2024屆高三英語作文專題復(fù)習讀后續(xù)寫動作描寫和環(huán)境描寫素材清單

2024年高考英語讀后續(xù)寫動作描寫和環(huán)境描寫動作描寫，三種句式：（獨立主格+非謂語+時間狀語從句）（1）獨立主格眼淚Tearswellingupinher

eyes,

shethankedthepolicewith/inatremblingvoice.眼淚奪眶而出，她用顫抖的聲音向警察表示感謝。Myspiritssank,

tearsstreamingdownmycheeks.我的情低落，淚水順著臉頰流下來眼睛Eyes

filledwith

regretfultears,sb.dosth.眼里充滿遺憾的淚水，某人做某事Eyes

glitteringwith

relief/joy,sb.dosth.眼里閃爍著欣慰/喜悅，某人做某事Eyes

wideningin

joy/disbelief/surprise/shock/fear,sb.dosth.眼睛因喜悅/難以置信/吃驚/震驚/害怕而睜大，某人做某事臉/心/肢體Face

blushingscarlet,

heapologizedforwhathehaddone.臉紅著，他為自己所做的事道歉Heart

burning/filledwith

frustration,sheloweredherhead.心在燃燒/充滿沮喪，她低下了頭Heart

pounding/beatingwith

happiness,heleaptintotheair.心因快樂而跳動著，他跳了起來Arms/legs/muscles

aching

andknees

shaking/trembling,Isatdown.胳膊/腿/肌肉疼痛，膝蓋顫抖，我坐了下來。（2）非謂語Considering

thethreatofthebear,westayedfarawayfromit.Feeling

extremelyangry,shedashedoutoftheroomlikeawind.Havingknown

whathadhappened,shesetaboutdealingwiththeissue.Relievedandoverjoyed,weyelledatthehelicopter,

trying

tocatchitsattention.Seeing

thehelicopter,we

criedout“Help!”,

waving

ourhandslikemad.Todistractthebear,

wethrewapieceofbreadfaraway.（3）時間狀語從句（while/when/as/themoment）普通版：Suddenly,Mary

found

anenvelope.進階版：WhileMarywasthinking,she

caughtsightof

anitemonthetable.She

walkedtowards

itand

found

anenvelope.普通版：I

saw

afriendofmine.進階版：AsIwaswalkinginthepark,I

saw

afriendofmine.高分替換詞替換“sb.

dosth.”某人做某事managetodosth.

設(shè)法做某事succeedindoingsth.

成功做某事achieve/accomplishsth.

實現(xiàn)/完成某事原句：Stevesavedthelittlegirl.改寫：Steve

managedtosave

thelittlegirl.Steve

succeededinsaving

thelittlegirl.Steve

achievedtherescueof

thelittlegirl.更多：struggletodosth.

努力/奮斗做某事makeeffortstodosth./makeanefforttodosth.

努力做某事makeeveryefforttodosth./sparenoefforttodosth.

竭盡全力做某事strivetodosth/striveforsth.(過去式strove)

努力、奮斗做某事can’thelpdoingsth./feellikedoingsth.

情不自禁做某事/想要做某事getdowntodoingsth.

開始/著手做某事keepdoingsth.

一直做某事goondoingsth.

繼續(xù)做某事carryondoingsth.

繼續(xù)做某事替換“cannotdosth.”無法做某事failtodosth.beunabletodosth.preventsb.fromdoingsth.原句：Atthesightofthesnake,hewassoscaredthathecouldn’tmove.替換句：Extremelyscared,hefailedtomoveatthesightofthesnake.Extremelyscared,hewasunabletomoveatthesightofthesnake.Enormousscarepreventedhimfrommovingatthesightofthesnake.替換“decidetodosth.”決定做某事bedeterminedtodosth.

下定決心做某事makeupone’smindtodosth.

下定決心做某事替換“wanttodosth.”想要做某事intendtodosth.

打算/想要做某事feellikedoingsth.

想要做某事替換“makesb.dosth.”讓某人做某事forcesb.todosth.(sb.wasforcedtodosth.)

強迫某人做某事persuadesb.todosth.

說服某人做某事allowsb.todosth.

允許某人做某事enablesb.todosth.

使某人能夠做某事encourage/motivatesb.todosth.

鼓勵/激勵某人做某事remindsb.ofsth/remindsb.todosth.

提醒某人做某事常用動作She

buriedherfaceinherhands.她以手掩面Sherubbedherhandstogether.她搓著雙手Shescratchedherhead/nose.她撓了撓頭/鼻子Shefakedasmile.她假裝微笑Hermouthfellopeninhorror.她驚恐地張大了嘴巴Sheraised/lifted

herhead/chin/hands.抬頭/抬起下巴/舉手Shelowered/hung/bowedherheadinshame.她慚愧地低下了頭shetookadeepbreath/heldherbreath.她深吸一口氣/她屏住呼吸Shefoldedherarmsacrossherchest.她雙臂交叉在胸前Shethrewherselfintohermother’sarms.她撲到母親懷里Shedashedintothebedroom/darkness.她沖進臥室/黑暗Shedashedoutoftheroomlikeawind.

她像一陣風一樣沖出房間Shegrabbedacakefromtheplate.

她從盤子里抓出一塊面包Sherosefromherseat.她從座位上站起來Sheleanedagainstthewall.她靠在墻上Shewasfightingbacktearsasshespoke.她一邊說話，一邊強忍住眼淚Shepacednervouslybackandforthacrosstheroom.她緊張地在房間里來回踱步Sheshruggedandspreadherhandshelplessly.她聳了聳肩,無助地攤開手排比：意象1+動詞1，意象2+動詞2，and意象3+動詞3.(優(yōu)先使用原文出現(xiàn)過的意象，再按需補充）示例：Thesunshone,thewindblew,andthetreewaved.Toosimpleright?And,then...

擴寫：形容詞+意象+動詞+介詞短語·位置+副詞示例：Theglaringmorningsunlightshoneonthegroundbrightly.耀眼的晨光明亮地照在大地上Thebitingnightwindhowledruthlesslythroughtheforest刺骨的夜風在森林間無情地呼嘯

實戰(zhàn)：（2022年全國Ⅰ卷讀后續(xù)寫）（借景抒情：前兩個意象寫景，第三個意象寫事情，抒發(fā)感情）The

sunlight

shonewarmlyonthetreeleaves,thecrisp

air

surroundedDavidandhisclassmates,andthe

forest

wasfilledwithlaughterofexcitement.陽光溫暖地灑在樹葉上，清新的空氣環(huán)繞著大衛(wèi)和他的同學，森林中洋溢著興奮的笑聲。Thewarm

sun

shoneonDavid’sface,the

trees

swayedwiththewind,andthewhole

forest

applaudedDavid’scourage.暖陽灑在大衛(wèi)的臉上，樹木隨風搖曳，整座森林都為大衛(wèi)的勇氣喝彩The

leaves

weretremblinginthebreeze,thepleasant

air

wasenvelopingtheentireforest,and

everythingaround

wascelebratingDavid’sbravery.樹葉在微風中顫動，愉悅的空氣籠罩著整個森林，周圍的一切都在慶祝著大衛(wèi)的勇敢。9種常見意象的用法：形容詞意象動詞副詞blazing

熾熱的glaring

耀眼的lingering

逗留不走的weak微弱的sunsunlightsunshineshine(shone)發(fā)光，照耀burn(burnt)燃燒brightly

明亮地dazzlingly耀眼地lively

充滿活力地mildly

溫和地gentle/soft/mildweak

微弱的white白色的silvery銀色的moonmoonlightshine（shone）發(fā)光glow（glowed）發(fā)微光weakly

微弱地lightly

輕輕地gently/softly

柔和地

glittering

閃閃發(fā)亮的starstwinklesparkle

閃爍，閃耀glimmer隱約地閃爍vividly

生動地quietly

安靜地peacefully

平靜地strong

勁(風）high/light

大/?。L）chill/cold

冷（風）biting

刺骨的，凜冽的windbreeze

微風blow（blew）吹howl/roar呼嘯drop(dropped)

減弱

fiercely

猛烈地ruthlessly

無情地gradually

逐漸地crisp

涼爽的，清新的fresh

新鮮的refreshing

使人涼爽的chill/cold

冷的airflow(flowed)

流動envelop

籠罩surround

環(huán)繞totally/completely

完全地，徹底地light

小（雨）heavy

大（雨）raindrizzle毛毛雨fall（fell）

落下pourdown傾瀉而下heavily

大地

thick/heavy濃（云）thin

?。ㄔ疲゜lack

烏（云）cloudspread（spread）擴散move

移動gatheredinthesky

聚集coveredthesky

遮蓋envelopedthefo