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中考作文注意事項一、徐老師的忠告：近幾年中考英語作文以看圖寫話的形式為主，重點考察學(xué)生運用一般過去時態(tài)講述過去故事的書面表達(dá)能力。因此，be動詞一律使用was,were;行為動詞一律用動詞的過去式形式；重點記憶不規(guī)則動詞的過去式；注意故事的書寫要自始至終使用過去時態(tài)；不提倡使用直接引語；不提倡使用沒見過和沒把握的句子；為提高句子水平，盡量使用幾個主從復(fù)合句，像賓語從句、定語從句、時間狀語從句或原因狀語從句，并列句和感嘆句也會為你的文章增色，但不能因為上難度而出語法錯誤，得不償失，看自己的能力而定；怕出錯，就全使用小短句子，正確無誤是第一追求；注意每張圖片的內(nèi)容都要有專門的句子體現(xiàn)，要點不能漏掉；每個單句句子都要符合簡單句的五種基本類型之一：主系表；主語謂語；主謂賓；主謂賓賓；主謂賓賓補；注意主謂一致；注意避免標(biāo)點符號、大小寫、拼寫錯誤等低級失誤；字?jǐn)?shù)要足；打草稿是個拿卷面分的好辦法，也避免低級失誤。將草稿上的作文抄到試卷上之后，再對照一下，不要漏掉字或出現(xiàn)書寫單詞不完整的現(xiàn)象。二、中考作文評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)：1）本大題共10分。2）卷面書寫潦草不工整，可酌情從總得分中扣1分。3）拼寫錯誤每兩個扣0.5分。同樣錯誤不重復(fù)計算。4）書面表達(dá)可分為四個等級：（1）9-10分語句通順，內(nèi)容完整，書寫工整，無語法錯誤，字?jǐn)?shù)符合要求。（2）7-8分內(nèi)容較完整，書寫較工整，語法錯誤較少（1-2處），字?jǐn)?shù)基本符合要求。（3）5-6分語句尚通順，書寫較工整，3-4處語法錯誤，字?jǐn)?shù)在60詞左右。（4）5分以下作文內(nèi)容不完整語句不夠通順，語法錯誤較多，書寫一般，字?jǐn)?shù)在50詞以下。三、類型舉例：1.做好事Tomisagoodboywholikeshelpingothers/whoisalwaysreadytohelpothers.Oneday,onhiswaytoschool/onhiswaybackhome,hefoundanoldmanwholookedworried.Hewentuptohimandaskedhimwhatwaswrong./ifhecouldhelphim.Theoldmansaidthathedidn’tknowhowtogetbackhome.Tomhelpedhimtoaskthepolicemanforhelp.ThenTomtookhimtohishomebybus.Hetookgoodcareoftheoldman.Atlast/Intheend,theoldmangotbackhomeandmethisfamily.TheythankedTomverymuch.Tomgottoshoollate/gothomelatebuthewasveryhappy.Whatagood/kindboy!Weshouldlearnfromhim./Helpingothersistohelpourselves.2.節(jié)日：Children’sDay兒童節(jié)；Teachers’Day教師節(jié)；AprilFool’sDay愚人節(jié)NationalDay國慶節(jié)；NewYear’sDay元旦；SpringFestival春節(jié)；Mid-AutumDay中秋節(jié)；MayDay五四青年節(jié)ChristmasDay圣誕節(jié)；ThanksgivingDay感恩節(jié)；Mother’sDay母親節(jié)；Father’sDay父親節(jié)Tomisagoodboywholoveshisparents.YesterdaywasWomen’sDay.Hewantedtodosomethingforhismother.Hetoldhisfatherwhathethoughtandhisfatheragreedwithhim.Theybegantowork.Tomsweptthefloorandhisfatherdidsomewashing/washedtheclothes.Whilehisfatherwascooking,heputthedishesontothetable.Whenhismothercamebackhome,hefoundsomedeliciousfoodonthetable.Howhappyshewas!ShehadawonderfulWomen’sDay.類似一篇：IhaveagoodfriendnamedJim.Heisafifteen-year-oldboy.YesterdaywasWomen’sDay,andhismotherwasbusyoutside.Hemadeuphismindtodosomethingforher.Sohecleanedoutthehouseinordertomakehismotherhappy.Atfirst,hecleanedthefloorandmadeitascleanaspossible.HelistenedtothemusicthatwaswrittenbyXuLang,oneofthemostpopularsingersinChina.Thenhedidthedishesafterlistening.Ittookhimalittletimetodoit.Atlast,hecookedsomethingnice.Afterfifteenminutes,hismothercamebackhome.Hesaid“HappyWomen’sDay!”Hismotherwasveryhappytoseesomefoodonthetable.Jimdidn'tfeeltiredintheslightest.Whatagoodboy!3.做錯事Oneday，XiaoMingandhisfatherwenttoZhongShanPark.XiaoMingwasveryhappy.Whiletheywerewalking,XiaoMing’sfatherfoundafenceanddecidedtojumpoverthefencesothattheycouldgettothezooquickly.XiaoMingdidn’tagreewithhisfather,buthisfatherjumpedoverthefence.XiaoMingwasveryworried.Thenapolicemancametohisfatherandtoldhimthathebrokethetrafficlaw.XiaoMing’sfatherfeltveryembarrassedandbowedtothepoliceman,“Sorry,Iwon’tdoitagain.”It’sdangeroustobreakthetrafficlaw./rules.另一篇：LastSunday,myfatherandmothertookmetothezoo.Itwasaveryinterestingzoo.Wetookawalkandenjoyedthebeautifulsights/flowersinthezoothewholemorning.Atnoon,wehadapicniconthegrass.Finally,Icouldn’tfinishthecakewithcream.Iwantedtothrowitaway.Butmymothertoldmenottodoit.Then,Iwantedtogiveittothemonkeys.Mymothersaiditwasagoodidea.Atthattimeaworkeratthezoocameuptousandtoldusnottodoit.Thenwerealizedourmistakes.Weshouldobeytherulesandtrytoprotecttheanimals.4.活動Tomisagoodboywholikesplayingsoccer.LastTuesday,hewasverybusy.Inthemorning,hegotupatsixthirtyandthenhadbreakfast.Hewenttoschoolonfootbecausehishousewasveryneartotheschool.Afterhehadfourclassesinthemorningandthreeintheafternoon,hewasverytired.Afterschool,heplayedsoccerwithhisfriends.Theyhadagoodtime.Aftersupper/dinner,hehadtodohishomework.Ittookhimtwohourstofinishit.HewatchedTVandreadnewspapers.Hedidn’tgotobeduntilteno’clock.Hewastiredbuthappy.Whatabusyday!（如果是周末或假期活動，只需要改變時間和活動內(nèi)容即可）另一篇：XiaoMing’sBusyDayLastweekend,XiaoMinghadaverybusyday.Inthemorning,hisfathertoldhimtogetuptoreadEnglish.Afterthat,hehadtopractiseplayingthepiano.Hismotherstoodbehindhimandmadehimplayagainandagain.Intheafternoon,hisfathertookhimtoanartschool.Helearnedhowtopaintthere.Thewholeday,XiaoMinghadnotimetohavearest.Hewassotiredthathefellillintheevening.Hewastakentohospitalbyhisparents.Whatapoorboy！Inmyopinion,Chineseparentsaretoostrictwiththeirchildren.Theyexpecttheirchildrentobecomesuccessfulinthefuture.Thechildrenaretoobusylearningallkindsofthingsallday.Ithinkit’sbadforthem.四、更多舉例：Sunday,May30thSunny/FineItwasMay30thyesterday.WhenIwokeup,Ilookedattheclock.Oh,de