Unit2Illhelptocleanupthecityparks.-2023-2024學年八年級英語下冊單元寫作深度指導（人教版）（教師版）

Unit2I’llhelptocleanupthecityparks.單元寫作指導與演練近三年考情分析話題考查熱度“提供幫助和做志愿者”志愿者活動本單元以＂志愿服務(wù)＂為話題，應(yīng)用文體裁居多，該話題屬于中考?？荚掝}之一。描述了發(fā)生在我們身邊的相關(guān)事情，目的在于教育學生團結(jié)互助，關(guān)心社會和諧發(fā)展。此類作文為英語中的?？荚掝}作文，寫作時應(yīng)盡量用倡議或號召性的語句或者用自己或他人親身經(jīng)歷的事件鼓勵、教育他人。寫作目標1.掌握并熟練使用表達出活動的要點；1.掌握并熟練使用表達出活動的要點；2.會寫一些簡單的應(yīng)聘信；3.清晰表達自己的能力。寫作步驟◆1.總分總結(jié)構(gòu)。短文通常分為三個部分：總第一部分：開篇點題，引出話題。分第二部分：活動內(nèi)容以及提供的幫助?？偂谌糠郑夯顒拥母惺堋！?.人稱：第一人稱?！?.時態(tài)：一般將來時、一般過去時。申請目的Ihavereadabout....申請目的Iwanttobeavolunteerof...in....I’mgoodat.../goodwith...個人優(yōu)勢Wecanraisemoneyfor....個人優(yōu)勢Ontheonehand,一方面Ontheotherhand,另一方面Ontheonehand,一方面Ontheotherhand,另一方面I’mableto...個人感受Iwilltrymybesttomaketheworldmorebeautiful.個人感受Tobevolunteerswillbeagreatexperienceforme.IhopeIcangetthechance.真題感知（2023·湖南湘潭·統(tǒng)考中考真題）湘潭市博物館正在為“講好湘潭故事，傳播本土文化”的大型宣傳活動招募英語講解員。假設(shè)你是李華，你想?yún)⒓哟舜位顒?，請根?jù)以下提示用英語向活動負責人寫一封自薦信。要點提示：（1）個人基本情況（姓名、年齡等）；（2）自薦的原因（性格、特長等）；（3）對活動的認知（感想或意義等）。注意：（1）字數(shù)在80詞左右，可適當發(fā)揮（開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)）；（2）不能出現(xiàn)可能透露真實身份的任何信息（如校名，個人姓名等）。DearSir/Madam,I’dliketobeavolunteerinthis“TellingXiangtanStories,SpreadingLocalCulture”activity.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________I’mlookingforwardtoyourreply.YoursLiHua【答案】例文DearSir/Madam,I’dliketobeavolunteerinthis“TellingXiangtanStories,SpreadingLocalCulture”activity.

MynameisLiHua.Iam14yearsold.I’msuchanoutgoingboythatit’seasyformetomunicatewithothers.Inaddition,I’vegotvariedhobbies,suchasreadingbooks,doingsportsandperformingthecrosstalk.IaminterestedinChinesetraditionalculture.Ioftenreadbooksaboutthem.AndIalsotakepartinmanyactivitieslikethis.Ithinkthisactivityisverymeaningful.Itcanmakemorepeoplelearnaboutourlocalculture.Itcanhelptopromoteculturalexchangesanddevelopment.IfIamchosentobeamemberofthisactivity,Iwilltrymybesttodoit.I’mlookingforwardtoyourreply.YoursLiHua[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇應(yīng)用文，為書信作文；②時態(tài)：時態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時”；③提示：寫作要點已給出，考生應(yīng)注意不要遺漏，適當增加細節(jié)完整表述內(nèi)容。[寫作步驟]第一步，開頭已給出，表達想成為一名志愿者的意愿；第二步，介紹自己的個人情況，自薦原因以及對活動的認知；第三步，期待對方的回信。[亮點詞匯]①inaddition另外②beinterestedin對……感興趣③takepartin參加[高分句型]①I’msuchanoutgoingboythatit’seasyformetomunicatewithothers.（such…that引導結(jié)果狀語從句）②IfIamchosentobeamemberofthisactivity,Iwilltrymybesttodoit.（if引導條件狀語從句）【詞匯積累】1.helptodo...幫助做..... 2.cleanup打掃3.cheerup使高興起來 4.giveoutfood分發(fā)食物5.teachkids教學生 6.volunteer志愿者7.givesomeadvice給出建議 8.makeaplan制定計劃9eupwith想出......10.workinanoldpeople’shome在敬老院上班11.helpoutwith想辦法解決lonely孤獨的 carefor照顧decideto決定做 giveup放棄attheageof在.....歲時 tryout參加.....選拔trieddoing嘗試做 etrue實現(xiàn)learnsomethingimportant學到了重要的東西beinterestedin對......感興趣 atthesametime同時volunteertodo自愿去做..... putup張貼repair修理 giveaway捐贈thankyoufor...因......而感謝changemylife改變我的生活句型積累：I’dliketohelptocleanupthecityparks.我想去幫忙打掃市里的公園。IcanteachkidstolearnEnglish.我會教孩子們學英語。Let’smakesomenotices.咱們做些通知吧。Iwanttobeavolunteerinanoldpeople’shome.我想在敬老院做志愿者。Ilikereadingnewspapertothem.我喜歡讀報給他們聽。Weshouldlistentothemandcareforthem.我們應(yīng)該傾聽他們并且照顧他們。Iloveanimalsandwanttobeananimaldoctor.我喜歡小動物想成為一名獸醫(yī)。8.IgetsuchastrongfeelingofsatisfactionwhenIseetheanimalsgetbetterandthelookofjoyontheirowners’faces.我得到強烈的滿足感當我看見他們主人臉上的喜悅感。9.Volunteeringhereisadreametrue.能在這做志愿者，我的夢想實現(xiàn)了。10.IcandowhatIlovetodoandhelpothersatthesametime.我可以做我喜歡做得去幫助別人。11.Helpingotherscanbringushappiness.幫助別人能給我們帶來快樂。12.Ithinkwe’dbetter....我覺得我們最好....13.InmyfreetimeIliketo...soIthinkI’dbegoodatthisjob.在業(yè)余時間我喜歡做所以我覺得我擅長這項工作。14.I’mstrongin....我強烈想加入....15.Iwanttohelpoutasavolunteerinyourgroup.我想在你們的團隊里做一名志愿者。例題分析：某兒童醫(yī)院正在招募一批能在周末來醫(yī)院幫忙的志愿者。假如你是Susan，你想成為其中的一員，請你給該兒童醫(yī)院寫一封自薦信。【思路點撥】1.定基調(diào)體裁：應(yīng)用文(自薦信)；信的主體部分為說明文時態(tài)：一般現(xiàn)在時人稱：第一人稱2.謀布局、寫句子3.巧銜接本文要求寫一封自薦信。在寫個人優(yōu)勢時，我們可用I’m...和Ican...的平行結(jié)構(gòu)作為一種銜接手段，這樣能使文章節(jié)奏勻稱、緊致。4.成篇章DearSirorMadam,_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________DearSirorMadam,I’mwritingtoyouaboutvolunteeringatyourchildren’shospital.Iwouldliketostaywithkids.

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Susan一、詞匯積累(一)動詞短語1.打掃干凈___________________2.(使)變得更高興；振奮起來___________________3.分發(fā)；散發(fā)___________________4.放棄___________________5.張貼___________________6.推遲___________________7.打給(某人)___________________8.修理；解決___________________9.贈送；捐贈___________________10.建立；設(shè)立___________________11.幫助解決困難___________________12.用完___________________13.想出；提出___________________(二)其他短語1.城市公園_____________________ 2.食物銀行_____________________ 3.開心的表情_____________________ 4.一個課后計劃_____________________ 5.由于_____________________ 6.從現(xiàn)在起_____________________ 7.清潔日_____________________ 8.殘疾人_____________________ 二、句子積累1.Thegirlcouldvisitthesickkidsinthehospitaltocheerthemup.【不定式tocheerthemup表目的】我可以去敬老院逗老人開心。___________________________________________________________________________________2.IcandowhatIlovetodoandhelpothersatthesametime.【whatIlovetodo是作do的賓語，意為＂做我喜歡的事情＂】我想做我喜歡的事情。___________________________________________________________________________________3.Volunteeringourtimetohelpthesepeopleisagoodideatospendourfreetime.【volunteeringourtimetohelpthesepeople在此句中是動名詞短語作主語，volunteertimetodosth.意為＂自愿花時間做某事＂】我認為自愿每周花時間去幫助殘疾人是很有意義的。___________________________________________________________________________________4.I’dliketohelphomelesspeople.Iwanttotravelalone.【wouldliketodosth.與wanttodosth.是指＂想要做某事＂】大學畢業(yè)后，我想成為一名志愿者。___________________________________________________________________________________【參考答案】一、詞匯積累(一)動詞短語1.cleanup2.cheerup3.giveout4.giveup5.putup6.putoff7.callup8.fixup9.giveaway10.setup 11.helpoutwithsth12.runoutof13.eupwith(二)其他短語1.citypark2.foodbank3.thelookofjoy4.anafterschoolprogram5.becauseof6.fromnowon7.CleanUpDay8.disabledpeople二、句子積累1.Icangotoanoldpeople’shometocheerthemup.2.IwanttodowhatIlovetodo.3.Ithinkvolunteeringourtimeeveryweektohelpdisabledpeopleismeaningful.4.I’dliketobeavolunteerafterIfinishmycollege.（一）1．為了更好地舉辦冬奧會，市冬奧辦現(xiàn)在面向全社會招聘身體健康、熱愛體育運動、樂于助人，并能熟練運用英語和外國友人交流的志愿者。假如你叫李華，請根據(jù)以下提示和要求，寫一封應(yīng)征冬奧會志愿者的自薦信。提示:1.Whydoyouwanttobeavolunteer?2.Whatcanyoudo?要求:1.自薦信須包含所有提示信息，可適當發(fā)揮；2.信中不得出現(xiàn)真實的人名、校名、地名；3.詞數(shù)80左右，開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。DearSirorMadam,Thankyouforreadingmyletter.I’dliketobeavolunteerforWinterOlympicGames.Because____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【答案】Onepossibleversion:DearSirorMadam,Thankyouforreadingmyletter.I’dliketobeavolunteerforWinterOlympicGames.BecauseIlikesports.Inschool,Ioftentakepartinallkindsofactivities.IamgoodatEnglish.IlistentoEnglishnewsontheradioeverydayandcanmunicatewithforeignfriendsfreely.Iamoutgoing,too.Icangetalongwiththemandgivethemahandwhenevertheyareinneed.Ithinkvolunteerworkisgreat.IhopeIcanbeamemberofWinterOlympicGames.I’mlookingforwardtoyourreply.Yours,LiHua【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇應(yīng)用文，要求寫一篇自薦信；②時態(tài)：時態(tài)主要為“一般現(xiàn)在時”；③提示：寫作時應(yīng)圍繞所給提示信息寫作，并適當發(fā)揮。[寫作步驟]第一步：文章開頭已經(jīng)給出，應(yīng)承接文章開頭，接著寫出想成為志愿者的原因及你擅長做的事情；第二步：對自薦信進行總結(jié)，寫出你的期待和愿望。[亮點詞匯]①takepartin參加，參與②municatewithsb和某人溝通，交流③givethemahand幫助某人④getalongwith和某人相處[高分句型]①Icangetalongwiththemandgivethemahandwhenevertheyareinneed.（用whenever引導時間狀語從句）②.IhopeIcanbeamemberofWinterOlympicGames.（hope后省略that的賓語從句）（二）2．根據(jù)以下提示，以“I’mHappytoHelpOthers”為題，寫一篇英語短文。內(nèi)容:1.過去我將錢花在買衣服和零食上；2.老師告訴我們有很多兒童缺少衣服和食物，更不能上學；3.從那以后，我將零花錢捐給一個幫助兒童的組織；4.我為能幫助別人而自豪。要求:1.語句通順，語意連貫；2.必須包含所有提示內(nèi)容，可適當發(fā)揮；3.80詞左右（不含所給詞）。I’mHappytoHelpOthersEveryoneneedshelp.Iusedto_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文I’mHappytoHelpOthersEveryoneneedshelp.Iusedtobuyclothesandsnackswithmypocketmoney.Butsometimestheywereawasteofmoney.Oneday,ourteachertoldusinsomeplacesintheworld,thereweremanypoorchildrenandtheydidn’thaveenoughclothesandfood.Theyevencouldn’tgotoschool.Hearingthat,Ifeltsorryforthem.Ishoulddosomethingforthem.Fromthenon,Igaveawaymypocketmoneytoanorganizationtohelpchildren.IhopeIcanhelpthepoorkids.Atleasttheycanbuyabook.Thismakesmefeelveryhappy.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇記敘文，為材料作文；②時態(tài)：時態(tài)為“一般過去時”；③提示：注意不要遺漏提示內(nèi)容中給出的要點，注意標點符號及大小寫等問題，不要犯語法錯誤。注意上下文之間的邏輯關(guān)系，語意連貫。[寫作步驟]第一步：表明寫作意圖。內(nèi)容是根據(jù)提示，以“I’mHappytoHelpOthers”為題，寫一篇英語短文。第二步：具體闡述寫作內(nèi)容。首先介紹過去我將錢花在買衣服和零食上；然后從老師那兒得知還有很多兒童缺少衣服和食物，更不能上學；其次介紹從那以后，我將零花錢捐給一個幫助兒童的組織。第三步：書寫結(jié)語。表示“我為能幫助別人而自豪?！盵亮點詞匯]①pocketmoney零花錢②awasteofmone浪費金錢③feltsorryfor感到抱歉

④gaveaway捐贈[高分句型]①Oneday,ourteachertoldusinsomeplacesintheworld,thereweremanypoorchildrenandtheydidn’thaveenoughclothesandfood.（therebe句型）②Fromthenon,Igaveawaymypocketmoneytoanorganizationtohelpchildren.（tohelpchildren.做目的狀語）③Thismakesmefeelveryhappy.（makesb.dosth.讓某人做某事）（三）3．假如你是Helen，你在某個圖書館的網(wǎng)站上看到了招收志愿者的公告，想申請成為其中一員。請你根據(jù)下面的要點提示并結(jié)合自己的實際情況，寫一封申請郵件。提示：1.Whatkindofvolunteerworkdoyouwanttodo?2.Canyoudotheworkwell?3.Whydoyouwanttodothevolunteerwork?4.Whenareyoufreetodothework?要求：1.短文應(yīng)包括以上要點，可適當發(fā)揮，以使行文通順、連貫；2.詞數(shù)：80左右（郵件的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)）。DearSirorMadam,_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

I’mlookingforwardtoyourreply.Yours,Helen【答案】參考范文DearSirorMadam,I’dliketovolunteerasastudenthelperinthelibrary.Inmyfreetime,Ilovereadingallkindsofbooks.I’malsogoodatChineseandEnglish.IthinkIcandotheworkwell.Iwanttohelpstudentslearnabouttheimportanceofreadingbecauseitmakespeoplesmart.IcanalsodowhatIlovetodoandhelpothersatthesametime.I’malwaysfreeonweekends,soI’llbeabletovolunteerthereontime.I’mlookingforwardtoyourreply.Yours,Helen【詳解】1.題干解讀：這是一篇電子郵件寫作。主要是表達自己想要參加志愿者項目的愿望，題干中給出了寫作要點，寫作時不要遺漏，可適當增加細節(jié)。2.寫作指導：要求是一封申請郵件，應(yīng)用書信格式。時態(tài)：一般現(xiàn)在時；人稱：第一人稱。首先描述自己想要做的志愿者工作以及自己做這份工作的優(yōu)勢；然后描述自己對于志愿者工作的理解；最后告知可以做志愿者工作的時間。寫作時要圍繞主題靈活運用不同的短語和句式使文章層次清晰、邏輯清楚。（四）4．第十九屆亞運會即將在杭州市舉辦。亞組委正向全社會招聘志愿者。假如你叫李華，你對此很感興趣，寫一封電子郵件應(yīng)聘。要求：1.樂于為國際友人服務(wù)；2.掌握豐富的文化知識，既是服務(wù)人員，也是文化的使者；3.具有流利的英語表達能力，能做好溝通工作。參考詞匯：第19屆亞運會the19thAsianGames；使者carrier；要求：1.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實姓名、校名或地名；2.語言通順，意思連貫，書寫工整；3.詞數(shù)在100左右。文章開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。DearSirorMadam,Thankyouforreadingmyletter.Astheingofthe19thAsianGames,________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________YoursLiHua【答案】參考例文：DearSirorMadam,Thankyouforreadingmyletter.Astheingofthe19thAsianGames,I’dlikeverymuchtobeavolunteer.MynameisLiHua.I’mgoodatEnglishandArabic.MyspokenEnglishissogoodthatIhavenodifficultymunicatingwithvisitors.Iamalwaysreadytohelpothers.Iamgladtoprovidethebestserviceforathletesandvisitorsduringthegames.Icanleadtheathletestodifferentplaceseasily.Besides,IhavearichknowledgeofChinesehistory,soIamnotonlyavolunteerbutalsoacarrierofChineseculture.I’mlookingforwardtoyourreply.IhopeIcanplayaroleinmakingourcitymorebeautifulandlively.Yours,LiHua【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一封電子郵件；②時態(tài)：時態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時”；③提示：根據(jù)所給提示完成寫作，注意標點符號及大小寫等問題，不要犯語法錯誤。注意上下文之間的邏輯關(guān)系，語意連貫。[寫作步驟]第一步，介紹寫信的目的——想成為一名志愿者；第二步，具體介紹自己的優(yōu)勢；第三步，最后期待能得到這次做志愿者的機會。[亮點詞匯]①begoodat擅長于②havenodifficultydoingsth做某事沒有困難③notonly...butalso...不僅……而且……[高分句型]①MyspokenEnglishissogoodthatIhavenodifficultymunicatingwithvisitors.（結(jié)果狀語從句）②IhopeIcanplayaroleinmakingourcitymorebeautifulandlively.（賓語從句）（五）5．假如你是李欣，一名英國交換生Judy向你咨詢你校關(guān)于志愿活動的事情，請根據(jù)以下內(nèi)容提示給Judy寫一封郵件，介紹你校的志愿活動。內(nèi)容提示：Whatvolunteeringactivitiesdoyouhaveinyourschool?Whendoyouusuallydovolunteeringwork?Howtojointhevolunteeringactivities?Somethingmoreaboutthevolunteering.注意：文中不得透露個人真實信息；詞數(shù)60—80；開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。Hi,Judy!I’mlookingforwardtoyourexchangevisit._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Hopethishelpsandseeyousoon!Love,LiXin【答案】例文Hi,Judy!

I’mlookingforwardtoyourexchangevisit.Thereareallkindsofvolunteeringactivitiesinmyschool.Letmeintroducesomeofthem.

Wecancollectrubbishinthecitypark.WecanalsohelpthechildrenwhoareinChildren’sHospitalandcheerthemup.Besides,wecandovolunteerworkintheOldPeople’sHome.Iusuallychoosetohelpthesickchildren,becauseIliketostaywiththem.Also,Icangetonwellwithchildren.Ifyouwanttojointhesevolunteeringactivities,youcansendanemailtoschoolstudents’union.Weusuallydotheseactivitiesattheweekends.Ithinkyoucangetalotbydoingvolunteeringwork.Hopethishelpsandseeyousoon!Love,LiXin【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇應(yīng)用文，為電子郵件；②時態(tài)：時態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時”；③提示：寫作要點已給出，考生應(yīng)注意不要遺漏，適當增加細節(jié)完整表述內(nèi)容。[寫作步驟]第一步，引出本文主題；第二步，介紹學校有哪些志愿活動，自己通常參加哪種志愿活動以及如何加入志愿活動；第三步，表達希望。[亮點詞匯]①lookforwardto期待②allkindsof各種各樣的③getonwellwith與……和睦相處[高分句型]①Letmeintroducesomeofthem.（祈使句）②WecanalsohelpthechildrenwhoareinChildren’sHospitalandcheerthemup.（who引導的定語從句）（六）6．假如你是李華，你參加了學校團委上周六組織的“用行動溫暖世界”(Actsmaketheworldwarm)的志愿者活動。請你根據(jù)以下表格信息，給你的筆友John寫一封電子郵件活動地點街道、社區(qū)……至少補充兩項)活動內(nèi)容清潔街道；分發(fā)環(huán)保廣告……(至少補充兩項)活動的感受勞累但……參考詞匯：street,neighborhood,clean,tiredbuthappy,……要求：1.可選擇使用參考詞匯，亦可適當發(fā)揮；2.語句通順，意思連貫；3.文中不得出現(xiàn)任何真實信息(姓名、校名和地名等)；4.詞數(shù)：不少于70詞。(開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，但不計入總詞數(shù))DearJohn,Longtimenosee!Letmetellyousomethingmeaningfulrecentlyinmylife.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________I’mlookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.Yours,LiHua【答案】例文：DearJohn,Longtimenosee!Letmetellyousomethingmeaningfulrecentlyinmylife.LastSaturday,Itookpartinavolunteeringactivity“Actsmaketheworldwarm”organizedbymyschool.Thevolunteerswenttothestreets,neighborhoods,hospitalsandoldpeople’shometodothevolunteeractivities.Someofuscleanedupstreets.Somehandedoutenvironmentaladvertisements.Somereadstoriestothesickchildreninhospital.Othersofferedtheirhelpinthebusstation.Itookpartinthevolunteeractivityattheoldpeople’shome.Ihelpedthemwashclothesandcleanrooms.Ialsosangsongstotheoldpeopletomakethemhappy.Whenwefinishedthework,wewereverytiredbutfeltveryhappyatthesametime.I’mlookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.

Yours,

LiHua【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇材料作文；②時態(tài)：時態(tài)為“一般過去時”；③提示：根據(jù)所給提示完成寫作，注意標點符號及大小寫等問題，不要犯語法錯誤。注意上下文之間的邏輯關(guān)系，語意連貫。[寫作步驟]第一步，問候?qū)Ψ讲⑻岢鲆o對方介紹自己的一次有意義的活動（題目已給出）；第二步，具體介紹自己的一次志愿者的經(jīng)歷，包括活動的地點、內(nèi)容以及自己的感受；第三步，最后期待對方的回復。[亮點詞匯]①takepartin參加②cleanup打掃③atthesametime同時[高分句型]①Whenwefinishedthework,wewereverytiredbutfeltveryhappyatthesametime.（when引導的時間狀語從句）②Ialsosangsongstotheoldpeopletomakethemhappy.（不定式作目的狀語）（七）7．假如你是李華，你和學校的志愿者最近開展了一次志愿活動，你的英國筆友Mike來信問及此事，請你根據(jù)以下要點用英文給他寫封電子郵件。要點如下：1.時間和地點：5月22日，敬老院；2.參與人員：學校的志愿者；3.活動：送鮮花水果，打掃衛(wèi)生等；4.收獲：懂得關(guān)愛老人，團隊合作。注意：1.詞數(shù)80～100；2.可適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫；3.郵件的開頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)。參考詞匯：OldPeople’sHome敬老院DearMike,Thankyouforyourlastemail.Nowletmetellyouwhatwedidinourlastschoolactivity.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Doyouhaveanyvolunteerwork?I’mlookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.Yours,LiHua【答案】例文DearMike,Thankyouforyourlastemail.Nowletmetellyouwhatwedidinourlastschoolactivity.OurschoolvolunteerswenttotheOldPeople’sHomeonMay22nd.Wegavethemflowersandfruits.Wealsohelpedthemcleanup.Somestudentsalsogavethemperformancestomakethemhappy.Throughthisactivity,Iunderstandthatweshouldcarefortheelderlyandworktogetherasateam.Ifweallgivealittlelove,theworldwillbebetter.Doyouhaveanyvolunteerwork?I’mlookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.Yours,LiHua【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇應(yīng)用文，為電子郵件；②時態(tài)：時態(tài)為“一般過去時”；③提示：寫作要點已給出，考生應(yīng)注意不要遺漏提示，并適當添加細節(jié)，突出寫作重點。[寫作步驟]第一步，介紹時間和地點：5月22日，敬老院。第二步，介紹參與人員：學校的志愿者。第三步，介紹活動：送鮮花水果，打掃衛(wèi)生等。第四步，介紹收獲：懂得關(guān)愛老人，團隊合作。[亮點詞匯]①cleanup清理②carefor關(guān)心③lookingforwardto盼望[高分句型]①Somestudentsalsogavethemperformancestomakethemhappy.（tomakethemhappy.動詞不定式作目的狀語）②Throughthisactivity,Iunderstandthatweshouldcarefortheelderlyandworktogetherasateam.（that引導的賓語從句）③Ifweallgivealittlelove,theworldwillbebetter.（if引導的條件狀語從句）（八）8．假如你是李華，長春市圖書館英文圖書室正招募志愿者。你想申請做志愿者，請根據(jù)以下要點和要求，用英語給負責人格林先生寫一封不少于40詞的申請書。要點：1.本人15歲，來自第一中學；2.擅長說英語，溝通能力強；3.可以幫助讀者介紹英文書籍、打掃衛(wèi)生等。要求：要點齊全；表述通順；簡潔得體。DearMr.Green,_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【答案】例文1DearMr.Green,IwouldliketobeavolunteerinthelibrarybecauseIlikemunicatingwithothers.I’m15yearsold.I’mstudyingatNo.1MiddleSchool.I’mgoodatspeakingEnglish.IcanalsohelptointroduceEnglishbookstothereaders.I’mwillingtocleanthelibrary.Thankyouforyourkindnessandconsideration.Yours,LiHua例文2DearMr.Green,Iwanttobeavolunteerforthelibrary.I’ma15yearoldgirlfromNo.1MiddleSchool.I’mfondoftalkingwithothersandIdowellinspeakingEnglish.IcanhelptocleanthelibraryandintroduceEnglishbookstothereaders.IbelieveIcandoit.I’mlookingforwardtoyourreply.Yours,LiHua【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇應(yīng)用文；②時態(tài)：時態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時”；③提示：寫作要點已給出，考生應(yīng)注意不要遺漏信息提示的內(nèi)容，適當增加細節(jié)，并且突出寫作的要點。[寫作步驟]第一步，表明寫作意圖。直接說明想要申請做志愿者；第二步，具體闡述寫作內(nèi)容。介紹自己，重點說明你的優(yōu)勢；第三步，書寫結(jié)語。希望能被錄用。[亮點詞匯]①wouldliketobe想要成為②begoodat擅長③consideration考慮④befondof喜愛⑤lookingforwardto期待[高分句型]①IwouldliketobeavolunteerinthelibrarybecauseIlikemunicatingwithothers.（原因狀語從句）②IcanhelptocleanthelibraryandintroduceEnglishbookstothereaders.（動詞短語并列）（九）9．學校學生會正在招募“手拉手”活動的志愿者，為外國來訪學生展示傳統(tǒng)手工制作（例如剪紙、風箏、燈籠等），以弘揚中華傳統(tǒng)文化。假如你是李欣，請你用英文給學校學生會寫一封自薦信，在信中說明你申請成為志愿者的理由以及你會做什么。內(nèi)容提示：（1）Whywouldyouliketobeavolunteer?（2）WhatdoyouthinkoftraditionalChineseculture?（3）Whatcanyoudoasavolunteer?（4）Somethingyou’velearnedfromvolunteerexperience.注意：文中不得透露個人真實信息；詞數(shù)60﹣80；文中已給出內(nèi)容不計入總數(shù)。DearSir/Madam,Learningthatthestudentunionislookingforvolunteers,I’mwritingtoapplytobeeavolunteer._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________I’mlookingforwardtoyourearlyreply!Yours,LiXin【答案】例文：DearSir/Madam,Learningthatthestudentunionislookingforvolunteers,I’mwritingtoapplytobeeavolunteer.IamLiXin,aboyfromClass2,Grade9.IhavebeenavolunteersinceIwasamiddleschoolstudent.Ihavelearnedalotfrommyvolunteerwork.Forexample,Iknowhowtomunicatewellwithothers.ThereasonwhyIwanttobeavolunteerofyourprogramisthatIloveChinesecultureverymuchandIwanttospreadChineseculture.Besides,MyEnglishisverygood,soIcanmunicatewiththemveryeasily.IthinktraditionalChinesecultureisimportantanduseful.Iamgoingtoshowthetraditionalhandicraft,suchaspapercutting,kites,lanternsandsoontospreadthetraditionalChineseculture.IfIhavethechance,Icanmakevideostotellinternationalstudentsthehistoryofkitesandteachthemtomakekites.I’msuretheywillbeveryinterestedinit.I’mlookingforwardtoyourreply!Yours,LiXin【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一封信件；②時態(tài)：時態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時”；③提示：寫作要點已給出，注意不要遺漏要點，可適當添加細節(jié)，并突出寫作重點。[寫作步驟]第一步，表明寫作意圖。表明自己寫信是為了推薦自己做一名志愿者；第二步，具體闡述寫作內(nèi)容。從“原因、對于中國傳統(tǒng)文化的看法以及作為一名志愿者會怎么做”具體闡述；第三步，書寫結(jié)語。表達自己的期待。[亮點詞匯]①lookfor尋找②municatewith與……交流③beinterestedin對……感興趣[高分句型]①ThereasonwhyIwanttobeavolunteerofyourprogramisthatIloveChinesecultureverymuchandIwanttospreadChineseculture.（why引導的原因狀語從句）②IfIhavethechance,Icanmakevideostotellinternationalstudentsthehistoryofkitesandteachthemtomakekites.（if引導的條件狀語從句）（十）10．成都將于今年夏天舉行世界大學生運動會，隨著時間的日益臨近，大動會主辦方于近日開啟了志愿者招募工作。你是一名即將畢業(yè)的初三學生，很想成為一名大運會志愿者。請你根據(jù)所給提示，用英語給大運會組委會相關(guān)負責人Jordan先生寫一封申請信。注意：1.須全面反映表格中信息；2.文中不能出現(xiàn)真實的學校和姓名；3.詞數(shù)：100左右。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：DearJordan,

IlearnfromtheInternetthattheWorldUniversityGameswillbeheldintheChengduwhereIlive.Iwouldliketoworkasvolunteerforit.I’maboyof15yearsoldfromamiddleschool.MyspokenEnglishisgoodandIcanmunicatewith