新高考英語一輪復(fù)習(xí)講練測第30講 應(yīng)用文寫作之感謝信（練）（解析版）

第30講感謝信（模擬精練+真題演練）書面表達(dá)1．（2023·廣東佛山·統(tǒng)考二模）假定你是李華，你的英國筆友Alex已被香港大學(xué)錄取。請你寫郵件祝賀Alex，并請教如何申請入讀香港大學(xué)。注意：1．寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80左右；2．請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】DearAlex,I’mthrilledtohearthatyou’vebeenacceptedintotheUniversityofHongKong!Congratulationsonthiswonderfulachievement!IamsoproudofyouandIknowhowhardyouhaveworkedtomakeithappen.Meanwhile,Iwaswonderingifyoucouldsharesomeinsightsonhowyouwentaboutapplyingtotheuniversity.I’minterestedinknowingmoreabouttheprocesssinceI’mthinkingaboutthepossibilityofstudyingthere.Anytipsoradviceyoucouldofferwouldbegreatlyappreciated.Ihopethatyou’reexcitedforthisnewadventureandIwishyouallthebestforyourstudiesinHongKong.Pleasekeepintouchandletmeknowhoweverythingisgoing.Bestregards,LiHua【導(dǎo)語】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文，要求考生給英國筆友Alex寫封郵件，祝賀他被香港大學(xué)錄取，并請教如何申請入讀香港大學(xué)。【詳解】1.詞匯積累激動的：thrilled→excited與此同時(shí)：meanwhile→inthemeantime提供：offer→provide為……感到驕傲：beproudof→takepridein2.句式拓展同義句轉(zhuǎn)換原句：Anytipsoradviceyoucouldofferwouldbegreatlyappreciated.拓展句：Iwouldappreciateitifyoucouldoffermesometipsoradvice.【點(diǎn)睛】[高分句型1]I’mthrilledtohearthatyou’vebeenacceptedintotheUniversityofHongKong!(運(yùn)用了that引導(dǎo)的賓語從句)[高分句型2]Meanwhile,Iwaswonderingifyoucouldsharesomeinsightsonhowyouwentaboutapplyingtotheuniversity.(運(yùn)用了if引導(dǎo)的賓語從句和how引導(dǎo)的賓語從句)2．（2023年四川成都·高三石室中學(xué)測試）假定你是李華，得知你的朋友Frank被牛津大學(xué)(UniversityofOxford)錄取，請給他寫一封英文郵件，內(nèi)容包括：1.表示祝賀;2.贊揚(yáng)他的努力及對你的鼓舞;3.美好祝愿。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右;2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】DearFrank,Goodnewstravelsfast!PleaseacceptmyheartycongratulationonyourgraduationfromseniorschoolandadmissiontoUniversityofOxford.IknowhowhardyouhavebeenworkingtheseyearsandIamveryproudofyouforyoursuccess.Iamfirmlyconvincedthatitisyourhardworkthatcontributestoyoursuccesstoday.Justastheoldsayinggoes,“Nopains,nogains.”Itisarewardforyourdiligenceandpersistence.YoursuccessisalsoagreatencouragementtometostudyharderandIhopethatonedayIwillenterafamousuniversityjustlikeyou.Ibelieveitwillbeanewbeginningandachanceforyoutoembraceafullerlifeandpavethewayforabrilliantfuture.Allmybestwishesforanevenmoreprosperousfuture!Yours,LiHua3．（2023·重慶市萬州二高高三?？茧A段練習(xí)）假定你是李華，外教Smith邀請你本周日陪他去大明湖游玩，但你因故不能前往。請你寫一封電子郵件，內(nèi)容包括：1．感謝邀請;2．說明原因;3．另約時(shí)間。注意：1．寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80左右;2．請按格式在相應(yīng)位置作答。DearSmith,________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________YoursLiHua【答案】DearSmith,ThankyouforinvitingmetogotoDamingLakewithyouthisSunday.However,IamafraidthatIcouldnotmanageit,becausetherewillbeanimportanttestnextMonday.Withtonsofnotestogothrough,Icanhardlysqueezeanytimeforthetripthisweekend.Iwonderifitispossiblethatwerescheduleitforanothertime.WillnextSundaysuityou?Pleaseletmeknowwhetheryouareavailable.Ihopethiswillnotbringyoutoomuchinconvenience.Lookingforwardtoyourreply.4．（2023·四川綿陽·綿陽中學(xué)?？既＃┘俣闶抢钊A，上周末你受本校交換生David邀請一起外出騎行，請你給David發(fā)一封電子郵件，內(nèi)容包括：1.感謝邀請；2.騎行感想；3.下周末安排。注意：1.寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80左右；2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。DearDavid,___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【答案】DearDavid,Whatanunforgettablerideitwas!NowI’mwritingtoexpressmysinceregratitudeforinvitingmeandproposeaplanfornextweek.Tobefrank,what’sreallyremarkablewaspeople’sactiveinvolvementinbicycleriding,fromtheyoungpedalingwithplaymatestowell-equippedcyclistsracingonpavedlanes.Besides,itwasyourencouragingwordsthatinspiredmetoholdontothelast,withoutwhichIwouldhavesurrenderedhalfwayuptheslopes.Astoournexttrip,howaboutcampingatthenearbylakenextSaturdayifweatherpermits?Lookingforwardtoyourearliestreply.Yours,LiHua5．（2023·四川成都·成都外國語學(xué)校?？寄M預(yù)測）假如你是李津。你校最近要為高三畢業(yè)生舉行成人典禮，你作為學(xué)生代表，被要求在典禮上發(fā)言。請根據(jù)下列要點(diǎn)，寫一個(gè)發(fā)言稿。1、感謝父母的養(yǎng)育之恩、感謝老師的培養(yǎng)之情；2、表達(dá)努力學(xué)習(xí)，爭取好成績的決心；3、表達(dá)為社會、為國家承擔(dān)責(zé)任的意志。注意：1，詞數(shù)不少于100；2、可適當(dāng)加入細(xì)節(jié)，以使內(nèi)容充實(shí)、行文連貫；3、信的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。Goodmorning,ladiesandgentlemen,Iamgreatlyhonoredtospeakonbehalfofmyschoolmatesatthiscoming-of-ageceremony.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Thankyou.【答案】Goodmorning,ladiesandgentlemen,Iamgreatlyhonoredtospeakonbehalfofmyschoolmatesatthiscoming-of-ageceremony.Firstofall,let’sexpressourgratitudetobothourparentsandteachersforwhattheyhavedoneforustobringusup.Withouttheirsupportandlove,wewouldnotbeasgrown-upaswearetoday.Topayback,weshouldsparenoefforttoworkhardineverysubjectsothatwecanbeadmittedintoourdreamuniversities.Itgoeswithoutdoubtthatonlybyacquiringasmuchadvancedknowledgeaspossiblecanweshouldermoreresponsibilitiesnotonlyforthesocietybutalsoforthefutureofourcountry.Dearparentsandteachers,youwillbeproudofus.Thankyou.6．（2023·重慶萬州·重慶市萬州第二高級中學(xué)?？级＃┘俣闶抢钊A，最近收到了你的英國朋友Jacob的來信，得知他已被劍橋大學(xué)(theUniversityofCambridge)錄取。請你寫信向他表示祝賀，并就你在大學(xué)專業(yè)選擇上遇到的困惑征求他的意見。內(nèi)容包括：1.向Jacob表本祝賀；2.談?wù)勀阍诖髮W(xué)專業(yè)選擇上的困惑；3.向?qū)Ψ秸髑笠庖姾徒ㄗh。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】DearJacob,Howiseverythinggoing?I’mgladtoreceiveyourletterandknowyou’vebeenadmittedtotheUniversityofCambridge.I’mwritingtooffermywarmestcongratulations.Iamnowintheprocessofuniversityapplication,strugglingwithwhichmajortochoose.I’masciencestudentinhighschool,soI’msupposedtochoosemajorsrelatedtoscienceandengineering.ButtheproblemsarethatI’mnotsurewheremyinterestliesandwhichmajorshaveabrightprospectthatcanensuremeagoodjob.Doyouhaveanysuggestionsonthechoiceofamajor?Iwouldappreciateitifyoucouldshareyouropinionswithme.Lookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.Yours,LiHua7．（2023·天津市新華中學(xué)校考二模）假定你是李華。近期，你在上海參加了為期兩周的以“培養(yǎng)國際視野的新一代”為主題的全國中學(xué)生夏令營活動。在培訓(xùn)期間，外教Smith先生就學(xué)習(xí)技巧和文化拓展等方面給予你很多幫助?；丶液螅阆虢o他寫一封信，以表達(dá)感謝，內(nèi)容包括：1.表示感謝；2.回顧你得到的幫助以及收獲；3.祝福和期待。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；3.開頭、結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。DearMr.Smith,_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yourssincerely.LiHua【答案】DearMr.Smith,I'mwritingtoexpressmysinceregratitudetoyouforyourgeneroushelpduringthetwo-weeksummercamp.Duringthetrainingcourses,youwerealwayswillingtohelpmepatientlyandgivemehintsonEnglishlearning.ItwasyouwhoencouragedmetobeconfidenttoexpressmyselfinEnglish.MyoralEnglishhasimproveddramaticallysince.Also,IreallyadmireyourlecturesaboutWesternculture,fromwhichIhavebenefitedalotandhadabetterunderstandingofdifferenttraditions.Myappreciationisbeyondwords.IwillbemorethanpleasedifIcanshowyouaroundmyhometowninreturnforyourkindness.Lookingforwardtoyourcoming.Yourssincerely,LiHua8．（2023年·廣東肇慶·一中考試）假如你是高三學(xué)生李華，請你寫一篇演講稿，代表全體同學(xué)在畢業(yè)典禮上發(fā)言，內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)如下：1.即將畢業(yè)的心情；2.高中三年的收獲；3.表示感謝。注意：1.詞數(shù)80左右；2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Goodmorning,everyone!I'mLiHua.It'smygreathonortostandhereonbehalfofallthestudentstodelivermyspeech.Atthismoment,IcannotbeartopartbutIamalsoeagerformynewlifeatuniversity.Duringthepastthreeyears,notonlyhaveImadesometruefriendswhosharesorrowsandjoyswithme,butalsoIhavegainedrichknowledge.Beforeleaving,I'dliketoexpressmysinceregratitudetomyteachers.NowIamabouttostartmynewcollegelifeandIwillliveuptotheexpectationsofmyteachersandmyparents.Thankyouforyourlistening.9．（2023年·重慶北碚·高三西南大學(xué)附中校考開學(xué)考試）我們除了感謝他人，也應(yīng)該感謝自己。在高中生活即將結(jié)束之際，請根據(jù)自身的情況，給自己寫一封感謝信，看到美好的自己和更美好的未來。注意：1.詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80左右；2.信的開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出。DearSelf,I’mwritingtoexpressmythankstoyou.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Self【答案】DearSelf,I’mwritingtoexpressmythankstoyou.Astimegoesby,Iwillgraduatefromhighschoolsoon.Lookingbackonthethreeyearsofhighschoollife,Ithankyouforyourcourageandhardwork.Inthefaceofdifficulties,youareneverafraidoffailure.Overthepastthreeyears,youhavebeengettingalongwellwithyourclassmatesandteachers,leavingmanygoodmemoriesofyourhighschoollife.YourdreamuniversityisZhejiangUniversity,whichisoneofthekeyuniversitiesinChina.Aslongasyouworkhard,youwillrealizeyourcollegedream.Ibelieveabrightfutureiswaitingforyou.

Iwishyoucanbeadmittedtoyourdreamuniversity.Self10．（2023·全國·一模）假定你是紅星中學(xué)高三學(xué)生李華。近期，你校外教Steve做了一場關(guān)于讀后續(xù)寫的在線講座（ALectureonContinuationWriting）。請你用英文給他寫一封電子郵件，內(nèi)容包括：1.表達(dá)感謝并簡述你的收獲；2.說明你在讀后續(xù)寫中的困惑并尋求幫助。注意：1.詞數(shù)80左右；2.開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。DearSteve,__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【答案】DearSteve,Thankyouverymuchindeedforthewonderfullectureyougaveoncontinuationwriting.I’velearntreallyalot,becauseyouhelpedmeovercomethebottleneck—howtoincreasethereadingandwritingspeed.However,Iamstillpuzzledbysomedifficultiesinit.Forexample,Ifindithardtograspthegistofthepassages,andIalsofeelithardtocontinuewhenconfrontedwithnewwords.WhatcanIdo?Wouldyoupleasegivemesomeadvice?Iwouldbereallygratefulifyoucouldhelpmeout.Thankyouverymuchagain.Yourearliestreplywouldbeappreciated.Yours,Lihua11．（2023·全國·高三專題練習(xí)）假定你是李華，春節(jié)期間你和朋友Mike一起出游，你剛收到他發(fā)給你的照片。請你給他回一封郵件，內(nèi)容包括：1.收到照片表示感謝；2.回顧一起度過的時(shí)光；3.邀請他周末來家作客。注意：1.寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80左右；2.請按如下各式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。DearMike,__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【答案】DearMike,Howareyou?Thankyouforsendingmethephotosthatbringbackthosewonderfulmemories.ThetimewespenttogetherduringtheSpringFestivalwasjustincredible.Wewokeupearlytoseethesunriseoverthesea.Onthewayback,wetastedthefinelocalfood,whichwasimpressiveindeed.AndwhatwastrulyunforgettablewasthehospitalityIhadasaguestatyourhome.Ireallyhadagreattime.I’dliketoinviteyouoverthisweekend.Itwillbeachanceforyoutomeetmyfamily.Lookingforwardtoyourcoming.Yours,LiHua12．（2023·山西·統(tǒng)考一模）假定你是李華，你校英語翻譯愛好者協(xié)會成功舉辦了中華詩詞英譯大賽，請你代表協(xié)會在本次活動的頒獎儀式上進(jìn)行總結(jié)發(fā)言，內(nèi)容包括：1.表示祝賀；2.回顧本次活動；3.表達(dá)希望。注意：1.寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80左右；2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。Dearfellowschoolmates,It’smygreathonortomakeaconcludingstatementhere.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________That’sall.Thankyou!【答案】Dearfellowschoolmates,It’smygreathonortomakeaconcludingstatementhere.Atthismoment,I’dliketoextendmysincerecongratulationstoalloftheparticipants.Thecompetitionwouldnotbeagreatsuccesswithoutthejointeffortsofeveryone.Myheartythanksgofirstlytoourteachers,whoseguidanceandencouragementhavegivenusmuchinsightintotranslationofChinesepoetry.Besides,alltheparticipants’devotionandwonderfulperformanceimpressedusalot.Mostimportantly,thecompetitionhasfurtherstimulatedourpassionforChinesepoetryandboostedourculturalconfidence.IsincerelyhopethatwestudentswillworktolearnEnglishwell,carryforwardandspreadtraditionalChineseculture.That’sall.Thankyou!13．（2023·福建省德化第一中學(xué)校聯(lián)考）假定你是李華，你的留學(xué)生好友Peter在你市舉辦的“中國傳統(tǒng)文化知識競賽(ChineseTraditionalCultureContest)”中獲得外國選手組一等獎。請你給他寫一封信,內(nèi)容包括：1.表示祝賀；2.回顧他的付出和努力；3.期待他為弘揚(yáng)中國文化做出貢獻(xiàn)。注意：1.寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80左右；2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；3.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。DearPeter,_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【答案】DearPeter,LearningyourwinningthefirstprizeintheChineseTraditionalCultureContestorganizedbyourcity,I’mwritingtoextendmysincerecongratulationstoyou.Itcameasnosurprise,foryouarekeenlyinterestedinChinesecultureandhavebeencontinuouslyexploringit.Notonlydidyourefertoabundantresources,butalsoyouconsultedmanylocalsandprofessionals,whichequipsyouwithacomprehensiveknowledgeandgoodcommandofChineseculture.CongratulateyouonyoursuccessagainandIhopeyoucandevoteyourselftospreadingtheChinesecultureandmakeitmoreaccessibletopeoplearoundtheworld.Yours,LiHua14．（2023·全國·模擬預(yù)測）假定你是學(xué)生會主席李華，學(xué)生會舉辦的英語演講比賽（EnglishSpeechContest）得到了外教Pam的大力幫助?；顒右褕A滿結(jié)束，請你給她寫一封感謝信。內(nèi)容包括：1.表達(dá)感謝；2.外教的幫助；3.同學(xué)的收獲。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；2.開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。DearPam,___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【答案】DearPam,IamwritingthislettertoexpressmyheartfeltgratitudeforyourinvaluablesupportandguidanceduringtheEnglishspeechcontest.Yourunwaveringcommitmentandencouragementhavehelpedusachievealotinthecompetition.YouhaveinvestedsomuchtimeandeffortinpreparingusforthecontestthatweallhavelearnedalotmoreaboutEnglishspeech.Yourexcellentteachingskills,patience,anddedicationhavebeeninstrumentalinimprovingourEnglishlanguageskills.What’smore,yourconstructivefeedbackandsuggestionshavehelpedusrefineourpronunciation,styleandpresentation,whichwerecrucialindeliveringanimpressivespeech.Weallfeelblessedtohavehadsuchapreciousopportunitytolearnfromyou.YourcontributionhasgreatlyenrichedourEnglishlearningexperience,andwewillalwayscherishthememoriesofthetimespentwithyou.Yours,LiHua15．（2023·安徽合肥·第八中學(xué)模擬預(yù)測）假定你是學(xué)生李華，你在學(xué)校組織的第三屆用英語講中國故事挑戰(zhàn)賽(“StoriesofChinaRetoldinEnglish”Challenge)中獲得冠軍。請撰寫一封英語郵件給外教David，分享這一喜訊并感謝他在賽前給予你的幫助。內(nèi)容包括：1.告知喜訊;2.回憶外教提供的幫助并表達(dá)感謝。注意：1.寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80左右;2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。DearDavid,______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【答案】DearDavid,Fullofjoy,Ican’twaittosharewithyouthisexcitingnews!Ihavebeencrownedwiththechampionshipinthethird“StoriesofChinaRetoldinEnglish”Challengeinmyschool.Mygratitudeforyouisbeyonddescription.WhenIwasrackingmybrainsforthedraft,itwasyouwhohelpedmepolishitandcorrectgrammarmistakescarefully.Withthedraftcompleted,itwasyouwhohelpedmerehearsethespeechandkindlypointedouthowtopauseandarticulateinabetterway.Inthetryout,whenIstutteredduetoextremeanxiety,itwasyouwhoencouragedmetocontinue.Withoutyourconstantencouragement,mymoralewouldhavebeendampened.Thanksagainforyourgeneroushelpandwishyouallthebest.Yours,LiHua書面表達(dá)1．（2021·天津·高考真題）假如你是晨光中學(xué)的李津。你在英國游學(xué)期間曾寄宿在英國學(xué)生Chris家，他母親Nancy通過電子郵件祝賀你順利完成高中學(xué)業(yè)，并詢問你將如何安排高中最后一個(gè)假期。請你用英語回復(fù)，內(nèi)容包括：(1)表示感謝并問候；(2)計(jì)劃與家人一起做的事情；(3)你決定選擇哪個(gè)專業(yè)，為學(xué)好該專業(yè)做何準(zhǔn)備。注意：(1)詞數(shù)不少于100；(2)可適當(dāng)加入細(xì)節(jié)，使內(nèi)容充實(shí)、行文連貫；(3)開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。DearNancy,__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiJin【答案】DearNancy,IamverygladtoreceiveyourE-mail.IamverygratefultoyouandyourfamilyfortakingcareofmeduringmystudytourintheUK.Andwishyouallthebest.NowthatIhavefinishedmyhighschoolstudies,myparentsandIaregoingtotraveltoBeijing.I'mgoingtoTian'anmentoseetheflagraisingandclimbtheGreatWall.Inaddition,IwanttogotoQinghuaGardentoenjoytheelegantdemeanoroffamousuniversities.Ihavedecidedtoregisterforthecomputermajor.WiththerapiddevelopmentoftheInternetindustry,thehigh-payingemploymentinITindustryattractsmoreandmorepeopletojointheInternettide.Beforechoosing,consultpeopleengagedinthismajororgototraininginstitutionsforconsultation.Onlywithacleargoal,wewillhavetargetedlearninginthefuture,whichwillbemoreefficient.Yours,LiJin2．（2020·全國·高考真題）假定你是李華，你和同學(xué)根據(jù)英語課文改編了一個(gè)短劇。給外教MissEvans寫封郵件，請她幫忙指導(dǎo)。郵件內(nèi)容包括:1.劇情簡介；2.指導(dǎo)內(nèi)容；3.商定時(shí)間地點(diǎn)。注意:1.詞數(shù)100左右;2.結(jié)束語已為你寫好。_________________