高考英語讀后續(xù)寫專題之親情類+家庭禮貌計劃：從抵觸到理解+講義

閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。Mamanoticesthattherehasbeenariseinbadmannersinthefamilylately,suchasSistertakingthingsfromBrotherwithoutasking,andBrotherpushingSisterwithoutsaying"Excuseme".

Itthenturnsintoashoving（推搡）matchbetweenthekids,withthemcallingeachothernames

andmakingfaces.Theirtablemannersaregettingworse,asinsteadofaskingtopassitemsacrossthetable,BrotherandSisterstufftheirmouthswithfoodandusesomeofittoengageinafoodfightandkickeachotherfromunderthetable.Mamatriestocoax(用好話勸)thekids,thencomplains,andfinallyshouts.ShealsotriestoaskPapaforhelp,butheisalsopartoftheproblem,aswhenPapagetsangryatthekids,hebangs(猛錘)onthetable.NothingforMamaworks,soshedecidestotakeoutabigpieceofcardboardandwritesoutherpolitenessplan.Whensheisdone,MamacallsafamilymeetingandintroducestheplantoPapaandthekids;iftheydosomethingrudesuchasforgettingtosay

"please"or"thankyou",thepunishmentistosweepthefloor.BrotherandSisterobjecttothe

politenessplan,tellingMamathatshe'snotbeingfair.Mama,however,remindsthekidsthatthey'retheoneswhoaren'tbeingfairtothemselvesorotherpeople.ShethenexplainswhatmannersareandwhytheyareimportantuntilPapainterruptsher.WhileMamaisthankfulforPapa'scomment,shenotesthathebreaksoneoftherules.Shehandshimafeatherdusterandhashimdusttheroom.BrotherandSisternotehowserioustheplanisandbothcomeupwiththeideaofbeingsuperpolitetogetMamatocalloffthepolitenessplan.注意：1.

續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應為150左右;2.

請按如下格式在答題卡的相應位置作答.Para1:Theyputtheirideaintopractice.

_______________________________________________________________________________Para2:Mamaispleasedwiththechange.

____________________________________________________________________________________________文章大意這篇文章講述了一個家庭中由于孩子們的行為越來越粗魯，母親決定制定一個禮貌計劃來改善家庭中的不良行為。起初，母親嘗試勸說孩子們，但效果不佳，甚至父親也因為憤怒而加重了問題。母親隨后推出了一個規(guī)定，如果孩子們有失禮行為，比如忘記說“請”或“謝謝”，就會被懲罰掃地。孩子們最初反對這個計劃，但后來他們決定表現(xiàn)得極為禮貌，希望能夠讓母親取消這個計劃。他們的行為有了顯著的改善，最終母親感到滿意，并取消了禮貌計劃，因為孩子們已經(jīng)真正理解并實踐了良好禮儀的重要性。原文中設置的伏筆及其在續(xù)寫中的回應如下：伏筆：母親注意到家中孩子們的行為越來越粗魯，比如互相推搡和用食物打仗?；貞耗赣H制定了一個禮貌計劃，希望通過懲罰來糾正孩子們的行為。伏筆：父親在憤怒時也會猛錘桌子，成為問題的一部分?；貞寒敻赣H違反了禮貌規(guī)則時，母親也給了他一根羽毛撣子，讓他打掃房間，體現(xiàn)了規(guī)則的一致性。伏筆：母親在家庭會議上介紹了禮貌計劃，孩子們最初反對，認為不公平?；貞汉⒆觽兒髞硗ㄟ^表現(xiàn)得極為禮貌來試圖讓母親取消禮貌計劃，這表明他們開始理解并接受母親關(guān)于禮貌的教導。伏筆：母親解釋了禮貌是什么以及為什么它們很重要，但父親打斷了她。回應：孩子們通過實際行動來展示他們已經(jīng)理解了禮貌的重要性，不再需要言語上的解釋。伏筆：孩子們最初對禮貌計劃的反對和認為不公平的態(tài)度?；貞汉⒆觽兒髞硗ㄟ^實際行動的轉(zhuǎn)變，從反對變?yōu)榻邮懿⒎e極參與禮貌計劃，體現(xiàn)了他們對禮貌價值的認識和成長。續(xù)寫要點Para1:孩子們實施超級禮貌的計劃描述孩子們?nèi)绾卧诩抑袑嵤┧麄兊某壎Y貌計劃，包括在餐桌上的禮貌請求和感謝。孩子們之間以及對父母的尊重行為，以及他們?nèi)绾伪苊馊魏慰赡軐е聸_突的行為。Para2:母親對孩子們行為改變的滿意反應敘述母親如何注意到孩子們行為上的積極變化，以及這些變化如何影響了家庭氛圍。母親對孩子們的持續(xù)禮貌行為感到滿意，并考慮是否取消禮貌計劃，因為他們已經(jīng)學會了重要的禮貌課程。參考答案Para1:Theyputtheirideaintopractice.Thenextdayatbreakfast,BrotherandSisterweretheepitomeofpoliteness."MayIpleasehavethebutter?"askedBrotherwithasmile,asSisterchimedin,"Couldyoupassthesyrup,please?Thankyousomuch!"Theycomplimentedeachother'soutfitsandheldthedooropenforoneanother.Evenwhenaminordisagreementarose,theyquicklyresolveditwithapolite"I'msorry"and"No,please,afteryou."TheirtransformationwassodrasticthatMamacouldn'thelpbutnoticethedifferenceintheirbehavior,andasenseofharmonyfilledthehousehold.Para2:Mamaispleasedwiththechange.Asthedayswentby,thepolitenesscontinued,andMamafoundherselfwithanewfoundpeace.Theoncechaoticfamilymealswerenowfilledwithpleasantconversationandgenuinegratitude.Thekidshadnotonlylearnedtosay"please"and"thankyou"butalsotolistenattentivelyandshowempathytowardseachother.Mamarealizedthatthepolitenessplanhadnotonlyimprovedtheirmannersbutalsostrengthenedtheirbondasafamily.Seeingthepositiveimpact,shedecidedtorewardthekidswithaspecialtreatandannouncedthesuspensionoftheplan,confidentthattheyhadtrulyinternalizedtheimportanceofgoodmanners.下水文1Theyputtheirideaintopractice.Every"please"and"thankyou"wasdeliveredwithexaggeratedsweetnessandeverybumpwasfollowedbyasheepishapology.Moreover,mealtimesbecamequietaffairspunctuatedonlybytheclinkingofsilverware.Mama,atfirstamusedbytheirtheatrics,soonfoundgenuinepleasureintheirnewfoundmanners.EvenPapaseemedtoenjoythepeace,hisnewspaperrustlinglessfrequently.AsPapaandthechildrenbecamemoreaccustomedtothenewrules,whatbeganasaplayfulattempttounderminethepolitenessplantransformedintoaheartywelcomeofchange.Mamaispleasedwiththechange.Oneevening,astheysataroundthedinnertable,acomfortablesilencedescendedafteraparticularlydeliciousmeal.Brother,unprompted,offeredtoclearthetable,andSister,withagenuinesmile,thankedhim.MamametPapa’ssurprisedgaze,asilentunderstandingpassingbetweenthem.Itwasasiftheonce-volatilevolcano,spewingangeranddisrespect,hadfinallysettled.Inthatmoment,bathedinthewarmglowofthekitchenlight,theyallknewthatoutoftheashesofchaos,they'dcreated

somethingtrulyspecial,afertilelandoflove.下水文2Para1:Theyputtheirideaintopractice.Atthedinnertablethatevening,BrotherandSisterexecutedtheirplanwithprecision."Couldyoupassthepeas,please?"Brotherinquiredwithacourteousnod,whileSisterofferedawarm"Thankyou"aftereachpoliterequest.Theymadeaconsciousefforttokeeptheirhandstothemselvesandtheirwordskind.Evenwhenplayfullyteasing,theydidsowithalight-heartedspiritthatavoidedcrossingintodisrespect.TheirexaggerateddisplayofetiquettewasnotlostonMama,whoobservedthesiblingswithamixofamusementandapproval.Para2:Mamaispleasedwiththechange.