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to在緊張的高三備考階段，英語老師為了提高復(fù)習(xí)效率，廣泛征求學(xué)生意見。假如你叫張華，請根據(jù)以下提示，給英語老師寫封信，表達(dá)你們的需求和建議?！蜻m當(dāng)放慢進(jìn)度，留出思考時(shí)間◎反復(fù)訓(xùn)練重要、易錯(cuò)知識點(diǎn)◎指導(dǎo)方法◎減少作業(yè)量以保證質(zhì)量◎給予更多鼓勵(lì)注意：1.根據(jù)以上內(nèi)容寫一篇短文，不要逐句翻譯，可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)以使行文連貫。2．要準(zhǔn)確使用語法和詞匯；使用一定的句型、詞匯，清楚、連貫地表達(dá)自己的意思。3．詞數(shù)100左右。開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。參考范文：DearMr.Wang，We’resopleasedthatyouarewillingtoshareourviews.Inthecourseofthegeneralrevision，whatweneedissolidfoundation.Asyouknow，wedidn’tlearnwellenoughinthefirsttwoyears，sopleaseslowdownandmakesurewehavereallymasteredsomething.Besides，weneedalittlemoretimetothinkforourselves.Asforthoseimportantpointswhichalsomakeusconfused，wouldyoupleasegiveusmorepracticeincaseweforget？Meanwhile，weneedyourinstructions，forexample，inhowtowriteinnaturalEnglish.Istillhaveanotherrequest：assignuslesshomeworkinorderthatwecandoitmoreefficiently. Bytheway，weoft