2025屆高考英語復習讀后續(xù)寫練習+馬克助力失明妻子走出黑暗+課件

高考英語讀后續(xù)寫語篇練習馬克助力失明妻子走出黑暗1題目分析讀后續(xù)寫題目再現(xiàn)范文呈現(xiàn)努力方向2Part1題目呈現(xiàn)3續(xù)寫原文Duetoamedicalmisdiagnosis(誤診),Susan,34,hadbeenleftsightless,andwassuddenlythrownintoaworldofdarkness,anger,frustrationandself-pity.Andallshehadtodependonwasherhusband,Mark.MarkwasanofficerandhelovedSusanwithallhisheart.Whenshefirstlosthersight,hewatchedhersinkintodespair.Hewasdeterminedtohelphiswifegainconfidencetobecomeindependentandreturntohernormallifeagain.Buthowwouldhedothat?4續(xù)寫原文Susanusedtotakethebustowork,butnowshewastoofrightenedtofacethewholeworld.MarkdecidedtoconvinceSusantotakethebusagain.Perhapsonedayshecouldenjoyacitytourallbyherselforbuysomedailygroceryinthesupermarketthreestopsaway.Butshewasstillsomoodyandsensitive.Howwouldshereact?Oneday,Marksummoneduphiscourageandsaid“Honey,lifeshallmoveon,let’strytakingthebusasthefirststep,OK?”Justashepredicted,Susanwasscaredattheideaoftakingthebusonherown.“I’mblind!”sherespondedbitterly.“HowamIsupposedtoknowwhereIamgoing?Ifeellikeyou’reabandoningme.”5續(xù)寫原文Mark’sheartbrokehearingthesewords,butheknewwhathadtobedone.HepromisedSusanhewouldridethebuswithheruntilshegotthehangofit.Andthatwasexactlywhathappened.Forawholeweek,MarkaccompaniedSusanonthebus.Hetaughtherhowtorelyonherothersenses,specificallyherhearing,todeterminewhereshewasandhowtoadapttohernewenvironment.Hehelpedherbefriendthebusdriverswhocouldwatchoutforher,andsaveheraseat.Finally,Susandecidedtotrythetriponherown.Markencouragedheranddecidedtocontinuewatchingoutforheruntilshegotoffthebus,onlyinsecret.6段首句Paragraph1：Withthehelpofherwalkingstick,sheslowlymadeittothebusstop.Paragraph2：Sheaskedthedriver,“WhydoyousaythatI’mverylucky?”7Part2題目分析8續(xù)寫原文分析9文章講述了34歲的蘇珊因醫(yī)療誤診失明后，陷入了黑暗、憤怒、沮喪和自憐的情緒中，生活完全依賴丈夫馬克。馬克作為一名軍官，深愛著蘇珊，決心幫助她重獲自信與獨立，回歸正常生活。他首先鼓勵蘇珊重新乘坐曾經(jīng)熟悉的公交車，盡管蘇珊起初因失明而恐懼、抵觸，覺得馬克在拋棄她，但馬克堅持陪伴蘇珊坐了一周的公交，教她利用聽覺等其他感官來適應新環(huán)境，還幫她與司機交好。最終，蘇珊決定獨自嘗試乘坐公交，馬克則在暗中守護，故事展現(xiàn)了這對夫妻在困境中的愛與勇氣，以及蘇珊努力走向獨立的過程。點1：位于續(xù)寫第一段段首，流暢銜接前面的記敘文和第一段段首語；點2：位于續(xù)寫第一段段尾，流暢銜接第二段段首句；點3：位于續(xù)寫第二段段首，續(xù)寫銜接第二段段首語；點4：文章結尾升華，給予讀者正能量，揭示和強調主題。情節(jié)構建的重點10續(xù)寫思路分析Para1：Withthehelpofherwalkingstick,sheslowlymadeittothebusstop.借助著盲杖，蘇珊一步一步緩緩地朝著公交站挪去。每走一步，她都先用盲杖小心翼翼地探探前方的路，確保沒有障礙物。清晨的陽光灑在身上，帶來一絲暖意，微風輕輕拂過她的臉頰，可她卻無心感受這美好。過往行人匆匆的腳步聲和交談聲傳入她的耳中，讓她愈發(fā)緊張。她緊緊握著盲杖，指節(jié)都因為用力而泛白，心中既害怕又期待。這是她第一次獨自出門乘坐公交，對未知的恐懼讓她的心跳急劇加速，但想起丈夫馬克的鼓勵和自己想要獨立的決心，她深吸一口氣，努力讓自己鎮(zhèn)定下來，繼續(xù)朝著公交站的方向前進。終于，她聽到了公交站那熟悉的嘈雜聲，知道自己快到了，腳步也稍微加快了一些。11續(xù)寫思路分析Para2：Sheaskedthedriver,“WhydoyousaythatI’mverylucky?”蘇珊上了車，找了個座位坐下后，便聽到司機笑著對她說：“姑娘，你可真是個幸運的人?！碧K珊不禁疑惑，自己失明后生活充滿了艱辛，怎么會是幸運的呢？于是，她忍不住問道：“為什么您說我很幸運呢？”司機從后視鏡里看了看她，眼神中透露出一絲溫暖，說道：“我每天在這路上開車，見過太多行色匆匆、滿臉疲憊的人，他們雖然看得見，卻好像對周圍的一切都視而不見，被生活的壓力壓得喘不過氣。而你，雖然看不見，但你卻比他們更懂得感受生活。你能聽到鳥兒的歌聲，能聞到花兒的芬芳，而且……”司機停頓了一下，接著說，“你還有一個默默守護著你的愛人。這幾天，有個男士總是悄悄地跟在你后面，眼神里滿是關切，我猜那一定是你丈夫吧。有這樣一個人在身邊，你難道不幸運嗎？”蘇珊聽后，心中涌起一股暖流，眼眶也微微濕潤了，原來自己一直被愛包圍著，也許自己真的是幸運的。12Part3范文呈現(xiàn)13范文呈現(xiàn)Withthehelpofherwalkingstick,sheslowlymadeittothebusstop.Themorningairwascrisp,carryingwithitthefaintscentofbloomingflowersfromanearbygarden,whichshecouldfaintlydetect.Asshestoodthere,thetipofhersticktappinggentlyontheground,shelistenedintentlytothesoundsaroundher.Thehustleandbustleofpeoplegoingabouttheirdailylivesfilledherears-hurriedfootsteps,snippetsofconversations,andtheoccasionalhonkingofacarinthedistance.Shetookadeepbreath,tryingtocalmthebutterfliesinherstomach.Herheartpoundedwithamixtureofnervousnessandanticipation.Thiswasherfirsttimeattemptingthisjourneyalone,andeverylittlenoiseseemedamplified.ButshewasdeterminedtoprovetoherselfandtoMarkthatshecoulddothis.Shestraightenedherback,adjustedhergriponthestick,andwaitedpatientlyforthebustoarrive,hersensesonhighalertforanysignofitsapproach.14范文呈現(xiàn)Sheaskedthedriver,“WhydoyousaythatI’mverylucky?”Thedriver,amiddle-agedmanwithakindfaceandawarmsmile,glancedatherthroughtherearviewmirrorashepulledawayfromthestop.“Well,miss,”hebegan,hisvoicefilledwithgenuinekindness,“mostdays,Iseepeoplerushingaround,alwaysinahurry,butneverreallytakingthetimetoappreciatethesimplethings.Butyou,youseemtobelivinginthemoment,relyingonyourothersensestoexperiencetheworldinawaythatmanyofusforgetto.Youhaveastrengthaboutyouthat'srare.Andontopofthat,”hepausedforamoment,chucklingsoftly,“youhavesomeonewholovesyousomuchthathe'sbeensecretlywatchingoveryoueverystepoftheway.That'sakindoflucknoteveryonehas.”Susanwastakenabackbyhiswords.Shesatbackinherseat,asmallsmileplayingonherlipsasshethoughtaboutMark.Maybeshewaslucky,inmorewaysthanshehadrealized.Asthebusrumbledalongtheroad,shefeltanewsenseofpeaceandgratitudewashoverher.15升級版范文呈現(xiàn)Withtheindispensableaidofherwalkingstick,Susanpainstakinglymadeherwaytothebusstop.Thegentlemorningbreeze,carryingwithitthedelicatefragranceofthebloomingflowersfromtheadjacentgarden,caressedherfaceeversosoftly.Standingthere,thetipofherstickrhythmicallytappingontheground,shelistenedattentivelytothesymphonyofsoundsthatenvelopedher.Thehurriedfootstepsofthepassers-by,thefragmentedconversationsthatfloatedby,andtheintermittenthonkingofcarsinthedistanceallreachedherears.Nervousnessandanticipationintertwinedwithinher,causingherhearttopoundvigorously.Thisbeinghermaidensoloattemptatthisjourney,everytriflingnoiseseemedmagnified.Yet,withunwaveringdetermination,sheresolvedtoproveherselfandMarkwrong.Straighteningherpostureandtighteninghergriponthestick,sheawaitedthearrivalofthebuswithbatedbreath,hersensessharpenedtodetectanysignofitsimpendingarrival.16升級版范文呈現(xiàn)Sheinquiredofthedriver,“WhydoyouassertthatIamextremelylucky?”Thedriver,amiddle-agedmanpossessingabenevolentcountenanceandagenialsmile,glancedatherthroughtherearviewmirrorashemaneuveredthebusawayfromthestop.“Well,miss,”hecommenced,hisvoiceimbuedwithsincerekindness,“onmostoccasions,Iwitnesspeoplescurryingabout,invariablyinarush,yetseldomtakingthetimetocherishthesimplepleasures.However,you,byre