05 開(kāi)放作文之?dāng)⑹旅鑼?xiě)類(lèi)（解析版）-【高分·技能】2024年中考英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作?？碱}型全面突破

05開(kāi)放作文之?dāng)⑹旅鑼?xiě)類(lèi)近三年考情分析近三年考情分析年份地區(qū)話(huà)題命題形式2023年北京介紹一個(gè)你參加過(guò)的社團(tuán)，談?wù)勥@個(gè)社團(tuán)的活動(dòng)內(nèi)容以及你的收獲。開(kāi)放作文浙江衢州以“WorkTogether，EnjoyTeamwork”為主題開(kāi)放作文湖北宜昌對(duì)未來(lái)人生的思考及行動(dòng)開(kāi)放作文重慶“團(tuán)隊(duì)協(xié)作”為話(huà)題開(kāi)放作文2022年湖南湘潭請(qǐng)你選擇一位老師，表達(dá)你對(duì)他（她）的感激之情。開(kāi)放作文江蘇泰州請(qǐng)分享你初中三年中的成長(zhǎng)故事，具體講述其中一個(gè)變化。開(kāi)放作文江蘇徐州“Meandmyafter-classcourse”為主題開(kāi)放作文2021年江蘇蘇州以“Aconflictwith…”為題開(kāi)放作文湖北黃石給你的好友李雷寫(xiě)一封感謝信開(kāi)放作文寫(xiě)作方法指導(dǎo)寫(xiě)作方法指導(dǎo)1、認(rèn)真審題把握信息。經(jīng)過(guò)審題，我們要知道，這篇文章要寫(xiě)幾個(gè)要點(diǎn)？用哪些詞語(yǔ)句型？用哪種時(shí)態(tài)，語(yǔ)態(tài)比較好？并且要注意使用哪些過(guò)渡詞或者是過(guò)渡句。2、明確主題，列提綱。我們?cè)诹刑峋V的時(shí)候，要認(rèn)真的思考題目要求，理清脈絡(luò)，思路清晰，把握文章所需要的全部要點(diǎn)。3、組織語(yǔ)言。大家在寫(xiě)文章的時(shí)候一定要注意，要用自己熟悉的英語(yǔ)詞匯和句型，對(duì)于沒(méi)有把握的句子或者單詞，我們要靈活，可以變一種說(shuō)法。同時(shí)要注意句式要多樣，簡(jiǎn)單句和復(fù)合句結(jié)合使用。句子和句子之間要使用過(guò)渡詞，段落與段落之間要使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪^(guò)渡句，一定要用英語(yǔ)思維。4、認(rèn)真檢查。我們要檢查語(yǔ)法是否正確，還有標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)，單詞拼寫(xiě)是否正確。寫(xiě)作模板寫(xiě)作模板（開(kāi)頭）Doyouknow_______(引出人物或事件)?He/She/Itis_______(概括主題或背景).（中間）①First,_______(描述第一個(gè)情節(jié)).②Then,_______(描述第二個(gè)情節(jié)).③Next,_______(描述第三個(gè)情節(jié)).④Finally,_______(描述最后一個(gè)情節(jié)).（結(jié)尾）Fromthisstory,Ilearnedthat_______(總結(jié)寓意或感想).常用表達(dá)常用表達(dá)1.Somebodywasdoing…when…當(dāng)…的時(shí)候，某人正在…e.g.IwastakingawalkbythelakewhenIsawamanfalloffthebicycle.2.Seeing/Hearingthis,I…一看到/聽(tīng)到…，我就…e.g.Seeing/Hearingthis,Iranovertohimassoonaspossible.3.Onseeing/hearingthis,I…一看到/聽(tīng)到…，我就…e.g.Onseeing/hearingthis,Iranovertohimassoonaspossible.4.Somebodyhadjustdone…when…當(dāng)…的時(shí)候，某人剛…e.g.Ihadjustlaindownwhenthetelephonerang.5.Assoonaswegottherewestartedtodo…我們一到那里就開(kāi)始…e.g.Assoonaswegottothefarm,westartedtohelpthefarmers.6.Whatsurprised/attractedusmostwasthat…最讓我們驚訝/吸引我們的是…e.g.Whatattractedusmostwasthatthewatertherewassoclear.7.I’llneverforgetthedaywhen/which…我永遠(yuǎn)不會(huì)忘記那一天…e.g.I’llneverforgetthedaywhichwespentonthefarm.I’llneverforgetthedaywhenwestayedonthefarm.8.Nomatter…,somebody…無(wú)論…某人都…e.g.Nomatterwhatshesaid,wedidn’tacceptthegift.中考真題精講中考真題精講（2023·北京·統(tǒng)考中考真題）同學(xué)們參加過(guò)各種各樣的社團(tuán)，如籃球隊(duì)、合唱團(tuán)等。假設(shè)你是李華。請(qǐng)你用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇短文給學(xué)校英文網(wǎng)站投稿，介紹一個(gè)你參加過(guò)的社團(tuán)，談?wù)勥@個(gè)社團(tuán)的活動(dòng)內(nèi)容以及你的收獲。提示詞語(yǔ)：takepartin,practice,skill,benefit,progress提示問(wèn)題：Whatclubdidyoujoin?Whatdidyoudointheclub?Whathaveyoulearnedfromtheexperience?________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：Ihavebeeninthebasketballclubforthreeyears.WeusedtopracticefromMondaytoFriday,andontheweekend,weplayedgameswithotherteams.Duringthethreeyears,myskillofplayingbasketballimprovedalot.AndIalsomadealotoffriends.Playingbasketballnotonlyhelpsmekeepfit,butalsohelpsmeunderstandtheimportanceofteamwork.Iwillkeepplayingandtrytobegoodatit.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇材料作文；②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)以“一般過(guò)去時(shí)”為主；③提示：寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)已給出，考生應(yīng)注意不要遺漏所給提示問(wèn)題涉及的關(guān)鍵信息，寫(xiě)短文談?wù)勛约簠⒓舆^(guò)的社團(tuán)、這個(gè)社團(tuán)的活動(dòng)內(nèi)容及你考生的收獲。[寫(xiě)作步驟]第一步，開(kāi)篇點(diǎn)明參加了什么社團(tuán)；第二步，介紹社團(tuán)中的活動(dòng)；第三步，談?wù)剰纳鐖F(tuán)活動(dòng)中學(xué)到了什么。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①u(mài)sedtodosth.過(guò)去常常做某事②ontheweekend在周末③notonly...butalso...不僅……而且……④begoodat擅長(zhǎng)[高分句型]WeusedtopracticefromMondaytoFriday,andontheweekend,weplayedgameswithotherteams.（and連接表等同關(guān)系的并列句）（2023·浙江衢州·統(tǒng)考中考真題）善于合作是一種重要能力。近期你校英語(yǔ)社團(tuán)將舉辦以“WorkTogether，EnjoyTeamwork”為主題的征文活動(dòng)。請(qǐng)寫(xiě)一篇英語(yǔ)短文，介紹你與他人合作的一次活動(dòng)經(jīng)歷并談?wù)勀愕母惺堋；顒?dòng)內(nèi)容可從下表中選擇一項(xiàng)或自行確定。TeamworkActivities●takepartinaballmatch●prepareforaparty●cleantheclassroom●makeaposter(海報(bào))●makeasurvey(調(diào)查)●joininarelayrace(接力賽)●dosocialpractice(社會(huì)實(shí)踐)●...注意：（1）文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名、校名等信息；（2）詞數(shù)：90?110。參考詞匯（僅供選擇使用）：teamwork（團(tuán)隊(duì)合作）

workwith（與……合作）teamspirit（團(tuán)隊(duì)精神）

makeaneffortto（努力去……）________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文Teamworkisimportantforbothteenagersandadults.Theabilitytoworktogetherwithothersaspartofateamisnotsimplyaskillneededatschool.Infact,itisalsoanimportantskillusedinallareasoflife.

IrememberedthatItookpartinafootballmatchlastmonth.Atfirst,IthoughtIcouldscoregoalsbymyself.Atlast,wefailedthisgamebecauseofarrogance.Afterthat,Irealizedthiswasateamsport.Ishouldworktogetherwithotherteammates.

Allinall,teamworkcannotonlystrengthenchildren’ssocialskills,butalsodeveloptheircommunicationskills.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇記敘文，為材料作文；②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”和“一般過(guò)去時(shí)”；③提示：寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)已給出，考生應(yīng)注意不要遺漏，適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)完整表述內(nèi)容。[寫(xiě)作步驟]第一步，介紹團(tuán)隊(duì)合作的重要性；第二步，講述自己的經(jīng)歷和從中學(xué)到了什么；第三步，總結(jié)概括。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①beimportantfor對(duì)……重要②infact事實(shí)上③takepartin參加④allinall總的來(lái)說(shuō)[高分句型]①Theabilitytoworktogetherwithothersaspartofateamisnotsimplyaskillneededatschool.（動(dòng)詞不定式作定語(yǔ)）②IrememberedthatItookpartinafootballmatchlastmonth.（賓語(yǔ)從句）（2023·浙江衢州·統(tǒng)考中考真題）善于合作是一種重要能力。近期你校英語(yǔ)社團(tuán)將舉辦以“WorkTogether，EnjoyTeamwork”為主題的征文活動(dòng)。請(qǐng)寫(xiě)一篇英語(yǔ)短文，介紹你與他人合作的一次活動(dòng)經(jīng)歷并談?wù)勀愕母惺堋；顒?dòng)內(nèi)容可從下表中選擇一項(xiàng)或自行確定。TeamworkActivities●takepartinaballmatch●prepareforaparty●cleantheclassroom●makeaposter(海報(bào))●makeasurvey(調(diào)查)●joininarelayrace(接力賽)●dosocialpractice(社會(huì)實(shí)踐)●...注意：（1）文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名、校名等信息；（2）詞數(shù)：90?110。參考詞匯（僅供選擇使用）：teamwork（團(tuán)隊(duì)合作）

workwith（與……合作）teamspirit（團(tuán)隊(duì)精神）

makeaneffortto（努力去……）________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文Teamworkisimportantforbothteenagersandadults.Theabilitytoworktogetherwithothersaspartofateamisnotsimplyaskillneededatschool.Infact,itisalsoanimportantskillusedinallareasoflife.

IrememberedthatItookpartinafootballmatchlastmonth.Atfirst,IthoughtIcouldscoregoalsbymyself.Atlast,wefailedthisgamebecauseofarrogance.Afterthat,Irealizedthiswasateamsport.Ishouldworktogetherwithotherteammates.

Allinall,teamworkcannotonlystrengthenchildren’ssocialskills,butalsodeveloptheircommunicationskills.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇記敘文，為材料作文；②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”和“一般過(guò)去時(shí)”；③提示：寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)已給出，考生應(yīng)注意不要遺漏，適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)完整表述內(nèi)容。[寫(xiě)作步驟]第一步，介紹團(tuán)隊(duì)合作的重要性；第二步，講述自己的經(jīng)歷和從中學(xué)到了什么；第三步，總結(jié)概括。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①beimportantfor對(duì)……重要②infact事實(shí)上③takepartin參加④allinall總的來(lái)說(shuō)[高分句型]①Theabilitytoworktogetherwithothersaspartofateamisnotsimplyaskillneededatschool.（動(dòng)詞不定式作定語(yǔ)）②IrememberedthatItookpartinafootballmatchlastmonth.（賓語(yǔ)從句）（2023·湖北宜昌·統(tǒng)考中考真題）假如你是李華，你的英國(guó)好友Jack想了解你對(duì)未來(lái)人生的思考及行動(dòng)，請(qǐng)你給他寫(xiě)一封電子郵件。內(nèi)容包括：★你想成為什么樣的人；★你的理由；★你的具體行動(dòng)。郵件要求：★80詞經(jīng)右，開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；★文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名和校名。DearJack,Howiseverything?I’mwritingtotellyou________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________LiHua【答案】例文DearJack,Howiseverything?I’mwritingtotellyouthatIwanttobeausefulpersoninthefuture.WhenIlearnsomethingaboutYuanLongping,Irespecthimforwhathehasdoneforourcountry.Thankstothescientistslikehim,ourcountrybecomesstrongerandwefeelhappiernow.Asknowledgeispower,Iwillstudyharderthanbefore.AndthenIplantogotoauniversity.AfterIgraduate,IwillservethepeopleintheareaswhereIamneeded.IhopeIcouldtrymybesttohelpmorepeopleinmycountry.LiHua【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇應(yīng)用文，為電子郵件；②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般將來(lái)時(shí)”；③提示：寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)已給出，考生應(yīng)注意不要遺漏，適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)完整表述內(nèi)容。[寫(xiě)作步驟]第一步，介紹自己想成為什么樣的人；第二步，分享自己的理由以及具體的行動(dòng)。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①inthefuture在未來(lái)②thanksto多虧③tryone’sbesttodosth盡某人最大努力去做某事[高分句型]①WhenIlearnsomethingaboutYuanLongping,Irespecthimforwhathehasdoneforourcountry.（when引導(dǎo)時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句）②AndthenIplantogotoauniversity.（動(dòng)詞不定式作賓語(yǔ)）（2023·重慶·統(tǒng)考中考真題）團(tuán)隊(duì)協(xié)作是21世紀(jì)人才必備能力之一。信任、配合、包容、溝通、責(zé)任、傾聽(tīng)是團(tuán)隊(duì)協(xié)作中重要的品質(zhì)。你校?？⒄Z(yǔ)專(zhuān)欄以“團(tuán)隊(duì)協(xié)作”為話(huà)題發(fā)起征文，請(qǐng)你講述自己團(tuán)隊(duì)協(xié)作的經(jīng)歷，分享其中令你最受益的品質(zhì)及你的感悟，以供他人借鑒和學(xué)習(xí)。要求：1.80—120詞；2.文中不能出現(xiàn)自己的姓名和所在學(xué)校的名稱(chēng)。參考信息：________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文Workingtogetherisimportantforteenagers.Lastterm,Liz,AnneandIenteredasciencecompetition.Ourtaskwastocreateaposterboardwithinformationaboutspaceships.Afterdiscussion,eachofusgotajob.LizandAnnewenttothelibrarytolookformoreinformationaboutspaceships.Isearchedforthepicturesweneededontheinternet.Thenextday,weorganizedtheinformationanddecidedwhatwewantedtoputontheboard.Afterthat,wespentthreedaysmakingtheposterboard.Finally,wewonsecondprize.Whenworkingasateam,Ilearnedhowtoworkwellwithmypartners.IlistenedtothemcarefullyandIrespectfullyandconfidentlyexpressedmyideas.Mycommunicationskillshaveimprovedalot.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇記敘文，為材料作文；②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為“一般過(guò)去時(shí)”；③提示：寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)已給出，考生應(yīng)注意不要遺漏“從這次經(jīng)歷中學(xué)到什么”，適當(dāng)添加細(xì)節(jié)，并突出寫(xiě)作重點(diǎn)。[寫(xiě)作步驟]第一步，表明寫(xiě)作意圖，指出團(tuán)隊(duì)合作很重要；第二步，具體闡述最難忘的一次團(tuán)隊(duì)合作經(jīng)歷；第三步，書(shū)寫(xiě)結(jié)語(yǔ)，總結(jié)這次經(jīng)歷中的收獲。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①lookfor尋找②searchfor搜索③workasateam團(tuán)隊(duì)合作[高分句型]①Thenextday,weorganizedtheinformationanddecidedwhatwewantedtoputontheboard.（what引導(dǎo)的賓語(yǔ)從句）②Isearchedforthepicturesweneededontheinternet.（省略that的定語(yǔ)從句）（2022·湖南湘潭·中考真題）親愛(ài)的同學(xué)，恭喜你即將畢業(yè)。在過(guò)去的三年初中學(xué)習(xí)中，你的老師教導(dǎo)、關(guān)心、幫助過(guò)你。請(qǐng)你選擇一位老師，表達(dá)你對(duì)他（她）的感激之情。內(nèi)容包括：1.你對(duì)這位老師的印象；2.你感謝他（她）的原因；3.你對(duì)他（她）的祝福。注意：1.詞數(shù)在80詞左右（開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）；2.可適當(dāng)舉例或拓展；3.文中不能出現(xiàn)可能透露真實(shí)身份的任何信息（如校名，師生名字等）。It’stimeformetosaygoodbyetomyjuniorschoollife.I’mheretosaythanksto______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：It’stimeformetosaygoodbyetomyjuniorschoollife.I’mheretosaythankstomyEnglishteacherMr.Zhang.Sheisverykindandpatient.ShehashelpedmealotinmystudiessinceIcametothisschool.WhenIwasintrouble,sheusedtoencouragemeandgivemesomegoodadvice.AtonetimeIfailedtopassanEnglishtestandIwasverysadaboutit.Shecameandcheeredmeup.ShetoldmesomegoodwaystoimprovemyEnglish.Withherhelp,IhavemadegreatprogressinEnglish.I’msothankfultoherforherkindhelpthatIwillworkharderandtrytodobetterinthefuture.Ihopeshewillbecomebetterandbetter.【解析】1.題干解讀：該題目屬于記敘文寫(xiě)作，本文開(kāi)頭已經(jīng)給出，選擇一位你想要感謝的老師，表達(dá)感激之情，根據(jù)提示要點(diǎn)進(jìn)行寫(xiě)作，可以適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。2.寫(xiě)作指導(dǎo)：本文主要用第一人稱(chēng)和第三人稱(chēng)來(lái)描述，時(shí)態(tài)以一般過(guò)去和一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主。本文可以采用一段式寫(xiě)作，要求描述對(duì)老師的印象，感謝的原因以及對(duì)老師的祝福。寫(xiě)作時(shí)保持主謂一致性，做到無(wú)語(yǔ)法和標(biāo)點(diǎn)錯(cuò)誤。（2022·江蘇泰州·中考真題）我們?cè)谧兓谐砷L(zhǎng)，成長(zhǎng)讓我們的人生充滿(mǎn)意義?；厥兹瓿踔袝r(shí)光，我們?cè)趯W(xué)習(xí)、思想、性格、生活等方面發(fā)生了很多變化。你所在學(xué)校公眾號(hào)的英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作欄目正在開(kāi)展“我的成長(zhǎng)”征文活動(dòng)，請(qǐng)分享你初中三年中的成長(zhǎng)故事，具體講述其中一個(gè)變化。要點(diǎn)如下：1.變化是什么？2.變化過(guò)程是什么？3.你從中得到了什么啟發(fā)？要求：1.必須含有所有要點(diǎn)，并適當(dāng)拓展；2.不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名、校名、地名等相關(guān)信息；3.詞數(shù)100左右。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文Wegrowupinchange.Growthmakesourlifefullofmeaning.Lookingbackonthethreeyearsofjuniorhighschool,Ihaveexperiencedmanychangesinmystudy,thoughts,personality,lifeandsoon.ThebiggestpersonalchangeI’veevermadeisthatIhavefalleninlovewithreading.WhenIwasachild,Ididn’tenjoybooksatall.Later,mymotheralwaysreadstoriesformeandboughtmebooks.Gradually,Ibegantolovereading.Whilereading,Ifeelliketalkingwithawiseman.Readingisalsoafantasticwaytoenjoymyfreetime.Booksaremyfriends.Andtheywillbenefitmealot.【解析】1.題干解讀：本文是一篇材料作文。要求根據(jù)提示問(wèn)題，分享自己初中生活以來(lái)的一個(gè)變化，注意要點(diǎn)齊全，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。2.寫(xiě)作指導(dǎo)：寫(xiě)作時(shí)要以第一人稱(chēng)來(lái)行文，時(shí)態(tài)綜合使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)、一般過(guò)去時(shí)和現(xiàn)在完成時(shí)。作文可分為三段，第一段介紹變化是什么；第二段介紹變化過(guò)程是什么；第三段介紹從中得到了什么啟發(fā)。要保證語(yǔ)言連貫，無(wú)語(yǔ)法和拼寫(xiě)錯(cuò)誤。（2022·江蘇徐州·中考真題）你校在課后服務(wù)活動(dòng)中，根據(jù)學(xué)生的需求開(kāi)設(shè)了豐富多彩的課程（見(jiàn)下表）。你選修了其中的一門(mén)，收獲頗豐。你校英文報(bào)正在組織題為“Meandmyafter-classcourse”的征文活動(dòng)，請(qǐng)你寫(xiě)一篇短文投稿，內(nèi)容包括：1.你選修的課程；2.你學(xué)習(xí)該課程的經(jīng)歷；3.你的收獲及感受。①運(yùn)動(dòng)（Sports）

②閱讀（Reading）

③手工（DIY）④繪畫(huà)（Painting）

⑤聲樂(lè)（Singing）

⑥……（自擬）注意：1.詞數(shù)90左右；2.短文中不得泄露個(gè)人信息；3.請(qǐng)按照如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。Meandmyafter-classcourseInmyschool,therearemanykindsofafter-classcourses.Ichoose____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文Meandmyafter-classcourseInmyschool,therearemanykindsofafter-classcourses.IchoosethecourseofDIY.DIYliterallymeansmakingthingsbyhand.Myfirstassignmentwastousethecoloredbubblemudcommonlyusedbyprimaryschoolstudentsnow,pasteacoloredblessingonthesmallboard,andthenmakeaframewithcoloredwool.BecauseIthinkeveryonehasadifferentunderstandingofhappiness.ImadeawordFuintocolor.It’squiteatestofaperson’spatiencetodosomesimplehandicrafts,suchascrossstitch,foldingthousandpapercrane...Throughthisstudy,Ilearnedthatwecanmakehandmadeinmanyways.Wastebeveragebottles,wool,icecreamsticksandsooncanbecomerawmaterialsforhandmade.Wecancreateourownsatisfactoryworksthroughourownimagination.【解析】1.題干解讀：本文是一篇材料作文。以“Meandmyafter-classcourse”為主題，結(jié)合所給要點(diǎn)提示寫(xiě)一篇作文。2.寫(xiě)作指導(dǎo)：本文時(shí)態(tài)采用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般過(guò)去時(shí)行文；人稱(chēng)以第一人稱(chēng)和第三人稱(chēng)為主。寫(xiě)作時(shí)先從表格里選擇一個(gè)課外課程，之后再根據(jù)三個(gè)要點(diǎn)展開(kāi)敘述。文章要確保語(yǔ)句通順，無(wú)單詞語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤。（2021·江蘇蘇州市·中考真題）在日常生活中,沖突難免發(fā)生。請(qǐng)以“Aconflictwith…”為題。用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)下你與他人（如：家人,老師,同學(xué)等）或自己內(nèi)心發(fā)生過(guò)的沖突故事。故事需包括沖突的發(fā)生和解決。注意：1.詞數(shù)：100左右;2.請(qǐng)先將標(biāo)題填寫(xiě)完整，再寫(xiě)文章；3文中不得出現(xiàn)與考生相關(guān)的真實(shí)姓名，校名等信息;照抄閱讀語(yǔ)篇不得分。參考詞匯：conflict沖突Aconflictwith________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】AconflictwithmymotherIndailylife,conflictsoftenoccur.Isometimeshaveconflictswithmymother.WhenIgothome,shealwayssaidalot.Shewouldaskmeaboutmyperformanceinclass,howIgotalongwithmyclassmatesandsoon.Ifeltreallyboredsometimes.Iwasverytiredafteraday’sclass.WhenIgothome,Ijustwantedtorestanddidn’twanttotalk.Sowhenevermymotheraskedmesomething,wealwayshadsomeconflicts.Later,ItoldmygoodfriendwhatIthought,andshesuggestedthatItalktomymotheraboutwhatIreallythought.Ididasshesuggested.Ihadaheart-to-hearttalkwithmymother.Iexplainedmythoughtsindetailtomymother.Insteadoftalkingaboutitendlessly,mymothergavememorespaceandmadememoreindependent.Intheend,myrelationshipwithmymotherbecameveryharmonious.Weallbecamehappierandmorerelaxed.【詳解】1.

題干解讀：題目要求根據(jù)提示詞語(yǔ)，寫(xiě)出自己和誰(shuí)發(fā)生了沖突，包括沖突的發(fā)生和解決，可以適當(dāng)?shù)陌l(fā)揮，寫(xiě)作時(shí)要運(yùn)用正確的英語(yǔ)表達(dá)，要選用恰當(dāng)?shù)脑~匯和短語(yǔ)。

2.

寫(xiě)作指導(dǎo)：寫(xiě)作時(shí)要緊扣主題，用第一人稱(chēng)和其他人稱(chēng)相結(jié)合來(lái)寫(xiě)作，時(shí)態(tài)以一般過(guò)去時(shí)為主，要做到要點(diǎn)齊全，無(wú)單詞拼寫(xiě)和語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤。（2021·湖北黃石市·中考真題）Asanoldsayinggoes,“Atruefriendreachesforyourhandandtouchesyourheart.”假如你叫李華，在你的初中學(xué)習(xí)生涯中，一定有許多朋友給了你不少幫助。在畢業(yè)之際，請(qǐng)給你的好友李雷寫(xiě)一封感謝信。要點(diǎn)：1.感謝他（她）對(duì)你的幫助。2.他（她）是如何幫助你的。要求：1.請(qǐng)結(jié)合具體事例，適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；語(yǔ)言通順，意思連貫。2.文中不能出現(xiàn)與本人相關(guān)信息。3.80詞左右（開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）。DearLiLei,Howtimeflies!Wearegoingtograduatefromjuniorhighschool.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Wishyouallthebest!Yours,LiHua【答案】DearLiLei,Howtimeflies!Wearegoingtograduatefromjuniorhighschool.Ireallywanttoexpressmythankstoyou.IstillrememberthatwhenIfirstarrivedatthisnewschool,Iwasshyandnervous.Ididn’tknowanyoneinourclassandyouwerethefirsttosayhellotome.Ifeltwarmandhappy.Duringthethreeyearsofstudy,youalwayshelpedmewhenIhaddifficultylearning.YouhelpedmewithmyEnglishandgavemealotofusefulsuggestions.MyEnglishhasimprovedalot.Wishyouallthebest!Yours,LiHua【詳解】1.題干解讀：本文是一篇書(shū)信作文。要求針對(duì)初中生活好友的幫助，給李雷寫(xiě)一封感謝信，注意要點(diǎn)齊全，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。2.寫(xiě)作指導(dǎo)：寫(xiě)作時(shí)要以第一和第二人稱(chēng)來(lái)行文，時(shí)態(tài)以一般過(guò)去時(shí)為主。作文可分為三段，第一段引出話(huà)題，感謝對(duì)方的幫助；第二段介紹他是如何幫助你的；第三段收尾。要保證語(yǔ)言連貫，無(wú)語(yǔ)法和拼寫(xiě)錯(cuò)誤。名校模擬題提升練名校模擬題提升練（2023上·北京通州·九年級(jí)統(tǒng)考期中）某英文網(wǎng)站正在開(kāi)展以“書(shū)香潤(rùn)心靈，閱讀伴成長(zhǎng)”為主題的征文活動(dòng)。假如你是李華，請(qǐng)用英文寫(xiě)一篇短文投稿，談?wù)勀谋緯?shū)對(duì)你影響最大，介紹一下這本書(shū)的內(nèi)容，以及給你成長(zhǎng)帶來(lái)的幫助。提示詞語(yǔ)：write,story,life,change,help提示問(wèn)題：

·Whichbookhashadabiginfluenceonyourlife?

·Whatisthebookabout?

·Howhasthebookhelpedyou?

Therearealotofbooksaroundus.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文Therearealotofbooksaroundus.Ilikereadingthem.Iwouldliketotalkaboutabook.ItisnamedTheSecret.ItiswrittenbyRhondaByrne,afamouswriter.Itdoesn’thaveanystory.Actually,itisbasedonthetruthoflife.Anumberofthingsrelatedtoourlifearementionedinthisbook,likehowtogethappiness,howtogetmoremoney,howtostayhealthy.Thisbookhaschangedmywayofthinkingandhasbeenveryhelpfultome.Ilikethisbook.Ithinkyoushouldreadit.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇材料作文；②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”；③提示：寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)已給出，考生應(yīng)注意不要遺漏“提示信息”中“對(duì)我的生活產(chǎn)生重大影響的書(shū)，這本書(shū)的內(nèi)容以及對(duì)我的幫助”，適當(dāng)添加細(xì)節(jié)，并突出寫(xiě)作重點(diǎn)。[寫(xiě)作步驟]第一步，表明寫(xiě)作意圖。借用“我們周?chē)泻芏鄷?shū)?！眮?lái)引出重點(diǎn)介紹的內(nèi)容；第二步，具體闡述寫(xiě)作內(nèi)容。從“對(duì)我有影響的書(shū)，這本書(shū)的內(nèi)容以及對(duì)我的幫助”重點(diǎn)介紹的我喜歡的書(shū)的具體情況；第三步，書(shū)寫(xiě)結(jié)語(yǔ)。表達(dá)“我認(rèn)為你應(yīng)該讀一下。”[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①bebasedon基于②anumberof許多的[高分句型]①I(mǎi)wouldliketotalkaboutabook.（wouldliketodosth表示“想要做某事”）②Ithinkyoushouldreadit.（省略that的賓語(yǔ)從句）（2021上·北京房山·九年級(jí)統(tǒng)考期末）某英文網(wǎng)站在開(kāi)展以“我最敬佩的人”為主題的征文活動(dòng)。假如你是李華，請(qǐng)用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇短文投稿。談?wù)勀阕罹磁宓娜?，?她是誰(shuí)，敬佩他/她的原因，以及從他/她身上學(xué)習(xí)到了什么。提示詞語(yǔ)：admire,responsibility,careful提示問(wèn)題：●Whoisthepersonyouadmirethemost?●Whydoyouadmirehim/her?●Whatdoyoulearnfromhim/her?_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________