2024-2025學(xué)年九年級(jí)英語(yǔ)全冊(cè)單元寫(xiě)作訓(xùn)練Unit5Whataretheshirtsmadeof含解析新版人教新目標(biāo)版

PAGEPAGE9Unit5Whataretheshirtsmadeof？本單元涉及的話題是“中國(guó)制造的東西”，話題作文通常會(huì)涉及民間藝術(shù)以及文化傳承。這是一個(gè)適合記敘、說(shuō)明兩種體裁相結(jié)合的話題，同時(shí)也是學(xué)生喜愛(ài)寫(xiě)、有話寫(xiě)的題材。寫(xiě)好這類(lèi)文章，最重要的是精確捕獲寫(xiě)作的“精髓”，有條理的把要描述的某一事物呈現(xiàn)出來(lái)，此類(lèi)話題的寫(xiě)作要立足事實(shí)、表達(dá)真情實(shí)感。寫(xiě)作此類(lèi)話題作文的常用表達(dá)有：(1)

Chinaisfamousfor…(2)

It’sgreatthatChinaissogoodat…(3)

…wishthatinthefuture…will…(4)

Theseusuallytrytoshow…(5)

Theyareseenassymbolsof…有用短語(yǔ):1.bemadeof

由……制成的(在成品后中仍可看出原材料)2.bemadefrom由……制成的（在成品中已無(wú)法分辨原材料）3.beknownfor以……著名4.beusedfor被用于……5.nomatter不論；無(wú)論6.becoveredwith用……覆蓋7.asfarasIknow據(jù)我所知8.byhand用手9.begoodfor對(duì)……有益10.onthelastFridayofeachmonth在每個(gè)月的最終一個(gè)星期五11.begoodat擅長(zhǎng)12.makehigh-technologyproducts制造高科技產(chǎn)品13.theearth’ssurface地球表面14.manydifferentkindsof很多不同種類(lèi)的15.flyakite放風(fēng)箏16.suchas例如17.accordingto依據(jù)；依據(jù)18.askforhelp懇求幫助19.asymbolof

……的象征20.put…on…把……放在……上21.goodluck好運(yùn)22.ataveryhighheat在高溫下23.bemadein在……制造的24.befamousfor以……著名25.onthesidesofmountains在山腰上26.trafficaccident交通事故27.akitefestival風(fēng)箏節(jié)28.befrom來(lái)自29.o...

把……變成……30.eventhough雖然；即使有用表達(dá)：1.It’smadeofusedwoodandglass.它是由廢棄的木頭和玻璃做成的2.It’smadefromgrass,leavesandflowers.它是用草、樹(shù)葉和花做成的3.thefairisaboutenvironmentalprotectionandrecycling展覽會(huì)是關(guān)于環(huán)境愛(ài)護(hù)和回收利用的4.somereallyinterestingandcreativeideas.一些既很好玩又有創(chuàng)意的辦法5.Theyproduceallkindsoftoysinthisfactory.他們?cè)谶@個(gè)工廠里生產(chǎn)各種各樣的玩具。6.ItseemsthatmanypeopleallovertheworlddrinkChinesetea.似乎全世界的很多人都在喝中國(guó)茶。7.Forexample,AnxiandHangzhouarewidelyknownfortheirtea.比如，安溪和杭州因茶葉而廣為人知。8.Americangoods美國(guó)商品9.nomatterwhat無(wú)論什么10.productsinthelocalshops本地商鋪的產(chǎn)品11.madeinChina中國(guó)制造everydaythings日常用品13.makehigh-technologyproducts制造高科技新產(chǎn)品14.inallpartsoftheworld在世界全部的地區(qū)15.hisshoppingexperiences他的購(gòu)物經(jīng)驗(yàn)16.Nomatterwhatyoumaybuy,youmightthinkthoseproductsweremadeinthosecountries.無(wú)論你買(mǎi)什么，你都可能認(rèn)為那些產(chǎn)品是在那些國(guó)家生產(chǎn)的。17.onthelastFridayofeachmonth在每月的最終一個(gè)星期五18.inGermany在德國(guó)19.mostoftheearth’ssurface地球的大部分表面20.causemanytrafficaccidents導(dǎo)致很多的交通事故21.usethissilverplate運(yùn)用這個(gè)銀制的盤(pán)子22.specialformsoftraditionalart獨(dú)特的傳統(tǒng)藝術(shù)形式23.frompapertoclaytobamboo24.objectsofbeauty美麗的物體25.accordingtoChinesehistory依據(jù)中國(guó)歷史26.sendout釋放27.becoveredwith被…覆蓋28skylanterns天燈，孔明燈29.papercutting剪紙12.aChinesefairytale中國(guó)童話故事30.fireataveryhighheat在高溫下燒烤31.茶是怎樣生產(chǎn)的？茶樹(shù)被栽在山邊上。當(dāng)茶葉長(zhǎng)好了，就被手工采摘下來(lái)然后送去加工。Howisteaproduced?Teaplantsaregrownonthesidesofmountains.Whentheleavesareready,theyarepickedbyhandandthenaresentforprocessing.【典型例題】假如你是韓梅，遠(yuǎn)在美國(guó)的筆友Linda給你寫(xiě)信了，信中，Linda向你了解中國(guó)有什么著名小吃。請(qǐng)依據(jù)表格提示給Linda回信。民間小吃糖葫蘆（tanghulu）原料山楂（haw）,有些地方的糖葫蘆用草莓（strawberry）、葡萄（grape），甚至小蘋(píng)果等制成歷史淵源據(jù)說(shuō)，宋代（thesongdynasty）一位皇帝的妻子曾因吃了糖葫蘆治好了病，因此流傳下來(lái)象征華蜜和團(tuán)員__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【優(yōu)秀范文】DearLinda,Youaskedmewhatfamoussnackstherewereinmycountry.Well,inmycountry,oneofthemostfamoussnacksistanghulu.

EachdifferentpartofChinahasdifferenttanghulu.Itisusuallymadeofhaws,whichareputtogetheronastickandcoveredwithicesugar.Buttherearemorematerialsfortanghulutodayinsomeplaces,suchasstrawberries,grapes,andevenlittleapples.Itissaidthattanghulueversavedthelifeofanemperor’swifeintheSongDynasty.ItwassodeliciousandhealthythatmanyChinesepeoplelikeeatingit.Itisnowseenasthebrightsymbolsofhappinessandreunion.Areyoulookingforwardtoeatingit?Cometomycountry,andI’lltreatyoutotanghulu【?？碱?lèi)型】（2024·貴州桐梓·初三一模）2024.5.21是聯(lián)合國(guó)大會(huì)確定的首個(gè)“國(guó)際茶日”，茶是中國(guó)傳統(tǒng)飲食文化的組成部分，是生活中不行或缺的飲品。作為中學(xué)生，我們應(yīng)了解茶并傳播茶文化。請(qǐng)依據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)提示，寫(xiě)一篇英語(yǔ)短文。要點(diǎn)提示：1.歷史悠久，約5000年前，神農(nóng)首次發(fā)覺(jué)茶可以飲用；2.種植廣泛，安溪和杭州尤以茶著名：3.喝茶有很多好處：有利健康，醒腦提神等；4.世界各地很多人喜愛(ài)喝茶并收集茶具(teaset)。寫(xiě)作要求：1.文章必需包括全部?jī)?nèi)容要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮以使行文連貫；2.詞數(shù)：80詞左右；（文章的開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）3.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名及校名。Chinaisfamousfortea.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【范文】Chinaisfamousfortea.Chineseteahasalonghistory.It'ssaidthatShenNongwasthefirsttodiscoverteaasadrinkabout5,000yearsago.Teaisproducedinmanydifferentareas.AnxiandHangzhouarewidelyknownfortheirtea.Therearelotsofadvantagesofdrinkingtea.It'sgoodforhealth.Acupofteacanmakeyourelaxedandfresh.Itseemsthatmanypeopleallovertheworldlovedrinkingteaandcollectingteasets.Asmiddleschoolstudents,weshouldknowaboutteacultureandspreaditaroundtheworld.【解析】1.題干解讀：這是一篇給材料作文。茶是中國(guó)傳統(tǒng)飲食文化的組成部分，是生活中不行或缺的飲品，為了了解茶并傳播茶文化。依據(jù)要點(diǎn)提示，從四方面綻開(kāi)寫(xiě)作：歷史悠久，約5000年前，神農(nóng)首次發(fā)覺(jué)茶可以飲用；種植廣泛，安溪和杭州尤以茶著名；喝茶有很多好處：有利健康，醒腦提神等；世界各地很多人喜愛(ài)喝茶并收集茶具。2.寫(xiě)作指導(dǎo)：本文主要是采納一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，主語(yǔ)是第三人稱(chēng)單數(shù)，本文所給材料比較具體，學(xué)生要做的就是用正確的英語(yǔ)把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來(lái)，留意時(shí)態(tài)與時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)的搭配及主謂一樣問(wèn)題。動(dòng)筆前要細(xì)致閱讀材料，不行遺漏要點(diǎn)，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。寫(xiě)作中正確運(yùn)用短語(yǔ)和句型，留意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。2.（2024·全國(guó)初二單元測(cè)試）英語(yǔ)課上,你班的各個(gè)學(xué)習(xí)小組對(duì)中國(guó)的一種傳統(tǒng)藝術(shù)形式——中國(guó)結(jié)進(jìn)行了溝通。老師要求每個(gè)小組選出一名代表來(lái)發(fā)言,介紹中國(guó)結(jié)。你是你們小組的發(fā)言人,請(qǐng)依據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)提示,寫(xiě)一篇發(fā)言稿。要點(diǎn)提示:1.每一個(gè)中國(guó)結(jié)都是由一根繩或線(asingleropeorthread)編成的;2.每一個(gè)中國(guó)結(jié)都依據(jù)特定的(specific)外形和意義來(lái)命名;3.過(guò)去人們用中國(guó)結(jié)來(lái)記錄事務(wù),現(xiàn)在人們主要把它當(dāng)作裝飾物(decoration);4.中國(guó)結(jié)是華蜜和好運(yùn)的象征。要求:1.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)微環(huán)節(jié),以使行文連貫;2.詞數(shù)90左右,開(kāi)頭已給出,但不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。MakingChineseknotsisatraditionalartformofChina.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Onepossibleversion:MakingChineseknotsisatraditionalartformofChina.It'sfamousinChinaandhasalonghistory.Everyknotismadewithasingleropeorthread.Everyknotisnamedbyitsspecificformandmeaning.Inthepast,peopleusedittorecordevents.Butnowit'smainlyusedasadecoration.TheChineseknotisusuallyred.InChina,it'sseenasasymbolofhappinessandgoodluck.Wecangiveittofriendsasagiftorhangitinourhouses.IthasbecomepopularinChinaandaroundtheworld.【解析】1.題干解讀：該題屬于說(shuō)明文。寫(xiě)作時(shí)要留意文章是一篇發(fā)言稿，要承接開(kāi)頭，主要介紹中國(guó)結(jié)。2.例文點(diǎn)評(píng)：例文采納一段式，主要圍繞4個(gè)句子進(jìn)行翻譯；精確介紹了中國(guó)結(jié)的制作，名字意義和象征；結(jié)構(gòu)清楚，段落分明。用第三人稱(chēng)來(lái)介紹；時(shí)態(tài)采納一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主，一般過(guò)去時(shí)和現(xiàn)在完成時(shí)為輔。3.高分亮點(diǎn)：短語(yǔ)：asymbolof，traditionalartform，inthepast，bemadewith，becomepopular。句型：Everyknotismadewithasingleropeorthread一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)，Everyknotisnamedbyitsspecificformandmeaning一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)。3.（2024·全國(guó)初三單元測(cè)試）請(qǐng)依據(jù)下列提示寫(xiě)一篇短文。詞數(shù)：80左右。提示：1.今日是Millie的生日。Millie的媽媽給她買(mǎi)了一件白襯衫、一條粉紅色短裙和一雙白色的鞋子。2.襯衫是絲綢的，產(chǎn)自杭州，穿起來(lái)很舒適。裙子是棉的，鞋是皮革的，都產(chǎn)自上海。襯衫和鞋很相配。3.Millie很喜愛(ài)它們。穿上它們，她看起來(lái)很美麗、很時(shí)髦。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________例文:TodayisMillie’sbirthday.Millie’smomboughtherawhiteblouse,apinkskirtandapairofwhiteshoes.Theblouseismadeofsilk.ItwasmadeinHangzhou.It’scomfortabletowear.Theskirtismadeofcottonandtheshoesaremadeofleather.TheywerebothmadeinShanghai.Theblousematchestheshoesverywell.Millielikesthemverymuch.Shelooksprettyandmodernonthem.【解析】1.題干解讀：這個(gè)一篇提綱作文，介紹了Millie的生日，依據(jù)所給材料寫(xiě)出正確的短文。2.例文點(diǎn)評(píng)：這些要點(diǎn)構(gòu)成寫(xiě)作的基本框架。我們要做的就是用正確的英語(yǔ)把要點(diǎn)表達(dá)出來(lái)，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮想象說(shuō)出自己的觀點(diǎn)。動(dòng)筆前要細(xì)致閱讀材料，不要遺漏要點(diǎn)，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。依據(jù)材料內(nèi)容可知本文主要是用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)和一般過(guò)去時(shí)態(tài)來(lái)寫(xiě)，要留意主謂一樣等問(wèn)題。寫(xiě)作中要適當(dāng)運(yùn)用連詞，留意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。3.高分亮點(diǎn)：短語(yǔ)：buysb.sth.；bemadeof；bemadein；looksprettyandmodern。句型：ItwasmadeinHangzhou.It’scomfortabletowear.；Theskirtismadeofcottonandtheshoesaremadeofleather.。（2024·山東初三課時(shí)練習(xí)）手機(jī)是現(xiàn)代人必備的通信工具之一。它不僅可以用來(lái)打電話，還可以用來(lái)做很多其他事情。例如：聽(tīng)歌、玩嬉戲、上網(wǎng)閑聊、發(fā)郵件、看電影等。它一般是用塑料（plastic）和金屬（metal）制造的。請(qǐng)依據(jù)以上提示寫(xiě)一篇短文，介紹一下手機(jī)。詞數(shù)80左右。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________例文:Mobilephonesarebecomingmoreandmoreimportantinourlife.Nearlyeveryonehashisorherownmobilephoneexceptsomechildrenorsomeoldpeople.Theyarenotonlyusedformakingaphonecall，butalsofordoingmanythings，suchaslisteningtomusic，playinggames，chattingonline，sendinge-mailsandwatchingmovies.Theyareusuallymadeofplasticandmetal.Ithinkmobilephoneswillbebetterandbetterandbringusmorehappiness.【解析】題干解讀：該題目屬于說(shuō)明文寫(xiě)作，寫(xiě)作時(shí)要把手機(jī)的各項(xiàng)作用寫(xiě)進(jìn)去，適當(dāng)?shù)倪\(yùn)用連詞以及從句等。例文點(diǎn)評(píng)：例文采納的是一段式；用第三人稱(chēng)復(fù)數(shù)來(lái)敘述手機(jī)的好處；時(shí)態(tài)采納的是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)；描寫(xiě)手機(jī)時(shí)，條理清楚，邏輯性強(qiáng)。高分亮點(diǎn)：短語(yǔ)：becomemoreandmoreimportant；beusedfordoingsth；suchas。句型：Theyarenotonlyusedformakingaphonecall，butalsofordoingmanythings，suchaslisteningtomusic，playinggames，chattingonline，sendinge-mailsandwatchingmovies；Ithinkmobilephoneswillbebetterandbetterandbringusmorehappiness?！军c(diǎn)睛】首先細(xì)致審題，看清題目中的要求和要點(diǎn)；然后依據(jù)提示內(nèi)容，列出寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)及每個(gè)要點(diǎn)中可能要用到的表達(dá)，例如becomemoreandmoreimportant；beusedfordoingsth；suchas以及語(yǔ)從句等；然后緊扣要點(diǎn)，動(dòng)筆寫(xiě)作，在寫(xiě)作過(guò)程中，要留意句與句、段與段之間的過(guò)渡，必要時(shí)可適當(dāng)運(yùn)用表示轉(zhuǎn)折、因果、并列、比較等關(guān)系的連詞，使文章過(guò)渡平穩(wěn)，自然流暢；最終，要細(xì)致檢查有無(wú)單詞拼法錯(cuò)誤、標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)誤用等，還要檢查語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理，有無(wú)重復(fù)、啰嗦的語(yǔ)言，大小寫(xiě)是否正確，詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。（2024·山東日照·初三三模）英國(guó)某中學(xué)邀請(qǐng)你學(xué)校學(xué)生代表團(tuán)于寒假期間去訪問(wèn)溝通,假如你是李華,請(qǐng)你作為學(xué)生代表,寫(xiě)一份英文答謝辭。內(nèi)容提示：1.感謝邀請(qǐng)；2.溝通過(guò)程中重點(diǎn)介紹中國(guó)的傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日—春節(jié)和中國(guó)傳統(tǒng)民間藝術(shù)—剪紙；3.近年來(lái)家鄉(xiāng)日照發(fā)生了很多新改變,邀請(qǐng)英國(guó)摯友明年寒假來(lái)日照過(guò)春節(jié)。要求：1.依據(jù)提示內(nèi)容,不要逐字翻譯,可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)微環(huán)節(jié)；2.文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名和校名；3.詞數(shù)90左右（開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）。Ladiesandgentlemen,I'mverygladtospeakhere.First,thanksfor_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________