Asstudents,wespendlongertime

atschool.So,loveourschoolandprotecttheenvironmenttomakeitabetterone.

到此為止，評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)中的第一個(gè)8分已收入囊中，但切勿忘記，考題除了對(duì)文章的結(jié)構(gòu)