高三英語一輪復習小用文寫作技巧課件

（一）概況1類型：應(yīng)用文（書信、簡歷、通知等）詞匯：100詞左右/篇題量：1篇分數(shù)：15分時間：建議30-40分鐘內(nèi)解題步驟1.明確寫作類型（書信為主，切勿忘非書信）2.列出寫作要點3.檢查格式、單詞拼寫及語法錯誤應(yīng)用文寫作2345

我校圖書館將面向國際學生舉辦一場講座，請你代圖書館寫一份英文通知，內(nèi)容包括以下要點：（1）講座時間為2020年6月15日下午兩點半到四點，地點在三樓演講廳；（2）講座嘉賓為王一

博士，經(jīng)濟學教授；（3）講座主題為擺地攤與中國經(jīng)濟。參考詞匯：（1）演講廳LectureHall；（2）經(jīng)濟學economics；（3）擺地攤streetvending.6

假設(shè)你是李明，最近參加了某旅行社（travelagency）組織的一次旅游，但你對這次旅行很不滿，請你向客服（customerservice）寫一封投訴信。闡述投訴的原因（如：酒店、飲食、交通及費用），并提出你期待的解決辦法。71.審題，確定寫作類型

投訴信2.列提綱，寫出要點

寫信目的（自我介紹，投訴對象）

投訴原因

解決辦法3.檢查格式、單詞及語法錯誤8（二）書信寫作格式9書信——寫作格式1.

稱呼頂格，后加逗號；對不相識的人，單數(shù)常用“DearSir,”或“DearMadam,”或“DearSir/Madam,”；復數(shù)直接加S。2.

正文縮進4~5個字符，于稱呼下方一行開始；常分三段，每段開頭對齊。3.

結(jié)束語放于第三段最后；Withmybestwishestoyou.Bestwishes!4.

簽名往右頂格對齊；Yourssincerely/truly,LiMing

Yours,LiMing10書信——寫作邏輯1.

開頭段問候自我介紹寫信背景，為什么寫這封信寫信目的，寫這封信想達到什么目的2.

中間段具體問題+具體分析3.

結(jié)尾段客套話口訣開門見山說意圖咨詢建議123不同內(nèi)容可分段感謝客氣不可少期待回信成老套11寫作——第一段第一段：1.交代背景

2.說明寫信目的感謝信：I'mwritingtogiveyoumysincerethanks…I'mwritingtoexpressmyappreciationfor…邀請信：I'mwritingtoinviteyouto…I'dliketotakethischancetoinviteyouto…12寫作——第一段祝賀信：CongratulationsonyoursuccessinpassingtheentranceexaminationtoXXUniversity.ItisreallygoodnewsthatyouhavebeenadmittedtoXXUniversity.道歉信：I'mwritingtoshowmyheartfeltapologytoyoufor…Iamwritingtoexpressmyregretabout…13寫作——第一段14寫作——第一段建議信：Iamwritingtogiveyousomeadviceabout…Iamwritingtoofferyouseveralpracticalsuggestions…求助信：Iamwritingtoaskyouforhelp.Iamwritingtoaskyoutodomeafavor.告知信：Iamwritingtogiveyousomemoredetails.Iamwritingtoinformyouextrainformation.15寫作——中間段常見書信的“中間段”寫法中間段：具體問題（主題句）+具體分析（拓展句）申請（求職）信：寫法一：TherearethreemainreasonswhyIamfitfortheposition/job.Tobeginwith,…What'smore,…Finally,…寫法二：IhavetheconfidencethatIcanhandlethejob.Firstly,…Secondly,…Thirdly,…16寫作——中間段感謝信：EverytimeI(看照片、看錄像、看那段時間的日記、回憶那段經(jīng)歷),Ijustcan'thelpthinkingofyou/whatyouhavedoneforme.Itwassokindofyouto(對方做的第一件事).Besides,you(對方做的第二件事),whichreallysurprisedme.Actually,Ishallalwaysremember(對方做的第三件事),consideringthat,(第三件事情的意義).Nothingwillbeabletoeraseourwonderfulmemories,andIwillcherishthemforever.17寫作——中間段邀請信：描述具體活動內(nèi)容，如活動主題、意義、地點、時間、參加者等Herearesomedetailsfortheactivities.Tobeginwith,(活動主題或活動目的，如：thethemeofthecontestis“humanandthenature”,whichisundoubtedlynotonlyentertainingbutalsoinstructive.)Moreover,(活動的地點和時間，如itwillbeinroom501from2:00to5:00ontheafternoonofJune15th.)18寫作——中間段19寫作——中間段建議信：寫給對方的具體建議寫法一：Thereareseveralsimplesuggestionsforyou.Tobeginwith,…Moreover,…What'smore,…Finally,…寫法二：Immediateandeffectivemeasuresmustbeputintopractice.Firstandforemost,…Additionally,…Lastbutnotleast,…20寫作——結(jié)尾段感謝信I,onbehalfofmywholefamily/class/school,wouldliketothankyouagain(forwhatyouhavedone)(forme/us).Mayyoubeblessed(ineverythingyoudo).建議信Hopefullythesesuggestionswillbeofgreathelptoyou.IfthereisanythingelseIcandoforyou,pleaseletmeknowassoonaspossible.I'msureyoucansolveyourproblembeforelong.21寫作——結(jié)尾段22寫作示例23寫作示例24寫作示例25寫作示例

Foryou,Ithinktobeoptimisticisveryimportant.（總起第三段，指出樂觀的重要性）Ifyouhopetoadaptyourselftothenewenvironment,you'dbetterbepositivenomatterwhatdifficultiesyouwillexperienceinyourcollegelife.Mayyouadaptyourselftothecollegelifeassoonaspossible!（最后表示美好祝愿）

Yours,Tim

26寫作示例Directions:Youhavealreadyhadadatewithyourfriendbutsuddenlyhaveanotherthingtodoandyouhavetotellyourfriendthatyoucan'tgo.Expressyourreasonclearlyinabout100words.Donotsignyournameattheendoftheletter.Use“LiMing”instead.Don’twritetheaddress.27寫作示例（1）審題本文是封道歉信。日常生活中難免會出現(xiàn)一些差錯，如失約、損壞東西等。遇到這種情形，應(yīng)及時寫信致歉，以消除不必要的誤解，維系正常的關(guān)系。道歉信除應(yīng)及時寫之外，還必須寫得誠懇，歉意應(yīng)發(fā)自內(nèi)心，決不可敷衍塞責。再則，事情原委要解釋清楚，措辭應(yīng)當委婉貼切。（2)寫作要點

對所造成的失誤或疏忽表示道歉（原因）

對失誤或疏忽做出解釋

提出如何補救或挽回損失28寫作示例29（二）非書信30非書信類——簡歷

簡歷是個人經(jīng)歷的書面表達形式，應(yīng)包含個人信息、教育背景和工作經(jīng)歷。有時還可包含事業(yè)目標（objective或careerobjective）、其他經(jīng)歷（activities）、獲獎情況（awards）和特長（specialskills）等。31非書信寫作——簡歷范文示例Direction:Supposeyouaregoingtograduatefromtheuniversity.Writearesumeinabout100wordstoapplyforajob.Donotuseyourownname,using"LiMei"instead.32非書信寫作——簡歷RESUMEPersonalData:Name:LiMeiSex:FemaleAddress:Room602,DormitoryBuilding12,SouthChinaNormalUniversityTianhe,Guangzhou,430021DateofBirth:June16,1997PlaceofBirth:Tianhe,GuanghzouTelephone:(020Hobbies:painting,reading,Internetsurfing,dancingForeignLanguages:EnglishObjective:Toworkasaregionalsalesrepresentativewhoisresponsibleforsalesactivityandcoordination.33非書信寫作——簡歷Education:2014~PresentStudyingatSouthChinaNormalUniversityBachelorofArtsinfinance2011~2014StudyingatGuangzhouNo.1HighSchool2009~2011StudyingatGuangzhouNo.7JuniorHighSchoolWorkExperience:NoneSpecialSkillsandTechnicalQualifications:Iamprofessionallytrainedinfinanceandeconomics.InadditiontoMandarin,Icanspeak,writeandreadEnglishfluently.Ihadtwopart-timejobsinACompanyandBCompany,whichhelpedmegainsomesalesoperationknowledgeandsalesplanningexperience.34非書信寫作——通知英文通知的寫作也可采用不同形式。有的是采用句子的形式予以陳述，而有的則只做以簡單的羅列。一般應(yīng)注意以下幾點：1.必須包括notice字樣，而且每個字母都應(yīng)采用大寫；2.內(nèi)容必須包括時間、地點、事宜和通知對象等。表達須準確，措詞也要較正式；3.必須包括寫通知的個人或者單位的稱謂，而且一般都放在通知的右下腳；4.必須包括寫通知的日期。35非書信寫作——通知36非書信寫作——通知37非書信寫作——請假條請假條應(yīng)包括以下四部分內(nèi)容：①日期日期通常應(yīng)在正文右上角，因請假條涉及到的是最近時間內(nèi)的事情，故可直接用幾月，幾日或星期幾來表示，如April10或10April或Thursday.②稱呼稱呼常用常規(guī)信中的稱呼語，如Dear…,Mr.…,Professor…,Dr.…等。③正文正文是請假條的核心部分，主要涉及到請假原因，請假時間，結(jié)尾時需用一些表示感謝或請求批準的話語。切記理由要充分，在必要是應(yīng)附上相應(yīng)的證明。④結(jié)束語的署名結(jié)束語常用yoursfaithfully或yourssincerely或yourstruly等。38非書信寫作——請假條常用句型①起首用語請假條中起首句常用來說明請假原因或請假時間，常用句型如下：I'dliketoapplyforthreedaysleaveofabsence,startingfrom…,andfinishingon…Iamwritingtoaskforsickleaveof…days,startingfrom…to…I'msorryIcan'tattendthemeetingbecause/as…Owingto…/As…,Ishallbeunableto…39非書信寫作——請假條②結(jié)尾常用語請假條中結(jié)尾用語常用來表示感謝、請予批準等。常用句型如下：Ishouldbeveryobliged/gratefulifyougrantmetheleave.Ihopeyouwillgrantmetheleave.Hopingyouwillexcusemynon-attendance.I'llcertainlydomybesttomakeup…once/assoonas…NowIenclosethetelegraphfrommyfather.40非書信寫作——請假條December01,2019DearManager,I’dliketoapplyforthreedaysleave,startingfromthe13thtothe15th,inordertoreturntomyhometowntoseemyfather,whoisseriouslyillthesedays.Ishouldbeverymuchobligedifyougrantmetheleave.Astothedutiestobemissedduringmyabsence,IshalldomybesttomakethemupassoonasIgetback.HereIenclosethemessagefrommymother.Yoursfaithfully,LiMing41（三）技巧421.inone'sopinion,asfarasI'mconcerned,frommypointofview代替think，believe（表達觀點）Ithink/believethatlearningaforegnlanguageisimportant.AsfarasI'mconcerned,learningaforegnlanguageisimportant.2.beof+n.替換adj.（important，useful等）Themeetingtobeheldtomorrowisveryimportant.Themeetingtobeheldtomorrowisofgreatimportance.寫作——詞匯替換43寫作——詞匯替換3.grateful,appreciation（appreciate）代替thankIthankyouverymuchfor…I'mtrulygratefultoyoufor…Ireallyappreciateyourhelp.4.expect,lookforwardto代替hopeIhopetoseeyousoon./Ihopetoreceiveyourearlyreply.I'mlookingforwardtoreceivingyouearlyreply.44寫作——詞匯替換5.besupposedtodo替換shouldYoushouldmakethebestuseoftime.Youaresupposedtomakethebestuseoftime.6.givesb.ahand/dosb.afavor代替helpWouldyouhelpmetohostthemeeting?Wouldyougivemeahand/domeafavortohostthemeeting?45寫作——詞匯替換46寫作——詞匯替換47寫作——詞匯替換11.apologize/apology替換sorryI'msorryforbeinglateandcausingyousometrouble.Iapologizeforbeinglateandcausingyousometrouble.12.sparenoefforts替換tryone’sbestIwilltrymybesttodomyworkwell.Iwillsparenoeffortstodomyworkwell.48寫作——詞匯替換13.beeagerto,belongingto替換wantIwanttobeamemberofyouandmakemoreprogress.I'meagertobeamemberofyouandmakemoreprogress.14.agrowingnumberof代替moreandmoreMoreandmorestudentsareindulgedinplayingtheKingofGlory.AgrowingnumberofstudentsareindulgedinplayingtheKingofGlory.4950寫作——詞匯替換寫作——詞匯替換17.bequalifiedfor替換befitforI'mquitesurethatI'mfitfortheposition.I'mquitesurethatI'mqualifiedfortheposition.18.havenochoicebutto替換havetoYouhavetocherishyourcollegelife.Youhavenochoicebuttocherishyourcollegelife.51寫作——連詞使用52寫作——連詞使用4.轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系

but，however,while,onthecontrary,whereas,nevertheless5.因果關(guān)系原因：because,as,since,dueto,owingto,for結(jié)果：therefore,thus,asaresult,sothat,asaconsequence,consequently6.條件關(guān)系if,unless,otherwise,incase,solongas,onconditionthat53寫作——連詞使用7.遞進關(guān)系what'smore,furthermore,

moreover,tomakemattersworse8.時間關(guān)系next,then,later,finally,eventually,meanwhile,atthesametime9.總結(jié)概括inshort,inbrief,inconclusion,inaword,ingeneral,generallyspeaking,onthewhole54寫作——常用表達闡述觀點或進行論證1.就我所知：asfarasIknow,tomyknowledge2.在我看來：frommypointofview,itseemstomethat3.一般來說：generallyspeaking,4.概括地說：ingeneralterms,55例證/補充說明/進一步闡述1.例如：forexample,forinstance,suchas2.等等：andsoon,andsoforth,andall,andothers,andthelike,aswell3.同樣地：similarly,likewise,inthesameway4.特別是：particularly,inparticular,especially5.再者，更重要的是：what’smore,morethanthat,themostimportant56例證/補充說明/進一步闡述6.此外：moreover,furthermore,inaddition,inadditiontothat,besides7.換言之：inotherwords,or,thatis57寫作——常用表達陳述觀點/理由/措施1.我的看法是……：