新教材適用2024-2025學(xué)年高中英語Unit1TeenageLifeSectionⅣ寫作指導(dǎo)學(xué)案新人教版必修第一冊(cè)

SectionⅣ寫作指導(dǎo)寫一封有關(guān)學(xué)校生活的建議信寫作儲(chǔ)備閱讀教材P18建議信，提煉建議信的寫作特點(diǎn)：Ⅰ.常用寫作格式1．齊頭式，即日期、正文和署名全在左邊頂格寫。教材中就接受了這種格式。2．空格式：日期、署名在右邊，正文每段開頭空兩格。Ⅱ.黃金寫作模板Ⅲ.寫作語言特點(diǎn)1．建議信要寫得簡明扼要、目的明確、具有合理性和勸服力。2．提出的理由要入情入理，語氣肯定要禮貌當(dāng)先。Ⅳ.寫作常用詞匯1．havetroublein...在……有些麻煩2．communicatewith...與……溝通3．feellonely感到孤獨(dú)4．a(chǎn)skforadviceon...就……征求建議5．suggestionn．建議6．overcomev．克服7．getalongwellwith...和……相處很好8．makeit做到9．makefriends交摯友10．a(chǎn)sfarasIamconcerned/inmyopinion就我而言/在我看來Ⅴ.寫作常用句型1．建議信開頭常用句式：(1)Iknowyouarenowhavingtroublecommunicatingwithothers,andyoumayoftenfeellonely.我知道你現(xiàn)在在與人溝通方面有些麻煩，你也可能常常感到孤獨(dú)。(2)I'mgladtoreceiveyourletteraskingformyadviceon...我很興奮收到你就……征求建議的來信。(3)Herearesometips/afewsuggestionstohelpyou.這里有幫助你的一些建議。(4)Ithinkyoucanmakeitifyoufollowtheadvicebelow.假如你聽從以下建議，我認(rèn)為你會(huì)做到的。2．表達(dá)建議常用句式：(1)First(ly),whynotjoinaclub?Ifyoudothis,youcanmakefriends.首先，為什么不參與一個(gè)俱樂部？假如你這樣做的話，就會(huì)交到摯友。(2)Second(ly)，youshould/cantrytotalkwithothers.Then/Thatway,youwillfeelbetter.其次，你應(yīng)當(dāng)盡力與人交談。這樣，你會(huì)感覺好點(diǎn)。(3)Third(ly),itwouldbeagoodideaifyoureadabookorlistentomusic.Bydoingthis,youwillcalmyourselfdown.第三，假如你看書或聽音樂將會(huì)是個(gè)不錯(cuò)的辦法。通過這樣做，你會(huì)使自己安靜下來。3．建議信結(jié)尾常用句式：(1)Ihopeyouwillfindtheseideasuseful.我希望你會(huì)發(fā)覺這些方法有用。(2)Astimegoeson,peoplewillknowyoubetterandwillliketomakefriendswithyouifyoucanfollowtheadviceabove.假如你遵從以上建議，隨著時(shí)間的推移，人們會(huì)更加理解你，會(huì)情愿和你交摯友的。(3)Ibelievethatifyoufollowmyadvice,you'llgetalongwellwithyourclassmates.我信任，假如你聽從我的建議，你會(huì)和同學(xué)們相處好的。典例剖析假如你是李華，你的好摯友蘇茹在交友方面存在著一些困難，請(qǐng)依據(jù)下面的提示給她寫一封信。1．要交摯友首先要做一個(gè)摯友；2．要和摯友同甘共苦；患難之中的摯友才是真正的摯友；3．友情須要時(shí)間和投入(effort)。留意：詞數(shù)80左右。審題謀篇Ⅰ.定框架→好的起先，勝利的一半體裁建議信人稱其次人稱為主時(shí)態(tài)主要運(yùn)用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)框架第一段：點(diǎn)出寫信的目的：交摯友存在困難其次段：正文列出所提的建議：做一個(gè)摯友；和摯友同甘共苦；須要時(shí)間和投入最終一段：寫信人的希望Ⅱ.定要點(diǎn)、關(guān)鍵詞及動(dòng)詞時(shí)態(tài)→打造一篇要點(diǎn)全面、用詞精確得體、時(shí)態(tài)多樣的極優(yōu)作文要點(diǎn)一：知道你在交友方面有麻煩，我很愧疚。(賓語從句)Iamsorrytoknowthatyouarehavingtroubleinmakingfriends.要點(diǎn)二：假如你接受我的建議，變更這種境況是很簡單的。(be＋adj.＋todo)Thesituationiseasytochangeifyoutakemyadvice.要點(diǎn)三：要交摯友首先要做一個(gè)摯友。(主謂結(jié)構(gòu))Ifyouwanttomakefriends,youshouldbeafriendfirst.要點(diǎn)四：你要和摯友同甘共苦。Youshouldsharehappinessandsorrowwithyourfriends.要點(diǎn)五：患難之中的摯友才是真正的摯友。Afriendinneedisafriendindeed.要點(diǎn)六：友情須要時(shí)間和投入。(主謂賓結(jié)構(gòu))Friendshipcallsfor/needstimeandeffort.Ⅲ.詞匯、句式升級(jí)→創(chuàng)建極優(yōu)作文的倩詞靚句升級(jí)句式一：用whynot改寫要點(diǎn)三Ifyouwanttomakefriends,whynotbeafriendfirst？升級(jí)句式二：用wouldn'titbeagoodideaif...改寫要點(diǎn)四Wouldn'titbeagoodideaifyousharehappinessandsorrowwithyourfriends？升級(jí)句式三：用justasasayinggoes來豐富要點(diǎn)五Justasasayinggoes,“Afriendinneedisafriendindeed.”Ⅳ.組建極優(yōu)作文→水到渠成的成就感：動(dòng)力的源泉參考范文：DearSuRu，Iamsorrytoknowthatyouarehavingtroubleinmakingfriends.However,thesituationiseasytochangeifyoutakemyadvice.Herearesometipstohelpyou.Tobeginwith,whynotbeafriendifyouwanttomakefriends?Inaddition,wouldn'titbeagoodideaifyousharehappinessandsorrowwithyourfriends?Justasasayinggoes,“Afriendinneedisafriendindeed.”Lastbutnotleast,youaresupposedtoputyourheartintomakingfriends.Itiswellknowntousallthatfriendshipcallsfortimeandeffort.Ihopeyouwillfindtheseideasuseful.Yours，LiHuaJ即學(xué)即練假如你是李華，你的英國摯友Tony來信告知你最近他沉迷于電子嬉戲，影響了學(xué)習(xí)和健康，希望你能就如何戒掉電子嬉戲給他提出建議。要點(diǎn)包括：①寫信的目的；②可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)微環(huán)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；③你的祝福。留意：①詞數(shù)80左右；②內(nèi)容可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，留意行文連貫。參考范文：DearTony，Hearingthatyou'readdictedtovideogames，whichdoesharmtoyourhealthandstudy,I'mwritingtogiveyousomeadviceonhowtogetridofit.Aboveall,itwouldbeagoodideatofocusonsomeotheractivities.Forexample，signupforsomevolunteerorganisationsorjoininsomemeaningfulorrelaxingextracurricularactivitieswhenyoufeelbored,likereadingordoingsports.What'smore，Ifeelitsignificanttolimitthetimeyouspendplayingvideogamesandfocusmoreonstudysothatyoucankeepabalancebetweenschoolworkandgames.Additionally,Irecommendthatyoushouldtrytogetintoagoodroutineandmakeaschedule，whichisbeneficialtoyourhealt