2024年高考英語寫（讀后續(xù)寫）開頭講義素材

2024年高考英語寫（讀后續(xù)寫）開頭講義一篇好的文章需要一個(gè)吸引眼球的開頭。同樣，一個(gè)好的段落，也要有一個(gè)吸引人的開頭。它就像是一塊敲門磚，敲開閱卷老師的高分之門。Asthesayinggoes,"wellbegun,halfdone!"良好的開始就是成功的一半！可見，寫出一個(gè)引人入勝的開頭是多么的重要。那么在時(shí)間緊迫的考場(chǎng)上如何才能寫出靚麗的開頭呢？以下開頭小技巧都是滿滿干貨，經(jīng)典例句，可以助您旗開得勝。1.無靈主語妙用1.無靈主語妙用無靈主語，即無生命的事物做主語，該類句子自帶擬人的修辭色彩，把沒有生命的東西，賦予生命，從而增加了句子的多樣性，使語言更加靈動(dòng)多變。=1\*GB3①Anxietytorehimintopieces.

他焦慮萬分，肝腸寸斷。=2\*GB3②Despairseizedhimatthethoughtofhisfailureintheexam.

一想到考試的失敗，他就萬念俱灰。③Thestoryremindsmeofasayingthat“Neverjudgeapersonbyhisappearance”.這個(gè)故事使我想起來一句諺語“不能以貌取人”。④Hisfaceburnedwithshame.他羞愧的臉都紅了。⑤Nighthasfallenover

thecountry.

夜幕已經(jīng)籠罩著鄉(xiāng)間。⑥Thethoughtofreturningtoherhometownsoon

filled

herheart

with

greathappiness.

想到不久就要回到故鄉(xiāng)，她心中感到十分快樂。⑦Asurgeofexcitementbubblingupinsideme,Ilookedupintomydad’sdarkeyes.一陣興奮涌上心頭，我看向父親深邃的眼睛。⑧Silencefelluponusforamoment.我們之間沉默了片刻。2.巧用非謂語動(dòng)2.巧用非謂語動(dòng)詞=1\*GB3①Feelingrefreshed,shecontinuedtowalkalongthestreamtofindthewayout.她感到神清氣爽，繼續(xù)沿著小溪散步，尋找出去的路。這里用feelingrefreshed的形式，很好體現(xiàn)了后一個(gè)動(dòng)作"walk"的伴隨狀態(tài)。=2\*GB3②“No,itisnotyourlamb.It’sours!”saidCharlie,placinghimselfinfrontofit.“不，這不是你的羊，這是我們的！”查理說著站到了羊的前面。③Feelingdesperateandscared,shehidherselfinatree.感覺既絕望又害怕，她藏到了一棵樹上。④Tokeepherselfsafefromthedarkness,shetriedtohideherselfinatalltree.為了自己在夜里的安全，她努力爬上一棵樹藏了起來。⑤Iwasspeechlessatthis,feelingashamedofmyselfishnessandguiltyatmymisunderstanding.對(duì)于這件事我說不出話來，對(duì)自己的自私感到羞愧也對(duì)我的誤解感到內(nèi)疚。⑥Failingtosayasingleword,hewasrootedtothespot.一句話也說不出來，他愣在那里一動(dòng)不動(dòng)。⑦Notknowingwhattodo,Ijuststoodthereandfrozenwithterror.不知所措，我站在那里被嚇呆了。3.巧用副詞開頭3.巧用副詞開頭kaitou=1\*GB3①Carefully,hepickedupallthesequins(亮片)withhiseyesfulloftears.眼含淚水，他仔細(xì)地將亮片撿起。=2\*GB3②Finally/Eventually,shewentherselfwithaheavyheart,draggingherleadenlegs,andbargainedwiththebutcher.最終，她懷著沉重的心情，拖著灌了鉛般的雙腿，自己去了那里，并且跟屠夫討價(jià)還價(jià)起來。③Immediately,absolutedarknessruledtheforest.很快，黑暗籠罩了整個(gè)森林。此處運(yùn)用副詞immediately開頭，同時(shí)，該句另一亮點(diǎn)是運(yùn)用無靈主語句，absolutedarkness為無靈主語，rule“統(tǒng)治，掌權(quán)”作謂語，讓人眼前一亮。④Recently,Iamsogratefulforthesupportandfriendshipofaverydearfriendofmine.最近，我對(duì)一個(gè)朋友的支持和友情感到非常感激。⑤Doubtfully,Bobunfoldedthenote.鮑勃疑惑地展開字條。⑥Apparently,shekeptamoreclearheadfacingthiscriticalsituation.很顯然，面對(duì)這危急時(shí)刻，她頭腦更清醒。4.巧用時(shí)間狀語=1\*GB3①Atthatmoment,Ican’thelpbutshedtearsofgratitude.4.巧用時(shí)間狀語在那個(gè)時(shí)刻，我唯有流下感激的淚水。=2\*GB3②Andmeanwhile,aninnervoicewhisperedtome,“goallouttosavethepoorcreature.”同時(shí)，內(nèi)心有個(gè)聲音低聲說道“竭盡全力救救這個(gè)可憐的小生靈吧?！雹跾ometimesI’mexhaustedattheendoftheday,butIstilllovethejourneyI’mon.有時(shí)候，一天到頭我會(huì)感到很累，但是我依然熱愛我現(xiàn)在的旅程。④Afterafewminutes,myparentswithhalfangryandhalfworriedfaceswalkedin.幾分鐘后，我父母走了進(jìn)來，臉上的表情既生氣又擔(dān)心。⑤Afterwhatmusthavebeenseveralhours,wesuddenlyheardthesoundofsheepinthedistance.大約過了幾個(gè)小時(shí)后，我們突然聽到了遠(yuǎn)處的羊叫聲。5.巧用形容詞或形容詞短語5.巧用形容詞或形容詞短語=1\*GB3①Anxioustofindoutthetruth,shetiptoedtothelivingroom，aimingtohearwhatherparentsweretalkingabout.迫切地想知道真相，她躡手躡腳地來到客廳，企圖聽一下父母在討論什么。=2\*GB3②Unabletosayasingleword,hewasrootedtothespot.一句話也說不出來，他愣在那里一動(dòng)不動(dòng)。③Exhaustedandanxious,wewonderwhetherwecouldfindourwaysuccessfully.既疲憊又焦慮，我們想知道是否能成功找到路。④AfraidthatImighthurtthelovelysmallcreature,Iautomaticallyletoutacrytostopmyhorse.由于害怕我會(huì)傷到這可愛的小生靈，我不假思索地叫了一聲，來阻止我的馬。⑤Sureenough,itwasonlymomentslaterthattheballoffurlifteditsheadoutoftheboxtopeekitsnewhomeandnewfriends.果然，僅僅片刻后，這個(gè)小毛球從箱子里探出頭，窺探它的新家和新朋友。6.巧用介詞短語6.巧用介詞短語=1\*GB3①Atthethoughtofpartingwiththelittlecreature,shecouldn’thelpfeelingsadbecausethechildrenloveditsomuch.一想到要與這個(gè)可憐的小動(dòng)物分離，她就不禁悲傷不已，因?yàn)樗暮⒆觽兲珢鬯恕?2\*GB3②Inatremblingvoice,Mrs.Grantexplainedtoherchildrenhowbadlyofftheywereaftertheirfatherdied.格蘭特夫人聲音顫抖地向孩子們解釋道，他們的爸爸去世后，他們的生活是多么的拮據(jù)。③【段首句】Whenthegirlwaswalkinginthegarden,asnakeappearedsuddenly.當(dāng)女孩在花園散步時(shí)，突然出現(xiàn)了一條蛇?！纠m(xù)寫句】Attheveryfirstsightofthesnake,shescreamedatthetopofhervoice.一看到蛇，她就以最大的聲音尖叫起來。④Withhishelp,Icanrealizemydreamofmakingakindactsprojects.在他的幫助下，我可以實(shí)現(xiàn)我善行義舉的夢(mèng)想。⑤Allofasuddenthehorsebegantorun.突然，馬開始跑起來。⑥“butIdon’twanttobelaughedat.”withoutpausingforthought,Ireplied.我毫不思索的答道“我不想被嘲笑”。7.巧用連詞7.巧用連詞=1\*GB3①Evenifshewaskindoftired,shewasatthetopoftheworld,seeinguscomeback.盡管有些累了，但是她看到我們回家，感到非常興奮。=2\*GB3②Whilethere’snothingwrongwithchildrenwhodon’thaveimaginaryfriends,childrenwhohaveimaginarycompanionsshouldn’tbeworriedeither.盡管沒有假想朋友那些孩子是沒問題的，但是那些有假想朋友的孩子也不必?fù)?dān)心。8.動(dòng)作鏈建構(gòu)8.動(dòng)作鏈建構(gòu)=1\*GB3①Fatherthenreachedouthishand,strokedmyheadandsmiled,“I’mhappyyouaregrowingupandcontributingtothefamily”爸爸伸出手，摸著我的頭微笑著說：“我很高興你長(zhǎng)大了，并且能為家里做貢獻(xiàn)了”=2\*GB3②Shegrabbedabigpieceofgarlicbreadfromtheplateandthrewitacrossthefence,whichimmediatelydrewthebear’sattention.她從包里拿出一塊大蒜面包，穿過籬笆扔出去，這立馬吸引了熊的注意力。③Thebearstoppedpoundingthefenceandwalkedtowardsthebread,buthewentbackagaininaminutewhenhefinishedthebread.熊不再撞擊籬笆，走向面包，但是當(dāng)他吃完面包后又回來了。④Hearinghisbagsunloadedonthedriveway,Poppy’searspickedupandsuddenlyshewasonallfours.一聽到他的包被放到車道上的聲音，Poppy的耳朵就豎了起來，立馬四肢著地站起來。9.感情描述9.感情描述=1\*GB3①Soangrywasthebearthatitroaredandsmackedthefenceviolently.熊怒火中燒，開始咆哮，并猛烈地拍擊護(hù)欄。該句利用so...that...倒裝句式，加上動(dòng)作描寫，將熊的憤怒刻畫得很細(xì)致。=2\*GB3②“Absolutely!”Johnshouted,excitementshininginhiseyes.約翰喊道，“一定！”他兩眼興奮地閃閃發(fā)光。③Whenhewastold