讀后續(xù)寫+友誼的溫暖：圣誕前的特別記憶 講義 高二下學(xué)期期末英語(yǔ)試題

閱讀下面文章，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語(yǔ)續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一個(gè)完整短文，續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右。SeeingthepictureofKellyandIholdingteddybearswithgreatjoy,Icouldn’thelprecallingthesweetmemory.Afewyearsago,beforeChristmas,mydadplacedalargeboxinhisgrocerystoreforpeopletodonatetoysforchildreninneed.Kelly,mybestfriendcameovertohelpwiththewrapping.Knowingthatoureffortswouldbringjoytosomanychildrenduringtheholidayseason,wethoughtitwasarewardingexperience.Asweworked,wesharedmomentsoflaughterandjoy.Afterashortwhile,wehadalmostfinishedwrappingallthetoyswithjustonelittleteddybearleft.Lookingatit,Isaid,“Itisthesweetest!Itremindsmeofmyteddybear.Isoldallmylittlekidstuffatourgaragesalewhenwemoved.ButnowI’mreallymissingit!”Kellycametoseeitandshared.“Ihaveasadteddybearstorytoo.Whenmylittlebrotherwasababy,IlethimplaywithmyRosyBear,butherefusedtogiveherback.Ever.”Afterourchat,weknewbothofushadaspecialstorywithateddybear.Rightthen,mydadenteredtheroomandexclaimed.“Wow,greatwrappingjob!Thekidsaregoingtobethrilledwhenopeningthesepresents.”“Theydefinitelywill.Maybewebothwanttobetheonewhocangettheteddybear.Icanjustimaginehowdelightedakidwouldbetounwrapthissweetteddybear.”saidKelly.Welaughed,gazingattheperfectlywrappedbears.Mymom,joininginthelaughter,suggested,“Whydon’tyougatheratourhousenextSaturdayforacookie-decoratingpartyandexchangeyourChristmasgiftsinadvance?I’llpreparethecookiesforyou.”“Goodidea!Iwillenjoythegreatjoyofunwrappingthegift.”Isaidcheerfully.Hearingwhatwesaid,Kelly’seyeslitup,saying,“Countmein!”“Allright,girls,”saidmydad.“Weneedtodothetoy-loadingworknow.Wehavetodropoffallthesepresentsbeforefiveo’clock!”注意：

1．續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；2．請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。Paragraph1:Thenextweek,Iwastryingtofigureoutaperfectgiftfortheparty._____________________________________________________________________Paragraph2:Finally,thedayofthepartyarrived._____________________________________________________________________【解析】【導(dǎo)語(yǔ)】本文以人物為線索展開，講述了幾年前的圣誕節(jié)前，作者和好朋友Kelly一起幫忙包裝人們?cè)诎职蛛s貨店里捐贈(zèng)的禮物，最后只剩下一個(gè)泰迪熊，它讓作者想起了自己被賣掉的泰迪熊，Kelly也想起自己被弟弟拿走的玩具熊，媽媽建議下周六在家舉辦餅干裝飾派對(duì)，提前交換圣誕禮物，作者和Kelly都高興地答應(yīng)了。伏筆，并在續(xù)寫中給出相應(yīng)的回應(yīng)：伏筆:提到“KellyandIholdingteddybearswithgreatjoy”?；貞?yīng):在續(xù)寫中，可以提及這些teddybears是為孩子們準(zhǔn)備的圣誕禮物，而Kelly和我決定保留一個(gè)作為我們友誼的象征，這可以作為我們共同回憶的一部分。伏筆:提到“mydadplacedalargeboxinhisgrocerystoreforpeopletodonatetoys”。回應(yīng):在續(xù)寫中，可以描述我們?nèi)绾螌⑦@些玩具送到需要的孩子們手中，以及這個(gè)行動(dòng)如何影響了我們和接受禮物的孩子們。伏筆:提到“wesharedmomentsoflaughterandjoy”?；貞?yīng):在續(xù)寫中，可以描述在cookie-decoratingparty中，我們?nèi)绾位貞浧疬@些歡笑時(shí)刻，并分享更多關(guān)于我們友誼的故事。伏筆:提到“myteddybear...Isoldallmylittlekidstuffatourgaragesale”?；貞?yīng):在續(xù)寫中，可以講述我如何找到或制作一個(gè)新的teddybear來(lái)替代我失去的那個(gè)，作為對(duì)過(guò)去的一種致敬和對(duì)Kelly友誼的象征。伏筆:提到“Kellyshared...'RosyBear'...herefusedtogiveherback.Ever.”回應(yīng):在續(xù)寫中，可以描述Kelly如何找到一種方式來(lái)紀(jì)念她的RosyBear，可能是通過(guò)講述一個(gè)故事，或者在cookie-decoratingparty上制作一個(gè)RosyBear形狀的餅干。伏筆:提到“thecookie-decoratingpartyandexchangeyourChristmasgiftsinadvance”。回應(yīng):在續(xù)寫中，可以詳細(xì)描述這個(gè)派對(duì)的情景，包括我們?nèi)绾窝b飾餅干，以及交換禮物時(shí)的情感交流。伏筆:提到“thetoy-loadingwork...dropoffallthesepresentsbeforefiveo’clock”?；貞?yīng):在續(xù)寫中，可以描述我們?nèi)绾瓮瓿蛇@個(gè)任務(wù)，以及在完成任務(wù)后感受到的成就感和滿足感。【詳解】1.段落續(xù)寫：①第一段首句內(nèi)容“接下來(lái)的一周，我一直在為派對(duì)想一個(gè)完美的禮物?！笨芍?，第一段可描寫作者為Kelly找到了一個(gè)完美的圣誕節(jié)禮物：泰迪熊。②由第二段首句內(nèi)容“終于，聚會(huì)的日子到了?！笨芍?，第二段可描寫作者和Kelly交換禮物后發(fā)現(xiàn)都是泰迪熊，這成了她們珍貴的回憶。2.續(xù)寫線索：尋找禮物——買下泰迪熊——想象Kelly的反應(yīng)——交換禮物——驚訝——擁抱——成為珍貴的回憶

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Thenextweek,Iwastryingtofigureoutaperfectgiftfortheparty.HopingtobringgreatjoyandsurprisetoKelly,Isearchedforsomethingunique.Oneday,walkinghomefromschool,Isawitintheshopwindow.ItisateddybearexactlyliketheoneI’dbeenwrapping.Iquicklyranintothestore,grabbedthebear,andbroughtitstraighttothecheckoutcounter.Uponreturninghome,Iimmediatelystartedwrappingitup.Icouldn’twaittofeelthejoyandexcitementwhenKellyunwrappedthisspecialgift.Iimaginedherfacelightingupwithsurpriseanddelight.Finally,thedayofthepartyarrived.Afterhavingfundecoratingthecookies,webeganthemostexcitingmoment.Weexchangedourgiftsandwerereadytoopenthebeautifullywrappedboxes.MyheartwasracingasKellydidthat.Meanwhile,IunwrappedmygiftfromKelly,onlytofind…ateddybear!Muchtomysurprise,wehadgottenthesamebrilliantidea.Atthesightoftheteddybears,KellyandIhuggedeachothertightly,gratefulforthejoywehadbroughttoeachother.Fromthatdayon,theteddybearbecameacherishedmemoryofus.Itremindsusofthelaughterandloveweshared,anditalwaysholdsaspecialplaceinourhearts.下水文1Paragraph1:Thenextweek,Iwastryingtofigureoutaperfectgiftfortheparty.Asthecookie-decoratingeventapproached,Iwantedtofindsomethingthatwouldnotonlybeasurprisebutalsocarryapersonaltouch.Aftermuchthought,IdecidedtomakeahandmadephotoalbumfilledwithpicturesofKellyandmeovertheyears.Ispenthourscarefullyselectingandarrangingthephotos,addingcaptionsthatcapturedourfriendshipandthefunwe'vehadtogether.Iknewthiswouldbeameaningfulgiftthatshewouldcherish.Paragraph2:Finally,thedayofthepartyarrived.Thehousewasfilledwiththearomaoffreshlybakedcookies,andthefestivedecorationsaddedawarmandjoyfulatmosphere.KellyandIexchangedgifts,andwhensheopenedthephotoalbum,hereyessparkledwithtearsofhappiness.Shehuggedmetightly,andwebothknewthatthiswasmorethanjustagift;itwasatestamenttoourenduringfriendship.Aswedecoratedcookiesandsharedstories,thelaughterandjoyfilledtheroom,makingitthemostmemorablepre-Christmascelebrationwehadeverhad.下水文2Paragraph1:Thenextweek,Iwastryingtofigureoutaperfectgiftfortheparty.IknewthatKellyandIhadatraditionofgivingeachothersomethinghandmade,soIdecidedtocraftaone-of-a-kindgift.Ispentdaysknittingacozyscarfinherfavoritecolors,weavinginourinitialsandtheyearwithadelicatethread.Eachstitch