高考英語(yǔ)全國(guó)卷I讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)情節(jié)設(shè)計(jì)課件高考英語(yǔ)作文復(fù)習(xí)專(zhuān)項(xiàng) 副本

2022年英語(yǔ)高考全國(guó)卷I讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)情節(jié)設(shè)計(jì)讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)審題謀篇故事情節(jié)和人物性格充分理解了原文的情節(jié)和人物性格確定故事走向。沖突和懸念創(chuàng)造障礙和難題來(lái)讓故事更加緊張刺激。留下一些懸念，讓讀者有想象的空間。生動(dòng)的描寫(xiě)通過(guò)描寫(xiě)人物、環(huán)境、氣氛等元素，讓讀者感受到身臨其境的感覺(jué)。保持一致性確保與原文的情節(jié)和人物性格保持一致。注意語(yǔ)言風(fēng)格與原文的語(yǔ)言風(fēng)格保持一致。Prep

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忍住不說(shuō)出某事；不流露情感meanwell本意是好的；出于好心SortouttheplotofthestoryWhowasthemaincharacter?Whathappenedtohim?what’stheclimaxoftheconflict?閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)續(xù)寫(xiě)兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。Davidhadabraindiseasewhichpreventedhimfromwalkingorrunninglikeotherchildren,butatschoolhisclassmatesthoughtofhimasaregularkid.Healwaysparticipatedtothebestofhisabilityinwhatevertheyweredoing.ThatwaswhynoneofthechildrenthoughtitunusualthatDavidhaddecidedtojointhecross-countryteam.Itjusttookhimlonger—that'sall.Davidhadnotmissedasinglepractice,andalthoughhealwaysfinishedhisrunlongaftertheotherchildren,hedidalwaysfinish.AsaspecialeducationteacherattheDavidfacedandwasschool,IwasfamiliarwiththechallengesDavidfacedandwasproudofhisstrongdetermination.注意：1.續(xù)寫(xiě)詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右：2．請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。

Wesatdownnexttoeachother，butDavidwouldn'tlookatme.___________________________________________________________IwatchedasDavidmoveduptothestartinglinewiththeotherrunners._____________________________________________________________Prep

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Writing【構(gòu)思框架】情感傳遞的方式語(yǔ)言和行為氛圍和周?chē)h(huán)境吸引人的情節(jié)利用時(shí)間創(chuàng)造續(xù)寫(xiě)需要的氛圍利用懸念讓情景更加吸引人讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)情緒描寫(xiě)語(yǔ)言?xún)?chǔ)備描寫(xiě)高興/喜悅的其他表達(dá)1.beinhigh/cheerfulspirits2.beoverjoyedat3.bewildwithdelight4.indescribablywildjoy5.beoverwhelminglyjoyful6.withafeelingofimmeasurablejoy7.canhardlyconcealone'sexcitement8.beonthetopoftheworld9.Arippleofexcitementranthroughhim10.bepleasedbeyonddescription11.beoverflowingwithhappinessPrep

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Writing10.feelasenseoffrustration11.befloatingintheoceanofsadness12.castacloudofgloomoverhisface13.beimmersedinsorrow14.Alookofsadnessranthroughhisface.15.raiseastormoffrustration16.Shesobbed,hidingherfaceinherhands.17.Theysattherewithglumlooksontheirfaces.描寫(xiě)憤怒/害怕的其他表達(dá)1.Fearslowlycreepsuponher.2.Shewasstruckwithhorrorwhen...3.Shewaschokedbyfear.4.Herfaceturnedpaleandstoodtheretongue-tied.5.Herheartbeatsoviolentlythatshefeltnearlysuffocated..Prep

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Gesturesandbehaviors: ItiedDavid'sshoelacesandgavehimapatontheback. IquicklyputmyarmaroundhisshoulderandassuredhimthatIbelievedinhimandthathecoulddoit. "Youdidit,David,"Isaidtohim,tearswellingupinmyeyes.

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Hegrinnedatmeasweranpasttheevergreentreesandflowers,feelingthefreshairinourlungs. David'steammatessurroundedhim,pattinghimonthebackandofferingwordsofencouragement.Waystomaketheplotmoreappealing:

Time:Afterwhatseemedlikehours,wefinallyreachedthefinishline.

Thrillingsuspense：Davidlookeddownathisfeetandmurmuredsomethingaboutnotfeelingwell. David'sfacewasred,andhewaspantingheavily,…

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Wesatdownnexttoeachother,butDavidwouldn‘tlookatme.“Areyousureyoudon’twantmetorunwithyou?”IaskedDavid.Davidlookeddownathisfeetandmurmuredsomethingaboutnotfeelingwell.Eventually,Helookedupatmeandsmiled,noddinghishead.

ItiedDavid'sshoelacesandgavehimapatontheback,thenstoodbehindhimandheldhimunderhisarms.

IwatchedasDavidmoveduptothestartinglinewiththeotherrunners.Wecounteddowntogether,andatthesoundofthestartinggun,wewereoff.Weranslowlyatfirst,butasDavidgotintohisstride,hebegantopickupspeed.Hegrinnedatmeasweranpasttheevergreentreesandflowers,feelingthefreshairinourlungs.Afterwhatseemedlikehours,wefinallyreachedthefinishline.David'sfacewasred,andhewaspantingheavily,buthegrinnedatme.Ihuggedhimandcongratulatedhimonhisfinish.Forhisefforts,Davidwasgivenaspecialawardforcourageanddeterminationbytheschoolprincipalduringtheawardsceremonylaterthatday.Itwasamomentthatbrought