高中英語北師大版選擇性必修一UNIT 3 Period 7　Writing-A“For”and“Against”Essay

Period7Writing—A“For”and“Against”EssayCONSERVATIONUNIT3細(xì)讀文本寫作指導(dǎo)實(shí)踐演練細(xì)讀文本1.Whatisthefirstparagraphmainlyabout?A.Introducetheideaoffactoryfarming.B.Describethedetailsoffactoryfarming.C.Concludetheauthor’sopinions.D.Presentsomeargumentsagainsttheidea.Activity1

Readforsomedetails.√2.Whatisoneoftheadvantagesoffactoryfarming?A.Itscostsarehighandtheproductionislow.B.Itismoreexpensivethantraditionalfarming.C.Itprovidesmorefoodforaworldpopulation.D.Itcanprovidemoreworkingpositions.√3.Whyarepeoplefightingforanimalrightsagainstfactoryfarming?A.Becausefactoryfarmingmaycauseseriouspollution.B.Becausemanyfarmanimalssufferterriblestress.C.Becausefactoryfarmingcreatesalotofwasteproducts.D.Becausefactoryfarmingcanproducecheapfood.√4.Whatisthepurposeofthelastparagraph?A.Tosumupandexpresstheauthor’sopinions.B.Toprovidethesupportingfactors.C.Tostresstheimportanceoftheidea.D.Toofferthebackground.√Ⅰ.Matcheachparagraphwithitsmainidea.Activity2

Readforthestructures.Ⅱ.Fillintheblankstocompletethestructureaccordingtotheessay.introductionfordisadvantageopinionReadandfindoutsentenceswithlinkingexpressions.______________________________________________________________Activity3

Readforsomegoodsentences.答案

(1)Accordingto

aninstitute，“74%oftheworld’spoultry,43%ofitsbeefand68%ofitseggsareproducedinthisway.”(2)Moreover，factory-farmedanimalssufferfromfewerdiseasesthanthoselivingoutside.(3)Ontheotherhand，opponentsoffactoryfarmingsaythatitiscrueltotheanimals.(4)Forinstance，manyfarmanimalsarekeptinsmallspaceswheretheycanhardlymove.(5)Inadditiontothis，factoryfarminghasanegativeimpactontheenvironment...(6)Tosumup，despiteproducingcheapfood，factoryfarmingisbadfortheplanetandfortheanimalsthemselves.(7)Inmyopinion，weshouldtrytoreducethiskindoffarming，althoughwewouldhavetopaymoreforoureggsandmeat.返回寫作指導(dǎo)正反觀點(diǎn)類議論文本單元的寫作任務(wù)是寫一篇包含正反觀點(diǎn)的議論文。此類文章是圍繞給出的話題論述兩個(gè)對(duì)立的觀點(diǎn)并給出自己的看法。該類文章一般分成三部分：第一部分：說明討論的話題；第二部分：說明正方和反方的觀點(diǎn)及其理由；第三部分：表明自己的觀點(diǎn)。[常用表達(dá)]首段常用句式：1.We’vehadasurveyon...2.Recently，wehadaheateddiscussionaboutwhether...ornot.3.Thetopicofthediscussionof...isbecomingmoreandmorepopularrecently.4.Opinionsaredividedonthisissue.5.Opinionsaremainlydividedintotwogroups.6.Differentpeople，however，havedifferentopinions/thinkquitedifferentlyonthismatter....中間段常用句式：1.35%ofthestudentsholdtheviewthat...Foronething...Foranotherthing...2.60%ofthestudentsarefortheidea，whothink...3.Intheiropinion，therearemanyadvantagesof.../...playanimportantpartin...4.However，theothersarestronglyagainstit.Theirreasonsareasfollows.Inthefirstplace...What’smore...Inaddition...5.Astheoldsayinggoes，eachcoinhastwosides.6.Someholdthedifferentviewthat...7.Therearealsosomedisadvantagesof......尾段常用句式：1.Inmyopinion/Inmyview，...2.Personallyspeaking，Ithink...3.Takingeverythingintoconsideration，weshouldmakegooduseof...4.Onlyinthiswaycanwe...5.I’mentirelyconvincedthat...6.AsfarasIamconcerned，......返回實(shí)踐演練近年來，手機(jī)視頻直播在年輕人中越來越流行，對(duì)此不同的人持有不同觀點(diǎn)。你班同學(xué)就此展開了討論。假設(shè)你是李華，請(qǐng)根據(jù)下表提供的信息，給報(bào)社寫一封信，客觀地介紹討論情況。60%的同學(xué)認(rèn)為40%的同學(xué)認(rèn)為你的看法1.分享生活體驗(yàn)的好方式；2.展示才華的舞臺(tái)；……1.誤導(dǎo)年輕人可以不勞而獲；2.泄露個(gè)人隱私；…………注意：1.信的開頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；2.詞數(shù)80左右。

參考詞匯：手機(jī)視頻直播mobilelivevideobroadcasting第一步審題謀篇[審題]1.確定文體：這是議論文，寫作時(shí)應(yīng)注意議論文的寫作特點(diǎn)；2.主體時(shí)態(tài)：應(yīng)以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主；3.主體人稱：以第一人稱和第三人稱為主。[謀篇]第一段：說明討論的話題——青少年是否能夠進(jìn)行手機(jī)視頻直播；第二段：說明正方和反方的觀點(diǎn)及理由；第三段：表明自己的觀點(diǎn)。第二步遣詞造句[核心詞匯]1.從……到……不同 ______________2.支持/反對(duì) _____________3……的好方式 ________________4.一方面……另一方面……

______________________________5.相反 ______________6.有……的風(fēng)險(xiǎn) ______________7.泄露隱私 _________________8.對(duì)……有消極影響 ______________________varyfrom...to...befor/againstagoodwaytodoforonething...foranotherthing...onthecontrarybeattheriskofgiveawayprivacyhaveanegativeeffecton9.對(duì)……上癮，對(duì)……癡迷 ______________10.阻止某人做某事 _____________________________11.豐富某人的生活 ______________12.一個(gè)例外 ____________beaddictedtoprevent/stopsb(from)doingsthenrichone’slifeanexception[連詞成句]1.關(guān)于手機(jī)視頻直播，人們的觀點(diǎn)各不相同。Asformobilelivevideobroadcasting，____________________________________.2.他們認(rèn)為這是一種跟家人朋友分享生活經(jīng)歷的好方法。Theyarguethatitis

withfriendsandfamilies.3.這為他們提供了展示才華的舞臺(tái)。Itprovidesthemwithastage

.opinionsvaryfrompersontopersonagoodwaytosharetheirlifeexperiencetoshowtheirtalents4.相反，有40%的人反對(duì)它(青少年手機(jī)視頻直播)。______________________________________________________________5.通過直播，青少年有泄露隱私的風(fēng)險(xiǎn)。Bybroadcasting，theyouthare

toomuchoftheirprivacy.6.這對(duì)他們的生活有消極的影響。______________________________________________________________7.任何事物都有兩面性，手機(jī)視頻直播也不例外。Everycoinhastwosidesandmobilelivevideobroadcasting_____________________.Onthecontrary,40%ofthemareagainstit.attheriskofgivingawayIthasanegativeeffectontheirlife.isnotanexception8.它是豐富我們生活的一種時(shí)尚方式。Itisafashionableway

.9.但是我們應(yīng)該合理使用，防止自己對(duì)它上癮。Butweshouldwiselyuseitand____________________________________.toenrichourlifepreventourselvesfrombeingaddictedtoit第三步句式升級(jí)1.把句2和句3改成notonly...butalso...結(jié)構(gòu)。__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________2.把句5和句6合并成分詞作結(jié)果狀語。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________3.把句8和句9改成while引導(dǎo)的狀語從句。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Theyarguethatitisnotonlyagoodwaytosharetheirlifeexperiencewithfriendsandfamiliesbutalsoprovidesthemwithastagetoshowtheirtalents.Bybroadcasting，theyouthareattheriskofgivingawaytoomuchoftheirprivacy，havinganegativeeffectontheirlife.Whileit’safashionablewaytoenrichourlife，weshouldmakewiseuseofitandpreventourselvesfrombeingaddictedtoit.第四步組句成篇用適當(dāng)?shù)倪^渡詞語，把以上詞匯和句式，再加上聯(lián)想內(nèi)容，組成一篇英語短文。[參考范文]DearEditor，Iamwritingtotellyouaboutmyclassmates’opinionsaboutthemobilelivevideobroadcastingamongyoungpeople.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Asforit，opinionsvaryfrompersontoperson.60%ofthemareforit.Theyarguethatitisnotonlyagoodwaytosharetheirlifeexperiencewiththeirfriendsandfamiliesbutalsoprovidesthemwithastagetoshowtheirtalents.Onthecontrary,40%ofthemareagainstit.Reasonscanbelistedasfollows.Foronething，itmisleadstheyouthtosomedegree.返回________________________________________________________________________________________________________