2024中考英語試題研究《中考書面表達-學校和學校生活》課件

中考書面表達——學校和學校生活Whatdoyouthinkofwhenyouseethesepictures?FreetalkWhatdoyouthinkofourschool?Whatcanyouthinkofwhenwetalkaboutourschool?ThinkandsayWehavenotonly…butalso…inourschool.Weoften…there.Ourteachersarevery…Theyalways/usually/often…kind,friendly,helpful,strict,hard-working,knowledgeable,…Ourschoollifeis…Iprefer…to…Howdoweintroduceourschoolandschoollife?Readandfind

Hello,I’mMary.Nowletmeintroducemyschoolandschoollifetoyou.Myschoolisapublicschool.It’scleanandbeautiful.Youcanseemanykindsofflowershereandthere.Therearemanymodernteachingfacilitiesinmyschool,suchasthelab,theplaygroundandsoon.What’smore,althoughmyteachersarestrictwithus,theyalsocareforus.Theyarenotonlymyteachersbutalsomyfriends.Myclassmatesareveryhelpful.TheyalwayshelpmewithmyChinese.Lastbutnotleast,theactivitiesinmyschoolareverycolourful.Therearemanydifferentskindsofclubs.Ipreferreadingtotakingpartinotheractivities.SoIlikegoingtothelibrarywhenIamfree.Ilovemyschoolandschoollifeverymuch.Readandfind1.Howmanypartsarethereinthepassage?Three.BeginningMaincontentConclusion2.Whatdoesthewritertalkaboutinthemaincontent?

Thewritertalksaboutherschool,herteachers,herclassmateandtheactivitiesinherschool.3.Underlinetheconnectingwordsinthepassage.4.Whichsentencedoyoulikebetter?Chooseoneanddiscussitwithyourpartner.E.g.Ilike“Ipreferreadingtotakingpartinotheractivities.”,becausethewriteruses“prefer…to…’’inthissentences.Youwillgraduatefromourschoolinafewweeks.Whatdoyouhopeyournewschoolwillbelike?WrittenexpressionHowtowrite審列連查謄五步寫作法審確定內(nèi)容確定人稱確定時態(tài)選擇喜歡的學校，介紹學校信息和喜歡的原因第一人稱事實性信息一般現(xiàn)在時確定結構敘述三段式首段:點明主題——點明想去的學校中間段:圍繞主題，展開敘述——敘述喜歡的原因尾段:回應主題，總結升華——重申想去的愿望審確定內(nèi)容:選擇喜歡的學校，介紹學校信息和喜歡的原因確定人稱:第一人稱確定時態(tài):一般現(xiàn)在時確定結構:敘述三段式首段:點明想去的學校（Beginning)中間段:敘述想去的原因(Maincontent)尾段:重申想去的愿望(Conclusion)列結合三段式，列出寫作提綱BeginningIwouldliketogoto…MaincontentTheschoolis…Theteachers…Thestudents…ConclusionIhope…連1.連詞成句BeginningIwouldliketogotoOrangeSchool.MaincontentTheschoolisprivate.It’swell-known.Theteachersareyoungandactive.Thestudentshavecolourfulactivities.ConclusionIhopeIcangotoOrangeSchool.——添加動詞和關鍵信息連2.擴句成段MaincontentsTheschoolisprivate.It’swell-known.ThePurpleSchoolispublic.Ithasalonghistory.IlikeOrangeSchoolbetter.Theschoolisprivate.It’swell-knowninourcity.——添加補充信息連2.擴句成段Maincontents——添加補充信息Theteachersareyoungandactive.TheteachersinPurpleSchoolishard-working.Theteachersthereareyoungandactive.Icangetalongwellwiththem.連2.擴句成段Maincontent——添加補充信息Thestudentshavecolourfulactivities.ThestudentsinPurpleSchoolhavelesshomework.ThestudentsinOrangeSchoolhavecolorfulactivities.Ilikehavingmorecoloufulactivities.連3.修改潤色——添加連接詞、高階詞匯或句型

ThePurpleSchoolispublic.Ithasalonghistory.IlikeOrangeSchoolbetter.Theschoolisprivate.It’swell-knowninourcity.

Although

thePurpleSchoolispublicandhasalonghistory.IlikeOrangeSchoolbetter.Becauseit’sawell-knownprivateschoolinourcity.連3.修改潤色——添加連接詞、高階詞匯或句型TheteachersinPurpleSchoolishard-working.Theteachersthereareyoungandactive.Icangetalongwellwiththem.

IknowtheteachersinPurpleSchoolishard-working.Butmostofthemarestrictwithstudents.Instead,theteachersherearenotonlyyoungbutalsoactive.Theyarepatientwithstudents.So

Icangetalongwellwiththem.連3.修改潤色——添加連接詞、高階詞匯或句型ThestudentsinPurpleSchoolhavelesshomework.ThestudentsinOrangeSchoolhavecolorfulactivities.Ilikehavingmorecoloufulactivities.

What’smore,OrangeSchooloffersmanycolourfulactivitiestostudents.It’sgoodtohavelesshomeworkinPurpleSchool.ButIpreferhavingmorecolourfulactivitiestohavinglesshomework.查對照中考英語作文評分標準逐項自查查要點是否齊全查語言結構是否豐富，行文是否流暢，表達是否清楚查是否有錯誤表達查是否有達到寫作目的注意：句式運用的多樣性IlikeOrangeSchoolbetter.IpreferOrangeSchool.ThefirstreasonIchoosethisschoolis…Thestudentshavecolourfulactivities.Theactivitiesofthestudentsthereareverycolourful.Thestudentsintheschoolcanenjoymanykindsofcolourfulactivities.工整謄寫，注意詞間距、行間距和段間距IwouldliketogotoOrangeSchool.

AlthoughthePurpleSchoolispublicandhasalonghistory.IlikeOrangeSchoolbetter.Becauseit’sawell-knownprivateschoolinourcity.IknowtheteachersinPurpleSchoolishard-working.Butmostofthemarestrictwithstudents.Instead,theteachersherearenotonlyyoungbutalsoactive.Theyarepatientwithstudents.SoIcangetalongwellwiththem.What’smore,OrangeSchooloffersmanycolourfulactivitiestostudents.It’sgoodtohavelesshomeworkinPurpleSchool.ButIpreferhavingmorecolourfulactivitiestohavinglesshomework.Inmyopinion,OrangeSchoolismoresuitableforme.IhopeIcangotoOrangeSchoolandenjoymylifethere.謄Trytowrite假如你是華文中學的一名學生，即將中學畢業(yè)，馬上就要進入高中學習，你對未來的高中生活充滿了憧憬。請你以“MyLifeinHighSchool”為題，根據(jù)表格信息，寫一篇80詞左右的英語短文(開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù))。內(nèi)容要點學校寧靜而美麗，有悠久歷史老師

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豐富多彩，可自由選擇要求：1．短文的標題和開頭部分已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)；2．語句通順，意思連貫，書寫規(guī)范。MyLifeinHighSchoolMymiddleschoollifewillbeover.AndIwillentermyhighschool.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Checklist時態(tài)是否運用了正確的時態(tài)結構是否使用了三段式的結構內(nèi)容是否涵蓋了所有要點語言是否使用了豐富的語言，行文是否流暢，表達是否清楚寫作目的是否達到了寫作目的ExampleMyLifeinHighSchoolMymiddleschoollifewillbeover.AndIwillentermyhighschool.Iexpectmylifeinhighschoolwillbeverywonderful.

Inmyopinion,

myhighschoolwillbenotonlypeacefulbutalsobeautiful.Itwillbeaschoolwithalonghist