八年級英語上學(xué)期 書面表達解題要點及專項訓(xùn)練

專題09書面表達解題要點及專項訓(xùn)練應(yīng)試策略1.審題目：要切中題意?？吹娇碱}后，先不要急于動筆，要仔細看清題目要求的內(nèi)容。在自己的頭腦中構(gòu)思出一個框架或畫面，確定短文的中心思想，不要匆匆下筆，看懂題意，根據(jù)圖畫、圖表、提綱或短文提供的資料和信息來審題。審題要審格式、體裁、人物關(guān)系、故事情節(jié)、主體時態(tài)、活動時間、地點等。2.圈要點：防止遺漏要點。要點是給分的一個重要因素。為了防止寫作過程中遺漏要點，同學(xué)們要充分發(fā)揮自己的觀察力，把情景中給出的各個要點逐條列出。3.列提綱：為寫作做好準(zhǔn)備。根據(jù)文章要點短文的中心思想將主要句型、關(guān)鍵詞記下，形成提綱。4.定基調(diào)：定出時態(tài)、人稱、順序、開頭、結(jié)尾。5.寫全文：寫短文時要做到以下六個方面：(1)避免使用漢語式英語，盡量使用自己熟悉的句型。幾種句型可交替使用，以避免重復(fù)和呆板。(2)多用簡單句型，記事、寫人一般都不需要復(fù)雜的句型?？蛇m當(dāng)多使用陳述句、一般疑問句、祈使句和感嘆句。不用或少用非謂語或情態(tài)動詞等較復(fù)雜的句型。(3)注意語法、句法知識的靈活運用。1）語態(tài)、時態(tài)要準(zhǔn)確無誤。 2）主謂語要一致，主語的人稱和數(shù)要和謂語一致。3）注意人稱代詞的賓格形式。 4）注意冠詞用法，例如：Heisanhoneststudent.中的an不能寫成a。5）注意拼寫、標(biāo)點符號和大小寫，例如：receive,believe,fourteen,forty,ninth,restaurant等。(4)描寫人物時，要生動具體，例如：1）外表特征：tall,short,fat,thin,strong,weak,ordinary-looking等。2）服飾顏色：red,yellow,blue,white,green,brown,black等。3）內(nèi)心境界：glad,happy,sad,excited,anxious,interested等。4）感情描寫：love,like,hate,feel,laugh,cry,smile,shout等。5）動作描寫：come,go,get,have,take,bring,fetch等。(5)上下文要連貫。上下文的連貫性也是評分的一條原則，因此同學(xué)們應(yīng)把寫好的句子，根據(jù)故事情節(jié)，事情發(fā)生的先后次序（時間或空間），使用一些表示并列、遞進等過渡詞進行加工整理，使文章連貫、自然、流暢。同學(xué)們應(yīng)注意下面過渡的用法：1）表示并列關(guān)系的：and,aswellas,or…2）表示轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系的：but,yet,however…3）表示時間關(guān)系的：when,while,after,before,then,afterthat…4）表示因果關(guān)系的：so,therefore,asaresult…5）表示目的的：inorderto,inorderthat,soasto,sothat…6）表示列舉的：forexample,suchas…7）表示總結(jié)性的：ingeneral,inall,inaword,generallyspeaking…(6)不會表達，另辟蹊徑。中考作文給分是以要點和語言準(zhǔn)確度而定，不以文采打分。造句越簡單準(zhǔn)確越好，造復(fù)合句容易出錯，容易被扣分，閱卷場上有句話：“錯誤面前人人平等，文采好不加分”。如遇到個別要點表達不出來或難以表達，可采用變通的辦法，化難為易，化繁為簡?？傊炀渥右_、得體、符合英語表達習(xí)慣。(6)改病句：認(rèn)真檢查，改正錯誤。中考作文時，由于時間緊、內(nèi)容多，同學(xué)們出錯在所難免。因此，改錯這一環(huán)節(jié)必不可少。中考作文評卷是根據(jù)要點、語言準(zhǔn)確性、上下文的連貫性來給分，根據(jù)錯誤多少來扣分。因此，中考時花幾分鐘時間用來檢查錯誤顯得尤為重要。檢查錯誤應(yīng)從以下幾個方面入手：1）格式是否有錯。2）拼寫有無錯誤。3）語言是否用錯。4）時態(tài)、語態(tài)錯誤。5）標(biāo)點錯誤。6）人稱是否用錯。注意事項書面表達要特別注意書寫工整，卷面整潔。閱卷老師工作量大，時間緊，可想而知。書寫是否工整，卷面是否整潔與得分高低直接有關(guān)。1.（23-24八年級上·浙江臺州·期末）新年將至，?？_展以“人間煙火撫人心，千絲萬縷家鄉(xiāng)(Hometown)情”為主題的征文活動。假如你是李華，請你結(jié)合自己的生活實際，根據(jù)以下提示寫一篇英語短文投稿。MyLovelyHometownWhatdoyoulikebestaboutyourhometown?(food,place,…)Whatimprovementdoesyourhometownneed?(environment,traffic(交通)...)Whatcanyoudotomakeitabetterplace?…要求：(1)內(nèi)容包括所有要點，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，要求語句通順、意思連貫。(2)文中不得出現(xiàn)你的真實姓名、校名。(3)詞數(shù)：80詞（文章開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)）。MyLovelyHometown___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________2.（22-23八年級上·浙江金華·期末）假如你是李華，你的英國朋友Lucy發(fā)來郵件向你征求學(xué)好中文的建議。請根據(jù)表格內(nèi)容給她回復(fù)郵件。MyadviceReasonslistentoChinesesongsimprovelistening...readaChinesebookeverymonthbuildupvocabulary;learnaboutChineseculture(文化)...…………注意：(1)短文內(nèi)容必須包括表格中的所有信息，可以適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；(2)文中不得出現(xiàn)真實姓名和校名等相關(guān)信息；(3)詞數(shù)：80~100；短文的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。DearLucy,Gladtohearfromyou.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Hopeyou’llhavefunlearningChinese.Yours,LiHua3.（23-24八年級上·山東濰坊·期末）下面是110熱線記錄下的一份交通事故報告表，請根據(jù)表格中提供的信息，用第三人稱將所發(fā)生的事故寫成一篇短文。提示：AccidentAmotorbikehitacar.Themotorbikewasbroken(損壞).Dateandtime6:30pm,October18thPlaceCambridgeRoadReasonRainyWeatherVictims(受害者)Jim(thedriverofthecar):OK,butfeltafraid.Nick(thedriverofthemotorbike):Hisrightarmwashurt.ActionThepolicearrivedat6:35pmandtookNicktothehospitalnearbyat6:50pm.要求：1.語句通順，語法正確，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；2.不少于80詞，首句已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。TherewasanaccidentonCambridgeRoadat6:30pmonOctober18th.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________4.（23-24八年級上·海南?？凇て谀┠秤⑽木W(wǎng)站正在開展以“我最喜愛的中國城市”為主題的征文活動。假如你是李華，請用英語寫一篇短文投稿，介紹你最喜愛的一座中國城市的概況（如：地理位置、人口、氣候等）、你喜歡它的原因、最佳游覽時間以及注意事項等。提示：1.Whatisyourfavouritecitylike?2.Whydoyoulikeit?3.Whenisthebesttimetovisitit?4....注意：1.包括所給提示內(nèi)容，并適當(dāng)增加細節(jié)；2.語言表達準(zhǔn)確，語意通順、連貫；3.詞數(shù)100左右。______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________5.（23-24八年級上·山東臨沂·期末）春晚歌曲《我和2035有個約》里唱到：“奇跡不斷地涌現(xiàn)，期待那時再相見，我和2035有個約，約在歡呼雀躍那一天，我親愛的祖國更加美麗和諧，昂揚屹立新世界?！庇H愛的同學(xué)們，假如你是李華，請以“MyLifein2035”為題暢想未來生活。請從以下幾個方面進行陳述。1.Whatwillyoubein2035?2.Wherewillyoulive?3.Whatwillyoudoinyourfreetime?4.Whatwilltheenvironment,cities,schoolsorotherthingswillbelike?要求：1.文中要包括問題所提到的內(nèi)容，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，詞數(shù)80左右；2.語言通順，條理清楚，書寫規(guī)范；3.文中不要出現(xiàn)任何真實人名、校名及其它相關(guān)信息，否則不予評分。___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________6.（23-24八年級上·河北石家莊·期末）自主學(xué)習(xí)，是學(xué)生打開知識大門的金鑰匙。學(xué)校英文網(wǎng)站正在開展以“自主學(xué)習(xí)（autonomouslearning）”為主題的征文活動。假如你李華，請用英語寫一篇短文投稿，談?wù)勀愫倨陂g將如何進行自主學(xué)習(xí)，以及這樣做的原因。提示詞語：makeatimetable,ask...forhelp,astrongwill,goal,keeptrying提示問題：·Whatwillyoudotobeanautonomouslearnerthiswintervacation?·Whywillyoustartautonomouslearning?注意：1.語法正確，意思連貫，書寫規(guī)范，要點齊全，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；2.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的地名、校名和人名；3.字?jǐn)?shù)80左右，文章開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。MyAutonomousLearningPlanforWinterVacationIwillstartautonomouslearningthiswintervacation.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________7.（23-24八年級上·北京豐臺·期末）假如你是李華，你的英國筆友Peter想和你交流上學(xué)路上安全的問題，請你用英語給他回復(fù)一封郵件，談?wù)勀氵x擇何種交通方式上學(xué)及原因，并給出安全出行的建議。提示詞語：e-scooter（電動自行車）,underground,dangerous,fast提示問題：●Howdoyouoftengotoschool?●Whydoyougotoschoolinthisway?●Whatadvicecanyougivetokeepsafeontheroad?DearPeter,I’mveryhappytosharesomethingaboutkeepingsafeonthewaytoschoolwithyou.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Ifyouwanttoknowmore,befreetoemailme.Yours,LiHua8.（23-24八年級上·北京朝陽·期末）假如你是李華，你的美國筆友Mike要來北京體驗中國文化（Chineseculture），他想向你了解來北京旅游的最佳時間、出行方式以及在京期間能體驗中國文化的活動。請根據(jù)他的問題回復(fù)郵件。提示詞語：autumn,comfortable,tea,BeijingOpera提示問題：●WhenisthebesttimetovisitBeijing?●HowdoItravelaroundBeijing?●WhatcanIdotoexperienceChinesecultureinBeijing?DearMike,I’mgladthatyouaregoingtovisitBeijingandexperienceChineseculture.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________I’mlookingforwardtoseeingyouinBeijing.Yours,LiHua9.（23-24八年級上·黑龍江綏化·期末）人們學(xué)英語的原因和方法各有不同，請以“MyViews(觀點)onLearningEnglish”為題寫一篇文章，說說你對學(xué)習(xí)英語的看法。寫作要求：1.不得在作文中出現(xiàn)學(xué)校真實的名稱或?qū)W生的真實姓名。2.語句連貫，詞數(shù)80個左右。作文的標(biāo)題已經(jīng)給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。MyViewsonLearningEnglish___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________10.（22-23八年級上·陜西渭南·期末）假如你是李華，你喜歡旅行，你下周一要從家鄉(xiāng)去北京旅游。你可以乘飛機、長途汽車或火車。請你分析每個交通方式的優(yōu)缺點，并給出最佳的旅行方式。請根據(jù)以上提示寫一篇英語短文。（提示信息：from…to…從……到……，themostcomfortable最舒服的，coach長途汽車）要求：1.參考提示信息，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；2.語句通順，意思連貫，書寫工整；3.文中不得出現(xiàn)你的任何真實信息（姓名、校名和地名等）；4,詞數(shù)：不少于70詞。（開頭已給出，但不計入總詞數(shù)。）IamLiHuaandIenjoytravelling.I’mgoingtovisitBeijingnextMonday.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________11.（22-23八年級上·河南南陽·期末）假如你是張麗，你校下周要舉行主題為“暢想未來城市”的英語演講比賽，你對此很感興趣。請你根據(jù)以下提示，以Thecityinthefuture為題寫一篇演講稿，為比賽做準(zhǔn)備。寫作要求：1)文中須包含上圖提示的所有信息，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；2)文中不得出現(xiàn)考生的真實姓名和學(xué)校名稱；3)詞數(shù)90左右。文章的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。參考詞匯：environment環(huán)境ThecityinthefutureHello,everybody!Myname’sZhangLi.Ithinkthecityinthefuturewillbebetter.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________I’mgladtoshareallmyideasaboutthefuturecitywithallofyou.Thankyou!12.（22-23八年級上·山東德州·期末）Atthefootofthousandsofacresofgoodland,onlylovehomeaninchofland.Goldnestandsilvernestarenotaspoorastheirhometown.（腳下良田千萬畝，只愛家鄉(xiāng)一寸土。金窩銀窩，比不上家鄉(xiāng)的窮窩窩。)家鄉(xiāng)是母親溫暖的懷抱，是我們靈魂的港灣。誰又不愛自己的家鄉(xiāng)呢?請對比下表家鄉(xiāng)近些年的變化，以“ILovemyhometown”為題，寫一篇文章，抒發(fā)對家鄉(xiāng)的喜愛贊美之情。InthepastNowTransportbike,bus...bike,bus,car,high-speedtrain....Weatherusuallybelow38℃insummer,coldinwinter,snow...oftenabove39℃insummerwarmerthanbefore,lesssnow...Populationmostpeopleinthecountry...mostpeopleinthecountyandcity...Environmentdirtystreets,old,lowhouses...wide,cleanstreets,flowersandtrees,lakes,parksandsquares...Waysoflifeslow...fast...要求：1)表達清楚，語法正確，上下文連貫；2)必須包括提示中的所有信息，并按要求適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；3)詞數(shù)：80詞左右(開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù))；4)不得使用真實姓名、校名和地名等。ILoveMyHometownGoldnestandsilvernestarenotaspoorastheirhometown.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________13.（22-23八年級上·河南鄭州·期末）陶行知先生說：“勞動即生活、生活既教育。”請你根據(jù)以下要點提示，用英語介紹你本學(xué)期的計劃及理由。要點：1.學(xué)習(xí)方面；2.勞動等生活方面；3.……要求：1.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實姓名和學(xué)校名稱；2.詞數(shù)80左右。___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________14.（22-23八年級上·河南南陽·期末）好的習(xí)慣很能使我們受益終身。請你根據(jù)以下提示，以“MyGoodHabits”為題寫一篇英語短文，結(jié)合自身經(jīng)歷與感受，介紹一些好的學(xué)習(xí)或生活習(xí)慣（至少選擇兩條）。詞數(shù)100左右。1.listencarefullyinclass2.finishtheschoolworkontime3.dosportsforoveranhour4.dosomethingtorelax5.readsomebooksMyGoodHabits_________________________________________________________________________________________