應(yīng)用文類型9：發(fā)言(演講稿)

發(fā)言(演講稿)【試題探究】

你校將舉辦英語(yǔ)演講比賽。請(qǐng)你以Besmartonlinelearners為題寫一篇發(fā)言稿參賽,內(nèi)容包括:

1.分析優(yōu)勢(shì)與不足;2.提出學(xué)習(xí)建議。Step

1:審題布局類型發(fā)言稿人稱第一人稱(I)時(shí)態(tài)一般現(xiàn)在時(shí);現(xiàn)在完成時(shí)要點(diǎn)1.網(wǎng)上學(xué)習(xí)的優(yōu)勢(shì)2.網(wǎng)上學(xué)習(xí)的不足3.網(wǎng)上學(xué)習(xí)的建議Step

2:巧飾亮點(diǎn)要點(diǎn)1:網(wǎng)上學(xué)習(xí)可以讓我們隨時(shí)隨地學(xué)習(xí)。一般表達(dá):Onlinelearning____________________________________.→網(wǎng)上學(xué)習(xí)可以讓我們隨時(shí)隨地學(xué)習(xí)。此外,我們可以吸收各種資源,從而更有效地學(xué)習(xí)。(補(bǔ)充細(xì)節(jié))Onlinelearning____________________________________.Besides,wecan___________________________tolearnmoreefficiently.allowsustolearnanytimeandanywhereallowsustolearnanytimeandanywhereabsorballkindsofresources

要點(diǎn)2:長(zhǎng)時(shí)間盯著屏幕對(duì)我們的眼睛有害。一般表達(dá):Staringatthescreenforlongtime____________________.→長(zhǎng)時(shí)間盯著屏幕對(duì)我們的眼睛有害。更糟糕的是,我們沒有很多機(jī)會(huì)與我們的老師和同學(xué)互動(dòng)。(補(bǔ)充細(xì)節(jié))Staringatthescreenforlongtime___________________.___________,wedon’thavemanyopportunities_______________________________________.isharmfultooureyesisharmfultooureyes

Worsestilltointeractwithourteachersandclassmates要點(diǎn)3:我們應(yīng)該勇敢地與他人討論我們的問題。其次,學(xué)習(xí)30分鐘后休息一下是明智的。Weshouldbebravetodiscussourproblemswithothers.Second,itiswise______________________________________________.totakeashortbreakafterlearningfor30minutesStep

3:銜接成篇Be

smart

online

learners

Onlinelearninghasbecomeanimportantwaytolearnrecently.However,onlinelearninghasbothadvantagesanddisadvantages.

Itsadvantagesareobvious.Onlinelearningallowsustolearnanytimeandanywhere.Besides,wecanabsorballkindsofresourcestolearnmoreefficiently.However,itsdisadvantagescannotbeignored.Staringatthescreenforlongtimeisharmfultooureyes.Worsestill,wedon’thavemanyopportunitiestointeractwithourteachersandclassmates.

Thenhowtobesmartonlinelearners?First,weshouldbebravetodiscussourproblemswithothers.Second,itiswisetotakeashortbreakafterlearningfor30minutes.

Inconclusion,onlybybeingsmartonlinelearnerscanwetrulyenjoythebenefitsofmoderntechnology.【句式儲(chǔ)備】1.篇頭——開場(chǎng)白①Thankyoufromthebottomofmyheartforgivingmethischancetospeaktoyoutoday.我從心底感謝你們今天給我這個(gè)機(jī)會(huì)在你們面前演講。②Ireallyappreciateyourmakingtimeinyourschedulestoattendthemeetingtoday.我非常感謝你們今天抽空來參加這個(gè)會(huì)議。2.篇中——拓展話題,論證觀點(diǎn)①Inasense,readingprovidesmewithasafeharborwhereIcanescapefromworriesinreallife,restmysoulandimmediatelygetrecharged.從某種意義上說,閱讀給我提供了一個(gè)安全的港灣,在那里我可以逃避現(xiàn)實(shí)生活中的煩惱,讓我的靈魂得到休息,并立即得到恢復(fù)。②Musiccanmakeusfeelrelaxedbothmentallyandphysically,thushelpingreduceourpressureatworkandinlife.音樂可以使我們身心放松,從而幫助我們減少工作和生活中的壓力。3.結(jié)尾——發(fā)出號(hào)召、呼吁或祝福①Wesincerelyhopethatyouwillhaveawonderfultimetonight.我們衷心希望你們今晚過得開心。②Bestwishesforaverysuccessfulexhibition!祝賀展覽會(huì)圓滿成功!【拓展訓(xùn)練】

勞動(dòng)是我國(guó)的傳統(tǒng)美德。假定你是李華,你校將舉辦勞動(dòng)教育活動(dòng)周,請(qǐng)以“Labor—ATraditionalVirtue”為題,寫一篇演講稿,內(nèi)容包括:

1.一次勞動(dòng)體驗(yàn);

2.你對(duì)勞動(dòng)的理解。___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【參考范文】Labor—A

Traditional

Virtue

Goodmorning,everyone.

Today,Iwouldliketotalkaboutthetheme“Labor—ATraditionalVirtue”inthecontextoftheupcomingLaborEducationWeekatourschool.

Recently,Ihadtheopportunitytoparticipateinalaborexperienceprogramorganizedbyourschool.Wespentawholedayworkingatalocalfarm,plantingvegetables,anddoingvariousphysicaltasks.Althoughitwastiring,Ifeltagreatsenseofaccomplishmentattheendoftheday.

Throughthisexperience,Igainedadeeperunderstandingof