方法與策略 熱點(diǎn)07-中考英語高分作文（浙江專用版）

備戰(zhàn)2023年中考英語高分作文熱點(diǎn)07方法與策略一、話題作文1．某英語網(wǎng)站開展關(guān)于“HowtoImproveMyself”的征稿活動，倡導(dǎo)同學(xué)們提升自我，努力成為“終生運(yùn)動者，責(zé)任擔(dān)當(dāng)者，問題解決者，優(yōu)雅生活者”，請根據(jù)以下圖示內(nèi)容積極投稿。要求：1.詞數(shù)80~100；2.請根據(jù)以上提示信息，結(jié)合實(shí)際情況敘述，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；3.文稿中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名、校名；4.字跡工整，語言流暢，表達(dá)正確，邏輯清晰。HowtoImproveMyselfLifeisreallyalonglesson,soIhavetoimprovemyself._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【參考范文】HowtoImproveMyselfLifeisreallyalonglesson,soIhavetoimprovemyself.First,Ineedtoexerciseonehoureveryday.Itisbadtostayathomeandplaygamesforalongtime.Second,Ishouldberesponsibleformyselfandmyfamily.Ishouldbeindependentinsteadofdependingonmyparentstoooften.Third,infaceoftheproblems,Ihavetotakeupthechallengesandworkthemoutratherthanrunawayfromthem.Next,Iwilldevelopmyinterestinmanythings,suchasplayingbasketball,andknitting,insteadofbeinginterestedinnothing.Lastbutnotleast,Iwillcommunicatewithothersandbeagoodteamplayer.【詳解】1.題干解讀：該題目屬于議論文寫作。在寫作時應(yīng)緊接開頭繼續(xù)寫作，根據(jù)題目要求講述運(yùn)動，責(zé)任擔(dān)當(dāng)，問題解決和興趣愛好方面提升自己的方法。2.寫作指導(dǎo)：本文時態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時為主，人稱以第一人稱為主，講述提升自己的方法，要敘述完整，條理清晰。2．你校英語社團(tuán)面向畢業(yè)生舉行以“成為更好的自己”為主題的征文活動，請你結(jié)合自身經(jīng)歷，從“makefriends”,“haveahealthylifestyle”,“developgoodstudyhabits”,“takeupanewhobby”,“beindependent”五個方面任選一至兩項(xiàng)，寫一篇英語短文投稿。要求：1.詞數(shù)80-100(開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù))；2.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名、校名等相關(guān)信息。Atthebeginningofanewlife,I’mgoingtomakemyselfbetter._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【參考范文】Atthebeginningofanewlife,I’mgoingtomakemyselfbetter.Firstly,developinggoodstudyhabitsisofgreatimportance.Icanasknotonlymyteacher,butalsomyclassmates.AndIshouldlearnfrommistakesinsteadofbeingafraidofmakingmistakes.Secondly,Ishouldmakefriendswithpeoplearoundmyself.Asthesayinggoes,“Friendsarethefamilieswechoose”.Wearehappierwhenwearewithfriends.Allinall,aslongasIworkhardatanything,Iwillmakemyselfbetter.【詳解】題干解讀：題目要求以“成為更好的自己”為主題寫一篇英語短文；要求包含一至兩項(xiàng)提示內(nèi)容，字?jǐn)?shù)80-100左右。寫作指導(dǎo)：此作文時態(tài)宜用一般現(xiàn)在時，采用第一人稱口吻。此作文可采用3段落格式，第一段：點(diǎn)明主題，想要成為更好的自己；第二段：從學(xué)習(xí)習(xí)慣、結(jié)交朋友兩方面說明如何成為更好的自己；第三段：總結(jié)全文，只要努力，就能使自己變得更好。二、材料作文3．2022年4月21日，國家發(fā)布《義務(wù)教育課程方案（2022年版）》，將勞動課程列入國家課程，讓學(xué)生要學(xué)會家務(wù)勞動，參與社會實(shí)踐勞動，志愿服務(wù)勞動等。作為一名中學(xué)生，請你結(jié)合實(shí)際，以“HowCanWeDevelopWorkingSpirit?”為題，寫一篇短文，談?wù)勀愕目捶?。參考詞匯：workingclass

livingskill

socialactivity要求：1.文中不得出現(xiàn)自己的真實(shí)姓名、學(xué)校等個人信息。2.詞數(shù)：100詞左右（文章開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）。HowCanWeDevelopWorkingSpirit?It’sprettyimportantforteenagerstodevelopworkingspirit.Asamiddleschoolstudent,___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【參考范文】HowCanWeDevelopWorkingSpirit?It’sprettyimportantforteenagerstodevelopworkingspirit.Asamiddleschoolstudent,Iwelcomeitwarmly.First,weshouldhaveworkingclassestolearnsomebasiclifeskillsatschooleveryweek.Secondly,wecantakepartinout-of-classactivitiessuchasplantingtressorgrowingvegetablestoenrichourreal-worldworkexperience.Also,weneedtrytodosomechoresathome,liketidyingrooms,washingclothesordoingsomedishes.Aboveall,wecouldformgoodworkinghabitsandvaluetheimportanceofworkinghardthroughourexperience.Inaword,thehardworkingspiriteducationsisnecessaryandithelpstobuildusup.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇說明文，為材料作文。②時態(tài)：時態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時”；③提示：以“HowCanWeDevelopWorkingSpirit”為題介紹如何培養(yǎng)勞動精神的方法。[寫作步驟]第一步，開頭已給出，并表達(dá)自己的看法。第二步，介紹培養(yǎng)勞動精神的方法。第三步，總結(jié)概括。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①takepartin參加②suchas例如③inaword總之[高分句型]①It’sprettyimportantforteenagerstodevelopworkingspirit（“it’s+形容詞+forsb+todosth”的句型）②Also,weneedtrytodosomechoresathome,liketidyingrooms,washingclothesordoingsomedishes.（動詞不定式作賓語）4．在豐富多彩的初中學(xué)習(xí)生活中，你一定積累了很多學(xué)習(xí)方法和經(jīng)驗(yàn)吧！現(xiàn)?？⑽膶谝浴癓earningtolearn”為主題征稿。請你根據(jù)以下提示，用英語寫一篇短文投稿。寫作要點(diǎn)：1.一個科目名稱；2.此科目的學(xué)習(xí)方法（至少兩個）；3.此科目的學(xué)習(xí)感受或期望。寫作要求：1.將標(biāo)題和首句補(bǔ)充完整；2.包含所有要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；3.文中不得透露個人信息；4.詞數(shù)80左右。Methodsoflearning________Herearemymethodsoflearning________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【參考范文】MethodsoflearningEnglishHerearemymethodsoflearningEnglish.First,IusuallywatchEnglishmoviesandlistentoEnglishsongs.Ithinkit’sarelaxingwaytolearnthecorrectpronunciationandproperexpressions.Second,readingpassagesonthesametopichelpsalotinlearningnewwords.Inthisway,thenewwordscanberepeatedandIcanunderstandtheirmeaningsbetter.What’smore,it’sagoodhabittokeepadiaryinEnglish.ThathelpsmethinkinEnglishandimprovemywritingskillsaswell.Englishisabridgewhichconnectstheworldandus.It’sinterestingtolearnit.IhopeIcanmakegreaterprogressinthefuture.【詳解】1.題干解讀：本文是一篇材料作文。以“學(xué)會學(xué)習(xí)”為題寫一篇短文。2.寫作指導(dǎo)：本文采用一般現(xiàn)在時，人稱以第三人稱和第一人稱為主。分為兩段式：第一段先介紹自己學(xué)習(xí)英語的方法；第二段表達(dá)學(xué)習(xí)英語的感受或期望。寫作時保持主謂一致性，做到無語法和標(biāo)點(diǎn)錯誤。5．2022年令世人矚目，在過去的半年里，涌現(xiàn)出了很多為了夢想拼搏奮斗的人物。例如，圓夢航天，勝利返航的神舟十三的3名宇航員；開場失利，永不言棄，最終奪得亞洲杯冠軍的中國女足運(yùn)動員……正是這種對夢想執(zhí)著追求的精神，使得他們?yōu)樽鎳龀隽送怀鲐暙I(xiàn)。作為新時代的青少年，你的夢想是什么？請以“MyDream”為題，寫一篇短文。要點(diǎn)：1.你的夢想是什么？2.原因是什么？3.為此你會怎么做？注意：1.詞數(shù)90左右；2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；3.文中不允許出現(xiàn)自己的真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校。MyDream___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【參考范文】MyDreamEveryonehashisdream.Mydreamistobeadoctor.WhenIwasinGradeSeven,Iwassickandoftenwenttoseedoctors.Thedoctorswereveryfriendlytomeandtheyoftencheeredmeup.Withthehelpofthem,Iwasgettingbetter.NowIamveryhealthy.SincethenIhavehopedtobecomeadoctor.Inordertoachievemydream,Iwillstudyhard.I’llgivemylovetothepatientsasmuchaspossibleandhelpthemoutofdanger.Tobeadoctorisreallygood.Ithinkmydreamwillcometrueoneday.【詳解】1.題干解讀：本文屬于材料作文寫作，要求以“MyDream”為題，介紹自己的夢想，以及擁有這個夢想的原因，和為此會做些什么。寫作時按說明文的格式來寫。2.寫作指導(dǎo)：本文主要采用第一人稱來寫。寫作時，說明“夢想是什么”這一部分應(yīng)用一般現(xiàn)在時；講述擁有這個夢想的事件時，應(yīng)用一般過去時；而在講述為了實(shí)現(xiàn)夢想，“會做什么事”這一部分應(yīng)用一般將來時。按照題目要求，先介紹“我”的夢想，再講述擁有這一夢想的事件過程，最后列舉為了實(shí)現(xiàn)夢想會做的事情并結(jié)尾。寫作時注意三種時態(tài)的正確使用方法。6．中國共產(chǎn)主義青年團(tuán)已經(jīng)走過了百年歷程。作為新時代青年中的一員，未來屬于我們，希望寄予我們，奮斗的青春更美麗。請以“HowtoMakeMyselfBetter”為題，談?wù)勀銓⑷绾嗡茉旄玫淖约骸Ｒ螅?.字跡工整，段落清晰，表達(dá)清楚，語法正確，行文連貫；2.思維導(dǎo)圖中的提示詞僅供參考，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；3.詞數(shù)：80-100詞。HowtoMakeMyselfBetter______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【參考范文】HowtoMakeMyselfBetterAsateenager,IthinkIshouldworkhardertomakemyselfbetter.Firstofall,itisimportanttolivehealthily.Iwilleatmorefruitandvegetables.Iwillalsotakeexerciseeverydayandgetenoughsleep.What’smore,Ishouldworkhardatallmysubjects.I’llnotbeafraidtofacechallengesanymoreandtrymybesttosolvetheproblems.Besides,itisnecessarytohaveagoodrelationshipwithfamilyandfriends.Lastbutnotleast,it’sourresponsibilitytotakecareofourparents.I’llalsodowhatIcantohelpotherpeople.Bydoingthese,Iwillmakemyselfbetterandbetter.【詳解】1.題干解讀：本文以“HowtoMakeMyselfBetter”并結(jié)合思維導(dǎo)圖中的提示詞寫一篇文章，介紹如何成為更好的自己。2.寫作指導(dǎo)：本文以一般將來時為主，人稱以第一人稱為主。第一段引入話題；第二段從不同的方面介紹如何成為更好的自己；第三段進(jìn)行總結(jié)。寫作時運(yùn)用不同的句式和短語使文章層次清晰、邏輯清楚，做到無單詞拼寫和語法錯誤。7．隨著“雙減”政策的實(shí)施，同學(xué)們有更多的課余時間來培養(yǎng)自己的興趣愛好，把生活過成自己喜歡的樣子。親愛的同學(xué)，你想做一個快樂的人嗎？請你以“HowtoBeaHappyStudent”為題，寫一篇英語短文。要求：(1)根據(jù)右邊的圖文信息，選擇至少兩個方面的內(nèi)容行文，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；(2)文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的姓名和校名等個人信息；(3)字跡工整，語言流暢，表達(dá)正確，條理清楚；(4)詞數(shù)不少于80。______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【參考范文】HowtoBeaHappyStudentEveryonewantstobehappy.Asastudent,whatcanwedotobehappy?Hereismyadvice.It’snecessaryforustohavelearninggoals.Thegoalscanmakeusbeclearaboutwhattodoeverydayandliveabusyandmeaningfullife.Tobehealthyistobehappy.Soremembertohavegoodlifehabitsanddomoreexercise.Wecandosomesports,suchasrunningorplayingbasketball.Also,weshouldbereadytohelpothers.Whenwehelpthoseintrouble,wecangetmuchhappiness.Besides,themostimportantforusistostayinagoodmood.Ifweareingoodspirits,wecanstudybetter.Weshouldhaveapositiveattitudeandbereadytohelpothers.Ibelieveifwedoso,wecanhaveahappylife.【詳解】1.題干解讀：本文是一篇材料作文。要求以“HowtoBeaHappyStudent”為題，結(jié)合圖文信息進(jìn)行寫作，注意要點(diǎn)齊全，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。2.寫作指導(dǎo)：寫作時要以第一人稱來行文，時態(tài)用一般現(xiàn)在時。作文可分為三段，第一段引出話題；第二段從健康，愛好，情緒和習(xí)慣幾方面進(jìn)行闡述；第三段收尾。要保證語言連貫，無語法和拼寫錯誤。8．最近，你校開展了“巧手制書簽，書香滿校園”主題活動，請你以“ADIYbookmarkformyfavouritebook”為題，根據(jù)表格中的內(nèi)容提示寫一篇英語短文，向?qū)W校英文報的讀書專欄投稿，介紹制作書簽的目的和過程，并分享制作心得。Whyyoumadeithelpenjoyreadingyourfavouritebook（name,typeofbook,whatyoulikemost）HowyoumadeitMaterials&Tools●card●scissors,glue…Steps●cutthecardinto…●drawapictureof…●write（yourfavouritesentencefromthebookorafamoussayingor…）●…Howyoufelt…要求：（1）表達(dá)清楚，語法正確，上下文連貫；（2）必須包括提示中的所有信息，并按要求適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；（3）詞數(shù)：100詞左右（開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）；（4）不得使用真實(shí)姓名、校名和地名等。ADIYbookmarkformyfavouritebookLastweekItookpartinourschool’sReading&Bookmark-makingactivity.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【參考范文】：ADIYbookmarkformyfavouritebookLastweekItookpartinourschool’sReading&Bookmark-makingactivity.Itspurposewastohelpusenjoyreadingourfavouritebook.MyfavoritebookistheclassicnovelJourneytotheWest,oneoftheFourGreatClassicalNovels.IlikeMonkeyKingbestbecausehehelpstheweakandnevergivesup.Inordertomakeabookmark,Ipreparedacard,scissors,glueandsoon.First,Icutthecardintolongstrips.AndthenIdrewapictureofamonkeyontheleftandwroteafamoussaying“Nothingisimpossibleifyouputyourheartintoit.”ontherighttoencouragemenottogiveupwhenfacingdifficulties.Atlast,Igluedittoathinpieceofwood.AlthoughImetsomedifficultiesinthisprocess,InevergaveupandIamproudofmyself.【詳解】1.題干解讀：本文以“ADIYbookmarkformyfavouritebook”為題，并結(jié)合表格中的內(nèi)容，描述制作書簽的目的和過程，可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)。2.寫作指導(dǎo)：本文以一般現(xiàn)在時和一般過去時為主；人稱以第一人稱為主。第一段介紹制作書簽的目的，以及最喜歡的書的類型和最喜歡這本書的什么地方；第二段重點(diǎn)描述制作書簽需要的材料和工具以及制作書簽的過程；第三段描述自己的感想。寫作時運(yùn)用不同的句式和短語使文章層次清晰、邏輯清楚，做到無單詞拼寫和語法錯誤。三、講稿9．假定你是李華，來自光明學(xué)校，將代表你校參加全市中學(xué)生“學(xué)會學(xué)習(xí)”主題分享會。請以“LearningtoLearn”為題，根據(jù)提示問題和寫作要求，寫一篇英語發(fā)言稿。提示問題：1.Whatsubjectareyouinterestedin?2.Howdoyoudealwiththedifficultiesinlearning?3.Doyouoftenmakeanyplansforyourstudy?4.Whatmethodsdoyouusuallyusetolearn?5.Doyouuseothergoodlearningmaterials?寫作要求：1.請作簡要的自我介紹；2.至少選擇三個提示問題展開寫作；3.詞數(shù)不少于80詞；4.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱。LearningtoLearnDearteachersandstudents,________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【參考范文】LearningtoLearnDearteachersandstudents,

MynameisLiHua.IcomefromGuangmingSchool.Todaymytopicis“Learntolearn”.

Firstofall,myfavoritesubjectisEnglish.Infact,atthebeginning,myEnglishwasnotgood,butIwasstillveryinterestedinit.InordertoimprovemyEnglish,Ioftenaskmyteacherforhelpandrecitewordsathomebymyselfeveryday.Slowly,myEnglishimproved.Besides,Ialsomakeplansformystudy.Forexample,IhavetomemorizeEnglishwordswhenIhavebreakfastinthemorning.AndIreviewwhatIlearneverydaybeforeIgotobedatnight.

That’sall.Thankyou!【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇應(yīng)用文，為演講稿；②時態(tài)：時態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時”；③提示：根據(jù)所給英文提示以“LearningtoLearn”為題寫一篇作文，介紹“學(xué)會學(xué)習(xí)”。[寫作步驟]第一步，可以從所給提示問題選出兩個來敘述；第二步，再從剩下的問題中選擇一個展開描述。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①beinterestedin對……感興趣②inorderto為了③forexample比如[高分句型]①IhavetomemorizeEnglishwordswhenIhavebreakfast