讀后續(xù)寫-愛的陪伴：幫助失明妻子重拾生活信心+講義 高三上學期第一次診斷性考試英語試題

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短文。Duetoamedicalmisdiagnosis(誤診),Susan,34,hadbeenleftsightless,andwassuddenlythrownintoaworldofdarkness,anger,frustrationandself-pity.Andallshehadtodependonwasherhusband,Mark.MarkwasanofficerandhelovedSusanwithallhisheart.Whenshefirstlosthersight,hewatchedhersinkintodespair.Hewasdeterminedtohelphiswifegainconfidencetobecomeindependentandreturntohernormallifeagain.Buthowwouldhedothat?Susanusedtotakethebustowork,butnowshewastoofrightenedtofacethewholeworld.MarkdecidedtoconvinceSusantotakethebusagain.Perhapsonedayshecouldenjoyacitytourallbyherselforbuysomedailygroceryinthesupermarketthreestopsaway.Butshewasstillsomoodyandsensitive.Howwouldshereact?Oneday,Marksummoneduphiscourageandsaid“Honey,lifeshallmoveon,let’strytakingthebusasthefirststep,OK?”Justashepredicted,Susanwasscaredattheideaoftakingthebusonherown.“I’mblind!”sherespondedbitterly.“HowamIsupposedtoknowwhereIamgoing?Ifeellikeyou’reabandoningme.”Mark’sheartbrokehearingthesewords,butheknewwhathadtobedone.HepromisedSusanhewouldridethebuswithheruntilshegotthehangofit.Andthatwasexactlywhathappened.Forawholeweek,MarkaccompaniedSusanonthebus.Hetaughtherhowtorelyonherothersenses,specificallyherhearing,todeterminewhereshewasandhowtoadapttohernewenvironment.Hehelpedherbefriendthebusdriverswhocouldwatchoutforher,andsaveheraseat.Finally,Susandecidedtotrythetriponherown.Markencouragedheranddecidedtocontinuewatchingoutforheruntilshegotoffthebus,onlyinsecret.注意：1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應為150左右；2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應位置作答。Withthehelpofherwalkingstick,sheslowlymadeittothebusstop._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Sheaskedthedriver,“WhydoyousaythatI’mverylucky?”__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________文章大意34歲的蘇珊因醫(yī)療誤診失明，陷入黑暗、憤怒、沮喪和自憐的情緒中，丈夫馬克全心全意地愛著她，決心幫助她重獲自信、獨立生活。馬克想讓蘇珊重新乘坐公交，蘇珊起初很抗拒，但馬克陪伴她一周，教她利用其他感官適應公交出行。最終蘇珊決定獨自嘗試，馬克則在暗中守護。這篇文章展現(xiàn)了夫妻間深厚的情感以及面對困難時的相互扶持，體現(xiàn)了愛的力量能幫助人克服恐懼、重新?lián)肀?。五要素分析人物：蘇珊（失明的妻子）、馬克（愛妻子的丈夫）環(huán)境：主要是公交站和公交車內(nèi)等日常出行環(huán)境情節(jié)：蘇珊失明后馬克幫助她克服對獨自乘坐公交的恐懼沖突：蘇珊因失明而恐懼獨自乘坐公交，與馬克希望她獨立的愿望產(chǎn)生沖突主題：愛與幫助能使人克服困難，重拾獨立和自信伏筆與回應伏筆：馬克決定暗中守護蘇珊。回應：司機提到有個男人每次都跟著蘇珊，讓蘇珊知道了馬克默默的守護。伏筆：馬克教蘇珊依靠其他感官出行?；貞禾K珊在獨自乘坐公交時利用聽力來判斷行程。續(xù)寫要點情感線：第一段：從蘇珊獨自乘車的緊張到成功下車后的自豪，再到得知馬克守護后的感動。第二段：延續(xù)感動之情，同時體現(xiàn)蘇珊對馬克愛的更深理解和對未來生活的積極態(tài)度。故事線：第一段：蘇珊順利乘車、下車的過程以及和司機的對話引出馬克的守護。第二段：蘇珊在知道真相后的心理活動和對未來生活的展望。主旨升華句Loveislikealighthouseinthedark,guidingustoovercomedifficulties.（愛是黑暗中的燈塔，指引我們克服困難。）Truelovenotonlyaccompaniesbutalsoempowersustofacethechallengesoflife.（真愛不僅陪伴我們，還賦予我們力量去面對生活的挑戰(zhàn)。）Thepoweroflovecanturnthemostdifficultjourneyintoabeautifuladventure.（愛的力量能把最艱難的旅程變成一場美麗的冒險。）Inthefaceofadversity,loveisthestrongestdrivingforceforustomoveforward.（在逆境面前，愛是我們前進的最強動力。）Lovegivesusthecouragetostepoutofthedarknessandembracethelightoflife.（愛給我們勇氣走出黑暗，擁抱生命之光。）寫作示范第一篇Withthehelpofherwalkingstick,sheslowlymadeittothebusstop.Shetookadeepbreath,tryingtocalmhernerves.Asthebuspulledup,shegotonwithasenseofdetermination.Onthebus,shefocusedonthesoundsaroundher,theengine'srumble,theannouncements.Whenshegotoffatherstop,shefeltahugesenseofaccomplishment.Sheaskedthedriver,“WhydoyousaythatI’mverylucky?”Thedriverreplied,“There'samanwho'sbeenfollowingyoueverytime.Hewatchesoveryoufromadistance.Youmustbeprecioustohim.”TearswelledupinSusan'seyes.SherealizedhowmuchMarklovedher.Fromthatdayon,shewasnolongerafraidoftheworld,forsheknewlovewasalwayswithher.第二篇Withthehelpofherwalkingstick,sheslowlymadeittothebusstop.Theworldaroundherwasasymphonyofsounds-thefootstepsofpassers-by,thehonkingofcars.Whenthebusarrived,shefeltherwayon.Duringtheride,sherememberedMark'swordsandfelthispresence.Whenshegotoff,shewasbeamingwithpride.Sheaskedthedriver,“WhydoyousaythatI’mverylucky?”Thedriversaid,“There'samanwho'sbeenshadowingyou.He'syourguardianangel.”Susanwasdeeplytouched.Inthatmoment,sheunderstoodthatlovewashereyesinthisdarkworld.WithMark'slove,shecouldconqueranyfearandembracelifeanew.Onepossibleversion:Paragraph1:Withthehelpofherwalkingstick,sheslowlymadeittothebusstop.Whenshewasstrugglingtogetonthebus,akidlentherahelpinghand.Somekindpassengersevenofferedtheirseatstoher.Shemanagedtositdown,sogratefulfortheassistanceofthewarm-heartedpeople.Shealsotriedtofeelthepositionoftheseatandpaidcloseattentiontotheannouncementsofthebusincaseshemissedherstop.Asshestoodupandwasabouttogetoffthe