新高考英語三輪沖刺重難點(diǎn)練習(xí)重難點(diǎn)16 應(yīng)用文寫作專練（解析版）

重難點(diǎn)16應(yīng)用文寫作根據(jù)新高考三年的考情分析，應(yīng)用文是每年高考考查頻率最高的體裁之一，其中以書信、電子郵件最為常見。從內(nèi)容上看，近幾年高考書信寫作主要包括致歉信、致謝信、筆友信、慰問信、投訴信、邀請信、介紹信、求職信、讀者請求的解答信及其答復(fù)讀者的信等。預(yù)計(jì)2024年高考應(yīng)用文寫作考查形式仍以書信開放性為主。近3年新高考應(yīng)用文寫作數(shù)據(jù)分析試卷類型年份體裁話題新高考I卷2023建議信分組練習(xí)口語新高考II卷2023建議信分組練習(xí)口語新高考I卷2022邀請信邀請外教做訪談新高考II卷2022邀請信邀請外教做訪談新高考I卷2021投稿短文讀報(bào)經(jīng)歷新高考II卷2021投稿短文讀報(bào)經(jīng)歷01/詞匯升級多使用高級詞匯，高級詞匯指的是大綱中沒有列入或沒有識記要求，但在實(shí)際運(yùn)用中卻出現(xiàn)比較頻繁的詞匯，比如frustration,awkward,awfully,concern等。這些詞匯為作文增添光彩，從而使考生穩(wěn)拿高分。02/句式升級寫作中精彩句式的合理使用會使文章讀起來抑揚(yáng)頓挫。固定句式(如感嘆句、復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)、強(qiáng)調(diào)句型等)、定語從句、現(xiàn)在分詞短語等都屬于較復(fù)雜的語法結(jié)構(gòu)。這些結(jié)構(gòu)的正確使用，可以使文章的語言充滿層次感，從而較好地反映出考生的語言運(yùn)用能力。03/邏輯升級銜接過渡詞能使語言連貫性得以實(shí)現(xiàn)。句與句、段與段之間恰當(dāng)?shù)厥褂勉暯舆^渡詞不僅可以起到承上啟下的作用，也可以使文章脈絡(luò)走向更為清晰明朗。所以在寫作中運(yùn)用過渡詞，對寫好文章有著重要意義。典例分析典例分析典例一（2023年新高考I卷）

假定你是李華，外教Ryan準(zhǔn)備將學(xué)生隨機(jī)分為兩人一組，讓大家課后練習(xí)口語，你認(rèn)為這樣分組存在問題。請你給外教寫一封郵件，內(nèi)容包括：1.說明問題；2.提出建議。注意：

1.寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80個(gè)左右；

2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。DearRyan,I’mLiHuafromClass3.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yourssincerely,LiHua【答案】DearRyan,I’mLiHuafromClass3.Ithinkit’snotagoodideatorandomlypairupstudentsforthespokenEnglishtrainingafterclass.Thereasonsareasfollows.Tobeginwith,randomlypairingupstudentsmayleadtounbalancedlanguageabilitieswithinthegroups.Thiscanhindertheprogressofstudentsasthemoreadvancedonemaydominatetheconversation,leavinglittleroomfortheotherstudentstoimprove.Besides,studentsmayfeeluncomfortableorlessmotivatedifpairedwithsomeonewhotheydon’tgetalongwithorhavedifficultycommunicatingwith.Mysuggestionistogroupstudentsbasedontheirlanguageabilitiesortoletstudentschoosetheirownpartners.Thisway,everyonecanfeelmorecomfortablepracticingandimprovingtheirspokenEnglishtogether.Thankyouforconsideringmysuggestion.Yourssincerely,LiHua【導(dǎo)語】本篇是應(yīng)用文寫作，要求考生給外教寫一封郵件，告訴他將學(xué)生隨機(jī)分為兩人一組，讓大家課后練習(xí)口語，你認(rèn)為這樣分組存在問題?！驹斀狻?.詞匯積累首先：tobeginwith→firstofall提高：improve→progress建議：suggestion→advice選擇：choose→select2.句式拓展簡單句變復(fù)合句原句：Mysuggestionistogroupstudentsbasedontheirlanguageabilitiesortoletstudentschoosetheirownpartners.拓展句：Mysuggestionisthatwearesupposedtogroupstudentsbasedontheirlanguageabilitiesortoletstudentschoosetheirownpartners.【點(diǎn)睛】[高分句型1]Thiscanhindertheprogressofstudentsasthemoreadvancedonemaydominatetheconversation,leavinglittleroomfortheotherstudentstoimprove.（運(yùn)用了現(xiàn)在分詞作狀語）[高分句型2]Besides,Studentsmayfeeluncomfortableorlessmotivatedifpairedwithsomeonewhotheydon’tgetalongwithorhavedifficultycommunicatingwith.（運(yùn)用了省略句和who引導(dǎo)定語從句）典例二（2022年新高考I卷）假定你是校廣播站英語節(jié)目“TalkandTalk”的負(fù)責(zé)人李華，請給外教Caroline寫郵件邀請她做一次訪談。內(nèi)容包括：1.節(jié)目介紹；2.訪談的時(shí)間和話題。注意：1.寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80左右；2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。DearCaroline,______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yourssincerely,LiHua【答案】DearCaroline,ThisismyfirsttimethatIhaveinvitedyoutoattendourprogram—TalkandTalk.ItistenyearssinceTalkandTalkwasestablished.Thisisanamazingprogramwhereyoucanshareyourideaswithstudents.Now,whenhavingtroubleinlearningEnglishwell,plentyofstudentsurgetoknowhowtodealwithit.Asourdistinguishedforeignlanguageteacher,youraidcanhelpusalot.IfyouareavailableonthisSunday,ItogetherwiththewholeTalkandTalkstaffamwaitingforyourcoming.I’dappreciateitifyoutakemyinvitationintoconsideration.Yours,LiHua【導(dǎo)語】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。要求考生寫一封郵件邀請你的外教Caroline來你校的廣播站英語節(jié)目“TalkandTalk”做一次訪談?！驹斀狻?.詞匯積累參加：attend→participatein建立：establish→setup幫助：aid→assistance許多：plentyof→alotof2.句式拓展簡單句變復(fù)合句原句：Asourdistinguishedforeignlanguageteacher,youraidcanhelpusalot.拓展句：Youareourdistinguishedforeignlanguageteacher,whoseaidcanhelpusalot.【點(diǎn)睛】[高分句型1]Thisisanamazingprogramwhereyoucanshareyourideaswithstudents.(運(yùn)用了where引導(dǎo)的限制性定語從句)[高分句型2]Now,whenhavingtroubleinlearningEnglishwell,plentyofstudentsurgetoknowhowtodealwithit.(運(yùn)用了when引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語從句的省略結(jié)構(gòu))（建議用時(shí)：20分鐘/篇）1．（2023·廣東梅州·廣東梅縣東山中學(xué)校考模擬預(yù)測）假如你是李華，你校英語報(bào)“頭腦風(fēng)暴”版塊中提到一個(gè)社會現(xiàn)象：ArtificialIntelligenceandrobotscandovariousthingsforhumans,thusmakinganumberofpeoplelosetheirjobs.請你寫一篇短文，談?wù)勀銓υ摤F(xiàn)象的看法，內(nèi)容包括：1.介紹該社會現(xiàn)象；2.談?wù)勀銓υ摤F(xiàn)象的看法；3.應(yīng)對措施。注意：詞數(shù)100左右。__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Nowadays,ArtificialIntelligence,shortforAI,hasbeenwidelyappliedtomanyaspectsinourlife.ManypeopleareconcernedthatAIwillreplacehumanlaborinthefutureandcausejobloss.【介紹社會現(xiàn)象】ItcannotbedeniedthatAIwilldefinitelyreplacehumanlaborinsomeindustries,butit’sunlikelytobeusedinallworksoflife.Insomespecialfields,robotscan’tdothehighlydemandingtaskbecausetheyareprogrammed,notcreative.What’smore,AItechnologystillhasalongwaytogotofullmaturity,soit’sunnecessarytoworryaboutthejoblosses.【對社會的看法】Asstudents,weshoulddevelopourcreativity.Afterall,itistheabilitytocreatesomethingnewthatmakesussmarterthanrobots.【應(yīng)對措施】【導(dǎo)語】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。假如你是李華，你校英語報(bào)“頭腦風(fēng)暴”版塊中提到一個(gè)社會現(xiàn)象：ArtificialIntelligenceandrobotscandovariousthingsforhumans,thusmakinganumberofpeoplelosetheirjobs.請考生寫一篇短文，談?wù)剬υ摤F(xiàn)象的看法?！驹斀狻?.詞匯積累代替：replace→taketheplaceof不可能的：unlikely→impossible此外：What’smore→Besides擔(dān)心：worryabout→beanxiousabout2.句式拓展簡單句變復(fù)合句原句：Nowadays,ArtificialIntelligence,shortforAI,hasbeenwidelyappliedtomanyaspectsinourlife.拓展句：Nowadays,AI,whichisshortforArtificialIntelligence,hasbeenwidelyappliedtomanyaspectsinourlife.【點(diǎn)睛】【高分句型1】ManypeopleareconcernedthatAIwillreplacehumanlaborinthefutureandcausejobloss.（運(yùn)用了that連接賓語從句）【高分句型2】Afterall,itistheabilitytocreatesomethingnewthatmakesussmarterthanrobots.（運(yùn)用了it作形式主語，不定式作真正的主語和that引導(dǎo)的定語從句）2．（2023·廣東佛山·統(tǒng)考模擬預(yù)測）你校英語角將舉辦英語演講比賽。請你“DevelopaReadingHabit”為題寫一篇發(fā)言稿參賽，內(nèi)容包括：1.養(yǎng)成閱讀習(xí)慣的重要性；2.你的建議。注意：1.詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80左右；2.題目和首句已為你寫好?？梢赃m當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。DevelopaReadingHabitAreadinghabitisimportantforus.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Onepossibleversion:DevelopaReadingHabitAreadinghabitisimportantforus.Undoubtedly,readinghelpstoexpandourknowledgeandunderstandingoftheworld.Byreadingbooksondifferenttopics,wecangaininsightsintodifferentcultures,histories,andperspectives.Thiscanhelpustobecomemoreempatheticandopen-mindedindividuals.Moreover,readingisagreatwaytorelax.Whenweread,wecanescapefromthestressesofeverydaylifeandenterintoadifferentworld,whichcanimproveourmentalhealth.Todevelopareadinghabit,itisimportanttosetasidesometimeeachdayforreading.Startwithshortbooksorarticlesthatinterestyouandgraduallyincreasethereadingtime.Joiningabookcluborfindingareadingbuddycanalsomotivateyoutoreadmore.Itisnevertoolatetostartreading,solet’stakethetimetoenjoythepleasureandbenefitsofreading.【導(dǎo)語】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。題目要求考生以“DevelopaReadingHabit”為題寫一篇英語演講比賽的發(fā)言稿，需闡述養(yǎng)成閱讀習(xí)慣的重要性，并分享自己的建議?！驹斀狻?.詞匯積累毫無疑問：undoubtedly→doubtlessly,unquestionably思想開明的：open-minded→broad-minded,open,receptive此外：moreover→inaddition,additionally,besides改善：improve→sharpen,enhance重要的：important→essential,crucial,significant,vital從……開始：startwith→beginwith,commencewith使……感興趣，吸引：interest→attract,intrigue,fascinate激勵(lì)：motivate→inspire,stimulate2.句式拓展合并簡單句原句：Byreadingbooksondifferenttopics,wecangaininsightsintodifferentcultures,histories,andperspectives.Thiscanhelpustobecomemoreempatheticandopen-mindedindividuals.拓展句：Byreadingbooksondifferenttopics,wecangaininsightsintodifferentcultures,histories,andperspectives,whichcanhelpustobecomemoreempatheticandopen-mindedindividuals.【點(diǎn)睛】【高分句型1】Whenweread,wecanescapefromthestressesofeverydaylifeandenterintoadifferentworld,whichcanimproveourmentalhealth.（運(yùn)用了When引導(dǎo)時(shí)間狀語從句及which引導(dǎo)非限制性定語從句）【高分句型2】Startwithshortbooksorarticlesthatinterestyouandgraduallyincreasethereadingtime.（運(yùn)用了that引導(dǎo)限制性定語從句）3．（2023·江蘇·統(tǒng)考模擬預(yù)測）假定你是高三學(xué)生李華，在上周的年級讀后續(xù)寫競賽中，你的續(xù)寫得分為16分（滿分25分），你覺得此分?jǐn)?shù)偏低不太合理。請你給評委Mr.Davis用英語寫一份郵件，內(nèi)容包括：1.說明問題；2.給出理由。參考詞匯：讀后續(xù)寫continuationwritingDearMr.Davis,___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yourssincerely,LiHua【答案】DearMr.Davis,

IamLihua,aparticipantinyoucontinuationwritingcompetition.Havingscoredonly16formycontinuationwriting,Ifeltitunfair,soIamwritingtoyoutostatemyreasons.

Formywriting,Ifeltittotallymeetstherequirementputforwardinthecontest.Tobeginwith,thestructureofmycompositionisdefinitelyclearandtheplotdevelopsreasonably,noprolixityatall.Additionally,thewordsandsentencesusedarecolorful,withoutrepeatedlyusingthesamewordagainandagain.Ievenwrotesomecompoundsentencestoupdatemywriting,suchasattributiveclause,theemphaticpattern,invertedsentenceandsoon.Finally,awell-knownsayingisusedtoendmyarticle,whichIthinkisaperfecthighlightofthepassage.

Inaword,withthemeritsmentionedabove,IwonderwhyIgotsuchalowscore.Ifitisconvenientforyou,pleasegivemeanexplanation.Yourssincerely,LiHua【導(dǎo)語】本篇書面表達(dá)為一篇應(yīng)用文。要求學(xué)生代替李華給續(xù)寫競賽的評委老師寫一封郵件，陳述自己續(xù)寫得分為16分，覺得此分?jǐn)?shù)偏低不太合理的理由。【詳解】1.詞匯積累：陳述：state→makeastatementof而且：additionally→what’smore/inaddition/furthermore完美的：perfect→excellent/outstanding2.句式拓展：同義句轉(zhuǎn)換原句：Tobeginwith,thestructureofmycompositionisdefinitelyclearandtheplotdevelopsreasonably,noprolixityatall.拓展句：Tobeginwith,thestructureofmycompositionisdefinitelyclear,withtheplotdevelopingreasonably,noprolixityatall.【點(diǎn)睛】【高分句型1】Havingscoredonly16formycontinuationwriting,Ifeltitunfair,soIamwritingtoyoutostatemyreasons.(運(yùn)用了現(xiàn)在分詞作狀語)【高分句型2】Finally,awell-knownsayingwasusedtoendmyarticle,whichIthinkisaperfecthighlightofthepassage.(運(yùn)用了which引導(dǎo)非限制性定語從句)4．（2023·江蘇揚(yáng)州·江蘇省高郵中學(xué)?？寄M預(yù)測）你校上周與新華中學(xué)舉辦了一場籃球比賽，你校以一分的優(yōu)勢險(xiǎn)勝對方。請你用英語寫一份廣播稿，在校廣播站英語新聞欄目向全校師生廣播。內(nèi)容包括：1．比賽概況;2．簡短評論。注意：1．寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80左右;2．請按如下格式作答。Hello,everyone!HerecomestheschoolEnglishNews._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________That’sthenewsofthehour.【答案】Hello,everyone!HerecomestheschoolEnglishNews.TheCityStadiumwitnessedabasketballgamebetweenXinhuaMiddleSchoolandourschoollastSaturday,andourteamnarrowlywonbyonescore.Inthefirsthalf,ourteamwasatadisadvantagebutallplayerscooperatedperfectlyandtriedtheirbesttoscoreandblocktheopponentteam.Atthelastmoment,wewonwithaperfectshot.Itwasreallyafantasticclosegame,whichhasnotonlystrengthenedthefriendshipbetweenthetwoschoolsbutencouragedusnottogiveupinfaceofadversity.That’sthenewsofthehour.【導(dǎo)語】本文是一篇應(yīng)用文。你校上周與新華中學(xué)舉辦了一場籃球比賽，你校以一分的優(yōu)勢險(xiǎn)勝對方。請你用英語寫一份廣播稿，在校廣播站英語新聞欄目向全校師生廣播。內(nèi)容包括：1.比賽概況；2.簡短評論?！驹斀狻?.詞匯積累見證：witness→see比賽：game→competition盡力做：tryone’sbesttodosth→sparenoefforttodosth很棒的：fantastic→fabulous2.句式拓展并列句變復(fù)合句原句：TheCityStadiumwitnessedabasketballgamebetweenXinhuaMiddleSchoolandourschoollastSaturday,andourteamnarrowlywonbyonescore.拓展句：TheCityStadiumwitnessedabasketballgamebetweenXinhuaMiddleSchoolandourschoollastSaturday,whenourteamnarrowlywonbyonescore.【點(diǎn)睛】【高分句型1】Inthefirsthalf,ourteamwasatadisadvantagebutallplayerscooperatedperfectlyandtriedtheirbesttoscoreandblocktheopponentteam.(運(yùn)用了but連接的并列句)【高分句型2】Itwasreallyafantasticclosegame,whichhasnotonlystrengthenedthefriendshipbetweenthetwoschoolsbutencouragedusnottogiveupinfaceofadversity.(運(yùn)用了which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句)5．（2023·江蘇鎮(zhèn)江·統(tǒng)考模擬預(yù)測）假如你是某國際學(xué)校學(xué)生李華，在過去的一個(gè)月里，你多次參加所在社區(qū)的社區(qū)服務(wù)活動(dòng)，現(xiàn)向校英文報(bào)投稿，內(nèi)容包括：1．服務(wù)經(jīng)歷；2．你的感受。注意：1．寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80左右；2．請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】LastmonthItookpartinacommunityserviceprojectorganized,whichprovedtobeatrulyrewardingexperience.Tohelpyoungpeopledevelopabettersenseofsocialresponsibilityandcontributemoretoourcommunity,aseriesofactivitieswereconducted.Forinstance,wepaidregularvisitstothenursinghometokeeptheseniorscompany.Wealsohandedoutleafletstopassers-bytoraisepeople’sawarenessofenvironmentalprotection.Byvolunteeringinthoseactivities,Iclearlyunderstandthateveryonecandotheirparttomakeapositiveimpactonthelivesofothers.【導(dǎo)語】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于記敘文。要求考生向校英文報(bào)投稿，介紹自己參加所在社區(qū)的社區(qū)服務(wù)活動(dòng)的經(jīng)歷和感受。【詳解】1.詞匯積累參加：takepartin→participatein幫助：help→assist例如：forinstance→forexample積極的：positive→active2.句式拓展簡單句變復(fù)合句原句：Wealsohandedoutleafletstopassers-bytoraisepeople’sawarenessofenvironmentalprotection.拓展句：Wealsohandedoutleafletstopassers-by,whichaimedtoraisepeople’sawarenessofenvironmentalprotection.【點(diǎn)睛】【高分句型1】LastmonthItookpartinacommunityserviceprojectorganized,whichprovedtobeatrulyrewardingexperience.(運(yùn)用了which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句)【高分句型2】Tohelpyoungpeopledevelopabettersenseofsocialresponsibilityandcontributemoretoourcommunity,aseriesofactivitieswereconducted.(運(yùn)用了非謂語動(dòng)詞不定式作目的狀語)6．（2023·江蘇蘇州·統(tǒng)考模擬預(yù)測）假定你是李華，是校學(xué)生會主席，你校將參觀蘇州古城墻遺址。請你以學(xué)生會名義寫一篇倡議書號召全校同學(xué)保護(hù)古城墻遺址。內(nèi)容包括：1.古城墻遺址的重要性；2.保護(hù)古城墻遺址的倡議。注意：1.寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80左右；2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。Dearfellowstudents,________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Students’Union【答案】Onepossibleversion:Dearfellowstudents,Withourvisitto“SuzhouAncientCityWalls”approaching,Icalloneveryonetotakeanactivepartinprotectingthem.Ancientcitywallsareofcriticalimportancebecausetheyarewitnessestooursplendidandprofoundculture.Meanwhile,ancientcitywallsareacrystallizationofwisdomofpastgenerationsandanirreplaceablesourceofinspiration.Thus,itisimperativetoprotectthem.Weshouldbehaveproperlywhensteppingonthesetime-honoredwalls.Litteringandscribblingonwallsarestrictlyprohibited.Let’sworktogethertomakesuretheancientwallsremaintheiroriginallook.Students’Union【導(dǎo)語】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。題目要求考生寫一篇倡議書號召同學(xué)保護(hù)古城墻遺址，需闡明古城墻遺址的重要性，并說明保護(hù)古城墻遺址的具體倡議。【詳解】1.詞匯積累呼吁：callon→appealto,urge參與：takepartin→participatein,engagein關(guān)鍵的：critical→crucial,decisive燦爛的：splendid→glorious,magnificent,spectacular同時(shí)：meanwhile→meantime,atthesametime無法取代的：irreplaceable→unique,incomparable因此：thus→asaresult,consequently,therefore必要的：imperative→essential,vital禁止：prohibit→forbid,ban2.句式拓展同義句原句：Withourvisitto“SuzhouAncientCityWalls”approaching,Icalloneveryonetotakeanactivepartinprotectingthem.拓展句：Asourvisitto“SuzhouAncientCityWalls”approaches,Icalloneveryonetotakeanactivepartinprotectingthem.【點(diǎn)睛】【高分句型1】Ancientcitywallsareofcriticalimportancebecausetheyarewitnessestooursplendidandprofoundculture.（運(yùn)用了從屬連詞because引導(dǎo)原因狀語從句）【高分句型2】Let’sworktogethertomakesuretheancientwallsremaintheiroriginallook.（運(yùn)用了不定式短語tomake…作目的狀語、連接詞that引導(dǎo)名詞性從句作makesure的賓語并被省略）7．（2023·浙江杭州·校聯(lián)考模擬預(yù)測）你校英語俱樂部擬創(chuàng)辦校英文刊物，將召開俱樂部成員會議，商討刊物欄目(columns)。假如你是成員李華，請你寫一份會議發(fā)言稿，提議開設(shè)一個(gè)欄目。內(nèi)容包括：1.欄目名稱；2.開設(shè)理由。注意：1.寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80左右；2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。Hello,mydearfellows!___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】范文Hello,mydearfellows.I’mreallyexcitedtobeinformedthatwearegoingtostartanEnglishjournaltogether,whichisdefinitelyawonderfulidea.It’ssuchagoldenopportunitytoenhancestudents’EnglishcapabilityandappreciatethecharmoftheEnglishlanguage.Asforproposals,I’dliketorecommend“Students’Voice”asadistinctivecolumn.Asstudyingisalwaysstudents’toppriority,westudentsareundergreatpressureandlackopportunitiestobelistenedto.Whynothelpstudentsvoiceinnerfeelingsandhaveagoodmoodtoembracethetoughyetbrightfuture?Thiscolumn,Ipromise,isboundtobeapreciousoutletandasteppingstonetocommunicatingfluentlyinEnglish.That’sallformyadvice!Thankyou!【導(dǎo)語】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。你校英語俱樂部擬創(chuàng)辦校英文刊物，將召開俱樂部成員會議，商討刊物欄目(columns)。假如你是成員李華，請你寫一份會議發(fā)言稿，提議開設(shè)一個(gè)欄目?！驹斀狻?.詞匯積累壓力：pressure→stress擁抱：embrace→hug絕對：definitely→absolutely機(jī)會：opportunity→chance2.句式拓展同義句轉(zhuǎn)換原句：Whynothelpstudentsvoiceinnerfeelingsandhaveagoodmoodtoembracethetoughyetbrightfuture?拓展句：Itwillbehelpfulforstudentstovoiceinnerfeelingsandhaveagoodmoodtoembracethetoughyetbrightfuture.【點(diǎn)睛】[高分句型1]I’mreallyexcitedtobeinformedthatwearegoingtostartanEnglishjournaltogether,whichisdefinitelyawonderfulidea.(運(yùn)用了that引導(dǎo)賓語從句和關(guān)系代詞which引導(dǎo)非限制性定語從句)[高分句型2]Asstudyingisalwaysstudents’toppriority,westudentsareundergreatpressureandlackopportunitiestobelistenedto.(運(yùn)用了as引導(dǎo)原因狀語從句)8．（2023·江蘇揚(yáng)州·統(tǒng)考模擬預(yù)測）假定你所在的城市正在創(chuàng)建全國文明城市，請寫一篇演講稿，呼吁全體同學(xué)行動(dòng)起來，為創(chuàng)建文明城市作出自己的貢獻(xiàn)。內(nèi)容包括：1.創(chuàng)建文明城市的內(nèi)容與意義；2.呼吁同學(xué)們從身邊小事做起(不少于兩點(diǎn))。詞匯：文明城市civilizedcity注意：1.寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80左右；2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。Boysandgirls,_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Thankyou.【答案】Boysandgirls,Ashasbeenpromotedbyourschool,wearetobuildacivilizedcity,inwhichcaseourcitycanbecleanerandmorecompetitive,andalltheresidentswillbebetteroff.Oncampus,weshouldpickuplitterwhilewewalkaround,orhelpotherswhennecessary.Athome,wecanpersuadeourparentstoquitsmokingandgetalongwellwithneighbors.Besides,thecoresocialistvaluesoughttobeputintopractice.Thankyou.【導(dǎo)語】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。要求考生演講稿，呼吁全體同學(xué)行動(dòng)起來，為創(chuàng)建文明城市作出自己的貢獻(xiàn)?！驹斀狻?.詞匯積累建設(shè)：build→setup應(yīng)該：should→besupposedto放棄：quit→giveup此外：besides→what’smore2.句式拓展簡單句變復(fù)合句原句：Besides,thecoresocialistvaluesoughttobeputintopractice拓展句：Besides,thecoresocialistvaluesoughttobeputintopractice,whichIthinkisessentialforustobuildacivilizedcity.【點(diǎn)睛】【高分句型1】Ashasbeenpromotedbyourschool,wearetobuildacivilizedcity,inwhichcaseourcitycanbecleanerandmorecompetitive,andalltheresidentswillbebetteroff.（運(yùn)用as和“介詞+which”引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句）【高分句型2】Oncampus,weshouldpickuplitterwhilewewalkaround,orhelpotherswhennecessary.（運(yùn)用了while引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語從句以及狀語從句的省略）9．（2023·江蘇·統(tǒng)考二模）假如你是李華，你剛剛參觀了你市博物館舉辦的一次“遇見藝術(shù)家”的展覽，請為你校英文報(bào)寫一則評論，內(nèi)容包括：1.展覽概況；2.觀展感受；3.意見建議。注意：1.寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80左右；2.為使行文連貫，可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)。___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】

LastSaturday,Ijustvisitedanexhibitiontitled“MeetingArtists”heldbyourcity’smuseum.Theexhibitionattractedmanymastersandamateursathomeandabroad.ManyartworksincludingChinesehandwritingandlandscapepaintingsfromancientandmoderntimeswereonshow.Thehostexplainedeveryworkindetailsonthespot.Theexhibitionleftadeepimpressiononme.Inmyview,itnotonlypromotedtheinheritanceofChinesetraditionalculturebutstrengthenedournationalprideaswell.Ihopetherewillbemoreactivitieslikethisinthefuture.【導(dǎo)語】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。要求考生寫一則關(guān)于剛剛參觀的市博物館舉辦的一次“遇見藝術(shù)家”展覽的評論。【詳解】1.詞匯積累參觀：visit→payavisitto舉辦：hold→throw展覽：onshow→ondisplay詳細(xì)地：indetails→detailedly2.句式拓展簡單句變復(fù)合句原句：LastSaturday,Ijustvisitedanexhibitiontitled“MeetingArtists”heldbyourcity’smuseum.拓展句：LastSaturday,Ijustvisitedanexhibitionwhichwastitled“MeetingArtists”heldbyourcity’smuseum.【點(diǎn)睛】【高分句型1】Inmyview,itnotonlypromotedtheinheritanceofChinesetraditionalculturebutstrengthenedournationalprideaswell.（由notonly…but引導(dǎo)的并列句結(jié)構(gòu)）【高分句型2】Ihopetherewillbemoreactivitieslikethisinthefuture.（由省略連詞that引導(dǎo)的賓語從句）10．（2023·江蘇南京·統(tǒng)考二模）假定你是校學(xué)生會主席李華，外教Mike被評為本學(xué)期“最受歡迎教師”。請寫一份頒獎(jiǎng)詞，內(nèi)容包括：1.回顧Mike的工作；2.簡述他獲獎(jiǎng)的理由。注意：1.寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80左右；2.結(jié)束語已為你寫好，不計(jì)字?jǐn)?shù)；3.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。Dearall,______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Nowlet’swelcomeourprincipaltopresentthisawardtoMike!【答案】Dearall,I’mhonoredtoannouncethatthissemester’s“Mostpopularteacher”goestoMike!HegivesourgradeoralEnglish,encouragingustospeakmore.Besides,heisresponsibleforourDramaClub,wherewerehearsetogetherandpresentmarvelousplaysunderhisprofessionalguidance.Mikeisworthyofthisaward.Hisexceptionalteachingabilityhasgreatlyboostedourconfidenceinexpressingourselves.What’smore,hispassionforteachingandfriendlinesstostudentsmakelearningwithhimareallyenjoyableexperience.Nowlet’swelcomeourprincipaltopresentthisawardtoMike!【導(dǎo)語】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。外教Mike被評為本學(xué)期“最受歡迎教師”，要求考生寫一份頒獎(jiǎng)詞?！驹斀狻?.詞匯積累此外：besides→what’smore精彩的：marvelous→wonderful增強(qiáng)：boost→improve愉快的：enjoyable→pleasant2.句式拓展合并簡單句原句：Mikeisworthyofthisaward.Hisexceptionalteachingabilityhasgreatlyboostedourconfidenceinexpressingourselves.拓展句：Mikeisworthyofthisawardbecausehisexceptionalteachingabilityhasgreatlyboostedourconfidenceinexpressingourselves.【點(diǎn)睛】【高分句型1】I’mhonoredtoannouncethatthissemester’s“Mostpopularteacher”goestoMike!（運(yùn)用了that引導(dǎo)的賓語從句）【高分句型2】Besides,heisresponsibleforourDramaClub,wherewerehearsetogetherandpresentmarvelousplaysunderhisprofessionalguidance.（運(yùn)用了where引導(dǎo)的非限定性定語從句）11．（2023·江蘇·統(tǒng)考二模）每年的3月22日是“世界水日”(WorldWaterDay)，上周日上午你校學(xué)生會組織部分青年志愿者走上街頭開展公益宣傳活動(dòng)。假定你是李華，請你為校英文報(bào)寫一篇報(bào)道，內(nèi)容包括：1.活動(dòng)目的；2.活動(dòng)內(nèi)容；3.活動(dòng)反響。注意：1.詞數(shù)80左右；2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。AYouthVolunteerActivityCelebratingWorldWaterDay________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】AYouthVolunteerActivityCelebratingWorldWaterDayWorldWaterDayfallsonMarch22everyyear.LastSunday,someyoungstudentvolunteers,organizedbythestudentunion,tooktothestreetstocelebrateandadvertiseWorldWaterDay.Firstly,theyhandedoutleafletstothecitizenstolectureaboutWorldWaterDay.Later,publicspeechesabouttheimportanceofprotectingwaterresourcesweregivenbysomevolunteers.Notonlydidtheseactivitiesarousedpeople’sgreatinterestinWorldWaterDay,butalsoraisedtheirawarenessofwaterresourcesprotection.Thisactivityturnedouttobeahugesuccess.【導(dǎo)語】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于新聞報(bào)道。要求考生為校英文報(bào)寫一篇報(bào)道，報(bào)道上周日上午校學(xué)生會組織青年志愿者走上街頭開展的“世界水日”公益宣傳活動(dòng)?！驹斀狻?.詞匯積累分發(fā)：handout→distribute傳單：leaflet→flyer重要性：importance→significance保護(hù)：protect→preserve2.句式拓展簡單句變復(fù)合句原句：Firstly,theyhandedoutleafletstothe