Unit4NaturalDisastersRevisionContinuationWriting課件高中英語人教版

人教版Book1Unit4RevisonAccumulatingCorpusEnhancingContinunationWritingSkillsTeachingobjectives1.TobuildacomprehensivecorpusofEnglishlanguagematerialsthatstudentscandrawuponforinspirationandreferenceintheirwriting;2.Todevelopstudents'abilitytoidentifyandutilizeavarietyoflinguisticfeatures,suchasvocabulary,syntax,andstyle,fromthecollectedcorpustoenhancetheirwriting;3.Toimprovestudents'writingfluencyandcoherencebyintegratingelementsfromthecorpusintotheirownwriting.RevisionVocabularyExpansion1.diev．→______

adj.臨終的；垂死的→______

adj.死的→________adj.致命的→______

n．死;死亡2.shockn．震驚;令人震驚的事;休克vt.

(使)震驚→__________

adj.令人震驚的→_________adj.感到震驚的3.wiseadj.明智的→_________

adj.不明智的→_________

adv.明智地→_________

n．智慧；才智4._______

vi.生存；存活vt.幸存；艱難度過→________

n．幸存；生還→_________

n．幸存者；生還者5.________

vt.遭受；蒙受vi.(因疾病、痛苦、悲傷等)受苦→_________

n．受難；苦楚→________

n．患難者；患病者6.longadj.→________

n．長(zhǎng)；長(zhǎng)度→_________

v．(使)變長(zhǎng)7.________

vt.&vi.復(fù)活；(使)蘇醒→_________n．振興；復(fù)蘇8.________v．浮現(xiàn),出現(xiàn)→_________

adj.新興的;突現(xiàn)的;緊急的

→___________突發(fā)事件，緊急情況dyingdeaddeadlydeathshockingshockedunwisewiselywisdomsurvivesurvivalsurvivorsuffersufferingsuffererlengthlengthenreviverevivalemergeemergentemergency詞形變化填空1.Peoplewere_________toseethatthelittlegirlwasoftenbeatenbyherstepmother.

The__________newsshockedallthepeoplearound.

(shock)2.Wemeasuredthe________oftheareaandfounditwasjustthreemeterslongandthus,weneededto__________it.

(length)3.Masteringsomebasicskillswouldgreatlyincreaseyourchancesof_________.Thankstotheswimmingskills，heandhisfriendsucceededin_________theterriblefloodandtheyweretheonlytwo_________.(survive)4.The________diseasehasaffectedmanypeopleandhascausedatleast30________uptonow.

(dead)5.Whenan__________incidentemerges，youcanimmediatelycallthe___________call.

(emerge)6.Thewisemanhasmuch_________andcanhandlevariousmatters_________.(wise)shockedshocking

length

lengthensurvivalsurvivingsurvivorsdeadlydeathsemergentemergencywisdomwisely動(dòng)詞去

e+al構(gòu)成名詞；名詞詞綴

-alrevive→revival振興；復(fù)興arrive→

arrivalsurvive→

surviavalremove→removalapprove→approval移走；清除贊成；批準(zhǔn)SentencePatternsReview1.得知你由于感染了重病已經(jīng)返回愛爾蘭，我對(duì)此感到非常難過。(2020·浙江)

，Iamterriblysorryaboutit.

Learning

that

you

have

returned

to

Ireland

because

you

are

affected

with

a

severe

illness2.Shecouldn'tstandthepain，_________________________________________________________.

(動(dòng)作描寫)

她忍受不了疼痛，以至于用手捂住臉不由自主地抽噎起來。sothatsheburiedherfaceinherhandsandsobbeduncontrollably3.痛苦和絕望擊垮了我，我倒在門階上哭泣。(無靈主語)

,

andIfellsobbingonthedoorstep.Suffering

and

despair

defeated

me________________________________________________________________________________________(brighten).完成早餐后，雙胞胎開心起來。Thetwinshavingfinishedbreakfast,theirfacesbrightenedjoy/delight;sadness/sorrow;anger/rage;despair/hopelessness;fear/scare/horror/fright;surprise/astonishment4.生活中總有一些起起伏伏，但是正是苦難讓我們更加堅(jiān)強(qiáng)。

(主旨升華)5.俗話說，成功與失敗如影隨形。(主旨升華)Asthesayinggoes,successandfailurealwaysgohandinhand.Therearealwayssomeupsanddownsinourlives，butitisthesufferingthatmakesusstronger.

Fivesentencepatterns

提升續(xù)寫品質(zhì)的五大句式[句型公式1]

Doing...,主語＋didsth；主語＋didsth,doing...1.

Hugging

meinhiswarmestarms,headded,“Asexpected,youreallycanmakeagoodshot！”

(2023·新高考)2.Davidstoodfirmlyinhisposition,

ignoringanythingaround.

(2022·新高考)[練透句式]1.聽到我的好消息，老師衷心地祝賀我。(2023·新高考)2.看到他臉上的微笑，我再也忍不住眼淚了。(2023·新高考)3.她深深地嘆了口氣，雙手掩面，開始絕望地抽泣起來。(情緒描寫)Hearingmygreatnews,myteachercongratulatedmesincerely.Seeinghissmileonface,Icouldnolongerholdbackmytears.Shesigheddeeply,buryingherfaceinherhands,andbegan

tosobindespair.[句型公式2]主語＋didsth,done...;Done...,主語＋didsth1.我被他的話打動(dòng)了，于是我決定在寫作上取得更多的進(jìn)步，以達(dá)到他的期望。

(2023·新高考)

2.處在這種競(jìng)爭(zhēng)的氣氛中，他精神高漲，突然感到一種力量。

(2022·新高考)

Struckbyhiswords,Imadeupmymindtomakemoreprogressinwritingsoastoliveuptohisexpectations.

Bathedinacompetitiveatmosphere,hewasinhighspiritsandfeltasuddenstrengthinsidehim.[練透句式]1.由于埋頭于功課，他對(duì)外面的事情一無所知。2.我被他的精神感動(dòng)了，我跟著他，一路上為他加油。(2022新高考)3.受熱情和鼓勵(lì)的鼓舞，大衛(wèi)興高采烈地加快了步伐。(2022新高考)Buried

in

his

lessons,heknewnothingabouttheoutsideworld.Movedbyhisspirit,Ifollowedhimandcheeredhimupalongtheway.

Inspiredbytheenthusiasmandencouragement,Davidquickenedhispaceinhighspirits.[句型公式3]Havingdone...,主語＋didsth

主語＋didsth,havingdone...1.知道了整個(gè)故事后，他給了我一個(gè)微笑，并告訴了我他以前在叢林里的經(jīng)歷。2.收到喬的消息后，查理和簡(jiǎn)扭著身子，緊緊地抓住繩子。Having

knownthewholestory,hegavemeasmileandtoldmehisformerexperiencesinjungle.HavingreceivedJoe'smessage,CharlieandJanetwistedtheirfiguresandclutchedtheropetightly.[練透句式]1.我們?cè)趯W(xué)校門口會(huì)合后，一大早就乘出租車去了那里。2.在被說服改變態(tài)度之后，我終于做出承諾要好好學(xué)習(xí)。Havinggatheredattheschoolgate,wetookataxithereearlyinthemorning.Havingbeenpersuadedtochangemyattitude,Ifinallymadeacommitmenttostudyinghard.[句型公式4]房屋已倒,學(xué)校被毀,那些遭受洪水侵襲的學(xué)生們急需幫助。

Homeslostandschoolsruined,thosestudents

whoaresufferingfromfloodareindesperateneedofhelp.獨(dú)立主格結(jié)構(gòu)：

doingdone

n./pron.＋todoadj.adv.inhishand狀語[練透句式

]1.他低著頭，肩膀顫抖著，顯然是在努力掩飾自己的失望。2.他慢慢抬起垂下的頭，淚水溢滿了眼睛。Headdown

andshoulderstrembling

,obviously,hewastryinghardtohidehisdisappointment.Heslowlyraisedhisdroppinghead,tearsfillinghiseyes.[句型公式5]

with復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)

todo

doingdonewith＋n./pron.＋

adj.

adv.

inhishand

心中充滿激情，我發(fā)表了一個(gè)簡(jiǎn)短的演講。

(2023新高考)Withafierymoodinmyheart,Ideliveredmyshortspeech.[練透句式

]1.大衛(wèi)臉上掛著悲傷的表情，一動(dòng)不動(dòng)無助地坐著，頭無力地低著。

(2022·新高考)2.我心里突然有一種強(qiáng)烈的感情，我笑了回去。Withasorrowfulexpressionhangingonhisface,Davidsataroundmotionlesslyandhelplessly,hisheaddroopingpowerlessly.Withasuddenstrongemotionalfeelinginmyheart,Ismiledback.Practicemakesperfect.

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