2024年高考英語模擬書信寫作15篇（第六期）(新高考專用)

書信寫作15篇（高考模擬真題）

1.（2024.浙江溫州?三模）你校英文報就最近舉辦的“當(dāng)英語遇上藝術(shù)”（WhenEnglishMeetsTheArts）系列活

動開展征文，請你寫一篇短文，分享其中讓你印象深刻的一項活動，內(nèi)容包括:

1.活動介紹2你的感想

注意：

1.寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80左右2請按如下格式在答題紙的相應(yīng)位置作答。

WhenEnglishMeetsTheArts

【答案1WhenEnglishMeetsTheArts

Recently,ourschoolorganizedaseriesofactivitiestitled“WhenEnglishMeetsTheArts**.Amongthem,

theactivitythatleftadeepimpressiononmewastheEnglishdramaperformance.

Duringtheactivity,studentsfromdifferentgradescooperatedtoproduceandperformshortEnglishdramas.

Eachdramashowcasedauniquestorylineandcreativedialogue,providingaplatformforstudentstoshowcase

theirEnglishproficiencyandactingskills.Personally,Iwasdeeplyimpressedbythededicationandteamwork

displayedbythestudents.Despitethechallengesoflanguagelearningandstagefright,theydemonstrated

confidenceandenthusiasmonstage.Moreover,thedramasnotonlyentertainedtheaudiencebutalsoencouraged

languagelearninginafunandinteractiveway.

Overall,theEnglishdramaperformancewasamemorableandinspiringexperience,highlightingthe

synergybetweenlanguagelearningandartisticexpression.Itreinforcedtheimportanceofcreativeapproachesin

languageeducationandprovidedvaluableopportunitiesforstudentstoshineonstage.

【導(dǎo)語】本篇書面表達屬于應(yīng)用文。要求考生寫一篇征文，分享學(xué)校英文報最近舉辦的“當(dāng)英語遇上藝術(shù)”

系列活動中讓你印象深刻的一項活動。

【詳解】1.詞匯積累

一系列：aseriesof—asuiteof

合作：cooperate一collaborate

展示：showcase一display

提供：provide一offer

2.句式拓展

簡單句變復(fù)合句

原句：Eachdramashowcasedauniquestorylineandcreativedialogue,providingaplatformforstudentsto

showcasetheirEnglishproficiencyandactingskills.

拓展句：Eachdramashowcasedauniquestorylineandcreativedialogue,whichprovidedaplatformforstudents

toshowcasetheirEnglishproficiencyandactingskills.

【點睛】【高分句型11Amongthem,theactivitythatleftadeepimpressiononmewastheEnglishdrama

performance^運用了that引導(dǎo)的限制性定語從句）

【高分句型2]Overall,theEnglishdramaperformancewasamemorableandinspiringexperience,highlighting

thesynergybetweenlanguagelearningandartisticexpression.（運用了現(xiàn)在分詞作狀語）

2.（2024.遼寧大連.一模）假如你是李華，你的英國筆友Eric得知你校學(xué)生于上個月參加了大連創(chuàng)新實踐

學(xué)校（DalianInnovationPracticeHighSchool）組織的各種體驗課程，請你給他寫一封回信，分享你體驗的

課程，內(nèi)容如下：

1.課程內(nèi)容；

2.你的感受。

DearEric,

I'msodelightedtohavereceivedyourletter.

Yours,

LiHua

【答案】DearEric,

I'msodelightedtohavereceivedyourletter.YouaskedmeaboutourcoursesinDalianInnovationPractice

HighSchoolandthedetailedinformationisasfollows.

Asscheduled,theexperientialcourse,whichwasfreeofcharge,beganonMarch11th,2024,lastingone

weekandendingonMarch15th.Thereweresomanydifferentkindsofclassesforustochoosefrom.Itookpart

intheprogramofhousehold,whichincludedcookingandfirstaidknowledge,suchascreativeillustration,DIY

cakes,coconutballmaking,trauma（夕卜傷）treatmentandpracticingcardiopulmonaryresuscitationorCPRand

someotherprograms.Throughthiscourse,Irealizedthecharmofhousekeepingwork,whichhelpedmetoenrich

mylifeandimprovethetasteoflife.

Ifyouhaveanyproblemaboutthisproject,pleasedon*thesitatetocontactmeforfurtherinformation.

Yours,

LiHua

【導(dǎo)語】本篇書面表達屬于應(yīng)用文。假如考生是李華，你的英國筆友Eric得知你校學(xué)生于上個月參加了大

連創(chuàng)新實踐學(xué)校（DalianInnovationPracticeHighSchool）組織的各種體驗課程，請你給他寫一封回信。

【詳解】1.詞匯積累

開始：takepartin-participatein

開始：begin-start

幫助：help-assist

選擇：choose一select

2.句式拓展

同義句

原句：Throughthiscourse,Irealizedthecharmofhousekeepingwork,whichhelpedmetoenrichmylifeand

improvethetasteoflife.

拓展句：ItisthroughthiscoursethatIrealizedthecharmofhousekeepingwork,whichhelpedmetoenrichmy

lifeandimprovethetasteoflife.

【點睛】【高分句型1]Itookpartintheprogramofhousehold,whichincludedcookingandfirstaidknowledge,

suchascreativeillustration,DIYcakes,coconutballmaking,trauma（外傷）treatmentandpracticing

cardiopulmonaryresuscitationorCPRandsomeotherprograms.（運用了which弓|導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句）

【高分句型2]Ifyouhaveanyproblemaboutthisproject,pleasedon'thesitatetocontactmeforfurtherin

formation.（運用了if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語從句）

3.（2024?湖北十堰?模擬預(yù)測）假如你是高三學(xué)生李華，你校外教John針對高三是否需要開設(shè)職業(yè)生涯規(guī)

劃（careerplanning）課程展開討論，請你寫一封信表達你的觀點。內(nèi)容包括：1.你的觀點2.你的理由3.你的

建議。

注意：1、詞數(shù)80詞左右；

2、可適當(dāng)增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

DearJohn,

I'mLiHua.

Yours,

LiHua

【答案】DearJohn,

IamaseniorthreestudentnamedLiHua.Iamwritingtoexpressmyviewsonthenecessityofoffering

careerplanningcoursesinseniorhighschools.

Firstly,Ibelievethatsuchcoursesarehighlyvaluable.Asweapproachgraduation,theideaofchoosinga

careerpathcanbeoverwhelming.Thesecoursesprovideanopportunitytoexplorevariousindustriesandjobroles,

helpingusmakeinformeddecisionsaboutourfuture.Secondly,careerplanningcoursesalsoteachvaluableskills

suchasresumewriting,interviewingskills,andjob-searchingstrategies.Theseskillsareessentialforsuccessin

theworkplace.Lastly,Isuggestthatsuchcoursesshouldbeintegratedintotheregularschoolcurriculum.We

couldhavededicatedteacherswhoareexpertsincareercounselinganddevelopment.Theseteacherscouldguide

usthroughtheprocessofexploringourinterests,skills,andvalues,andhelpusidentifysuitablecareerpaths.

Inconclusion,I'mfirmlyconvincedthatseniorhighschoolsshouldoffercareerplanningcourses.Thank

youforconsideringmyviews.

Yours,

L

iHua

【導(dǎo)語】本篇書面表達屬于應(yīng)用文。要求考生寫一封信表達關(guān)于“高三是否需要開設(shè)職業(yè)生涯規(guī)劃課程”的

觀點，說明理由，給出建議。

【詳解】1.詞匯積累

傳達：express一convey

選擇：choose一select

有價值的/寶貴的：valuable-precious

建議：suggest^-recommend

2.句式拓展

合并簡單句

原句：Secondly,careerplanningcoursesalsoteachvaluableskillssuchasresumewriting,interviewingskills,and

job-searchingstrategies.Theseskillsareessentialforsuccessintheworkplace.

拓展句：Secondly,careerplanningcoursesalsoteachvaluableskillssuchasresumewriting,interviewingskills,

andjob-searchingstrategies,whichareessentialforsuccessintheworkplace.

【點睛】【高分句型11Asweapproachgraduation,theideaofchoosingacareerpathcanbeoverwhelming.（運

用了as引導(dǎo)的狀語從句）

【高分句型2】Wecouldhavededicatedteacherswhoareexpertsincareercounselinganddevelopment.（運用

了who引導(dǎo)的限制性定語從句）

4.（2024?遼寧?模擬預(yù)測）假定你是李華。你在和筆友Peter的交流中得知，他因為數(shù)學(xué)成績很不理想，決

定要放棄數(shù)學(xué)，你不同意他的計劃。請你寫一封郵件，內(nèi)容包括：

1、你的意見和建議；2.你的理由。

注意：1.寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80左右；

2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。

DearPeter,

Yours,

LiHua

【答案】DearPeter,

Hearingthatyou'reconsideringgivingupmathsduetoyourrecentstruggleswithit,Iunderstandyour

frustration,butIdisagreewithyourdecision.

Mathsisafundamentalsubjectthatisvaluableinmanyaspectsoflife,fromproblem-solvingtocritical

thinking,whichwillbenefityouinthelongrun.Insteadofabandoningmathsaltogether,Isuggestyoushould

considerseekingextrahelp.Infact,allittakesisadifferentapproachorsomeadditionalguidancetoimprove.

Besides,perseveranceisthekeytoovercomingchallenges.

Ihopeyoucantakemyadviceintoconsideration.Tmconvincedyoucanmakeit.

Y

ours,

L

iHua

【導(dǎo)語】本篇書面表達屬于應(yīng)用文。要求考生給筆友Peter寫信，他因為數(shù)學(xué)成績很不理想，決定要放棄

數(shù)學(xué)，你不同意他的計劃，給他寫信提出一些建議和意見。

【詳解】1.詞匯積累

考慮：consider—takeintoaccount

方法：approachtmethod

此外：Besides—>What'smore

建議：advice—suggestion

2.句式拓展

簡單句變復(fù)合句

原句：Besides,perseveranceisthekeytoovercomingchallenges.

拓展句：Besides,perseveranceisthekey,whichcanhelpyouovercomechallenges.

【點睛】【高分句型11Hearingthatyou'reconsideringgivingupmathsduetoyourrecentstruggleswithit,I

understandyourfrustration,butIdisagreewithyourdecision.（運用了非謂語動詞中的現(xiàn)在分詞作狀語，that

引導(dǎo)賓語從句。）

【高分句型2]Mathsisafundamentalsubjectthatisvaluableinmanyaspectsoflife,fromproblem-solvingto

criticalthinking,whichwillbenefityouinthelongrun.（運用了關(guān)系代詞that引導(dǎo)的定語從句以及which引導(dǎo)

的非限制性定語從句。）

5.（2024.江蘇.二模）假定你是某國際學(xué)校學(xué)生李華，因高三畢業(yè)即將退出校籃球隊，請你在團隊儀式上

用英文發(fā)表告別演說，內(nèi)容包括：

1.回顧往昔；

2.表示感謝；

3.?；@球隊。

注意：

1.寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80左右；

2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。

Mydearteammates,

【答案】

Mydearteammates,

Ifindithardtosaygoodbye.Meanwhile,Ifeelincrediblyfortunatetohavespentthreeyearspractising

withyou,whichhastrulygivenmesomeofthebestmomentsofmylife.Thechampionshipweclaimedlast

semesterwillserveasaconstantreminderofoureverlastingfriendship.

Itseemsimpossibletoexpressmygratitudetoallofyou.Allofmycoachesandteammates,theinfluence

youhavemadeonmeisimmeasurable.Yourloveandcarewillcarrymethroughwhatthenextchapterhasin

storeforme.

Withyourpassionandcommitment,Ibelievethatourteamwillachievemorefeatsandhaveaprosperous

future.

【導(dǎo)語】本篇是應(yīng)用文寫作。要求考生因高三畢業(yè)即將退出?；@球隊，寫一篇演講稿在團隊儀式上發(fā)表告

別演說。

【詳解】1.詞匯積累

困難的：hard-difficult

同時：meanwhile—atthesametime

感激：gratitude一appreciation

影響：influence-impact

2.句式拓展

同義句替換

原句：Withyourpassionandcommitment,Ibelievethatourteamwillachievemorefeatsandhaveaprosperous

future.

拓展句：Withyourpassionandcommitment,Ifirmlybelievethatourteam,whichhasalreadyachievedsomuch,

willcontinuetoachieveevenmorefeatsandhaveaprosperousfuturefilledwithsuccessandaccomplishment.

【點睛】[高分句型1]Ifeelincrediblyfortunatetohavespentthreeyearspractisingwithyou,whichhastruly

givenmesomeofthebestmomentsofmylife.（which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句）

[高分句型2]A11ofmycoachesandteammates,theinfluenceyouhavemadeonmeisimmeasurable^省略that的

定語從句）

6.（23-24高三上?福建?期末）學(xué)校英語俱樂部正在開展以Wayst。RelieveStress為題的討論。請根據(jù)圖表

中的調(diào)查結(jié)果寫一篇發(fā)言稿，內(nèi)容包括：1.簡述調(diào)查結(jié)果；2.評價并提出建議。

注意：1.寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80左右；2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。

Boysandgirls,

【答案】【參考范文1】

Boysandgirls,

I'mhonoredtopresenttheresultofthesurveyaboutwaystorelievestress.80%oftherespondentssaid

theyfavoredwatchingvideostorelax,followedcloselybylisteningtomusic.Comparatively,onlyasmallnumber

ofstudentschoseexerciseortalkingtoothers.

Whilevideosandmusicarefun,spendingtoomuchtimeonthemcanmakeusrelytoomuchonour

phonesandignoremoreimportantthings.Thereareactuallybetteroptionsavailable.Forexample,doingexercise

ortalkingwithfriendsnotonlyrelievesstressbutalsobringsusclosertoeachother.

So,ifwearefeelingalotofstress,ifsagoodideatotrydifferentwaystorelax.Butmostimportantly,we

shouldfocusonthingsthathelpbothourbodyandmind.

Thankyouforlistening!

【參考范文2】

Boysandgirls,

I'mhonoredtopresenttheresultofthesurveyaboutwaystorelievestress.Surprisingly,approximately

fourfifthsoftherespondentsregardedwatchingvideosastheirpreferredwaytoeasestress,closelyfollowedby

listeningtomusic.Incontrast,onlyasmallpercentageofindividualschosesportsorchattingwithothersas

meansofreducingtheirpsychologicalburden/Incontrast,thenumberofstudentspreferringsportsorchatting

accountsfor30%and40%respectively.

Whilevideosandmusicofferamusementandfascination,excessiveindulgence（過分沉溺）canintensify

ourdependenceonsmartphones,thusdistractingourattentionfromourdailylives.Infact,alternativeapproaches,

suchassportsandsocialinteraction,canoffergreaterbenefits.Notonlydoesparticipatinginsportspromote

physicalwell-being,butinteractingwithourfriendsandparentscanalsoprovidecomfortaswell.

Therefore,Isuggestthatseniorthreestudentsadoptacombinationofstress-reliefmethods,prioritizing（優(yōu)

先考慮）thosethatenhancebothourphysicalandmentalhealth.

Thankyouforlistening!

【導(dǎo)語】本篇書面表達屬于應(yīng)用文。要求考生根據(jù)圖表中的調(diào)查結(jié)果寫一篇發(fā)言稿。

【詳解】1.詞匯積累

榮幸的：honored—privileged

選擇：choose^select

依賴：relyon—dependon

集中注意力于：focuson一concentrateon

2.句式拓展

簡單句變復(fù)合句

原句：I'mhonoredtopresenttheresultofthesurveyaboutwaystorelievestress.

拓展句：I'mhonoredtopresenttheresultofthesurveywhosethemeiswaystorelievestress.

【點睛】【高分句型1JWhilevideosandmusicarefun,spendingtoomuchtimeonthemcanmakeusrelytoo

muchonourphonesandignoremoreimportantthings.（運用了while弓|導(dǎo)的讓步狀語從句）

【高分句型2】Butmostimportantly,weshouldfocusonthingsthathelpbothourbodyandmind.（運用了that

引導(dǎo)定語從句）

7.（2024.河北邢臺.二模）假定你是李華，你校英語社團將舉行歌唱比賽。請寫一封英文郵件，邀請交換

生John參賽，內(nèi)容包括：

1.比賽的基本信息；

2.曲目要求及其他注意事項；

3.發(fā)出邀請。

注意：寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80左右。

【答案】DearJohn,

Ihopeyouareenjoyingyourexchangetimehere.Iamwritingtoextendawarminvitationtoyouto

participateintheSingingContesttobeorganizedbyourEnglishclubnextTuesdayinourschoolarthall.

Thecontestrequireseachparticipanttoperformasong,eithersolosorduets.Thechosensongshouldhave

meaningfullyricsandamelodypleasanttotheear.Additionally,youareexpectedtoattendarehearsaltoensurea

smoothcontest.

Welookforwardtoyourparticipationandhopetoseeyouatthecontestsoon.

Bestregards,

LiHua

【導(dǎo)語】本篇書面表達屬于應(yīng)用文，要求考生給John寫一封邀請信，邀請他參加歌唱比賽，告知比賽的基

本信息、曲目要求及其他注意事項。

【詳解】1.詞匯積累

參力口：participatein一takepartin

比賽：contest—competition

此外：additionally-inaddition

確保：ensure—guarantee

2.句式拓展

簡單句改為復(fù)合句

原句：IamwritingtoextendawarminvitationtoyoutoparticipateintheSingingContesttobeorganizedbyour

EnglishclubnextTuesdayinourschoolarthall.

拓展句：IamwritingtoextendawarminvitationtoyoutoparticipateintheSingingContestwhichwillbe

organizedbyourEnglishclubnextTuesdayinourschoolarthall.

【點睛】【高分句型1]IamwritingtoextendawarminvitationtoyoutoparticipateintheSingingContesttobe

organizedbyourEnglishclubnextTuesdayinourschoolarthall.(使用了不定式作目的狀語、后置定語)

【高分句型2】Additionally,youareexpectedtoattendarehearsaltoensureasmoothcontest.(使用了不定式作

主語補足語、目的狀語)

8.(2024?湖南長沙?一模)你在某英語學(xué)習(xí)網(wǎng)站上看到一個話題為"MyPlan(s)foraMeaningfulSummer

Vacation”的帖子，請你寫一篇英語短文跟帖，內(nèi)容包括：

1.你的暑假安排；

2.說明你的理由。

注意：

1.寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80左右；

2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。

MyPlan(s)foraMeaningfulSummerVacation

【答案】范文

MyPlan(s)foraMeaningfulSummerVacation

Asahighschoolsenior,Ithinkthissummervacationisspecial.Fveplanneditfocusingonpersonalgrowth

andexploration.

Ihavedecidedtoworkpart-timeatabookstore.Thisexperiencewillnotonlyhelpmedevelopasenseof

responsibilitybutallowmetosaveupfbralanguagecourse.BeingsurroundedbybooksisanaddedbonusasI'm

abooklover.Additionally,I'mdeterminedtolearnArabic.Understandinganotherlanguageopensdoorsto

differentculturesandperspectives,whichIfindincrediblyvaluable.

I'msurethiscombinationofworkandlearningwillmakeforabothproductiveandmeaningfulsummer.

【導(dǎo)語】本篇書面表達屬于應(yīng)用文。要求考生以"MyPlan⑸foraMeaningfulSummerVacation”為題寫一篇

英語短文跟帖。

【詳解】1.詞匯積累

決定：decideto一makeupone'smind

集中：focuson—concentrateon

此外：additionally一besides

寶貴的：valuable一precious

2.句式拓展

合并簡單句

原句：Ihavedecidedtoworkpart-timeatabookstore.Thisexperiencewillnotonlyhelpmedevelopasenseof

responsibilitybutallowmetosaveupforalanguagecourse.

拓展句：Ihavedecidedtoworkpart-timeatabookstore,whichwillnotonlyhelpmedevelopasenseof

responsibilitybutallowmetosaveupforalanguagecourse.

【點睛】[高分句型1]BeingsurroundedbybooksisanaddedbonusasI'mabooklover.（運用了as引導(dǎo)原因狀

語從句）

[高分句型2]Understandinganotherlanguageopensdoorstodifferentculturesandperspectives,whichIfind

incrediblyvaluable.（運用了which引導(dǎo)非限制性定語從句）

9.（23-24高三上.廣西柳州.階段練習(xí)）假定你是校英語俱樂部負責(zé)人李華，為緩解同學(xué)們的學(xué)習(xí)壓力，俱

樂部擬于下周五下午舉行戶外游戲活動。請你代表俱樂部寫一則通知，內(nèi)容包括：

1.活動時間、地點；

2.活動形式；

3.希望大家積極參加。

注意：1.寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80個左右；

2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。

Notice

Dearfellowschoolmates,

TheEnglishClub

【答案】Notice

Dearfellowschoolmates,

Inordertorelievestudents*studypressure,theclubplanstoholdoutdoorgames.Asscheduled,weareto

gatherontheplaygroundinourschoolat13:30nextFridayafternoon.Theactivitywillbeginat14:00ontime.

Theactivitiesaremainlyintheformofvariousgames,whosepurposeistorelaxeverystudent.Moreover,don't

forgettowearuniforms.Pleasedoarriveontime.Wearelookingforwardtoyourparticipation.

TheEnglish

Club

【導(dǎo)語】本篇書面表達屬于應(yīng)用文。假定考生是校英語俱樂部負責(zé)人李華，為緩解同學(xué)們的學(xué)習(xí)壓力，俱

樂部擬于下周五下午舉行戶外游戲活動。請你代表俱樂部寫一則通知。

【詳解】1.詞匯積累

壓力：pressure—'Stress

止匕夕卜：moreover一what，smore

高度評價：thinkhighlyoJsinghighpraisefor

開始：begin一start

2.句式拓展

簡單句變復(fù)合句

原句：Theactivitywillbeginat14:00ontime.

拓展句：Itisat14:00ontimethattheactivitywillbegin.

【點睛】【高分句型11Theactivitiesaremainlyintheformofvariousgames,whosepurposeistorelaxevery

student.（運用了whose引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句）

【高分句型2]Inordertorelievestudents*studypressure,theclubplanstoholdoutdoorgames.（運用了不定式

作目的狀語）

10.（2024?江西九江?二模）學(xué)校學(xué)生會為6月6日全國愛眼日（NationalEyeCaringDay）征集倡議書，以

“照顧好眼睛，避免近視”為題，根據(jù)圖表中的調(diào)查結(jié)果對同學(xué)發(fā)出倡議。內(nèi)容要點：

近視率力學(xué)生近視率初中生近視率高中生近視率

1.簡述青少年近視現(xiàn)狀；

2.提出護眼建議；

3.發(fā)出倡議。

注意：

1.詞數(shù)80左右；

2.可以適當(dāng)增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

TakeCareofourEyesandAvoidMyopia

Dearfellowstudents,

Wearelivinginaneraofrapidtechnologicaldevelopment,whereelectronicproductshavebecomean

indispensablepartofourdailylives.

TheStudents5Union

【答案1TakeCareofourEyesandAvoidMyopia

Dearfellowstudents,

Wearelivinginaneraofrapidtechnologicaldevelopment,whenelectronicproductshavebecomean

indispensablepartofourdailylives.However,alongwiththiscomesasharpriseofmyopiarateamongteenagers

from14.5%of6-year-oldstoover80%ofhighschoolstudents,whichisbecomingaworryingphenomenon.

WithNationalEyeCaringDayapproaching,ourschoolcallsoneveryonetopayattentiontoeyehealth.

Firstly,developeyecaringhabitssuchaslookingintothedistanceevery20-30minutestorestoureyesand

maintaineyeexercises.Secondly,participateactivelyinoutdooractivitiestokeepoureyesawayfromelectronic

products.Mostimportantly,ensuresufficientsleepandavoidstayinguplate.

Forthehealthofoureyes,lefstakeactionnow!

TheStudents9Union

【導(dǎo)語】本篇書面表達屬于圖表作文。要求考生以“照顧好眼睛，避免近視”為題，根據(jù)圖表中的調(diào)查結(jié)果

對同學(xué)發(fā)出倡議。

【詳解】1.詞匯積累

然而：however?一nevertheless

令人擔(dān)憂的：worrying-alarming

來臨：approach一drawnear

參力口：participatein一takepartin

2.句式拓展

簡單句變復(fù)合句

原句：WithNationalEyeCaringDayapproaching,ourschoolcallsoneveryonetopayattentiontoeyehealth.

拓展句：AsNationalEyeCaringDayisapproaching,ourschoolcallsoneveryonetopayattentiontoeyehealth.

【點睛】【高分句型1]However,alongwiththiscomesasharpriseofmyopiarateamongteenagersfrom14.5%

of6-year-oldstoover80%ofhighschoolstudents,whichisbecomingaworryingphenomenon.（運用了which弓|

導(dǎo)定語從句）

【高分句型2】WithNationalEyeCaringDayapproaching,ourschoolcallsoneveryonetopayattentiontoeye

health.（運用了with復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)）

11.（2024.安徽滁州.二模）值母親節(jié)、父親節(jié)來臨之際，為弘揚中華傳統(tǒng)美德——孝道，中學(xué)生英語報社

以“ThePowerofParentalRoleModels”為題，面向中學(xué)生征稿。請你寫一篇短文投稿，感謝父母“以身為范、

助我成長”。內(nèi)容要點包括：

1.個人經(jīng)歷；

2.你的感想。

注意：

1.寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80個左右；

2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。

ThePowerofParentalRoleModels

【答案】ThePowerofParentalRoleModels

Asasayinggoes,"'Actionsspeaklouderthanwords."Inourgrowingstage,parentsplayaleadingrole

betterthroughtheirbehaviors,whichwasconfirmedbymypersonalexperience.

Myfatherusedtoblamemefornotconcentratingonmystudywhilehimselfplayingwithhiscellphone

besideme!Itdidnothelpatalluntilonedayhebeganreadingandstudyinghardwithmetogether.

Evidently,parents5actionsaremorepowerfulonourgrowththanoralrequirementsdo.AndIreally

appreciatewhatmyfatherdid.

【導(dǎo)語】本篇書面表達屬于應(yīng)用文。值母親節(jié)、父親節(jié)來臨之際，為弘揚中華傳統(tǒng)美德——孝道，中學(xué)生

英語報社以"ThePowerofParentalRoleModels”為題，面向中學(xué)生征稿。要求考生寫一篇短文投稿，感謝父

母“以身為范、助我成長

【詳解】1.詞匯積累

證實：confirm一verify

集中于：concentrateon一focuson

明顯地：evidently^obviously

真地：really一truly

2.句式拓展

簡單句變復(fù)合句

原句：Evidently,parents5actionsaremorepowerfulonourgrowththanoralrequirementsdo.

拓展句：Evidently,parents5actionsaremorepowerfulonourgrowththanoralrequirementsdo,whichisgreatly

truetolife.

【點睛】【高分句型l]Inourgrowingstage,parentsplayaleadingrolebetterthroughtheirbehaviors,whichwas

confirmedbymypersonalexperience.（運用了which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句）

【高分句型2]Itdidnothelpatalluntilonedayhebeganreadingandstudyinghardwithmetogether.（運用了

until引導(dǎo)時間狀語從句）

12.（2024.河北張家口.模擬預(yù)測）假定你是李華，為配合學(xué)校將于下月舉辦的科技節(jié)，你校英語報設(shè)置了

“科技節(jié)獻策”欄目。請你以“MyProposalfortheScienceandTechnologyFestival”為題寫一篇短文投稿。內(nèi)容

包括：

1.你的獻策；

2.獻策理由。

注意：

1.寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80個左右；

2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。

MyProposalfortheScienceandTechnology

Festival_________________________________________________________________________________________

【答案】MyProposalfortheScienceandTechnologyFestival

Asagreatfanofscienceandtechnology,Iamexcitedaboutthefestivalapproachingnextmonth.Atthe

festival,Iexpecttoattendlecturesfromoneortwoscientistsfromtopuniversities.Ibelievethestudentswillget

inspirationsfromtheirbrilliantinsightsintofieldslikeAIandbiologicalengineering.Besides,Ibelieveitwillbe

agreatideatoholdanexhibitionofthestudents9projectsandaspeechcontest,whichcangivethestudents

opportunitiestosharetheirpointsofviewonthedevelopmentandsocialvalueofscienceandtechnology.

Iamanticipatingthismeaningfulfestivalandwillbedelightedtobepartofit.

【導(dǎo)語】本篇書面表達屬于應(yīng)用文。為配合學(xué)校將于下月舉辦的科技節(jié)，學(xué)校英語報設(shè)置了“科技節(jié)獻策”

欄目。要求考生以"MyProposalfortheScienceandTechnologyFestival”為題寫一篇短文投稿。

【詳解】1.詞匯積累

激動的：excited-thrilled

接近：approach一drawnear

期望：expect一anticipate

獲得：get-gain

2.句式拓展

簡單句變復(fù)合句

原句：Atthefestival,Iexpecttoattendlecturesfromoneortwoscientistsfromtopuniversities.

拓展句：Atthefestival,whatIexpectistoattendlecturesfromoneortwoscientistsfromtopuniversities.

【點睛】【高分句型1]Besides,Ibelieveitwillbeagreatideatoholdanexhibitionofthestudents*projectsand

aspeechcontest,whichcangivethestudentsopportunitiestosharetheirpointsofviewonthedevelopmentand

socialvalueofscienceandtechnology.（運用了which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句和省略that的賓語從句）

【高分句型2]IbelievethestudentswillgetinspirationsfromtheirbrilliantinsightsintofieldslikeAland

biologicalengineering.（運用了省略that的賓語從句）

13.（2024.遼寧.三模）如今隨著生活、學(xué)習(xí)和工作節(jié)奏的加快，很多人容易出現(xiàn)疲勞的狀態(tài)。請你結(jié)合自

己的實際情況，談?wù)勀銘?yīng)對疲勞的方法。

注意：1.詞數(shù)80左右；

2.可以適當(dāng)增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

HowtoDealwithTiredness

【答案】HowtoDealwithTiredness

Everyonewillexperiencetirednessintheirdailylife.Itisabadfeeling,whichwillaffectusinvariousways.It

canleadtoalackofmotivationandpassion,andevencauseustofeeldepressed.Actually,thereareeffective

waystohelpyoudealwithit.First,whennoticingyouareexperiencingtiredness,findtimetogetagoodnight's

sleep.Youcanalsotakeexercisethatwillreducetiredness.Sometimessimplywalkingaroundyourneighborhood

canbegoodforyou.Inaddition,whenfeelingyourtirednessiscontrollingyou,ifsimportanttoseeadoctorfor

professionalhelp.Inconclusion,dealingwithtirednessisnotsodifficultifyoutreatitincorrectways.

【導(dǎo)語】本篇書面表達屬于應(yīng)用文，如今隨著生活、學(xué)習(xí)和工作節(jié)奏的加快，很多人容易出現(xiàn)疲勞的狀態(tài)。

請你結(jié)合自己的實際情況，談?wù)効忌鷳?yīng)對疲勞的方法。

【詳解】1.詞匯積累

影響：affect—influence

各種各樣的：various-allkindsof

苦難的：difficult—lough

另夕卜：inaddition一what'smore

2.句式拓展

簡單句變復(fù)合句

原句：Actually,thereareeffectivewaystohelpyoudealwithit.

拓展句：Actually,thereareeffectivewayswhichcanhelpyoudealwithit.

【點睛】[高分句型1]Itisabadfeeling,whichwillaffectusinvariousways.（運用了which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定

語從句）

[高分句型2]Youcanalsotakeexercisethatwillreducetiredness.（運用了that引導(dǎo)的定語從句）

14.（2024.山西.二模）假定你是李華，你校國際交流中心成立了京劇俱樂部。請你給交換生Jack寫一封郵

件，內(nèi)容包括：

1.發(fā)出邀請；

2.參加俱樂部的好處。

注意：1.寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80左右；

2.可適當(dāng)增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

【答案】DearJack,

I'mthrilledt