06 多彩社團(tuán)與課外活動中考英語滿分作文賞析

06多彩社團(tuán)與課外活動NO.1（2022·湖南長沙·中考真題）新學(xué)期來了，學(xué)生社團(tuán)又要招新啦！假如你是社團(tuán)招新工作負(fù)責(zé)人，請根據(jù)以下內(nèi)容和要求寫一篇短文，為同學(xué)們介紹社團(tuán)的情況（包括名稱、活動及目的）。要求：（1）介紹下表中第1和第2兩個(gè)社團(tuán)，并聯(lián)系實(shí)際或發(fā)揮想象，補(bǔ)充介紹第3個(gè)社團(tuán)；（2）80詞左右（開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）；（3）文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)人名和校名。1.PublicSpeakersActivities:practicespeakinginpublicandgivespeeches;…Purposes:tovoiceopinionsclearlyandconfidently;toovercomefearandshyness;…2.CoolCooksActivities:design（設(shè)計(jì)）healthymenusandlearnhowtocook;…Purposes:tohavebalanced（均衡的）andhealthyeating;toenjoylife;…3.____Sports____Activities:chooseyourownfavouritesportsanddoexercisewithfriends;…Purposes:tokeepfitandloseweight;tomakemorefriends;…ClubsAreCalling!Thenewtermishere.Areyoureadyforaninterestingandcolorfulschoollife?NowI’dliketointroducesomeofourclubs.IntheclubofPublicSpeakers,________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【滿分作文賞析】

ClubsAreCalling!Thenewtermishere.Areyoureadyforaninterestingandcolorfulschoollife?NowI’dliketointroducesomeofourclubs.IntheclubofPublicSpeakers,youwillpracticespeakinginpublicandgivespeeches.Thepurposeistovoiceopinionsclearlyandconfidently.Byjoiningthisclub,youcanovercomeyourfearandshynessandbecomemoreout-going.TheCoolCooksclubisreallycool.Itholdsactivitiessuchasdesigninghealthymenusandlearninghowtocook.Youcantastedifferentfoodanddevelopabalancedandhealthyeatinghabit.Itwillmakeyourlifemoreenjoyable.Ifyouwanttoloseweightorjustkeepfit,theSportsClubisyourbestchoice.Therearemanykindsofsportsinthisclub.Youcanchooseyourownfavouritesportsanddoexercisewithfriendsandotherstudents.Soyouwillmakemorefriendsatthesametime.Youcanchoosemorethanoneclub,dependingonyourinterestandtime.Ibelievetheseclubswillmakeyourschoollifefullofsurprises.Joinusnow!【解析】1.題干解讀：題干要求根據(jù)表格中所給的兩個(gè)社團(tuán)的信息，并補(bǔ)充第三個(gè)社團(tuán)信息，介紹這三個(gè)社團(tuán)，包括它們的名稱、活動內(nèi)容和目的。2.寫作指導(dǎo)：本文時(shí)態(tài)采用一般現(xiàn)時(shí)和一般將來時(shí)，以第三人稱介紹俱樂部。寫作時(shí)承接所給開頭，對三個(gè)俱樂部的活動和目的分別進(jìn)行描述，最后另起一段表達(dá)期望并呼吁同學(xué)們加入。注意保持主謂的一致性，做到無標(biāo)點(diǎn)和語法錯(cuò)誤。NO.2（2022·貴州銅仁·中考真題）你校廣播站面向全校學(xué)生舉辦一場以“豐富的課外活動”為主題的英語征文活動。假設(shè)你是李華，請撰文投稿，分享學(xué)校的課外活動情況及體會。要求：（1）短文必須包括左圖所有信息，可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，使行文連貫。（2）80詞左右（文章開頭句已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）。（3）文章不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名、校名、地名。（4）書寫正確規(guī)范，卷面整潔。提示詞：laborpracticebase（勞動實(shí)踐基地）diggingtheland（松土）；respect（尊重）。ColorfulAfter-SchoolActivitiesI’mLiHua.Gladtosharethecolorfulafter-schoolactivitiesofourschool.Inourschool,wecanchoosewhatweareinterestedin.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【滿分作文賞析】ColorfulAfter-SchoolActivitiesI’mLiHua.Gladtosharethecolorfulafter-schoolactivitiesofourschool.Inourschool,wecanchoosewhatweareinterestedin.IfyouwanttoimproveyouroralEnglish,youcanchooseEnglishClub.Youcanlearnabouthowtorecitehere.Ifyouaregoodatdrawing,youcanjoinDrawingClub.Youcanalsolearnaboutpaper-cutting.Ifyouareinterestedingrowingvegetablesandplanting,youcanjoinLabourPractice.Ifyouwanttokeephealthy,youcanjoinSportsClub.Youcanlearnhowtoswim,playfootballandsoon.Theseafter-schoolactivitiesnotonlyenrichourafter-schoollives,butalsoteachussomebasicskills.【解析】1.題干解讀：本文是一篇材料作文。圍繞“豐富的課外活動”寫一篇短文。2.寫作指導(dǎo)：本文主要采用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，人稱以第一人稱和第二人稱為主。分為三段式：第一段引出主題，文章開頭已給出；第二段根據(jù)提示材料介紹學(xué)校不同的課外活動，以及參加這些課外活動的好處；最后一段表達(dá)自己對這些課外活動的體會。寫作時(shí)保持主謂一致性，做到無語法和標(biāo)點(diǎn)錯(cuò)誤。NO.3（2022·四川瀘州·中考真題）開展豐富多彩的課外活動對我們很有好處。請以“Free-timeActivities”為題，用英語寫一篇短文介紹你及朋友們的課外活動開展情況。要點(diǎn)提示：1.內(nèi)容：體育，如跑步；藝術(shù)，如唱歌繪畫；勞動，如做家務(wù)、參加志愿者活動；其它，如閱讀……。2.好處：休息放松，學(xué)習(xí)新知識，學(xué)會新技能，結(jié)交新朋友等。3.個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)：……。要求：1.詞數(shù)110詞左右（首句已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）；2.要點(diǎn)提示均須涉及，可適當(dāng)增加內(nèi)容；3.不用真實(shí)姓名、校名、地名。參考詞語：volunteer，relax，knowledge，skillFree-timeActivitiesFree-timeactivitiesaregoodforusteenagers._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【滿分作文賞析】Free-timeActivitiesFree-timeactivitiesaregoodforusteenagers.MyfriendsandIhaveavarietyoffree-timeactivities.First,weoftenrunforanhouronweekendsandwealwaysplayfootballafterclassbecausewealllikeplayingit.Ifwehavetime,wewilldrawsomebeautifulpicturestodecorateourschool.What’smore,weoftenhelpourparentsdothehousework.Evensomeofusdosomevolunteerwork,suchascleaningtheparkandvisitingtheold.Andwealsoreadsomeinterestingbooksandshareourideastogether.Free-timeactivitiesarebeneficialtous.Wecannotonlyrelax,butalsowecanlearnsomeknowledgethatcan’tbelearntinclass.Besides,wecanlearnsomeskillsthatareimportanttoourlife.Themostimportantisthatwecanmakemanyfriendswhohavethesameinterest.Inmyopinion,weshouldsparesometimetodofree-timeactivitiesinordertogrowuphealthily.【解析】1.題干解讀：本文以“Free-timeActivities”為題，并根據(jù)題干中的提示寫一篇文章，可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)。2.寫作指導(dǎo)：本文以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和第一人稱為主。第一段已給出；第二段從不同方面介紹自己和朋友的課外活動；第三段介紹課外活動的好處；最后一段發(fā)表自己的觀點(diǎn)。寫作時(shí)運(yùn)用不同的句式和短語使文章層次清晰、邏輯清楚，做到無單詞拼寫和語法錯(cuò)誤。NO.4（2022·浙江麗水·中考真題）假如你是李明，你的美國朋友David向你了解暑假社會實(shí)踐活動的計(jì)劃，請結(jié)合下表內(nèi)容寫一封郵件向他介紹你的計(jì)劃。SocialPracticePlanWhattodoWhytodoso●volunteertodo...●makeasurveyabout...●haveagraduationtripto...●…●behelpful...●learnmoreabout...●openone’seyes...●…注意：1）文中必須包含至少兩項(xiàng)活動的內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；2）文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名、學(xué)校等信息；3）詞數(shù)：80~100；郵件的開頭與結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。DearDavid,Gladtosharemysocialpracticeplanwithyou._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Lookingforwardtoyourreply.Yours,LiMing【滿分作文賞析】DearDavid,Gladtosharemysocialpracticeplanwithyou.Asitwillbethelastsummerholidayinjuniorschool,someclassmatesandIplantogoonagraduationtriptoHangzhou,thecapitalcityofZhejiang.Byenjoyingthebeautifulsceneryandcolorfulculturesthere,wecanopenoureyesandbringsomeunforgettablememories.Afterthetrip,Iwillvolunteertohelpinourcitylibrary,sortingoutbooks,guidingreaderstotherightbookshelves,andofcourse,communicatingwithdifferentpeople.I’msurethisexperiencecannotonlyenrichmylifebuthelpmeunderstandthetruemeaningoflearningbydoing.Lookingforwardtoyourreply.Yours,LiMing【解析】1.題干解讀：本文是一封郵件作文。向David介紹自己的暑假社會實(shí)踐活動計(jì)劃。2.寫作指導(dǎo)：本文主要采用一般將來時(shí)，人稱以第一人稱為主。分為三段式：第一段引出主題；第二段根據(jù)材料提示內(nèi)容介紹自己的計(jì)劃；最后一段表達(dá)期待對方的回信。寫作時(shí)保持主謂一致性，做到無語法和標(biāo)點(diǎn)錯(cuò)誤。NO.5（2022·山東棗莊·中考真題）讀下面的文章。請根據(jù)問題提示，盡可能用自己的話寫出大意總結(jié)。詞數(shù)不少于60，不多于80。Doyoufeeltiredofthesameeverydaylife?“Survival(生存)Holidays”isforchildrentogointothelonelyplaceforexcitingactivities.About1,100schoolswilltakechildrenintothegreatoutdoorswithouttheirparentsthissummer.Whydopeoplelike“SurvivalHolidays”?Becausetheythinkbeingclosetonatureisgoodforchildren.ManychildreninbigcitiesspendalltimewatchingTVandplayingcomputergames.“SurvivalHolidays”givesthemanimportantchange.Is“SurvivalHolidays”awonderfulidea?Itis.Childrenwillhavemorefreetimetoplayandlearntofacedanger.Theydon’tknowwhattodowhentheyareindanger.Evensomethinglikecrossingasmallriverseemstobeahardchallenge.Childrenarenotcomfortablewithdanger.Evensmalldangerlikegettingtheirfeetwetorfallingdownseemsveryterribletothem.Manypeoplethinkthesurvivalactivitiesaregoodforchildren.Evenyearslater,theywillstillrememberwhattheyhavelearned.Somehavelearnedtostayclamindifficulttimes.Somehavelearnedhowtokeepsafe.Othershavelearnedhowtoworkinateam.Alltheseskillswillhelpthemalotintheirlives.1.Whatis“SurvivalHolidays”?2.Whydopeoplelike“SurvivalHolidays”?3.Is“SurvivalHolidays”awonderfulidea?Whyorwhynot?4.Whatarethegoodpointsofthesurvivalactivities?_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________