中考英語二輪復(fù)習(xí)書面表達(dá)導(dǎo)學(xué)案：話題三 學(xué)校生活

話題三學(xué)校生活河北中考8年考情分析分析河北近8年中考真題的書面表達(dá)可知，針對“學(xué)校生活”這一話題，僅在2021年考查了學(xué)校的基本情況：從兩所學(xué)校中選擇一所你喜歡的學(xué)校。分析全國真題可知，此話題有以下命題角度：①介紹學(xué)校的基本情況；②介紹學(xué)生的學(xué)校生活；③介紹校園活動。好詞好句成好篇?角度1介紹學(xué)校的基本情況考查要點通常是介紹學(xué)校的基本情況。主要包括以下寫作要點：①學(xué)校的歷史、知名度；②學(xué)校老師的情況；③在校學(xué)生的學(xué)習(xí)情況。詞匯短語積累1.withone’shelpof...在……的幫助下2.bepatientwith對……有耐心3.getalong/onwellwith...與……相處融洽4.liebehind...位于……的后面5.dosports做運(yùn)動6.getmuchpleasure獲得很多樂趣必備句型1.I’mgladtotellyousomethingaboutmy...2.It’sagoodplaceformetorelax...andpreparemylessons.3.Ofalltheplacesinmyschool,Ilike...best.佳句積累開頭句1.Ourschoolisasbeautifulasagardenwithlotsofgreentreesallyearround.我們的學(xué)校像花園一樣美麗，一年四季都有許多綠樹。2.Myschoolisfamousforthefamousteachers.我的學(xué)校以名師而聞名。3.Myschoolislikeanotherhometomeandthelibraryismyfavoriteplace.我的學(xué)校就像我的另一個家，圖書館是我最喜歡的地方。中間句1.Infrontofthedininghallisthesportshallandthebuildinginfrontofthatisforscience.在食堂的前面是體育館，前面的建筑是供科學(xué)實驗用的。2.It’saplacewhereIfindfriendshipandjoy.這是我找到友誼和快樂的地方。3.Ourteachersnotonlyteachushowtolearn,butalsoteachushowtobeausefulpersoninsociety.我們的老師不僅教我們?nèi)绾螌W(xué)習(xí)，而且教我們?nèi)绾纬蔀橐粋€對社會有用的人。結(jié)尾句1.It’sveryluckyforustohavesuchgoodlearningenvironment.我們很幸運(yùn)有這樣一個良好的學(xué)習(xí)環(huán)境。2.MyschoolisaplaceIwillrememberforever.我的學(xué)校是一個我會永遠(yuǎn)記得的地方。3.Forme,thereadingroomistheplaceIlikebestatschool.對我來說，閱覽室是我在學(xué)校最喜歡的地方。審主題：從兩所學(xué)校審主題：從兩所學(xué)校中，選擇一所你喜歡的學(xué)校審文體：說明文審人稱：以第一人稱為主審時態(tài)：一般現(xiàn)在時審要點：①你想去哪一所學(xué)校；②選擇的理由［2021·河北］初中生活已近尾聲，同學(xué)們即將步入高一級學(xué)校。請你仔細(xì)閱讀下表中的內(nèi)容和所給提示，從下面兩所學(xué)校中選擇一所你喜歡的學(xué)校，并根據(jù)該校信息寫一篇短文。Items(條目)NamesPurpleSchoolOrangeSchoolSchoolspublic,alonghistoryprivate,well-knownTeachershard-workingyoungandactiveStudentslesshomeworkcolorfulactivities提示：1.Whichschoolwouldyouliketogoto?2.Whydoyouchooseit?注意：1.短文須包括表格中你所選學(xué)校的全部信息和提示中的兩個要點，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；2.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的地名、校名和人名；3.詞數(shù)80個左右（開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)）。Iwouldliketogoto_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________IwouldliketogotoPurpleSchool.擴(kuò)句：增加選擇這所學(xué)校的目的開篇：引出話題wouldliketo_________________________________________________________________________________________________?文章有框架IwouldliketogotoPurpleSchool.擴(kuò)句：增加選擇這所學(xué)校的目的開篇：引出話題wouldliketo選擇一所你喜歡的學(xué)校選擇一所你喜歡的學(xué)校Itisapublicschool.擴(kuò)句：增加伴隨狀語來描述這所學(xué)校Itisapublicschool.擴(kuò)句：增加伴隨狀語來描述這所學(xué)校apublicschoolschoolapublicschoolschool正文：具體陳述選擇這所學(xué)校的原因正文：具體陳述選擇這所學(xué)校的原因Theteachersarehard-workingandtheyarepatientwiththestudents.擴(kuò)句：增加具體事例Theteachersarehard-workingandtheyarepatientwiththestudents.擴(kuò)句：增加具體事例hard-workingteachershard-workingteachersThestudentstherehavelesshomework.擴(kuò)句：增加作業(yè)少的結(jié)果studentslesshomeworkThestudentstherehavelesshomework.擴(kuò)句：增加作業(yè)少的結(jié)果studentslesshomeworkSoIchoosePurpleSchool.結(jié)尾：重申主題SoIchoosePurpleSchool.結(jié)尾：重申主題?成篇好表達(dá)連句成篇滿分升格IwouldliketogotoPurpleSchoolforstudy.It’sapublicschoolwithalonghistory.①Somefamouspeoplegraduatedfromthisschool.Theteachersherearehard-workingandthey’repatientwiththestudents.Theyalsoknowhowtoteachwell.I’msurewecanlearnbetterwiththeirhelp.What’smore,thestudentstherehavelesshomework.②Iwon’tspendtoomuchtimedoingmyhomework.Thisway,Icanspendmoretimeonmyhobbiesandinterests.Sowecandevelopourselvesallround.③SoIchoosePurpleSchool.①用“Itissaidthat...”升格________________________________________________________________________②用“if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語從句”升格________________________________________________________________________③用“That’swhy...”升格____________________________________________________________________________?角度2介紹學(xué)生的學(xué)校生活考查要點通常是介紹學(xué)生在學(xué)校中的生活，如最喜歡的運(yùn)動、上學(xué)日、如何度過校園生活等。主要包括以下寫作要點：①描述在學(xué)校中難忘的事情或遇到的困難；②解決問題或困難采取的方式；③在學(xué)校中的收獲。（續(xù)表）詞匯短語積累1.lookbackatthepastthreeyears回顧過去的三年2.anunforgettableevent一件難忘的事3.tiredbutmeaningful累但是有意義4.beproudof/takepridein對……感到驕傲5.howtimeflies時間飛逝6.bringsb.happinessandgrowth使某人快樂、成長7.interestingandcolorfulthree-yearlife有趣、豐富多彩的三年生活必備句型1.Withthehelpof...,Imadegreatprogressin...2.Idowellin/amgoodat...3.I’mluckytostudyinthisbeautifulschool.4.Greatchangeshavetakenplaceinourschoolsince...佳句積累開頭局1.Myjuniorhighschoollifeiscomingtoanend.TherearealotofthingsIwillneverforget.我的初中生活即將結(jié)束。有很多事情我永遠(yuǎn)不會忘記。2.IwillleavemyjuniorhighschoolnextmonthafterIfinishtheexam.下個月考試結(jié)束后，我將離開我的中學(xué)。3.LastFridaywehadadiscussiononwhatweshoulddoafterschool.上周五我們就放學(xué)后該做什么進(jìn)行了討論。4.Juniorhighschoolwillcometoanendandallofuswillhaveanunforgettablememory.初中將要結(jié)束，我們都將有一段難忘的記憶。中間句1.Inthepastthreeyears,Ihavebeenhard-workingandmadegreatprogress.在過去的三年里，我努力學(xué)習(xí)，取得了很大的進(jìn)步。2.Iamgoodatcommunicatingandliketomakefriendswithothers.我善于溝通，喜歡和別人交朋友。3.OurteachersandclassmatesaresofriendlyandhelpfulthatIcanaskthemforhelpatanytime.我們的老師和同學(xué)都很友好、樂于助人，我可以在任何時候向他們求助。4.Atschool,Ioftengooutoftheclassroomtoplaywithmyclassmatesordophysicalexerciseduringthebreaks.在學(xué)校里，我經(jīng)常走出教室和同學(xué)們一起玩兒，或者在休息時間做體育鍛煉。5.Iremembermyteacherwasalwayspatientwithmeinclass.我記得我的老師在課堂上對我總是很有耐心。結(jié)尾句1.I’velearnedalotofthingsthatcanbehelpfultomylaterstudyandlife.我學(xué)到了很多可以幫助我以后學(xué)習(xí)和生活的東西。2.Althoughthelifeinhighschoolishard,IbelieveI’mbraveenoughtofacethedifficultiesandIcantrymybesttoovercomethem.雖然高中生活很艱苦，但我相信我有足夠的勇氣去面對困難，可以盡我最大的努力去克服它們。3.Itisunforgettablebecauseit’sthefirsttimethatIhavedonesomethingmeaningfultoprotecttheenvironment.這是令人難忘的，因為這是我第一次為保護(hù)環(huán)境做了一些有意義的事情。4.However,theendofjuniorhighschoolisthebeginningofanewlife.然而，初中的結(jié)束是新生活的開始。佳作剖析滿分升格審主題：寫給自己的一封信審文體：應(yīng)用文審主題：寫給自己的一封信審文體：應(yīng)用文審人稱：第二人稱審時態(tài)：一般現(xiàn)在時審要點：表格提示內(nèi)容，包括回憶和感想回憶，也有許多感慨？假定你是李華，你校英語報向初三學(xué)生征集稿件，題為“寫給自己的一封信”，請你結(jié)合下表內(nèi)容寫一份稿件投稿。ALettertoMyself內(nèi)容要點參考詞匯Memoriesmakeprogress,...haveagoodtime,...makemistakes,...havetrouble,...Feelingstakepartin...,...Thankful,...regretful,...注意：1.信中須包含兩項內(nèi)容點，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮（參考詞匯僅供選擇使用或參考）。2.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的地名、校名和人名。3.詞數(shù)80個左右（開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)）。ALettertoMyselfDearmyself,Howtimeflies!It’stimetosaygoodbyetoyourjuniorhighschoollife._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________?文章有框架It’It’stimetosaygoodbyetoyourjuniorhighschoollife.（已給出）開篇：告別初中生活Sweet:makeprogress通過過去和現(xiàn)在進(jìn)行對比，體現(xiàn)進(jìn)步Sweet:makeprogress通過過去和現(xiàn)在進(jìn)行對比，體現(xiàn)進(jìn)步Memories，從Memories，從sweet和bitter兩方面進(jìn)行敘述正文：參考表格內(nèi)容進(jìn)行敘述Bitter:havetrouble...如交友、與同學(xué)發(fā)生矛盾等，體現(xiàn)痛苦正文：參考表格內(nèi)容進(jìn)行敘述Bitter:havetrouble...如交友、與同學(xué)發(fā)生矛盾等，體現(xiàn)痛苦ALettertoMyselfALettertoMyselfFeelings，從positive和negative兩方面進(jìn)行敘述，或穿插在memories中Positive:thankful/outgoing...Positive:thankful/outgoing...Negative:regretful/openyourselfup...Negative:regretful/openyourselfup...總結(jié)：難忘的經(jīng)歷Theseunforgettablemomentshelpyougrowintoabetterperson.總結(jié)：難忘的經(jīng)歷Theseunforgettablemomentshelpyougrowintoabetterperson.Wishyouallthebest,mydearself.（已給出Wishyouallthebest,mydearself.（已給出）結(jié)尾：表達(dá)祝福?成篇好表達(dá)連句成篇滿分升格ALettertoMyselfDearmyself,Howtimeflies!It’stimetosaygoodbyetoyourjuniorhighschoollife.MemoriesarestillfreshthatyouweresoshyandquietwheninGradeSeven.①Sometimesyouevendidn’twanttoasktheteachersproblemsaboutlearning.②Butteachersandwarmheartedclassmateshelpyoubecomemoreconfidentandoutgoing.Doyoustillrememberthequarrelwithyourbestfriend?Sometimessilencecausesmisunderstandings.Trytoopenyourselfup,andyouwillunderstandwhatfriendshipmeanstoeverybody.Mayyoualwayskeeptheseupsanddownsinmind.③Alloftheseunforgettablemomentshelpyougrowintoabetterperson.Wishyouallthebest,mydearself.Yours,LiHua①用“l(fā)ackcourage”升格________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________②用“withthehelpof...”升格________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________③用“Itis...that...強(qiáng)調(diào)句”升格________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________?角度3介紹校園活動考查要點通常是介紹學(xué)生在學(xué)校中參加的活動，如興趣小組、學(xué)校安全教育，對校規(guī)的認(rèn)識以及建議，或?qū)處煹慕虒W(xué)方法發(fā)表看法，或給同學(xué)們提供某項活動的建議。主要包括以下寫作要點：①活動的時間、地點和人物；②活動的主題與內(nèi)容；③活動的感受及期待等。詞匯短語積累1.developfriendship發(fā)展友誼2.payattentionto注意3.attendontime準(zhǔn)時參加4.showup出現(xiàn)5.givealecture演講6.preparefor為……準(zhǔn)備7.takenotescarefully認(rèn)真記筆記8.makeuseof利用必備句型1.Lastweek,ourschoolheldaneventwiththethemeof...2.I’mgladtosharesomethingexciting/interestingwithyou.I’mwritingtoinviteyouto...3.Areyoureadyforaninterestingandcolorfullaborclub?NowI’dliketointroducesomeofourlaborclubs.4.Theseactivitiescannotonly...butalso...佳句積累開頭句1.Ourschooldidasurveyamongthestudentsaboutourplansforsocialpracticeactivityduringthesummervacation.Herearetheresults.我們學(xué)校在學(xué)生中做了一個關(guān)于暑假社會實踐活動計劃的調(diào)查。以下是結(jié)果。2.I’mwritingtoinviteyoutoacomingsharingmeetingattheschoolhall.我寫信是想邀請你參加即將在學(xué)校大廳舉行的分享會。3.I’mhappytoheartherewillbeanoutdooractivityinourschoolattheendofthismonth.聽說這個月底我們學(xué)校將組織一次戶外活動，我很高興。（續(xù)表）佳句積累中間句1.Takingpartinteamsportscanmakeusknowtheimportanceofteamwork.參加團(tuán)體運(yùn)動可以讓我們知道團(tuán)隊合作的重要性。2.Theearlierwelearntobeindependent,thebetterourfuturewillbe.我們越早學(xué)會獨(dú)立，我們的未來就會越好。3.Weshouldregardtheschoolasourownhomeandtakegoodcareofthesurroundingenvironment.我們應(yīng)該把學(xué)校當(dāng)作自己的家，好好愛護(hù)周圍的環(huán)境。4.Ifyoucome,payattentiontotherulesandsafety.如果你來了，注意規(guī)則和安全。結(jié)尾句1.WespokehighlyoftheEnglishDay.Welearntalotthroughpractice.我們高度評價了英語日。通過實踐，我們學(xué)到了很多。2.Wehopetherewillbemorecolorfulactivitiesinourschool.我們希望學(xué)校里會有更豐富多彩的活動。3.I’msurethisEnglishCornerwillbecomeapopularplaceforustoimproveourspokenEnglish,andmakemorefriendsaswell.我相信這個英語角會成為一個受歡迎的地方，使我們提高我們的英語口語，并結(jié)交更多的朋友。4.IfthereisanythingthatIcando,pleaseletmeknow.如果有什么我能做的，請告訴我。5.Theseactivitieshavenotonlyhelpedmehaveabetterunderstandingofourcity,butalsoleftalastinginfluenceonmyheartandmind.這些活動不僅幫助我更好地了解了我們的城市，而且在我的心靈和思想上留下了持久的影響。佳作剖析滿分升格審主題：戶外活動的征集意見審人稱：第一人稱審主題：戶外活動的征集意見審人稱：第一人稱審要點：①你喜歡的戶外活動類型；②你選擇此項戶外活動的原因；③你如何安排此項戶外活動，涉及時間、地點、活動內(nèi)容等審時態(tài)：一般現(xiàn)在時本月底你校將舉辦一次戶外活動，為了更好地開展這次活動，校英語社團(tuán)正在向?qū)W生征集意見。假設(shè)你是張華，請根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容寫一篇短文向社團(tuán)投稿。提示：1.Whatoutdooractivitydoyoulike?2.Whydoyoulikeit?3.Howdoyouarrangeit?(when,where,whattodo...)注意：1.短文須包括所有提示內(nèi)容，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。2.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的地名、校名和人名。如果出現(xiàn)地名，請以East________代替。例如：EastMountain...3.詞數(shù)80個左右（開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)）。DearSir,I’mhappytoheartherewillbeanoutdooractivityinourschoolattheendofthismonth._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Hopemysuggestionshelp.Yours,ZhangHuaI’mhappytoheartherewillbeanoutdooractivityinourschoolattheendofthismonth.（已給出）續(xù)寫：指出你喜歡的活動類型，并解釋原因I’mhappytoheartherewillbeanoutdooractivityinourschoolattheendofthismonth.（已給出）續(xù)寫：指出你喜歡的活動類型，并解釋原因開篇：引出話題Ihopetogo...onJune25th.Time:onJune25th/April4th...Ihopetogo...onJune25th.Time:onJune25th/April4th...戶外活動We’dbettergo...bybus...Transport:bybus/bike/subway...戶外活動We’dbettergo...bybus...Transport:bybus/bike/subway...正文：介紹活動安排Activities:collecthistorystoriesabout.../pickuprubbish/trylocalfood...注意：結(jié)合實際生活選取最有把握的活動進(jìn)行敘述Activities:collecthistorystoriesabout.../pickuprubbish/trylocalfood...注意：結(jié)合實際生活選取最有把握的活動進(jìn)行敘述Theseunforgettablemomentshelpyougrowintoabetterperson.總結(jié)：難忘的經(jīng)歷Theseunforgettablemomentshelpyougrowintoabetterperson.總結(jié)：難忘的經(jīng)歷結(jié)尾：希望建議被采納Hopemysuggestionshelp.結(jié)尾：希望建議被采納Hopemysuggestionshelp.（已給出）?成篇好表達(dá)連句成篇滿分升格DearSir,I’mhappytoheartherewillbeanoutdooractivityinourschoolattheendofthismonth.Ilikeclimbingmountainswithmyclassmates.①Wecanenjoythebeautyofnature.Wecanalsomakefriendsandhelpeachotherontheway.Tomaketheactivitymoreinteresting,IhopetogotoEastMountainonJune25th.Sinceit’salittlefar,we’dbettermeetattheschoolgateat7:30a.m.andgotherebybus.②Wecancollectsomehistorystoriesaboutthefamousmountain,andthenwecansharethemtogether.③It’llbeniceforustotrysomelocalfoodforlunchthere.Intheafternoon,wecanpickuptherubbishtoprotecttheenvironment.Thenwecangohomeat4:30p.m.We’resuretohavegreatfun.Hopemysuggestionshelp.Yours,ZhangHua①用“notonly...butalso”升格___________________________________________________________________________________________________②用“sothat”升格________________________________________________________________________________________________③用“if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語從句”升格_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________實戰(zhàn)真演練［2023·河南改編］為了豐富學(xué)校大課間活動內(nèi)容，學(xué)校?？⒄Z專欄以“最美大課間，強(qiáng)健青少年”為主題面向?qū)W生進(jìn)行征文。請你根據(jù)以下提示，用英語寫一篇短文，向?qū)谕陡濉Ｌ崾荆?.Talkabouttheactivitiesduringthe30-minutebreak.2.Talkaboutyourfeelingsabouttheactivities.3.Givesomeadviceonhowtomakeitbetter.注意：1.短文須包括所有提示信息，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。2.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的地名、校名和人名。3.詞數(shù)80個左右（開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)）。參考詞匯：shuttlecockexercises毽子操；badminton羽毛球；ropeskipping跳繩Thecolorfulactivitiesduringthe30-minutebreakhelpmaketeenagershealthierandstronger._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________