2025屆高三英語二輪復(fù)習(xí)應(yīng)用文專題之道歉信課件

應(yīng)用文寫作之道歉信

LearningObjectives學(xué)習(xí)目標(biāo)Bytheendofclass,studentswillbeableto1.understandthestructureofaletterofapology.2.reviewandmastersomekeywordsandsentencepatternsaboutaletterofapology.4.writealetterofapologyandthenevaluateit.導(dǎo)入Youandyourgoodfriendplannedtogoout.However,somethingunexpectedpreventedyoufromgoing.Whatwouldyousaytoyourfriend?Hello,I’mLiHua.年份卷區(qū)命題形式話題2021年北京卷道歉信向英國好友Jim解釋不能和他本周末一起外出了。（因故不能赴約）2016年全國卷Ⅲ道歉信向留學(xué)生Bob解釋不能和他一起去書店了。

（因故不能赴約）愛找麻煩的“困難華”真題感知(2016全國Ⅲ)假定你是李華，與留學(xué)生朋友Bob約好一起去書店，因故不能赴約。請給他寫封郵件，內(nèi)容包括：1．表示歉意2．說明原因3．另約時間作文評價假如你是閱卷老師,你的評分是多少?這篇作文存在哪些問題？用詞不當(dāng)，未傳達(dá)寫作意圖。中間段落未準(zhǔn)確說明原因。最后結(jié)尾表達(dá)不當(dāng)。了解評分細(xì)則內(nèi)容、詞匯語法、篇章結(jié)構(gòu)范文賞析DearBob,I’mterriblysorrytosaythatIcan’tgotothebookshopwithyouonSundaymorningasplanned.Iamwritingtoapologizetoyouforbreakingmypromise.HereisthereasonwhyIcan’tgowithyou.IwasillsuddenlyandIfeltuncomfortable,soIwassenttothehospitalbymyparents.Afterseeingdoctor,hesuggestedthatIshouldtakesomemedicineandrestforafewdays.Ihopethechangewon’tcauseyoutoomuchtrouble.Iwonderifitispossiblethatwewillgotothebookshopnextweekend.Ifit’sconvenientforyou,let’smeetat8:30a.m.attheschoolgate.Sorryagainfortheinconveniencecaused.(2016全國Ⅲ)假定你是李華，與留學(xué)生朋友Bob約好一起去書店，因故不能赴約。請給他寫封郵件，內(nèi)容包括：1．表示歉意2．說明原因3．另約時間優(yōu)秀作文的特點(diǎn)是什么？√內(nèi)容、詞匯語法、篇章結(jié)構(gòu)Sorryagainfortheinconveniencecaused.Yours,LiHua

HereisthereasonwhyIcan’tgowithyou.IwasillsuddenlyandIfeltuncomfortable,soIwassenttothehospitalbymyparents.Afterseeingdoctor,hesuggestedthatIshouldtakesomemedicineandrestforafewdays.Ihopethechangewon’tcauseyoutoomuchtrouble.Iwonderifitispossiblethatwewillgotothebookshopnextweekend.Ifit’sconvenientforyou,let’smeetat8:30a.m.attheschoolgate.DearBob,I’mterriblysorrytosaythatIcan'tgotothebookshopwithyouonSundaymorningasplanned.Iamwritingtoapologizetoyouforbreakingmypromise.

表示歉意（寫信背景+目的）說明原因+另約時間+補(bǔ)救措施再次致歉請求諒解篇章構(gòu)架片段構(gòu)架1表示歉意（寫信背景+目的）不能赴約Iamunableto...Ican’t...asplanned.Ifailto...Ihavebeenexpectingto...,but...

我向你表示歉意I’mterriblysorrytosay...Iregrettosaythat...I’mwritingtoapologize/makeanapologytoyoufor...I’mwritingtoexpressmyheartfeltapology.I’msorryforthesuddenchangeoftheplanandfeelitagreatpitytomisstheopportunityto...仿寫：我一直都期待和你這周末去看畫展，但我很遺憾地告訴你我不能去了。我寫信想表達(dá)我真摯的歉意。I’mterriblysorrytosaythat

Ican'tgotothebookshopwithyouonSunday

morningasplanned.

Iamwritingtoapologizetoyou

forbreakingmypromise.Ihavebeenexpectingtogotothepaintingexhibitionwithyouthisweekend,butIregrettosaythatIamunabletogo.I’mwritingtoexpressmyheartfeltapology.片段構(gòu)架2說明原因+另約時間+補(bǔ)救措施

理由陳述需達(dá)到共情的效果（擴(kuò)展）突發(fā)性sudden、無法預(yù)料unforeseen、不可回避unavoidable意外受傷Iwasinjuredbyaccident.或突然生病Iwasillsuddenly.重要的比賽時間提前Animportantcompetitionwillbeheldaheadofschedule.父母出差，要照顧生病的奶奶。Myparentswereonabusinesstrip,andIneedtolookaftermygrandmother.

1.IfindthatIhaveto...2.Thereasonisthat...3.I’vejustbeentold/informedthatIhaveto...,whichisofvitalimportancetome...4.Ihavenochoicebutto...說明具體的原因后還要適當(dāng)擴(kuò)充細(xì)節(jié)仿寫：我被告知英語演講比賽將提前舉行。這個比賽對我是十分重要的，我一直夢想有這樣的機(jī)會來提高我的英語口語。I’vejustbeeninformedthattheEnglishspeechcontestwillbeheldaheadofschedule,whichisofvitalimportancetome,andIhavealwaysbeendreamingtohaveachancelikethistoimprovemyspokenEnglish.HereisthereasonwhyIcan’tgowithyou.

Since

thefinalexamisjustaroundthecorner,Idecidetostayathometo

goovermylessons.Ididn’tdowellinthelastexamsoIwanttodevotemysparetimeto

workingonmylessonsinordertogetgoodscores.

ShallwegoonSaturdaymorning?Ifit’sconvenientforyou,let’smeetat8:30attheschoolgate.

另約時間+補(bǔ)救措施Shallwegoon...?

Shallweputitofftill...?WouldyoumindifIfixanothertime?Iwonderifitispossiblethat...IdohopethatIcandosomethingtomakeupfor....Ifitisconvenientforyou,let’s...Toremedy(補(bǔ)救）thisunpleasantmatter/compensate（彌補(bǔ)）fortheloss,Ipromise...仿寫：我們是否能推遲到下周日？如果你方便的話，我們可以早一點(diǎn)出發(fā)以便于我們有充分的時間去欣賞畫作。ShallweputitofftillnextSunday?Ifitisconvenient,wecansetoutearliersothatwehaveplentyoftimetoenjoythepaintings.片段構(gòu)架3結(jié)尾再次致歉望理解Sorryagainfortheinconveniencecausedtoyou.Idohopeyoucanunderstandmysituationandacceptmysincereapology.Onceagain,sorryfornotbeingabletoaccompanyyou.

仿寫：因?yàn)槲业娜毕俅蜗蚰愕狼浮Ｎ蚁Ｍ隳茉徫也⒔邮芪艺鎿吹那敢?。Onceagain,sorryformyabsence.Ihopeyoucanforgivemeandacceptmysincereapology.寫作任務(wù)

假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)高三學(xué)生李華。你和同學(xué)Jim約好這周天下午去五洲國際看電影，你因故不能赴約。請你用英文給他寫一封電子郵件，內(nèi)容包括：

1.表達(dá)歉意并說明原因；

2.另約時間和提出補(bǔ)救辦法。注意

1.詞數(shù)80左右；

2.開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。時態(tài)根據(jù)表達(dá)的語境選擇（一般現(xiàn)在，一般過去，一般將來）人稱通常以第一、二人稱語言用詞準(zhǔn)確，語句流暢。語氣得體委婉。內(nèi)容內(nèi)容表達(dá)清晰，道歉的原因一定要合理而且容易接受書寫書寫工整，卷面整潔ChecklistTotalContentCovertheexpressingapology?Clickheretogivethescore.Coverthereasonofapology?Covertheanotherappointmentandwayofsavingsituation?Covertheapologyagain?Reasonisacceptable?StructureHave3paragraphs?Eachparagraphhascorrectwritingpurpose?LanguageUsesentencepatternswereviewedinthisclass?Nogrammarandspellingmistake?HandwritingCleanandbeautiful?12345678910自我+同伴評價Selfandpeerevaluation范文賞析DearJim,

Ihavebeenexpectingtogotothecinemawithyouthisweekend,butIregrettosaythatIamunabletobepresentontime.I’mwritingtoexpressmyheartfeltapology.

I’vejustbeeninformedthatmyparentsneedtodealwithsomethingurgentandIhavetovisitmysickgrandfatherinthecountryside,whowassuddenlysenttothehospital.ShallwegonextSundayafternoon?

Ifit’sconvenientforyou,let’smeetoutsidethecinemaandI’mconvincedwewillhavefun.

Onceagain,I’msorryforanyinconveniencecaused.Isincerelyhopeyoucanacceptmyapologyandunderstandmysituation.

Yours,

LiHua總結(jié)歸納1.表示歉意2.說明具體原因3.另約時間+提出補(bǔ)救辦法4.