高考英語(yǔ)復(fù)習(xí)讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)練習(xí)+從陌生隔閡到溫情轉(zhuǎn)變的鄰里故事課件

高考英語(yǔ)讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)語(yǔ)篇練習(xí)從陌生隔閡到溫情轉(zhuǎn)變的鄰里故事1題目分析讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)題目再現(xiàn)范文呈現(xiàn)努力方向2Part1題目呈現(xiàn)3續(xù)寫(xiě)原文WhenSamandIwerefirstmarried,welivedinaquietneighborhood.Acrossthestreet,therewasabighousewithasix-foothighhedge(樹(shù)籬)thatblockedallbutasmallpathtoitsyard.Itwasclearthatourneighborswantedprivacyandweren’tinterestedinany“neighborly”behavior.Samhaddiscoveredthatabrotherandsisterlivedinthehouse.Thehousebelongedtothesister,andthebrotherhelpedaroundthehousewiththingslikegettingthemailandsettingtherubbishcansoutonthedaywhentherubbish-collectingtruckwouldcome.Thesisterandbrotherwerebothveryold.AndweconsideredthemunfriendlybecausetheyhadcalledthepolicewhenSamplayedmusicwithhisbandinouryardoneafternoon.4續(xù)寫(xiě)原文Notrealizingitwaswewhowereinthewrong,wethoughtourneighborscausedtroubletoouralreadydifficultlife.Atthetime,SamandIwerequiteshortofmoney.WefeltsadwhenChristmaswasaroundthecorner.ItwasourfirstChristmasasamarriedcouple,andwedidn’thavemuchmoneytocelebrateit.Therewerenogiftsorparties.Wedidn’tevenhaveanyspecialholidaytreatstoshareathome.“IwishwecouldhaveenoughgoodstuffonChristmasDay.WhenIwasakid,myfamilywouldalwayshavecheese,meat,cookies,candies,etc.Italwaysfeltlikeafeast(盛宴)tomeasakid,”ItoldSam.IunderstoodthatChristmaswasn’tallaboutnicethings,butitjustdidn’tfeellikeChristmaswithonlyafewfoods.Samseemedtofeelthesameway.“Thingswillgetalotbetternextyear,”hesaid,tryingtobecheerful.5續(xù)寫(xiě)原文ThreeweeksbeforeChristmas,wegottoknowour“unfriendly”neighbor,thebrother,hadabaddiseaseandpassedaway.Onemorningafterthat,wenoticedourneighbor—thetinysisterMary—tryingwithallherstrengthtopullherrubbishcanstotheroadsidealone.Shelookedsoweakandlonely.6段首句Paragraph1：Samcouldn’tstanditandrushedtoher,saying,“MayIhelpyou?”P(pán)aragraph2：Whenweansweredthedoor,therewasnobodybutabigbagofgoods.7Part2題目分析8續(xù)寫(xiě)原文分析9文中講述了婚后的“我”和山姆住在一個(gè)寧?kù)o街區(qū)，對(duì)面鄰居家有高大樹(shù)籬，看似拒人于千里之外，還因山姆樂(lè)隊(duì)演奏報(bào)過(guò)警，這讓“我”倆覺(jué)得他們不友好，加上經(jīng)濟(jì)拮據(jù)，首個(gè)圣誕節(jié)也過(guò)得寒酸?！拔摇毕蛏侥坊貞泝簳r(shí)豐盛的圣誕美食，滿(mǎn)是遺憾。然而，圣誕節(jié)前三周，鄰居哥哥病逝，姐姐瑪麗獨(dú)自艱難地拖垃圾桶，顯得虛弱又孤獨(dú)。此前的隔閡與誤解在這一瞬間開(kāi)始消融，“我”和山姆對(duì)這位曾經(jīng)“不友好”的鄰居有了新的認(rèn)識(shí)，也預(yù)示著鄰里關(guān)系將發(fā)生轉(zhuǎn)變，故事在這種微妙的氛圍中留下了溫情的伏筆。點(diǎn)1：位于續(xù)寫(xiě)第一段段首，流暢銜接前面的記敘文和第一段段首語(yǔ)；點(diǎn)2：位于續(xù)寫(xiě)第一段段尾，流暢銜接第二段段首句；點(diǎn)3：位于續(xù)寫(xiě)第二段段首，續(xù)寫(xiě)銜接第二段段首語(yǔ)；點(diǎn)4：文章結(jié)尾升華，給予讀者正能量，揭示和強(qiáng)調(diào)主題。情節(jié)構(gòu)建的重點(diǎn)10續(xù)寫(xiě)思路分析Para1：Samcouldn’tstanditandrushedtoher,saying,“MayIhelpyou?”山姆看到瑪麗如此艱難，心中一緊，再也忍不住了。他毫不猶豫地快步?jīng)_過(guò)去，臉上帶著關(guān)切的神情，大聲說(shuō)道：“瑪麗，我來(lái)幫你吧！”瑪麗有些驚訝地抬起頭，眼中閃過(guò)一絲猶豫，但在看到山姆真誠(chéng)的目光后，微微點(diǎn)了點(diǎn)頭。山姆接過(guò)垃圾桶，輕松地將它拖到了路邊，瑪麗在一旁靜靜地看著，眼神里透露出一絲感激。隨后，山姆陪著瑪麗回到她家門(mén)口，簡(jiǎn)單聊了幾句，瑪麗的臉上漸漸有了些許笑容，仿佛堅(jiān)冰開(kāi)始融化。山姆離開(kāi)時(shí)，瑪麗輕輕地說(shuō)了聲“謝謝”，這聲謝謝讓山姆心里暖暖的，也讓他決心以后要多多關(guān)照這位孤獨(dú)的鄰居。11續(xù)寫(xiě)思路分析Para2：Whenweansweredthedoor,therewasnobodybutabigbagofgoods.圣誕節(jié)的清晨，陽(yáng)光透過(guò)窗戶(hù)灑在我們臉上，我和山姆被一陣敲門(mén)聲吵醒。我們迅速起身，整理好衣服去開(kāi)門(mén)，滿(mǎn)心期待著會(huì)是怎樣的一個(gè)驚喜。當(dāng)門(mén)緩緩打開(kāi)，卻發(fā)現(xiàn)門(mén)口空無(wú)一人，只有一個(gè)大大的袋子放在地上。我們好奇地將袋子拿進(jìn)屋，打開(kāi)一看，里面裝滿(mǎn)了各種各樣的美食，有鮮嫩的奶酪、噴香的肉類(lèi)、精致的餅干，還有五彩斑斕的糖果。我們驚訝地對(duì)視一眼，心中滿(mǎn)是疑惑和感動(dòng)。是誰(shuí)在這個(gè)特別的日子給我們送來(lái)了這樣一份珍貴的禮物？突然，山姆像是想到了什么，他望向?qū)γ娆旣惖募?，眼神里透露出一絲了然和溫情，我也瞬間明白了，這份禮物一定是瑪麗送來(lái)的。這一袋禮物不僅僅是食物，更是一份珍貴的心意，它化解了過(guò)去的所有不愉快，讓我們真切地感受到了鄰里之間那份溫暖的情誼在這個(gè)寒冷的冬日里悄然綻放。12Part3范文呈現(xiàn)13范文呈現(xiàn)WitnessingMary'sfrailfigurestrugglingwiththeheavyrubbishcans,Sam'sheartwasfilledwithcompassion.Unabletobearthesightanylonger,hedashedacrossthestreetwithoutamoment'shesitation.AsheapproachedMary,hisfaceshowedgenuineconcernandhesaidinawarmvoice,"MayIhelpyou?"Marylookedup,abitstartledbySam'ssuddenappearance.Foramoment,therewashesitationinhereyes,butuponseeingthekindnessandsincerityinSam'sgaze,shenoddedslightly.Samthentookholdoftherubbishcanswitheaseandhauledthemtotheroadside.Marywatchedquietly,aglimmerofgratitudeshininginhereyes.Afterward,SamaccompaniedMarybacktoherdoorstep,andtheyexchangedafewwords.Slowly,afaintsmileemergedonMary'sface,asiftheicebetweenthemhadbeguntothaw.WhenSamleft,Marywhisperedasoft"thankyou",whichwarmedSam'sheartandstrengthenedhisresolvetolookoutforthislonelyneighborinthefuture.14范文呈現(xiàn)OnChristmasmorning,thesunlightfilteredthroughthewindowandgentlywokeSamandme.Wewererousedfromoursleepbyaknockatthedoor.Hastilygettingoutofbedandstraighteningourclothes,werushedtothedoor,filledwithanticipationofwhatsurprisemightawaitus.Asthedoorcreakedopen,toourastonishment,therewasnooneinsight.Instead,alargebagsatontheground.Curious,webroughtthebaginsideandopenedit.Toouramazement,itwasfilledwithallsortsofdelicioustreats-freshcheese,savorymeats,delicatecookies,andcolorfulcandies.Weexchangedalookofsurpriseandwonder,ourheartsfilledwithquestionsandgratitude.Whocouldhavesentussuchapreciousgiftonthisspecialday?Suddenly,Samseemedtohaveanidea.HelookedtowardsMary'shouseacrossthestreet,andtherewasaglimmerofrealizationandwarmthinhiseyes.I,too,immediatelyunderstoodthatthisgiftmusthavecomefromMary.Thisbagofpresentswasnotjustfood;itwasaprecioustokenofkindnessthatdissolvedallthepastunpleasantnessandmadeustrulyfeelthewarmbondofneighborlyfriendshipblossomingonthiscoldwinterday.15升級(jí)版范文呈現(xiàn)ItwasachillymorningwhenSamcaughtsightofMary,whowaswrestlingwiththerubbishcans,herfeebleframeseeminglyonthevergeofbeingoverpoweredbytheweight.Unabletoenduresuchaheart-wrenchingsceneanylonger,Sam,withasurgeofkindnessfloodinghisheart,boltedtowardsher."MayIhelpyou?"heinquired,hisvoicelacedwithgenuineconcern.Mary,takenabackbyhissuddenapproach,hesitatedforasplitsecond.However,itwasthesinceritygleaminginSam'seyesthatconvincedhertonodeversoslightly.WithSamtakingchargeofthebinseffortlessly,Maryfollowed,hereyesnowshimmeringwithatingeofgratitude.Astheyreachedherdoorstep,afewwordswereexchanged,andloandbehold,afaintsmilecreptontoMary'sface,asifthefrostyrelationshipbetweenthemhadstartedtothawunderthewarmthofSam'sact.LittledidtheyknowthatthiswasjustthepreludetoaheartwarmingChristmassurprise.16升級(jí)版范文呈現(xiàn)Christmasmorningarrived,bathingourhumbleabodeinasoft,goldenglow.Suddenly,aknockatthedoorshatteredthestillnessoftheroom.Rousedfromourslumber,wehastenedtothedoor,ourheartspoundingwithanticipation.Andthe