高考英語復(fù)習(xí)讀后續(xù)寫練習(xí)+舉辦派對幫助感化女兒學(xué)校的小惡霸+課件

高考英語讀后續(xù)寫語篇練習(xí)舉辦派對，幫助感化女兒學(xué)校的”小惡霸“1題目分析讀后續(xù)寫題目再現(xiàn)范文呈現(xiàn)努力方向2Part1題目呈現(xiàn)3續(xù)寫原文Thereareallkindsofenemies,andoneoftheartsoflivingistolearntotellthemapart.Butconsiderthekindwhonevermeanttobeanenemyatall,anddoesn’twanttobeanenemy,really.He’snotmadatyou;he’smadattheworld,andifyouarewanderingaroundonhislonelybattlefield,yougetshot,whichisnotmeantforyouatall.4續(xù)寫原文Letmetellyouaboutoneofthem.Shewasthedark-eyeddaughterofourtownbarber:abig,stormyGinaLollobrigida.Yearsago,IbroughtmytwolittlegirlshomefromSouthAmericaandputtheminschooldowntheroad.TheytalkedaverypeculiarlanguagethatwasneitherEnglishnorSpanish,andtheirclassmatesgavethemahardtime.EspeciallyGina,whowasolderandtheringleader(元兇)oftheterrorofthetinykids.Shehadanairofangerwithherfieryeyes,whichseemedtopiercethroughanyonewhodaredtocrossherpath.Herwordswerehurtful,andeveninmomentsofsilence,thetensionsurroundingherwasevident,likeathickwallbuiltbetweenherandtherestoftheworld.Whenmydaughtersweremisunderstoodandteasedbecauseofanunfamiliarlanguage,Ginaprovedtobethemosttroublesomeamongallthestudents,dominatingtheyoungerchildrenandcausingchaoswhenevershepleased.5續(xù)寫原文PatandPeggycamehomecryingalmosteveryday,soIdecidedtocheerthemup.“Let’shaveaparty,”Isaid.Pat’sandPeggy’stearsdriedmagically.Rightawaytheygotcreative:“Icecream!Cake,bigredballoons!”“Andfriends?”Isaid.Thetearsstartedagain.“Wehaven’tgotanyfriends,”Patcried.Peggyhowled,“Nothingbutenemies.”ThenIhadoneofmyrareinspirations.“Let’shaveanenemyparty.Let’sinviteallyourenemies–andwe’llfillthemupwithicecreamandcakeandgivethemredballoonstotakehome.LittlePatandPeggyexchangedknowinglooks,andoneofthemsaidinSpanish,“QuépassaalViejo?”(“Whatiswrongwithdad?”)6段首句Para1：Itturnedoutthatthe“EnemyParty”wasamad,merrysuccess.

Para2：AnotherbonusofthepartywasthatGinaseemedadifferentpersonafterwards.

7Part2題目分析8續(xù)寫原文分析9本文以人物為線索展開，文章主要講述了幾年前作者帶著兩個女兒搬家，她們到了新學(xué)校，新學(xué)校的同學(xué)不是很友好，特別是吉娜，一個脾氣不好的小惡霸，經(jīng)常隨心所欲地制造混亂。女兒們受到同學(xué)們的嘲笑，很難過，經(jīng)?？拗丶?。作者看到這種情況，決定通過舉辦一個“敵對聚會”來解決。這事一個化敵為友的故事，這其中的經(jīng)歷更是讓作者受益良多。點1：位于續(xù)寫第一段段首，流暢銜接前面的記敘文和第一段段首語；點2：位于續(xù)寫第一段段尾，流暢銜接第二段段首句；點3：位于續(xù)寫第二段段首，續(xù)寫銜接第二段段首語；點4：文章結(jié)尾升華，給予讀者正能量，揭示和強(qiáng)調(diào)主題。情節(jié)構(gòu)建的重點10續(xù)寫思路分析Para1：Itturnedoutthatthe“EnemyParty”wasamad,merrysuccess.由第一段首句內(nèi)容“事實證明，“敵對派對”取得了瘋狂而愉快的成功?！笨芍?，第一段可描寫派對的成功氣氛，作者的感悟，吉娜的反應(yīng)以及女兒們的改變，變得快樂并且自信，與同學(xué)們成了朋友。11續(xù)寫思路分析Para2：AnotherbonusofthepartywasthatGinaseemedadifferentpersonafterwards.

由第二段首句內(nèi)容“這次聚會的另一個好處是，吉娜在聚會結(jié)束后似乎變了一個人。”可知，第二段可描寫通過活動吉娜的改變，吉娜感謝帕特邀請自己參加派對，以及作者的感悟。12續(xù)寫思路分析派對氣氛——關(guān)系融洽——派對成功——女兒們快樂并自信——成為朋友——吉娜改變——感激——感悟13續(xù)寫素材續(xù)寫素材行為類①超出：exceed/gobeyond②參加：engagein/involvein/takepartin③討厭：hate/dislike/befedupwith情緒類①高興：withdelight/delightedly/gladly/joyfully②困惑：inconfusion/confused/puzzled14續(xù)寫素材續(xù)寫素材[高分句型1]Itseemedthattheangelswhohavethespecialjobofwatchingoverchildren’spartiesmusthaveseentoitthateveryoneinvolvedhadfun,andthebesttimewashadbythebiggestenemy,Gina,whorolledonthefloorandshriekedwithdelight.（運(yùn)用了固定句型itseemedthat，who引導(dǎo)定語從句，that引導(dǎo)賓語從句，it作形式賓語）[高分句型2]Gonewastheirself-pity,replacedbyanewfoundconfidencethatradiatedfromwithin.（運(yùn)用了全部倒裝，過去分詞作狀語，that引導(dǎo)定語從句）15Part3范文呈現(xiàn)16范文呈現(xiàn)Itturnedoutthatthe“EnemyParty”wasamad,merrysuccess.Theeventexceededourexpectationsaslaughterfilledtheairandjoyradiatedfromeverycorner.Itseemedthattheangelswhohavethespecialjobofwatchingoverchildren’spartiesmusthaveseentoitthateveryoneinvolvedhadfun,andthebesttimewashadbythebiggestenemy,Gina,whorolledonthefloorandshriekedwithdelight.Andalltheother“enemies”alsoshedtheirenmityandembracedthesheerblissofthemoment.Asaresult,PatandPeggynevercamehomecryingfromschoolanymore.Instead,theyeffortlesslymingledwiththeirclassmates,engaginginplayfulconversationsandschoolactivitieswithinfectiousenthusiasm.Gonewastheirself-pity,replacedbyanewfoundconfidencethatradiatedfromwithin.17范文呈現(xiàn)AnotherbonusofthepartywasthatGinaseemedadifferentpersonafterwards.Thebiggestenemyandformerbullyhadturnedintomydaughters’staunchestchampionsandshewouldneverliftafingeragainstanyoneorthreatenthelittlekids.Theotherday,Gian

askedPatinconfusion,“Whydidyouinvitemetothepartyinthefirstplace?”“Youlikeicecream,cakeandbigredballoons,justlikeanyothergirl.Right?”Patsmiled.Gina’sexpressionsoftened,sharingarevelationwithPat,“Butdoyouknowsomething?Nobodyeveraskedmetoapartybefore.”WhathadhappenedtoGinamademethink:Arethe“Ginas”leftoutbecausetheyareenemies,ordotheybecomeenemiesbecausetheyareleftout?Manytheoriesexist,butwhenyouloveyour“enemies”anddogoodtothosewhohateyou,miraclescanhappen.18范文譯文事實證明，“敵人黨”取得了瘋狂而快樂的成功?；顒映隽宋覀兊念A(yù)期，空氣中充滿了笑聲，歡樂從每個角落散發(fā)出來。似乎那些專門負(fù)責(zé)照看兒童聚會的天使們一定確保所有參與者都玩得開心，而最好的時光是由最大的敵人吉娜度過的，她在地板上滾來滾去，高興地尖叫起來。所有其他“敵人”也擺脫了敵意，擁抱了當(dāng)下的純粹幸福。結(jié)果，帕特和佩吉再也沒有哭著放學(xué)回家。相反，他們毫不費力地與同學(xué)們交往，以富有感染力的熱情進(jìn)行有趣的對話和學(xué)校活動。他們的自憐消失了，取而代之的是從內(nèi)心散發(fā)出來的新的自信。19范文譯文聚會的另一個好處是，吉娜后來似乎變了一個人。最大的敵人和前欺負(fù)者已經(jīng)變成了我女兒們最堅定的擁護(hù)者，她永遠(yuǎn)不會對任何人動一根手指，也不會威脅小孩子。前幾天，吉安困惑地問帕