專題12難點題型（4）書面表達-2023年中考英語一輪復(fù)習(xí)

專題12難點題型（4）書面表達考點題型特點注意點書面表達該題型分值有15分/20分/25分這三個分?jǐn)?shù)段，要求考生寫出符合題目要求的一篇文章。做書面表達的題時要注意審題，審清楚文章的題材、時態(tài)和人稱以及要求寫的字?jǐn)?shù)范圍。寫完后需要認(rèn)真檢查單詞的拼寫，標(biāo)點符號以及內(nèi)容是否完整，有沒有遺漏要點。一、書面表達“換詞法”二、書面表達“換句法”考向一：書面表達“換詞法”變化原則1：make

更有feel

原句：After

doing

sports,

I

feel

relaxed.

改寫：It

makes

me

feel

relaxed

to

do

sports.

I

made

a

progress

in

English.

I

feel

proud.

It

makes

me

feel

proud

to

make

a

progress

in

English.

變化原則2：連詞不再用and

增補

not

only…but

also…,

as

well

as…

進階

what’s

more/worse

,

furthermore

轉(zhuǎn)折

while,

however

變化原則3：喜歡不再like改成用be

fond

of,

enjoy,

be

crazy

about

I

am

fond

of

reading

books.

變化原則4：凡是提出措施盡量不用should用“besupposedtodo”

、“had

better”、“have

no

choice

buttodo

”、

“It’s

our

duty

to

do”

2022年鎮(zhèn)江市中考英語書面表達真題七、書面表達(共1題;滿分15分)66.假如你是李華，看到某英語報社將要組織的勞動體驗和體育鍛煉夏令營活動的宣傳。請用英語給編輯寫一封信，談一談你更想?yún)⑴c的一種活動及理由，并對你選擇的活動提出建議。要求：1.所寫內(nèi)容必須包括一種活動的所有信息，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮;2.對你所選擇的活動說明理由，并對其提出建議;3.文章不少于90詞，開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù);4.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的姓名、校名等信息。DearSir/Madam,Thanksforofferingsuchmeaningfulcamps.Iprefer____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【答案】DearSir/Madam,Thanksforofferingsuchmeaningfulcamps.IpreferlivingskillstrainingbecauseallthelivingskillsIwillgetduringtheprocesswillbeofgreatvaluetomylaterlife.Thelivingskillstrainingwillbeonafarm.There,Icanlivewithlocalpeoplewhowillhelpmelearnmoreabouttheircustomsandlifestyles.Moreover,whatmakesmeinterestedisthatIcancookbymyself.Inthesummercamp,Icantakepartinactivitiesonthefarmsuchasfeedinganimalsandpickingfruit.Ialsohavesomeadviceforyou.Ihopetherewillbemoreactivitieslikegrowingplantsandvegetables.IhopeIwillenjoymyselfonthefarm.Yours,LiHua【解析】本文屬于書信作文寫作，要求根據(jù)提示要點內(nèi)容給報社編輯寫一封信，談?wù)勀銜x擇的夏令營活動項目及選擇的理由，并對活動提出建議。本文主要采用第一人稱單數(shù)來寫，時態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時為主，一般將來時為輔。寫作時承接短文開頭，即直接說明選擇的活動項目以及總體原因，作為信件的第一段；第二段根據(jù)提示要點依次說明選擇此項目的具體原因；第三段對此項目提出一兩個建議并結(jié)尾。具體原因的闡述為本文重點，寫作時應(yīng)巧妙運用銜接語言，使列舉原因更有條理，更清晰易懂。2022年常州市中考英語書面表達真題七、書面表達(共1題;滿分15分)57.某中學(xué)生英文報YourVoice欄目中有如下征文通知，請你寫篇英語文章投稿，談?wù)勀愕南敕āt’snotveryeasyforteenagerstomaketruefriends.Someofthemmakefriendsbyfollowingsuit(隨大流).Thatmeanstheydothesameastheirfriends,suchasplayingonlinegamesorsayingbadwordsbehindothers,althoughthey’renotwillingto.Shareyourideasaboutthetopic.1.Isitwisetofollowsuitinordertomakefriends?2.Howcanteenagersmaketruefriends?Don’tforgettosupportyourideaswithyourexperienceasanexample.注意：1.文中不得出現(xiàn)你的真實姓名和學(xué)校名稱；2.詞數(shù)100左右；文章的開頭已為你寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)。Iwanttosharemyideasaboutthetopic._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Iwanttosharemyideasaboutthetopic.Inmyopinion,makingfriendsbyfollowingsuitisnotwise.Becauseeveryoneisanindividual,withhisowninterestsandpersonality.Sodon’tfollowthecrowdandjustdowhatotherpeopleliketodo.Weshouldmakefriendswiththosewhocangiveushelpandshareourhappinessandsadness.Tomaketruefriends,youmustbefriendlytoothers.Smileatothersandyouwillgetasmileinreturn.Youcanmakefriendswiththosewhosharethesameinterestwithyouorthosewhoaretotallydifferentfromyou.Trytohelpyourfriendswhentheyareintroublebecauseafriendinneedisafriendindeed.【解析】本文是一篇材料作文。要求以“交友”為話題，結(jié)合提示內(nèi)容進行寫作。注意要點齊全，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。寫作時要以第一、第二人稱來行文，時態(tài)用一般現(xiàn)在時。作文可分為三段，第一段引出話題；第二段介紹自己認(rèn)為為了交朋友而跟風(fēng)是否是明智的；第三段介紹青少年怎樣才能交到真正的朋友。要保證語言連貫，無語法和拼寫錯誤?？枷蚨簳姹磉_“換句法”原則1：表達觀點要“自我”

In

my

opinion,

we

should

pay

much

more

attention

on

the

weak

subjects!

原則2：兩句之間要過渡

I

left

my

pen

at

home.

What

was

worse,

the

drugstore

was

closed

that

day.

原則3：凡是問題闡述用形容詞句型！！

普通級句型The

environment

is

bad.

比較級句型

The

environment

is

getting

much

worse

than

before.

The

environment

is

getting

worse

and

worse

最高級句型

I

have

never

seen

the

worse

environment

.

原則4：表達作用多用it句式

…is

a

…way

to…

閱讀能幫助我放松自己。Reading

is

a

good

way

to

relax

myself.

看電影能幫助我們學(xué)習(xí)英語。Watching

movies

is

a

wonderful

way

to

learn

English.

原則5：增強情感轉(zhuǎn)感嘆

閱讀對我們很有益.

How

beneficial

it

is

for

us

to

read！

作運動對學(xué)生很重要.

How

important

it

is

for

students

to

do

sports.

原則6：事情到感情句型It

makes

sb.

feel

…

that

…

I

was

very

happy

that

I

got

an

A

in

English

last

term.

It

makes

me

feel

happy

that

I

got

an

A

in

English

last

term.

原則7：形容詞句型升級：it

is

one

of

the

most

…

It

was

an

unusual

experience

in

my

life.

It

was

one

of

the

most

unusual

experience

in

my

life.

原則8：活用there

be結(jié)合定從Many

reasons

made

me

like

reading.

There

are

many

reasons

why

I

enjoy

reading原則9：列舉式結(jié)構(gòu)First

of

all,

secondly,

besides,

what's

more,

last

but

not

leastFor

one

thing,

..............For

another,

............Oneonehand,........Ontheotherhand,...........2022年泰州市中考英語書面表達真題八、書面表達（滿分20分）78.我們在變化中成長，成長讓我們的人生充滿意義?；厥兹瓿踔袝r光，我們在學(xué)習(xí)、思想、性格、生活等方面發(fā)生了很多變化。你所在學(xué)校公眾號的英語寫作欄目正在開展“我的成長”征文活動，請分享你初中三年中的成長故事，具體講述其中一個變化。要點如下：1.變化是什么？2.變化過程是什么？3.你從中得到了什么啟發(fā)？要求：1.必須含有所有要點，并適當(dāng)拓展；2.不得出現(xiàn)真實的人名、校名、地名等相關(guān)信息；3.詞數(shù)100左右。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Wegrowupinchange.Growthmakesourlifefullofmeaning.Lookingbackonthethreeyearsofjuniorhighschool,Ihaveexperiencedmanychangesinmystudy,thoughts,personality,lifeandsoon.ThebiggestpersonalchangeI’veevermadeisthatIhavefalleninlovewithreading.WhenIwasachild,Ididn’tenjoybooksatall.Later,mymotheralwaysreadstoriesformeandboughtmebooks.Gradually,Ibegantolovereading.Whilereading,Ifeelliketalkingwithawiseman.Readingisalsoafantasticwaytoenjoymyfreetime.Booksaremyfriends.Andtheywillbenefitmealot.【解析】本文是一篇材料作文。要求根據(jù)提示問題，分享自己初中生活以來的一個變化，注意要點齊全，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。寫作時要以第一人稱來行文，時態(tài)綜合使用一般現(xiàn)在時、一般過去時和現(xiàn)在完成時。作文可分為三段，第一段介紹變化是什么；第二段介紹變化過程是什么；第三段介紹從中得到了什么啟發(fā)。要保證語言連貫，無語法和拼寫錯誤。2022年徐州市中考英語書面表達真題六、書面表達（滿分20分）71.你校在課后服務(wù)活動中，根據(jù)學(xué)生的需求開設(shè)了豐富多彩的課程（見下表）。你選修了其中的一門，收獲頗豐。你校英文報正在組織題為“Meandmyafterclasscourse”的征文活動，請你寫一篇短文投稿，內(nèi)容包括：1.你選修的課程；2.你學(xué)習(xí)該課程的經(jīng)歷；3.你的收獲及感受。①運動（Sports）②閱讀（Reading）③手工（DIY）④繪畫（Painting）⑤聲樂（Singing）⑥……（自擬）注意：1.詞數(shù)90左右；2.短文中不得泄露個人信息；3.請按照如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。MeandmyafterclasscourseInmyschool,therearemanykindsofafterclasscourses.Ichoose____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】MeandmyafterclasscourseInmyschool,therearemanykindsofafterclasscourses.IchoosethecourseofDIY.DIYliterallymeansmakingthingsbyhand.Myfirstassignmentwastousethecoloredbubblemudmonlyusedbyprimaryschoolstudentsnow,pasteacoloredblessingonthesmallboard,andthenmakeaframewithcoloredwool.BecauseIthinkeveryonehasadifferentunderstandingofhappiness.ImadeawordFuintocolor.It’squiteatestofaperson’spatiencetodosomesimplehandicrafts,suchascrossstitch,foldingthousandpapercrane...Throughthisstudy,Ilearnedthatwecanmakehandmadeinmanyways.Wastebeveragebottles,wool,icecreamsticksandsooncanbeerawmaterialsforhandmade.Wecancreateourownsatisfactoryworksthroughourownimagination.【解析】本文是一篇材料作文。以“Meandmyafterclasscourse”為主題，結(jié)合所給要點提示寫一篇作文。本文時態(tài)采用一般現(xiàn)在時和一般過去時行文；人稱以第一人稱和第三人稱為主。寫作時先從表格里選擇一個課外課程，之后再根據(jù)三個要點展開敘述。文章要確保語句通順，無單詞語法錯誤。第一篇：書面表達（滿分15分）71.4月23日是第26個世界讀書日。讀書使我快樂，讀書使我明智，讀書使我……請根據(jù)以下提示信息，以“ReadingMakesMe________”為題，寫一篇英文小短文談?wù)勀愕淖龇ê透惺堋hatdoyouusuallyread?Whatgoodreadinghabitsdoyouhave?Howdoyoufeelaboutreading?Howhaveyouchangedafterreading?1.參考提示內(nèi)容，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；2.語句通順、意思連貫，書寫工整；3.文中不得出現(xiàn)你的任何真實信息；(姓名、校名和地名等)4.詞數(shù)不少于70。(開頭已給出，但不計入總詞數(shù))ReadingMakesMe________Readingisalifelongjourneyandplaysanimportantroleinourlife._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】ReadingMakesMeLiveaMeaningfulLifeReadingisalifelongjourneyandplaysanimportantroleinourlife.Itcannotonlyopenourminds,butalsomakeusgetmoreusefulknowledgethatwecan’tlearnfromschoolbooks.Ioftenreadbooksabouthistoryandsomeinterestingnovelsinmyfreetime.ThemoreIread,themorethoughtfulIwillbe.Ididn’tusetoreadbefore.Ispentmuchtimeinlisteningtomusic,watchingTVorplayinggames.FinallyIrealizeditwasbadforme,soItookupreading.Readinghasmademylifecolorfulandmeaningful.Ireadbooksatleastthreetimesaweeknow.Let’sstartreadingnow.Andletitbeeapartofourlife!【解析】1.題干解讀：該題目是寫一篇記敘文，講述自己在閱讀中的做法和感受，要求要參考提示內(nèi)容，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。2.寫作指導(dǎo)：本文要采用第一人稱來敘述；時態(tài)上用一般現(xiàn)在時。寫作時要適當(dāng)使用一些副詞和連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系，結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，表達具有條理性。第二篇:書面表達（本大題共20分）65.2022年立春，北京冬奧會如約而至。在這個世界共襄的冰雪盛會，有人成功了也有人失敗了。勝敗乃兵家常事，體育競技場亦是如此。那么，對于你來說，成長過程中是成功更能鼓舞士氣還是失敗更能激勵斗志？請你選擇一方面，寫一篇發(fā)言稿，陳述你的觀點并給出你的理由。以下信息為非限定性內(nèi)容，僅供參考。注意事項：1.發(fā)言稿須自擬，要求觀點明確、語句通順、意思連貫、符合題意；2.詞數(shù)在100個左右，發(fā)言稿的首尾已在答卷紙上給出，不計入總詞數(shù)；3.發(fā)言稿中不得使用真實的個人及學(xué)校信息；4.發(fā)言稿必須寫在答題卡指定的位置上。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Everyonewonderswhat’sbestforusteenagers,butnooneknowswhatthatis.Itmightbesucceeding,butitmightbefailing.Ithinkfailureteachesmore.Firstofall,failuremakespeoplepatient.IttookYuanLongpingandhisteamnearlytenyearstodevelopanewtypeofhybridrice.Secondly,we’llbeemodesttoothersbecauseofseeingourselvesclearly.J.K.Rowlingissuchanexample.SpudWebb’sstoryalsoshowswecandoalmostanythingifwenevergiveupworkingharder.Finally,failuregivesusadeepviewofthings.Thoughfailingtowinthethirdgold,YuzuruHanyuprovedthatoneofthegreatchallengesinlifeiswellbeingourselvesratherthanparingwithothers.Actually,bothsuccessandfailureareonlytwoleavesofthetree.Theprocessismoreimportantthantheresult.Justrememberwhatitisthatwehavelovedaboutthethinginthefirstplace.【解析】1.題干解讀：本文主要是討論成長過程中是成功更能鼓舞士氣還是失敗更能激勵斗志，要表達自己的觀點，可根據(jù)題干中的提示進行寫作，也可適當(dāng)增加細節(jié)。2.寫作指導(dǎo)：本文以一般現(xiàn)在時為主，人稱以第一人稱和第三人稱為主。第一段表明自己的觀點；第二段描述理由和舉例說明；最后一段進行總結(jié)。在介紹內(nèi)容時，力求語言準(zhǔn)確，內(nèi)容完整，保證行文連貫，條理清晰。2022年蘇州市中考英語書面表達真題第七部分書面表達（共1題；滿分25分）57.《蘇州日報》英文專刊以“Practicemakesperfect”為題向中學(xué)生開展征文活動，請你用英語寫一篇短文投稿，內(nèi)容包括：1.你對該諺語的理解；2.你生活中的一個事例（例如：運動、樂器、家務(wù)、學(xué)習(xí)等方面）；3.你的感悟，注意：1.詞數(shù)100，短文開頭已給出，不計人總詞數(shù)；2.內(nèi)容需涵蓋所有要點，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；3.文中不得出現(xiàn)與考生相關(guān)的真實校名和姓名等信息。PracticemakesperfectHaveyouheardofthesaying“practicemakesperfect”?Imean__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】PracticemakesperfectHaveyouheardofthesaying“practicemakesperfect”?Imeanthatweshouldpracticeunfamiliarthingsagainandagain.We’llbeabletoperformitperfectly.ThepracticeoflearningEnglishisagoodexample.WearenotlivinginanEnglishspeakingcountry.So,inordertolearnitwell,weneedextrapractice,suchasreadingEnglishbooks,goingtoEnglishcorners,ormunicatingwithforeigners.Youcan’tmasterEnglishjustbysittingatyourdesk.Asanotherexample,ifwewanttobeskilledinusingtheputer,wealsoneedtopracticeusingit.Somechildrenbeelittleexpertsinputer,justbecausetheyplaywithiteveryday.Onthecontrary,ifwejuststicktobooks,wewillstillfeelconfusedwhenusingputers.Judgingfromtheevidenceoffered,wemightsafelydrawtheconclusionthatpracticemakesperfect.【解析】本文是一篇材料作文。圍繞“熟能生巧”這句諺語展開描述。本文采用一般現(xiàn)在時，人稱第一人稱為主。分為兩段式：第一段引出主題，介紹自己對這句諺語的理解；第二段從學(xué)習(xí)英語以及學(xué)習(xí)使用電腦這兩個方面，解讀這句諺語。寫作時保持主謂一致性，做到無語法和標(biāo)點錯誤。2022年揚州市中考英語書面表達真題B.寫作（計20分）76.最近，你校開展了“巧手制書簽，書香滿校園”主題活動，請你以“ADIYbookmarkformyfavouritebook”為題，根據(jù)表格中的內(nèi)容提示寫一篇英語短文，向?qū)W校英文報的讀書專欄投稿，介紹制作書簽的目的和過程，并分享制作心得。Whyyoumadeithelpenjoyreadingyourfavouritebook（name,typeofbook,whatyoulikemost）HowyoumadeitMaterials&Tools●card●scissors,glue…Steps●cutthecardinto…●drawapictureof…●write（yourfavouritesentencefromthebookorafamoussayingor…）●…Howyoufelt…要求：（1）表達清楚，語法正確，上下文連貫；（2）必須包括提示中的所有信息，并按要求適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；（3）詞數(shù)：100詞左右（開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)）；（4）不得使用真實姓名、校名和地名等。ADIYbookmarkformyfavouritebookLastweekItookpartinourschool’sReading&Bookmarkmakingactivity.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】ADIYbookmarkformyfavouritebookLastweekItookpartinourschool’sReading&Bookmarkmakingactivity.Itspurposewastohelpusenjoyreadingourfavouritebook.MyfavoritebookistheclassicnovelJourneytotheWest,oneoftheFourGreatClassicalNovels.IlikeMonkeyKingbestbecausehehelpstheweakandnevergivesup.Inordertomakeabookmark,Ipreparedacard,scissors,glueandsoon.First,Icutthecardintolongstrips.AndthenIdrewapictureofamonkeyontheleftandwroteafamoussaying“Nothingisimpossibleifyouputyourheartintoit.”ontherighttoencouragemenottogiveupwhenfacingdifficulties.Atlast,Igluedittoathinpieceofwood.AlthoughImetsomedifficultiesinthisprocess,InevergaveupandIamproudofmyself.【解析】本文以“ADIYbookmarkformyfavouritebook”為題，并結(jié)合表格中的內(nèi)容，描述制作書簽的目的和過程，可適當(dāng)增加細節(jié)。本文以一般現(xiàn)在時和一般過去時為主；人稱以第一人稱為主。第一段介紹制作書簽的目的，以及最喜歡的書的類型和最喜歡這本書的什么地方；第二段重點描述制作書簽需要的材料和工具以及制作書簽的過程；第三段描述自己的感想。寫作時運用不同的句式和短語使文章層次清晰、邏輯清楚，做到無單詞拼寫和語法錯誤。2022年宿遷市中考英語書面表達真題六、書面表達（滿分15分）71.實施“雙減”政策，推行“陽光作業(yè)”，我們同學(xué)可以從繁重的課業(yè)負擔(dān)中解放出來，有更多的時間培養(yǎng)興趣愛好，陪伴家人、朋友。學(xué)校請你與學(xué)弟、學(xué)妹們分享如何合理安排課余生活，請根據(jù)下表提示完成一篇題為“Enjoystudy,enjoylife”的英語短文。Enjoystudy,enjoylife校園1.參加各種活動，如：繪畫、舞蹈等；2.多做運動，有益健康；3.……（補充一點）家庭1.暢說夢想，傾訴煩惱；2.幫做家務(wù)，學(xué)會一些生活技能；3.……（補充一點）注意事項：1.詞數(shù)90左右，開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)；2.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的地名、校名、人名等信息。Enjoystudy,enjoylifeBecauseofthe“doublereduction”policy,wehavemoretimetodowhatweliketoenjoystudyandlife.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Inaword,ifwespendourfreetimeproperly,wewillgetalotinbothbodyandmind.【答案】Enjoystudy,enjoylifeBecauseofthe“doublereduction”policy,wehavemoretimetodowhatweliketoenjoystudyandlife.Inschool,weshouldactivelyparticipateinvariousactivities,suchaspainting,dancing,football,etc.Throughthesesports,wecanmakeourbodieshealthierandstronger.Ifstudentshavedifficulties,weshouldalsoactivelyhelpthem.Athome,weshouldliveinpeacewithourparents.Weshouldtalkaboutourdreamswiththemandtalkaboutourtroublesintime.Letparentsknoweverythingaboutus.Withtheirsupport,wewillgettwicetheresultwithhalftheeffort.Atthesametime,weshouldalsohelpourparentsdosomehouseworkandlearnsomelifeskills.Ifyouareinabadmood,youcanlistentosomemusicordosomethingyoulike.Inaword,ifwespendourfreetimeproperly,wewillgetalotinbothbodyandmind.【解析】本文以“Enjoystudy,enjoylife”為題介紹如何合理安排課余生活，可適當(dāng)增加細節(jié)。本文以一般現(xiàn)在時為主，人稱以第一人稱為主。第一段已給出；第二段介紹在學(xué)校的安排；第三段描述在家里的生活。寫作時運用不同的句式和短語使文章層次清晰、邏輯清楚，做到無單詞拼寫和語法錯誤。2022年連云港市中考英語書面表達真題七、書面表達(共1小題;滿分25分)76.“雙減”之后,如何讓我們的暑假生活過得快樂而有意義?請你根據(jù)以下圖片及文字提示,以“HappySummerVacation"為題給校報英語專欄寫一篇短文,為同學(xué)們提供一些建議并說明理由。注意:(1)詞數(shù)90左右,短文開頭已給出,不計人總詞數(shù);(2)文中應(yīng)包括所給內(nèi)容要點，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，使文章連貫;(3)文中不得出現(xiàn)考生的真實姓名、校名等信息。HappySummerVacationThesummervacationising.Withmorefreetime,howcanwehaveahappyandmeaningfulvacation?Hereismyadvice.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Thesummervacationising.Withmorefreetime,howcanwehaveahappyandmeaningfulvacation?Hereismyadvice.First,wecandosomesports.Wecangorunningeverymorning.Itcanhelpuskeephealthy.Besides,wecandosomehouseworkathome.Itisnecessaryforustolearnsomelifeskillsandlookafterourselves.What’smore,weneedtoreadsomebooks.Readinghelpsimproveourknowledgeandopensupawholenewweoldtous.Wecanalsojoinsomeclubs,suchastheSingingClubortheDancingClub.Itcanhelpusdevelophobbies.Ihopeyoucanhaveacolourfulvacation.【解析】本文以“HappySummerVacation”為題介紹如何讓我們的暑假生活過得快樂而有意義，文章可適當(dāng)增加細節(jié)。本文以一般現(xiàn)在時為主，人稱以第一人稱為主。第一段已給出；第二段介紹假期可以如何度過的方式以及各自的理由；第三段表達期待大家都能有一個愉快的假期。寫作時運用不同的句式和短語使文章層次清晰、邏輯清楚，做到無單詞拼寫和語法錯誤。2022年無錫市中考英語書面表達真題八、書面表達（本大題共20分）生命中總有一些值得我們感恩的人。最近，無錫教育電視臺將舉辦題為“ThePersonIWanttoThank”的英語演講比賽。假如你想感謝身邊某位對你有影響的人(父/母親、老師、朋友……),請根據(jù)以下流程圖寫一篇英文演講稿參加比賽。Influence(...)ExperienceInfluence(...)Experience(example/story)Introduction(looks;personalities;...)注意事項：演講稿須根據(jù)流程圖自擬，要求語句通順、意思連貫、符合題意；流程圖中括號部分為非限定性內(nèi)容，僅供參考；詞數(shù)在100個左右，演講稿的首尾已在答題卡上給出，不計入總詞數(shù)；演講稿中不得使用真實的個人及學(xué)校信息；演講稿必須寫在答題卡指定的位置上。ThePersonIWanttoThank________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】ThePersonIWanttoThankInmylife,manypeoplehavehelpedmealot,butMissWangisoneofthemostimportantpersonsinmylife.Iwanttothankhermost.

MissWangismyEnglishteacher.Sheisbeautifulwithlonghair.

She’sverykindandoutgoing.Shelikestohelpwithothers.ShehashelpedmealotinlearningEnglish.Sheissoenergeticthatherclassesareveryinterestingandfunny.Sometimesshe’stoostrictwithus.Icouldn’tdowellinEnglishbefore.WithherhelpIstartedtotakemuchinterestinlearningEnglish.I’mgoodatEnglishnow.NotonlydidshehelpedmewithmyEnglish,shealsotaughtmehowtofacethetrouble.

Thankherforgivingmesomuchhelp.Iwillstudyharderandharder.【解析】文章屬于比較開放的話題作文寫作；文章主題是“我想感謝的人”，寫作時要緊扣主題；第一段指明我最想感謝的人是誰，并且要對他或她的容貌、性格進行介紹；第二段舉出我和他或她之間發(fā)生的具體值得感恩的事例；第三段敘述他或她對我的影響。文章采用三段式；用第一、三人稱來敘述；時態(tài)采用一般過去時和一般現(xiàn)在時；敘述情感要真切。（2022·江蘇揚州市江都區(qū)中考英語一模試題）寫作（計20分）76.家住揚州的大學(xué)生李華去年暑假成為了一名志愿者。近期疫情又在多地爆發(fā)，她所在外語學(xué)院正在舉辦一次以“抗擊疫情”為主題的征文活動，李華想把自己的經(jīng)歷寫成文章來投稿，假如你是李華，請根據(jù)以下內(nèi)容要點，給?？瘜懸黄恼?。WhoamI?1.李華2.十八周歲3.來自外語學(xué)院（SchoolofForeignlanguages）4.年輕有活力WhathaveIdonetohelp?1.在人們做核酸檢測時（donucleicacidtests）引導(dǎo)人們排隊。2.在人們居家隔離（quarantine）時，給人們送菜……3.……WhathaveIlearned?1.醫(yī)生，護士的艱辛。2.通過為別人服務(wù)來提升鍛煉了自己。3.……要求：（1）表達清楚，語法正確，上下文連貫；（2）必須包括表格中所有的要點內(nèi)容，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；（3）詞數(shù)100詞左右。（4）不得使用真實姓名，校名和地名。Workingasavolunteer________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】WorkingasavolunteerMynameisLiHua.I’m18yearsold.IamastudentfromSchoolofForeignlanguages.Iamyoungandactive.Lastsummer,Ibecameavolunteerandgainedalotofthings.Myvoluntaryworkwasleadingpeopleinlinewhentheyweredoingnucleicacidtests.AndIgavesomedailysupplieslikesvegetablestopeoplewhowereinquarantine.Ialsobroadcastedtheimportanceofepidemicprevention.Attheendofvolunteering,Ilearntalotofthingsfromdoctorsandnurses.Theyworkedveryhard.Theyusuallyworkedformanyhourswithoutrest.Buttheyneverplainedandgaveup.AndIalsolearnedtoexercisemyselfbyservingothers.Ialsohopethisepidemicwillendsoon.【解析】1.題干解讀：本文是一篇材料作文。圍繞自己曾經(jīng)的志愿經(jīng)歷寫一篇短文。2.寫作指導(dǎo)：本文采用一般過去時為主，人稱以第一人稱和第三人稱為主。分為兩段式：第一段介紹自己去年暑假的志愿經(jīng)歷；最后一段介紹自己的收獲。寫作時保持主謂一致性，做到無語法和標(biāo)點錯誤。（2022年南京市金陵中學(xué)中考英語一模試題）七、書面表達（滿分15分）76.疫情期間，同學(xué)們不得不在家上網(wǎng)課。針對網(wǎng)課，在學(xué)生調(diào)查中發(fā)現(xiàn)存在兩種不同觀點，請以IPrefertoStudyatSchool/atHome（選擇你贊同的一方面）為題寫一篇短文。一些學(xué)生認(rèn)為不用去學(xué)校理由：1.既節(jié)省路上時間又省了交通費用；2.有更多空余時間，可以在薄弱學(xué)科多下功夫另一些學(xué)生認(rèn)為有必要去學(xué)校理由：1.面對面交流學(xué)習(xí)效果更佳；2.和同學(xué)相處，樂趣很多我……理由：……（自擬至少2點）提示詞：網(wǎng)課onlinecourse新冠疫情coronaviruspandemic注意：1.內(nèi)容涵蓋要點，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，全文連貫通順；2.詞數(shù)90詞左右；3.文中不得提及有關(guān)考生個人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等。IPrefertoStudy______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】IPrefertoStudyatSchoolTobehonest,Iprefertostudyatschool.Iusedtothinkhowgreatitwouldbeifwecouldstudyathome.Wewouldn’thavetogetupsoearlyandwewouldhavemorefreetimetodoourownthings.However,thetruthisnotwhatIthought.Studyingathomeseemstobebusierthanatschool.Now,Ienjoystudyingatschool.First,Ithinkfacetofacemunicationisbetterforlearning.Second,it’sgoodforustostudywithclassmates.Wehavelotsofthingsinmonandwecansharethingswitheachotherandhelpeachother.Inaword,Ireallyhatestudyingonlineagain.Iguessmyclassmateswouldprefertostudyatschoollikeme.【解析】1.題干解讀：該題目是一篇材料作文。根據(jù)“IPrefertoStudyatSchool/atHome”來選擇一個自己贊同的一方并以此為題寫一篇短文。2.寫作指導(dǎo)：本文應(yīng)該用第一人稱來敘述故事內(nèi)容；時態(tài)采用一般過去時和一般現(xiàn)在時為主。第一段選擇贊同的觀點；第二段描述過去的想法；第三段講述自己為什么選擇這種觀點的理由；第四段進行總結(jié)。要保證語言連貫，無語法和拼寫錯誤。（常州溧陽市南渡初級中學(xué)2022年中考英語一模試題）七、書面表達（共1題,滿分15分）57.世界衛(wèi)生組織和聯(lián)合國兒童基金會將生活技能（lifeskills)作為全球青少年兒童發(fā)展的重要主題之一。請根據(jù)圖中提示寫一篇英語短文，描述作為青少年，應(yīng)該提高哪些及如何提高自己的生活技能。除了提示中的內(nèi)容，請你至少再補充一條。注意：1.文中不得出現(xiàn)你的真實處名和學(xué)校名稱：2.表達清楚，語句通順，意思連貫，書寫規(guī)范：3.詞數(shù)不少于100。文章的開頭已為你寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)。Lifeskillsarenecessaryforus.Whatlifeskillsshouldweteenagersdevelop?Andhow?Hereismyopinion.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Lifeskillsarenecessaryforus.Whatlifeskillsshouldweteenagersdevelop?Andhow?Hereismyopinion.First,weshouldtryourbesttokeephealthy.It’sagoodideatokeepabalanceddietandtakedailyexercise.Andbehappyeveryday.Second,workingwithothersisimportant.Sometimes,weneedtoworkasateam.Whenmunicatingwithothers,trytounderstandthem.Third,solveproblemsindifferentways.Weshouldbeabletofindoutthesolutionsaloneorwithothers.Besides,learntomanagetime.Wecanmakealistofthingsthatweneedtodoeverymorning.Getupearlyandneverbelateforschool.Finally,learnsomebasicskills,suchascooking.WecanaskourfamilyforhelporsearchtheInternet.Allinall,ifwetryourbesttoimprovetheselifeskills,wewillleadahappierandhealthierlife.【解析】1.題干解讀：本題為一篇材料作文。題目要求根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容寫一篇青少年應(yīng)該提高哪些生活技能及如何提高這些生活技能的短文，并適當(dāng)拓展。

2.寫作指導(dǎo)：本文時態(tài)應(yīng)為一般現(xiàn)在時，人稱以第一人稱為主。寫作時可采用經(jīng)典的三段式寫法：第一段引出主題；第二段論述青少年應(yīng)提高哪些生活技能以及如何提高這些生活技能，并拓展至少一條；最后一段總結(jié)概括。寫作時要保持主謂一致，