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UNIT6I’mgoingtostudycomputerscience.UNIT6寫作能力提升練目

錄CONTENTS01寫作任務(wù)02思路點(diǎn)撥03寫作實(shí)踐

假設(shè)你是李明，你夢想成為一名醫(yī)生。請根據(jù)提示，給你的朋友李華寫一封郵件，告訴他你將如何實(shí)現(xiàn)自己的夢想。提示：

getexcellentgrades；focusonscienceclasses(Science

classesarerequired(必需的)formedicalschools.)；improvemy

physicalhealth要求：

1.要點(diǎn)齊全，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；2.不少于80詞。［謀篇布局］厘清文章要素，構(gòu)建文章結(jié)構(gòu)。［遣詞造句］就結(jié)構(gòu)圖中的要點(diǎn)和詞語完成句子。1.當(dāng)一名醫(yī)生不容易，所以為此我制訂了一個(gè)計(jì)劃。It’snoteasy

，soI

?forit.2.

為了考上最好的醫(yī)學(xué)院，我需要取得優(yōu)秀的成績。Togetintothebestmedicalschool，Ineedto

?

?.tobeadoctormadeaplangetexcellent

grades3.

我打算更加努力地學(xué)習(xí)，以取得更好的成績。I’mgoingto

sothatIcan

?

?.4.

我計(jì)劃多鍛煉來改善我的身體健康狀況。I

?toimprovemyphysicalhealth.workhardergetbetter

gradesplantodomoreexercise5.

我打算盡全力實(shí)現(xiàn)自己的夢想。I’mgoingto

tomakemydream

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?.domybestcome

true［巧妙銜接］本文中，在敘述實(shí)現(xiàn)自己夢想的做法時(shí)，運(yùn)用

firstly，secondly，thirdly，allinall(總之)來使文章結(jié)構(gòu)勻

稱、緊致。DearLiHua，IwanttobeadoctorwhenIgrowup.It’snoteasytobea

doctor，soImadeaplanforit.Firstly，togetintothebestmedicalschool，Ineedtoget

excellentgrades.SoI’mgoingtoworkhardersothatIcanget

bettergrades.［連句成篇］Secondly，I’mgoingtofocusonscienceclassesbecausethey

arerequiredformedicalschools.Thirdly，Iplantodomoreexercisetoimprovemyphysical

health.Mostdoctorsworklonghours，andit’sbadfortheir

health.SoIneedtohaveahealthybody.Allinall，I’mgoingtodomybesttomakemydreamcome

true.Whatareyougoingtodointhefuture？I’mlookingforwardtoyourreply.Yours，LiMing

請你以Myidealjob(我的理想職業(yè))為題寫一篇80詞左右的短文，要求包括以下要點(diǎn)：1.

每個(gè)人都有自己的理想職業(yè)；2.

我的理想職業(yè)是什么；3.

我怎樣為我的理想職業(yè)做準(zhǔn)備。

Everyonehashisownidealjob.I’dliketosharemyideal

jobwithyou.Myidealjob

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Myidealjobisateacher.Firstofall，Iliketostaywith

youngpeopleverymuch.Besides，ateacherhastwo

vacationseveryyear.Icanenjoymyselfduringthesummer

andwinterholidays.Finally，Iwanttoteachthestudentsall

thatIknowandhelpthemtobecomeusefulpersons.

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Inordertobeagoodteacher，Iamgoingtostudyharderthanevertoenrichmyknowledge.