讀后續(xù)寫友誼類之Sally難忘的生日寫作任務(wù)單-高考英語作文復(fù)習(xí)專項(xiàng)

讀后續(xù)寫原題目呈現(xiàn)：閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。Sally'sbirthdaywasapproaching,buttheexcitementthatusuallyfilledherheartwasreplacedwithdisappointmentandstress.Turningelevenwasabigdeal,andshehadalwayscelebratedherbirthdaywithagrandpartysurroundedbyherfriends.However,thisyearwasdifferent.Theburdenofexcessivehomeworkandherparents’strugglingbusinessweighedheavilyonher,forcingSallytomakethedifficultdecisionofnothavingabirthdayparty,eventhoughitwasaneventsheenjoyeddearlyeveryyear.Oneday,duringthebreak,herbestfriend,Jane,withacuriouslookinhereyes,approached.“Areyougoingtohaveabirthdaypartythisyear?"Janeasked,sensingSally'ssadness.'No,"Sallysighedandrepliedsadly.“There'sjusttoomuchgoingonandmyparentsaregoingthroughfinancialdifficulties.”Sallysmiledweakly,tryingtoconcealherimmensedisappointmentandstress,butJanesawthroughherpretense(假裝)easily.Janenoddedthoughtfullyanddidnotsayanything.Afterthebreak,Sallysawhertalkingtooneoftheirclassmates,Sarah,secretively.Curious,Sallywentovertothem,butassoonasJanesawher,shequicklywalkedaway.SallywasstartledbyJane'sstrangeactionsandturnedtowardsSarah.“Whatdidshesay?”Sallyasked.However,Sarahsimplyshruggedandwalkedaway,leavingSallystandingthere,feelingleftoutandanxious.“Whatishappening?”Sallywonderedanxiously.“Aretheykeepingsomethingfromme?”AsSally'sbirthdaydrewnearer,Janewasoftenfoundchattingsoftlywithherotherclassmates.WheneverSallywentovertothem,theywouldjustwalkawayortellherthattheyweretalkingaboutasecretwhichSallywasnotallowedtoknow,“Janehasneverkeptsecretsfrommebefore,”Sallythought.Herheartsank.Evenherotherfriendsweredistancingthemselvesfromher!Sheswungbetweenconfusionandsadnesswitheachpassingmoment,desperatelytryingtofigureoutwhatwashappening.Whywereherfriendsdistancingthemselvesfromher?Andwhatweretheyhiding?P1：OnthedayofSally'sbirthday,shewenttoschoolandfoundherclassroom

intotaldarkness.P2：TearssprangfromSally'seyesandherfacebrokeintoaradiant(喜氣洋洋的)smile.【情節(jié)分析】Sally的11歲生日馬上就要到了，她自己非常激動并且也十分期待。然而，繁重的學(xué)業(yè)，加上父母親的財(cái)政危機(jī)，等原因，她不得不做出一個(gè)艱難的決定——今年不過生日。她感到十分悲傷。但是，她的好朋友Jane察覺了此事，于是和班上同學(xué)精心為Sally準(zhǔn)備了一場生日聚會，在生日這天，給Sally一個(gè)驚喜?！舅悸伏c(diǎn)撥】文章有特定的場景——生日。第一段段首句也出現(xiàn)了環(huán)境描寫herclassroomintotaldarkness，這和前文Sally悲傷的心情是一致的。因此，我們不妨還是從環(huán)境描寫中光線的角度切入，第一段寫Sally在出現(xiàn)“光”（教室燈光或者蠟燭的光）前后的心理變化，以及光亮起之后教室內(nèi)的場景描寫（同學(xué)們精心布置的聚會場景）。第二段段首句描寫了Sally的激動情緒，眼含淚水，但是臉上綻放笑意。可以重點(diǎn)描寫Sally的激動和感動的心情，明白了前文所講的同學(xué)們“疏離”她的原因——準(zhǔn)備生日驚喜。同時(shí)也明白了友誼的珍貴，正如培根所說：“Moreoftenthannot,closefriendshipwillhelpsmoothoutthesometimesrockyroadthatweareallmeanttotravel.”（新譯林版教材必修一Unit3Extendedreading）?！緟⒖挤段摹縊nthedayofSally'sbirthday,shewenttoschoolandfoundherclassroomintotaldarkness.Theatmospherewaschargedwithmysteriousstillnessandsuspense.Asshecautiouslysteppedintothechaoticandconfusingdarkness,thefeelingofdepressioncoursedthroughher.Suddenly,thelights

were

flickedon

and

achorusof

“Surprise!”

eruptedintheroom.She

wasoverwhelmedbythesightof

colorfulballoonsandstreamersandahomemadebirthdaycake,

andherdesk

waspiledwith

giftsofallshapesandsizes.Herbestfriend,Jane,leadingallherclassmates,

heldahomemadebirthday

withacardattached

toitstransparentpackagingbox

andexcitedlyinvited

herto

makeawish.Theloveand

effortputintoeverydetail

ofthepartyfilledherwithwarmth.TearssprangfromSally'seyesandherfacebrokeintoaradiantsmile.Shemovedforwardand

picked

upthecarefullypreparedcardthatwasfilledwithcolorfulpaintingsandheartfeltmessages.Eachwordsheread

sentawaveofhappiness,

dispellingtheshadowsof

doubtandanxietythathadcloudedherheart.Alivewith

happinessandgratitude,sheembracedJaneandherclassmates,feelingblessedtohavesuchwonderfulfriendsbyherside.Shecouldn'tbelieve

thelengthsherfriendsandclassmateshadgoneto

makeherbirthdayspecialandunforgettable,which

servedasareminderofwhat

Bacononcesaid,

“Friendshipwillhelpsmoothoutthesometimesrockyroadthatweareallmeanttotravel”.默寫版：OnthedayofSally'sbirthday,shewenttoschoolandfoundherclassroomintotaldarkness.___________________________________氣氛充滿了神秘的寂靜和懸念.Asshecautiouslysteppedintothechaoticandconfusingdarkness,thefeelingofdepressioncoursedthroughher.___________________________________突然，燈亮了，房間里響起了“驚喜！”的合唱.She

wasoverwhelmedbythesightof

colorfulballoonsandstreamersandahomemadebirthdaycake,

andherdesk

waspiledwith

giftsofallshapesandsizes.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________她最好的朋友，簡，帶領(lǐng)她的所有同學(xué)，舉行了一個(gè)自制的生日，卡片附在透明的包裝盒上，并興奮地邀請她許愿.Theloveand

effortputintoeverydetail

ofthepartyfilledherwithwarmth.TearssprangfromSally'seyesandherfacebrokeintoaradiantsmile.Shemovedforwardand

picked

upthecarefullypreparedcardthatwasfilledwithcolorfulpaintingsandheartfeltmessages.__________________________________________________________她讀到的每一個(gè)字都散發(fā)著幸福的氣息，驅(qū)散了籠罩在她心頭的懷疑和焦慮的陰影.Alivewith

happinessandgratitude,sheembracedJaneandherclassmates,___________________________________________________________________有這么好的朋友在她身邊，我感到很幸運(yùn).Shecouldn'tbelieve

thelengthsherfriendsandclassmateshadgoneto

makeherbirthdayspecialandunforgettable,which

__________________________________________________________________________________________________________