八年級(jí)英語上Unit6WritingMynewyear27sresolution

G8(A)Unit6OurNewYear’sresolutionsWritingTopic(主題):plans（計(jì)劃）Unit6I’mgoingtostudycomputerscienceLearninggoals(學(xué)習(xí)目標(biāo)):1.掌握以人物思想、情緒、行為為線索的記敘文的寫作方法2.能用begoingto/planto/expectto/tryone’sbesttodo/cometrue/inaword談?wù)撐磥淼纳钣?jì)劃與愿望

Task2MyNewYear’sresolutionsNewyeariscoming.Herearemyresolutionsforthenewyear.First,I’mgoingtolearnsinging,soIamgoingtotakesinginglessons.Then,I’mgoingtodomoresportsandeatmorehealthierfoodbecauseIexpecttokeepfit.Next,Iwanttoimprovemyrelationshipwithmyfamily,soI’mgoingtotalkwiththemmoreoften.Finally,Iplantoimprovemyteachingskills,soIamgoingtolearnmorefromothers.Inaword,Ihopemynewyear’sresolutionswillcometrue.1.審題——想一想，填一填。審題體裁：_______________________人稱：_______________________時(shí)態(tài)：_______________________審題體裁：_______________________人稱：_______________________時(shí)態(tài)：_______________________第一人稱一般將來時(shí)記敘文OutlineBeginning

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Differentkindsofresolutions—Hopeandexpectation—AboutNewYearOutline文章結(jié)構(gòu)Resolutionsaboutself-improvementimprovingphysicalhealthimprovingrelationshipwithfamilyandfriendsdoingbetteratschool/jobHow?

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What?Task4Discussingroup,andwriteresolutionsunderthefollowingheading.1.Resolutionsforself-improvement:____2.Resolutionsforimprovingphysicalhealth:_________3.Resolutionsforimprovingrelationshipwithfamily/friends:__________4.Resolutionsfordoingbetteratschool:_____________Task4Writing

在新年來臨之際，為了提高和完善自我，制定新年計(jì)劃是有意義的。請(qǐng)你以“OurNewYear’sresolutions”為題，寫一篇80左右的短文來介紹你一家的新年決心。

1.內(nèi)容合理，符合實(shí)際，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮

2.語句順暢，行文連貫

3.不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名1.審題——想一想，填一填。審題體裁：_______________________人稱：_______________________時(shí)態(tài)：_______________________審題體裁：_______________________人稱：_______________________時(shí)態(tài)：_______________________第一人稱一般將來時(shí)記敘文OutlineBeginning

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Iamgoingto/planto…..WhatHowWhy—Hopeandexpectation—AboutNewYear2.Outline文章結(jié)構(gòu)……Whilewriting3.寫一寫:寫初稿4.查一查:請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下提示，檢查并修改自己的文章。1.篇章方面：布局是否完整？邏輯是否合理？要點(diǎn)是否齊全/豐富？2.句子方面：主謂是否一致？時(shí)態(tài)語態(tài)是否正確？連詞使用是否正確？句式是否多樣化化？是否用到好詞好句？3.詞語方面：代詞的主格，賓格等形式是否正確？動(dòng)詞搭配/形式是否正確？名詞單復(fù)數(shù)是否正確？4.細(xì)節(jié)方面：單詞拼寫、標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)、大小寫是是正確？請(qǐng)和同伴交換習(xí)作，依據(jù)以上提示和下列評(píng)價(jià)表，相互欣賞與修改習(xí)作，然后給對(duì)方的習(xí)作打分。

修改習(xí)作時(shí)可使用這些符號(hào)：優(yōu)美句子～；漏詞∧；錯(cuò)處：○；刪除／；語法錯(cuò)誤G；

人稱錯(cuò)誤P；時(shí)態(tài)錯(cuò)誤T；拼寫錯(cuò)誤Sp

項(xiàng)目標(biāo)準(zhǔn)自我評(píng)價(jià)同伴評(píng)價(jià)教師評(píng)價(jià)結(jié)構(gòu)（3分）段落合理（2分）銜接自然（1分）內(nèi)容（8分）你和家人的新年計(jì)劃（2分）制定相應(yīng)計(jì)劃的目的（2分）如何實(shí)施計(jì)劃（2分）拓展合理（2分）語言（3分）詞匯豐富（1分）句法正確，語言優(yōu)美（2分）卷面（1分）書寫工整ShowTimeHello，everyone.HereareourplansforthecomingNewYear.Atfirst,I'mgoingtostudyhardertogetbettergrades.I'mgoingtohelpmymumdohouseworkbecauseIwanttoimprovemyrelationshipswithmyfamily.Then,mysisterexpectstokeephealthy，sosheisgoingtoeathealthierfoodanddomoreexercise.myparentshavetheirNew

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resolutions,too.Myfatherlikesplayingtheguitar，soheisgoingtotakeguitarlessonseveryweekend.Asformymum,sheisgoingtodomorereadingtoknowwhatishappeningaroundtheworld.Allinall,wewilltryourbesttomakeourNewYear'sresolutionscometrue.本文緊扣題目要求，開門見山，從家庭不同成員的新年計(jì)劃入手。用了Atfirst,then,also,asfor,Allinall等詞連接上下文。計(jì)劃制定合理，闡述清晰，邏輯分明，首尾呼應(yīng)。表達(dá)了他們制定相應(yīng)計(jì)劃的目的，并說明了將如何實(shí)施計(jì)劃，內(nèi)容充實(shí)，句式豐富。Homework: