04 命題作文之?dāng)⑹旅鑼戭悾ń馕霭妫?【高分·技能】2024年中考英語寫作常考題型全面突破

04命題作文之?dāng)⑹旅鑼戭惤昕记榉治鼋昕记榉治瞿攴莸貐^(qū)題目命題形式2023年四川南充Wherethereisawill,thereisaway命題作文江蘇蘇州Startingfrommeandnow命題作文遼寧丹東TheSpreadofLove命題作文山東東營TheplaceIwanttovisit命題作文2022年重慶B卷ControlYourAngerandSolveYourProblem命題作文江蘇無錫ThePersonIWanttoThank命題作文湖南湘西OurColorfulLifeafterSchool命題作文2021年江蘇南京MyBeautifulSchoolDay命題作文浙江寧波MotherlandinMyHeart命題作文寫作方法指導(dǎo)寫作方法指導(dǎo)命題作文的基本要求：1．習(xí)作要有扎實的英語基本功底，要牢固掌握英語基礎(chǔ)知識，文章中的大小寫、標(biāo)點符號、詞法、句法及語法等都要表達(dá)正確。2．要按照命題要求正確采用相應(yīng)的行文格式撰寫習(xí)作，層次分明，結(jié)構(gòu)嚴(yán)謹(jǐn)，句式排列整齊，段落過渡自然，富有條理性。3．文章內(nèi)容前后照應(yīng)，詞語運用準(zhǔn)確到位，語言流暢，言簡意賅，內(nèi)容充實，敘事完整，深化主題。4．要根據(jù)文章規(guī)定的單詞數(shù)組織安排文章的結(jié)構(gòu)，不要忽上忽下。寫作技巧：第一步，審題。無論寫什么樣的文章都不能離開文章的主題。主題是文章所要表達(dá)的中心，是文章的靈魂主宰。如果審不清主題，就有可能出現(xiàn)“下筆千言，離題萬里”的情況。第二步，選材。審?fù)觐}之后，就應(yīng)該著手選材了。主題是文章的宗旨，材料必須為主題服務(wù)：主題必須統(tǒng)領(lǐng)材料，二者是密不可分、相輔相成的關(guān)系。既然要選材，就必須有充足的備選材料。只有平時多觀察、多學(xué)習(xí)、多積累，才能保證材料充分、詳實。在具備充足的材料的基礎(chǔ)上，要學(xué)會去粗取精，去偽存真。還要分清材料的主次與詳略，做到詳略得當(dāng)。第三步，列提綱。寫文章之前列個提綱是個非常好的寫作習(xí)慣。列提綱可以使雜亂無章的材料變得井然有序；列提綱可以使你緊扣主題不跑題；列提綱還可以節(jié)約你的時間，提高寫作效率。第四步，動筆。寫作時一定要切題，抓住要點。題目要求的內(nèi)容一定要寫進去，以保證內(nèi)容的完整。對于與要求無關(guān)的內(nèi)容切忌任意發(fā)揮，畫蛇添足。寫作時要注意語法正確、用詞得當(dāng)、語言地道。在寫不同題材和體裁的文章時，所用的句式、時態(tài)及用詞均不同。寫作時要多從交流的角度考慮以上幾個方面。第五步，檢查修改。要提高英語寫作水平，除了準(zhǔn)確遣詞造句、嚴(yán)謹(jǐn)布局外，文章的修改也是很重要的一步。文章寫好后，要經(jīng)過反復(fù)修改潤色，才能措辭準(zhǔn)確，句子流暢，因此修改文章是提高寫作水平的有效方法。寫作模板寫作模板 Oneday,

.(事情發(fā)生的時間、地點等) WhenIwas

,somethingstrangehappened

.(事情發(fā)生的過程)Finally,

.(結(jié)果) I’llneverforget

(感受)常用表達(dá)常用表達(dá)亮點詞匯1、敘事順序first,tobeginwith,firstofall,firstly首先secondly,then,besides,what'smore,inaddition,moreover然后atlast,lastbutnotleast,aboveall,allinall,tosumup,onthewhole,finally最后2、時間描寫after.....之后 afterashort/longtime/period在一段很短/很長的時間后afterwards后來；然后 assoonas...一......就......fromthattimeon從那時起 immediately立刻;立即lately最近;近來;不久前 nowadays現(xiàn)在;如今recently最近 shortly馬上;立刻sincethen從那時起 when,while...的時候3、地點詞匯church教堂 tower塔bridge橋 station車站dormitory宿舍 supermarket超市shop商店 hospital醫(yī)院theater劇院 playground操場cinema電影院 museum博物館4.動作描寫gooutforapicnic去野餐 haveaparty舉行聚會gocamping去露營 rideahorse騎馬haveawalk散步 flykites放風(fēng)箏takephotos拍照 hurryto..匆忙趕到...seeadoctor看醫(yī)生 setoff出發(fā)watchthematch看比賽 climbthemountains爬山5、結(jié)尾詞匯thanksto多虧 asaresult結(jié)果luckily幸運地 because/becauseof因為atlast/intheend最后.......中考真題精講中考真題精講（2023·四川南充·統(tǒng)考中考真題）你校英語報以“Wherethereisawill,thereisaway（有志者事竟成）”為題向全校學(xué)生開展征文活動，請你用英語寫一篇短文投稿，內(nèi)容包括：（1）你對該諺語的理解；（2）你生活中的一個事例；（3）你的感悟。要求：1.必須包含所給要點，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；2.語句通順，意思連貫，語法正確，書寫規(guī)范；3.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實人名、校名或地名；4.詞數(shù)100左右（短文開頭已經(jīng)給出，不計入總詞數(shù)）。Wherethereisawill,thereisawayHaveyouheardofthesaying“Wherethereisawill,thereisaway”?Itmeans_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：Wherethereisawill,thereisawayHaveyouheardofthesaying“Wherethereisawill,thereisaway”?Itmeansifyouarereallydeterminedtodosomething,howeverdifficultitmightbe,youwilleventuallyfindawaytodoitwell.Theimportantpointisthatyoumusthavethewilltoachievesuccess.Takemeforexample.SpeakingEnglishusedtobedifficultforme.InGrade7,Icouldn’tspeakEnglishclearlyandmyclassmatesalwayslaughedatme.WithmyEnglishteacher’shelp,Imadeplanstoimproveit.IreadEnglishtextsaloudforanhoureverymorning.Ialsomadeaforeignfriendonline.Italkedtohertwiceaweek.ShehelpedmecorrectthewayIspokeEnglish.DaybydaymyspokenEnglishimprovedalot.LastmonthIwonfirstprizeinmyschool’sEnglishSpeechContest.Thisexperiencehastaughtmethatnothingistoodifficultaslongasyoumakethedecisiontodoit,justthesayinggoes,“Wherethereisawill,thereisaway”.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇記敘文，為材料作文；②時態(tài)：時態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時”；③提示：根據(jù)所給的要點提示，結(jié)合自身經(jīng)歷，談?wù)勀銓Α坝兄菊?，事竟成”的理解和感悟，可適當(dāng)添加細(xì)節(jié)，并突出寫作重點。[寫作步驟]第一步，引出話題，并表達(dá)自己對該諺語的理解；第二步，以自身經(jīng)歷為例來闡述；第三步，書寫結(jié)語。表達(dá)自己的感悟。[亮點詞匯]①takemeforexample就拿我來說②usedtobe過去常常是③makeplantodo制定計劃做某事④makethedecisiontodosth下決定做某事[高分句型]①Theimportantpointisthatyoumusthavethewilltoachievesuccess.(表語從句)②Thisexperiencehastaughtmethatnothingistoodifficultaslongasyoumakethedecisiontodoit,justthesayinggoes,“Wherethereisawill,thereisaway”.(aslongas引導(dǎo)的條件狀語從句)（2023·江蘇蘇州·統(tǒng)考中考真題）HappyHomeClub本期的主題是“HowtomakeSuzhoumorebeautiful”，你打算以“Startingfrommeandnow”為題向中外朋友介紹你的想法，請你用英語寫一篇發(fā)言稿，內(nèi)容包括：1.觸動你的一件事情；2.這件事給你的啟示；3.你的倡議。注意：1.詞數(shù)：100左右。2.內(nèi)容完整（照抄閱讀語篇不得分）3.文中不得出現(xiàn)與考生相關(guān)的真實校名和姓名等信息。Startingfrommeandnow________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文StartingfrommeandnowLastweekend,Iwenttothecityparkwithmyclassmates.Whenwegotthere,wewereamazedthatthereweredifferentkindsofrubbishontheground.Wefeltverysadaboutthat.Thecityisourhome,soweshouldtryourbesttokeepthecityclean.Firstofall,weshouldprotectourenvironment.Don’tthrowrubbisharoundorspitanywhere.We’dbetterplantmoretreestomaketheairclean.Second,wearesupposedtobefriendlyandhelpfultoothers.Third,weoughttoobeythetrafficrules.Don’tridetoofastorplayonthestreet.Lastbutnotleast,remembertosaveenergy.Turnoffthelightsandtapsintime.Aslongaswetryourbestandstartingfrommeandnow,IbelieveSuzhouwillbecomemoreandmorebeautiful.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇演講稿；②時態(tài)：時態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時”和“一般過去時”；③提示：要求根據(jù)題干中的提示介紹如何讓自己的家鄉(xiāng)變得更美，適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)。[寫作步驟]第一步，介紹觸動你的一件事情以及這件事情給你的啟示；第二步，為了使蘇州變得更美，介紹你的倡議；第三步，書寫結(jié)語。表達(dá)“希望家鄉(xiāng)會更美麗”的愿望。[亮點詞匯]①differentkindsof各種各樣的②besupposedtodosth.應(yīng)該做某事③remembertodosth.記得做某事④intime及時[高分句型]①Whenwegotthere,wewereamazedthatthereweredifferentkindsofrubbishontheground.（when引導(dǎo)時間狀語從句）②We’dbetterplantmoretreestomaketheairclean.（“sb.hadbetterdosth.”表建議的句型）③IbelieveSuzhouwillbecomemoreandmorebeautiful.（賓語從句）（2023·遼寧丹東·統(tǒng)考中考真題）1．保持善良，傳播愛心。我們都曾幫助過別人或接受過別人的幫助。請結(jié)合自身經(jīng)歷，以“TheSpreadofLove”為題，講述一次你幫助別人或別人幫助你的經(jīng)歷，并談?wù)勀愕母形蚣敖窈蟮拇蛩?。寫作要求?.語言表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確，語意通順連貫；2.書寫工整規(guī)范；3.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實姓名、校名和地名；4.詞數(shù)：70詞左右。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文TheSpreadofLoveEveryonehasdifferentideasaboutlife.Inmyopinion,lifeisbeautifulandfulloflove.Severalweeksago,myclassmateBobwasbadlyill.Hehadtobeinhospitalforalongtime.Buthisfamilywastoopoortoaffordit.SoIdecidedtoraisemoneytohelphim.WhenIsentallthemoneytoBob,heandhisparentsweredeeplymoved.Helpingothersmakesmehappy.Maybesometimeswefeelunlucky,butweshouldbelievethatlifeisbeautifulandlovewillbearoundusforever.AndIwillalsohelpmorepeopleinthefuture.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇記敘文，為話題作文；②時態(tài)：時態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時”和“一般過去時”；③提示：根據(jù)所給提示完成寫作，不能遺漏信息，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。[寫作步驟]第一步，開門見山，介紹生活充滿愛；第二步，具體闡述你幫助別人或別人幫助你的經(jīng)歷；第三步，最后表達(dá)自己的感悟及今后的打算。[亮點詞匯]①inmyopinion在我看來②too...to...太……而不能……③decidetodo決定做[高分句型]①WhenIsentallthemoneytoBob,heandhisparentsweredeeplymoved.（when引導(dǎo)的時間狀語從句）②Maybesometimeswefeelunlucky,butweshouldbelievethatlifeisbeautifulandlovewillbearoundusforever.（that引導(dǎo)的賓語從句）（2023·山東東營·統(tǒng)考中考真題）旅游是我們看世界的重要方式，它可以讓我們開闊視野，增長見識，豐富閱歷，陶冶情操。如果你有機會出去旅游，你最想去的地方是哪里？為什么想去那個地方？你想在那個地方干些什么？請以“TheplaceIwanttovisit”為題，寫一篇100詞左右的短文。要求：1.文中不得出現(xiàn)考生姓名、學(xué)校及其他相關(guān)信息。2.照抄試卷內(nèi)容不得分。TheplaceIwanttovisit________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：TheplaceIwanttovisitBeijing,thesecondlargestcityinourcountry,istheplaceIwanttovisit.ThereareseveralreasonswhyIwouldliketovisitBeijing.First,BeijingisthecapitalofChina,andhasahistoryofmorethan3,000years.Ithasbeenthecapitalformanydynasties.Second,therearemanyhistoricalbuildings,suchastheGreatWallandtheSummerPalace.Therearealsosomenewstadiums,includingtheBirdNestandtheWaterCube,whichwerebuiltforthe2008BeijingOlympicGames.Iamreallylookingforwardtogoingthereandvisitingallthewonderfulplaces.Atthesametime,IhopeBeijingwillbemoreandmorebeautiful.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇話題作文；②時態(tài)：時態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時”；③提示：題目要求以“TheplaceIwanttovisit”為題寫短文介紹自己想要參觀的地方。[寫作步驟]第一步，介紹想要去參觀哪里；第二步，談?wù)勏肴ミ@個地方的原因；第三步，介紹想要在那里干些什么。[亮點詞匯]①wouldliketodosth.想要做某事②suchas例如③lookforwardtodoingsth.期待做某事④atthesametime與此同時[高分句型]①ThereareseveralreasonswhyIwouldliketovisitBeijing.（why引導(dǎo)定語從句）②Second,therearemanyhistoricalbuildings,suchastheGreatWallandtheSummerPalace.（therebe句型）（2022·重慶B卷·中考真題）有效控制憤怒能幫助我們恢復(fù)理智，找回方向，解決問題。你校EnglishConer將進行“ControlYourAngerandSolveYourProblem”的成長分享。請你寫一篇發(fā)言稿，講述你通過有效控制憤怒，成功解決某一問題的小故事，并分享你的感悟。要求：1.80—120詞，開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞2.文中不能出現(xiàn)自己的姓名和所在學(xué)校的名稱。參考詞匯：angern.[U]憤怒1.有效控制憤怒，成功解決問題的小故事（起因、經(jīng)過、結(jié)果）2.你的感悟（保持冷靜、學(xué)會反思、有效溝通……）3.……ControlYourAngerandSolveYourProblemHaveyouevercontrolledyourangerandsolvedaproblembetter?___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Thanksforlistening.【答案】例文ControlYourAngerandSolveYourProblemHaveyouevercontrolledyourangerandsolvedaproblembetter?Hereismyexperience.Lastterm,IboughtamagazinethatIhadalwayswanted.IlikeditsomuchthatIwascarefuleverytimeIcarriedit.Butoneday,mybestfriendTomtookthemagazinewithouttellingme.WhenIfoundit,Iwasveryangry.ButIcalmeddownsoon.IthoughtofhowTomhelpedmewhenIwasintroubleandIdidn’twanttobreaktherelationshipbetweenus.SoIcontrolledmyangeranddecidedtohaveatalkwithhim.Itoldhimthatheshouldtellmeifhewantedtoreadthemagazine.Afterthetalk,ourrelationshipbecamestronger.Fromthisexperience,whenweareangry,weshouldcalmourselvesdownandlearntoreflect.Themostimportantistocommunicatewithothersontimesothatwecansolvetheproblemsbetter.Thanksforlistening.【解析】1.題干解讀：本文以“ControlYourAngerandSolveYourProblem”為題，結(jié)合自己的經(jīng)歷講述通過有效控制憤怒，成功解決一件小事，可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)。2.寫作指導(dǎo)：本文以一般過去時和一般現(xiàn)在時為主，人稱以第一人稱和第三人稱為主。第一段引入話題；第二段講述自己有效控制憤怒，成功解決問題的小故事；第三段描述自己的感悟。寫作時運用不同的句式和短語使文章層次清晰、邏輯清楚，做到無單詞拼寫和語法錯誤。（2022·江蘇無錫·中考真題）生命中總有一些值得我們感恩的人。最近，無錫教育電視臺將舉辦題為“ThePersonIWanttoThank”的英語演講比賽。假如你想感謝身邊某位對你有影響的人(父/母親、老師、朋友……)，請根據(jù)以下流程圖寫一篇英文演講稿參加比賽。注意事項：1.演講稿須根據(jù)流程圖自擬，要求語句通順、意思連貫、符合題意；2.流程圖中括號部分為非限定性內(nèi)容，僅供參考；3.詞數(shù)在100個左右，演講稿的首尾已在答題卡上給出，不計入總詞數(shù)；4.演講稿中不得使用真實的個人及學(xué)校信息；5.演講稿必須寫在答題卡指定的位置上。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文ThePersonIWanttoThankInmyjuniorschoollife,manypeoplehavehelpedme.Ithankthemverymuch.ButthepersonIwanttothankmostismyEnglishteacherMissLee.MissLeeisbeautifulwithlonghair.Andsheiskind.Shehelpsmealot.SheoftenhelpsmewithmyEnglish.WhenIamintrouble,shealwaysencouragesmetofacemydifficultiesandgivesmegoodadvice.IstillrememberthatonceIfailedinanimportantEnglishexamandwasupset.ShecheeredmeupandtoldmesomegoodwaystoimprovemyEnglish.Withherhelp,ImadegreatprogressinEnglishandbecameinterestedinit.I’mverythankfulforallthatshehasdoneforme.Shehasagreatinfluenceonme,andherhelpisveryusefulformyfuturedevelopment.【解析】1.題干解讀：本文是一篇演講稿。寫作時要根據(jù)漢語提示的內(nèi)容，寫出最想感謝的人是誰；他/她的外表、性格；舉例說明為何感謝他/她；以及對你的影響。2.寫作指導(dǎo)：本文應(yīng)該以第一人稱和第三人稱為主來敘述內(nèi)容；敘述想感謝的人的外表和性格時應(yīng)用一般現(xiàn)在時，敘述具體的故事時應(yīng)用一般過去時。同時寫作時注意語句的連貫性，保證詞匯和語法的正確使用。（2022·湖南湘西·中考真題）隨著義務(wù)教育階段“雙減”政策的全面實施，合理安排課外生活對我們初中生尤為重要。某報刊青少年專欄以“我們豐富的課外生活”為主題開展征文活動。請根據(jù)以下表格內(nèi)容提示，以“OurColorfulLifeafterSchool”為題，寫一篇英語短文介紹豐富多彩的課外生活，并推薦你最喜歡的一項活動且說明原因。OurColorfulLifeafterSchooltakepartindifferentvolunteeringactivitiesdevelophobbiesandinterests,likesinging,dancing...getclosetonature,suchasclimbingmountains,camping...learnsomeusefulskillsinourdailylife,suchas...要求:1.結(jié)構(gòu)完整，要點齊全，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；2.表達(dá)通順，語言規(guī)范，書寫清晰；3.文中不能出現(xiàn)任何真實的人名、校名等信息；4.詞數(shù)80左右。文章的開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。OurColorfulLifeafterSchoolLifeafterschoolisanimportantpartinourdailylife.Howcanwemakeitmorecolorful?________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文OurColorfulLifeafterSchoolLifeafterschoolisanimportantpartinourdailylife.Howcanwemakeitmorecolorful?Wecantakepartindifferentvolunteeringactivities.Wecandevelopourhobbiesandinterests,likesinging,dancingandsoon.Weoftengetclosetonature,suchasclimbingmountains,camping.Wecanalsolearnsomeusefulskillsinourdailylife,suchascooking.Ilikesingingbecauseitisalsoa?goodwaytorelaxmyself.Besides,inthemusicclub,Icanmakemanyfriends.Allinall,after-schoolactivitiesmakemylifemorecolorfulandmeaningful.【解析】1.題干解讀：題目要求以“OurColorfulLifeafterSchool”為題介紹課外活動；要求包含表格中的內(nèi)容提示。2.寫作指導(dǎo)：此作文時態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時為主；采用第一人稱口吻；可采用1段落格式，闡述最喜歡的課外活動以及原因；注意無語法和拼寫錯誤。（2021·江蘇南京市·中考真題）某英文網(wǎng)站正在舉辦征文活動，請根據(jù)網(wǎng)站征文要求，用英語寫一篇短文投稿。Thisnewglobalsiteisaplaceforstudentstosharetheirideas.Wearelookingforyourbeautifulschooldaytoinspire（鼓舞）ourreaders.Didyouhelpanyoneatschool?Didyouenjoyabeautifulsonginyourartlesson?Didyouhaveanamazingexperienceintheschoollab?Yourschoollifeisfullofbeauty.Chooseabeautifulschoolday.Writeapassagetotelluswhatyoudidthatdayandwhyyouthinkitwasbeautiful.Sendyourwritingtousrightnow!注意:1.內(nèi)容涵蓋要點,全文連貫通順。2.詞數(shù)80左右（已給出的文章開頭,不計入總詞數(shù)）。3.文中不得提及有關(guān)考生個人身份的任何信息,如校名、人名等。MyBeautifulSchoolDayMyschoollifeisfullofbeauty.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】MyBeautifulSchoolDayMyschoollifeisfullofbeauty.Iwillneverforgetthedaywhichmakesmefeelmeaningful.MybestfriendLucyandIalwaysridebikestogetherafterschool.Oneday,Iwaitedalongtimebutdidn’tseeher.ThenIsearchedforherinthecornerofourschool.Shewascryingatthattime.ShetoldmethatshewasnervousbecauseshewouldhaveanEnglishtest.IdecidedtohelpherwithEnglish.Thatevening,Ihelpedherreviewthekeypointsandnotes.Twodayslater,shetoldmethatshepassedit.Ifeltthathelpingotherswhoareinneedwasverymeaningful.【詳解】1.題干解讀：本文是一篇材料作文。圍繞“我美麗的學(xué)校生活”寫一篇短文。2.寫作指導(dǎo)：本文主要采用一般過去時。分為兩段式，第一段引出主題；第二段描述自己的經(jīng)歷，并發(fā)表自己的感悟。寫作時保持主謂一致性，邏輯性要強，無語法和標(biāo)點錯誤。（2021·浙江寧波市·中考真題）假如你是李華,上個月你校舉行了“祖國在我心中”的主題活動（themeevent）,請你根據(jù)以下提供的信息并結(jié)合你參加這個主題活動的經(jīng)歷,寫一篇英語短文向你校英語報投稿。注意：（1）短文必須包括導(dǎo)圖的所有要點,并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮;（2）文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的人名和校名;（3）詞數(shù)80-100;標(biāo)題已給出,不計入總詞數(shù)。MotherlandinMyHeart________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】MotherlandinMyHeartLastmonth,ourschoolheldaneventwiththethemeof“MotherlandinMyHeart”toexpressourloveforourmotherland.Duringtheevent,wehadmanyactivities,includingsingingredsongsandtellingstoriesabouttheRedArmy.Itookpartinthesingingcompetition.Besides,IattendedthespeechcontestinwhichItoldastoryaboutahero.Manystudentsweremovedbymystory.Ithinkthiseventisverymeaningful.I’mproudofmycountry.Ihopeourmotherlandwillbecomemuchgreaterandeverybodycanliveabetterlife.【詳解】1.題干解讀：該題目要求根據(jù)所給提示，以“MotherlandinMyHeart”為題，結(jié)合自己參加“祖國在我心中”主題活動的經(jīng)歷寫篇文章，向?qū)W校英語報投稿。2.寫作指導(dǎo)：人稱應(yīng)采用第一人稱，介紹主題活動內(nèi)容時用一般過去時，表達(dá)自己的感受時用一般現(xiàn)在時。注意要包含所給要點，保證條理清晰。名校模擬題提升練寫作方法指導(dǎo)名校模擬題提升練寫作方法指導(dǎo)（2022上·吉林長春·九年級校考期末）“少年強，則國強”，青少年要勇敢肩負(fù)起時代賦予的重任，腳踏實地、志存高遠(yuǎn)。進入九年級，每個同學(xué)都在為進入夢想中的學(xué)校而努力著。那么，為了實現(xiàn)你的夢想，你打算怎么做？請你以“MyDream,MyFuture”為題，寫一篇不少于80詞的英語短文。寫一寫你的期待和夢想；為了實現(xiàn)夢想，你計劃做哪些方面的努力？至少2點.；呼吁大家一起為夢想而加油！要求：1.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，使行文流暢；2.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實姓名和學(xué)校名稱。MyDream,MyFuture________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文MyDream,MyFutureI’maGrade9studentnow.Theseniorhighschoolentranceexaminationiscoming.I’mbusygettingreadyforiteveryday,suchasreadingaloudinthemorning,finishinglotsofexercisesandsoon.It’smydreamtogotohighschool.Toachievemydream,Ihavesomeplans.First,I’lllistentomyteacherscarefullyinclass.Everylessonisimportant,Ican’tmissanypoint.Second,Ineedtofinishmyhomeworkontime.It’sagoodwaytocheckwhatIhavelearnedandhowIhavelearned.Finally,it’snecessarytopayattentiontomyphysicalandmentalhealth,whichareimportantformetofacethebigchallenge.Witheveryeffort,Ihopemydreamwillcometruesoon.Let’sworkhardtofightforabrightfuture.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇話題作文；②時態(tài)：時態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時”；③提示：本文以“MyDream,MyFuture”為題，結(jié)合題干中的提示介紹如何實現(xiàn)自己的夢想，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。[寫作步驟]第一步，簡單說明自己的夢想；第二步，具體闡說如何實現(xiàn)夢想；第三步，最后呼吁大家一起為夢想而加油。[亮點詞匯]①getreadyfor作準(zhǔn)備②ontime準(zhǔn)時③payattentionto注意[高分句型]①Toachievemydream,Ihavesomeplans.（動詞不定式表目的）②It’sagoodwaytocheckwhatIhavelearnedandhowIhavelearned.（what引導(dǎo)賓語從句）③Finally,it’snecessarytopayattentiontomyphysicalandmentalhealth,whichareimportantformetofacethebigchallenge.（which引導(dǎo)非限制性定語從句）（2023上·天津和平·九年級統(tǒng)考期中）每個時代都有自己的偶像，青少年們在成長中也一定有榜樣的力量在指引。例如：航天英雄楊利偉，奧運冠軍蘇炳添，抗疫英雄鐘南山等等。其實，只要用心觀察，平凡的生活中也有我們的偶像。他們陪伴我們成長，指引我們前行，給予我們力量。請根據(jù)以下提示，以“Myhero”為題，講述一位平凡生活中的偶像。(1)偶像：媽媽

年齡：40多歲

職業(yè)：醫(yī)生

愛好：讀書(2)生活中照顧我；遇到困難給我建議；(3)經(jīng)?；ê芏鄷r間工作，目的是幫助更多的人；(4)兩年前，去貧困地區(qū)當(dāng)志愿者，培訓(xùn)年輕醫(yī)生并且?guī)椭⑨t(yī)院；(5)我認(rèn)為……。寫作要求：(1)不得使用真實姓名和學(xué)校名。(2)包含以上所有要點，可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，使內(nèi)容充實，行文連貫。(3)字跡工整，語言精練，表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確，條理清楚。(4)詞數(shù)80詞左右。(開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。)MyheroMyheroismymotherand__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文MyheroMyheroismymotherandsheisfortyyearsold.Sheisadoctorandenjoysreading.MymothertakescareofmeinlifeandgivesmesomeadvicewheneverImeetdifficulties.Sheoftenspendsalotoftimeworkingtohelpmorepeople.Twoyearsago,shevolunteeredinpoorareas,trainedyoungdoctors,andhelpedfoundhospitals.Ibelievethatmymotherisgreat.WhenIgrowup,Ialsowanttobecomesomeonelikemymotherandmakecontributionstothe