九年級上冊 牛津滬教版 英語 第六單元《Unit 6 Writing》課件

HealthydietUnit6Writing

九年級上冊—牛津滬教版—英語—第六單元1.

Learnsomerelevantwordsandphrasesofrestaurantreviews.

學習關(guān)于餐廳評論相關(guān)的詞匯短語。2.Understandthestructureandmainpointsoftherestaurantreviews.

了解餐館點評的結(jié)構(gòu)和要點。3.Graspandusethesentencepatternsofrestaurantreviews.

掌握并運用餐評的通用句式。4.Learnhowtoexpressthediningexperienceinwrittenlanguageinanobjectiveway.

學習如何用書面語客觀地對餐廳用餐經(jīng)歷進行表達。LearningAims學習目標Leading-inBrainstormingFoodPriceServiceEnvironment...What

canattractyoutohavemealsinthesamerestaurantagain?TheresultisbasedonClass2,Grade9intheHills’School.Whatwillyoudoifyou

don’t

likethefoodandtheservicethere?Writesomereviewsfortherestaurant

Whatwillyoudoifyoulikethefoodandtheserviceintherestaurant?Arestaurantreviewisaboutyourexperienceofeatingatarestaurant.YoucanfindthiskindofreviewontheInterneteasily.Pre-writingHowtowritearestaurantreview?Dorishas

writtenarestaurantreview.Readthereviewbelow.Titletitlen.標題OpeningIntroductionReviewofthe

foodReviewofthe

serviceservicen.服務Recommendationrecommendn.推薦v.推薦recommendationStructureTitleamazing...excellentdeliciouswonderfulfantasticunforgettable+nameoftherestaurantadjectivesTitle:

Title+nameoftherestaurantadjectivesLet’stry在一家廣州餐廳的粵式美食DeliciousCantonesefoodat

aGuangzhouRestaurant在一家重慶餐館非常難忘的火鍋大餐AnunforgettablehotpotataChongqingRestaurantOtherpossibletitles...,amust-gorestaurantLovelyfood,lovely...Wonderfulmealat...Agreatdiningplace...OpeningOpening:

______+_______ate/hadmeal/dinner...+_________.

whenwhowhereIntroduction:

foodprice_______serves_____food.

restauranttypeWhopaid/spent_____toeat/eatingthere.

priceamount+currency貨幣單位

200yuanIntroduction+FoodreviewsTopicsentenceThefoodwas_______.adjectivegoodwonderfuldeliciousexcellentsosonotsogoodbadterrible...Specificdetails____________________.detailsofyourexperienceServicereviewsReviewoftheserviceThewaiters/service/...was_______.adjective

________________.beseatedv.就坐receivefoodv.收到食物specificexperienceRecommendationIwouldcertainlyrecommend_______...restaurantYoushould______________.givesuggestionsarrivaltimewaitingtimeparkinglotavailableotherthingsneedtoknowAnalyze(分析)thelinkingwordsusefullinkingwords并列連詞：also

and

inaddition

besides

aswell

notonly,butaslo

...

轉(zhuǎn)折對比連詞：but

however,

...

though/although

時間連詞：(not)...until/until

when/while

...

因果連詞：because/so/asaresult,/therefore,...

Whattense?theSimplePastTensetheSimplePresentTenseAnalyze(分析)thetense時態(tài)past

experiencepresentsituation/recommendationAnalyze(分析)thePerson人稱thefirstperson第一人稱I、me、myWe、us、our

thesecond

person第二人稱You、your、you

Whatperson?whathappenedinthepastgiveadviceAnswerthequestionsbelowtohelpyouwriteyourownrestaurantreviews.回答以下問題并結(jié)合自己的用餐經(jīng)歷寫餐評。Arestaurantreview3.Tense:SimplePresentTenseSimplePastTense4.Person:thefirstpersonthesecondperson假設昨晚你與父母到綠茵閣(TheGreeneryCafe)吃晚飯，請根據(jù)表格內(nèi)容為該餐廳寫一則評價。Practice項目評價和意見價格280元，小貴食物牛排(steak)和沙拉很美味，但湯太咸(salty)服務友善，但上菜有點慢環(huán)境餐廳干凈、安靜，輕柔的音樂，讓人放松總體建議推薦就餐123456ArestaurantreviewSamplewriting

ExcellentEnglishfoodattheGreeneryCafeLastnight,myparentsandIateattheGreeneryCafe.Thecafeserveswesternfood.Wepaidabout280yuantoeatthere.Itwasalittleexpensive.Thefoodwaswonderful.Thesteakandthesaladtasteddeliciousthoughthesoupwastoosalty.Thewaiterswerefriendlytous,butalittleslow.Weorderedourfoodat7p.m.,butwedidn’treceiveourfooduntil8p.m.Theenvironmentwasnice.Itwascleanandquiet.Inaddition,thesoftmusicmadeusrelaxed.Iwouldcertainlyrecommendittomyfriends.IfeelgreatwiththeGreeneryCafeandIwillgotheretohavemealsagain.Finishtheevaluationchart.自評與他評?！獭獭獭獭獭蘌ost-writingAssessmentStandard評分標準Opening

TitleIntroductionReviews

WhenWhoWhereContent（內(nèi)容性）

Accuracy（準確性）

Coherence（連貫性）

TenseGrammaticalmistakesLinkingwordsorphrases

FoodPriceFoodServiceOthers...PresentTensePastTenseRecommendation

spelling，capitalize，punctuation...PersonSummary:writingfor

arestaurantreviewInthislesson,wehavelearnt

whatarestaurantreviewis.somenewwordsandphrasesofthistopic.thestructureofarestaurantreview.howtoorganizeeachpartwiththehelpofsomeusefulpatternsandlinkingwords.howtowrite

areviewofoureatingexperienceinarestaurantinanobjectiveway.howtoevaluateourwritingandimproveitinabetterway.

Ihopeyoucanenjoytheclass!??????Writeanotherreviewofyourfavouriterestaurantandrecommendittoyourfriends.HomeworkThemoreyoushare,thehappieryouwillfeel.Thankyou!HealthydietUnit6Writing

九年級上冊—牛津滬教版—英語—第六單元（答疑）Let’sgivecommentsforoneofmystudents’restaurantreviewsandcorrecthermistakestogether.YummyCantoneseDimsumatTaoTaoJuYesterdaymorning,mymotherandIhavemorningteaaTaoTaoJuinPanyu.TherestaurantserveCantoneselocalfood,wepaidabout200yuantoeatthere.Thedimsumtherewasverydelicious.Thesteamedbeefballs,shrimpdumplingsandsteamedcrabdumplingswasmyfavourit.Thewaiterswerefriendlytous,butthefoodwassendtoustooslowly.Afterorderourfood,wewaitedaboutfortyminutes.Theenvironmentwasalittlenoise.Andthereweretoomanypeopleandalittleofcrowded.Buttheenvironmentwasprettynice.Iwouldcertainlyrecommendittoyou.Thedimsumhereisverydelicious.Youmusthaveatry.IlikethislocalrestaurantsomuchthatIwillgototheretohavemorningteaagain.AssessmentStandard評分標準adj.+thenameoftherestaurant3W:when,who,wherefood+pricetopicsentence+detailedexperiencerecommend+givesuggestionstense/person/grammarpointslogicalconjunctionsYummyCantoneseDimsumatTaoTaoJuYesterdaymorning,mymotherandIhavemorningteaaTaoTaoJuinPanyu.TherestaurantserveCantoneselocalfood,wepaidabout200yuantoeatthere.Thedimsumtherewasverydelicious.Thesteamedbeefballs,shrimpdumplingsandsteamedcrabdumplingswasmyfavourit.Thewaiterswerefriendlytous,butthefoodwassendtoustooslowly.Afterorderourfood,wewaitedaboutfortyminutes.Theenvironmentwasalittlenoise.Andthereweretoomanypeopleandalittleofcrowded.Buttheenvironmentwasprettynice.Iwouldcertainlyrecommendittoyou.Thedimsumhereisverydelicious.Youmusthaveatry.IlikethislocalrestaurantsomuchthatIwillgototheretohavemorningteaagain.adj.nameoftherestaurantwhenwhowherefoodpricetopicsentencedetailedexperiencetopicsentence+detailedsentencesrecommendContent:+suggestion+personalopinionsYummyCantoneseDimsumatTaoTaoJuYesterdaymorning,mymotherandIhavemorningteaaTaoTaoJuinPanyu.TherestaurantserveCantoneselocalfood,wepaidabout200yuantoeatthere.Thedimsumtherewasverydelicious.Thesteamedbeefballs,shrimpdumplingsandsteamedcrabdumplingswasmyfavourit.Thewaiterswerefriendlytous,butthefoodwassendtoustooslowly.Afterorderourfood,wewaitedaboutfortyminutes.Theenvironmentwasalittlenoise.Andthereweretoomanypeopleandalittleofcrowded.Buttheenvironmentwasprettynice.Iwouldcertainlyrecommendittoyou.Thedimsumhereisverydelicious.Youmusthaveatry.IlikethislocalrestaurantsomuchthatIwillgototheretohavemorningteaagai