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閱讀下面材料,根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段,使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。Arnold,aneagle,waslivingatareserve.Asacuteandprettybird,hewaswellcaredforandlovedbythestaff.Onedaylastmonth,oneofthecaretakersnoticedsomethingstrange.KeeperEricsawArnoldprotectingalargelow-lyinglandintheground.Thespotwascarefullydecoratedwithleavesandbranches,andfeaturedasimplerockrightinthecenter.Laterthatday,EricevensawArnoldsittingontherockasifitwereanegg.AndEricfoundArnoldcontinuedtodosodayafterday.“Maleeaglestakeanequalpartinraisingyoung,sothisisaverynaturalbehaviorforArnold,amaleeagle,”Ericthought.ThenEricsharedArnold’sstoryontheInternet.Hepostedsomethinglikethis:Everysooften,ourlovelyeagle,Arnold,rearrangesthesticksinhisnestandcackles(咯咯叫)atanyothereaglesthatcometooclose.WewishArnoldalltheluckintheworld,butwe’renottellinghimtherealityofthesituation.Wehavetoseearockhatch(孵化)!ManyviewerswereimpressedbyEric’shumourandmeanwhileassumedthatArnoldwaslonelyandneededsomemates,butEricinsistedArnoldwaschoosingtodothisonhisown.“Arnoldisnotlonely!Heishousedwithfourotherbaldeagles—twomalesandtwofemales,”Ericresponded.“Heisnotwelcomehelpwithhisnest,norisheseekinghelp!Hehasnotbeenfindingmates,soheveryclearlywantstodothisonhisown.Heisperfectlycontent!Maybehewishestobeafather.”MoreandmoreviewersagreedwithEricandadvisedfindingababyeagleforArnoldbeforehavinghisownbaby.Lastweek,aneaglenestcontainingonechick(雛鳥)wasblowndownbyveryhighwinds.Thechick’smotherdied,butthechickwasfoundandrescuedbyafaithfulnestwatcher.Ericsuddenlyhadagoodidea.HefinallydecidedtobringthechicktoArnold’sside.注意:1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右;2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。ThechickwouldgiveArnoldachancetobearealfather,butitwouldalsobeachallengeforhim._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________WhenthechickgotclosetoArnold,awonderoccurred._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________文章大意:這篇文章講述了一只名叫Arnold的鷹在保護區(qū)的生活。Arnold被工作人員深愛和照顧,他展現(xiàn)出了想要孵化石頭的奇怪行為,這引起了管理員Eric的注意。Eric將Arnold的故事分享到了互聯(lián)網(wǎng)上,許多人認為Arnold孤獨需要伴侶,但Eric堅持認為Arnold是自愿這么做的。后來,一場大風摧毀了一個鷹巢,導致一只雛鳥失去了母親,但幸運地被救。Eric決定將這只雛鳥帶到Arnold身邊,給Arnold一個成為真正父親的機會,同時也是一個挑戰(zhàn)。當雛鳥靠近Arnold時,Arnold展現(xiàn)出了父愛,開始照顧這只雛鳥。伏筆及回應(yīng):伏筆:Arnold保護并裝飾了地面上的一塊地方,仿佛它是一個蛋?;貞?yīng):Eric和網(wǎng)友們猜測Arnold想要成為父親。伏筆:Eric在互聯(lián)網(wǎng)上分享Arnold的故事,提到Arnold咯咯叫著保護石頭?;貞?yīng):網(wǎng)友們被Eric的幽默所吸引,并關(guān)注Arnold的行為。伏筆:Arnold被安排與其他四只禿鷹一起生活?;貞?yīng):Eric解釋說Arnold并不孤獨,他不需要伴侶,而是想要獨自孵化。伏筆:一場大風摧毀了鷹巢,一只雛鳥失去了母親?;貞?yīng):Eric決定將這只雛鳥帶給Arnold,給他一個成為真正父親的機會。伏筆:Arnold對雛鳥的初步反應(yīng)未知?;貞?yīng):Arnold展現(xiàn)出父愛,開始照顧這只雛鳥。續(xù)寫要點(兩段):第一段:描述將雛鳥介紹給Arnold的過程,以及這對Arnold的挑戰(zhàn)。第二段:描述Arnold對雛鳥的反應(yīng),以及他如何展現(xiàn)出父愛。情感線:文章中的情感線是Arnold從孤獨的石頭孵化者到成為真正父親的轉(zhuǎn)變,以及人們對他的關(guān)愛和支持。故事線:故事從Arnold的奇怪行為開始,經(jīng)歷了人們對他的關(guān)注和討論,到Eric將雛鳥帶給Arnold,最后Arnold展現(xiàn)出父愛。主旨升華句(5句英文):"Sometimes,nature'sgreatestteachersarefoundinthemostunexpectedplaces.""Theheartthatyearnstonurtureisnevertrulyalone.""Intheeyesofaprotector,eventhesmallestchargecanreflectauniverseoflove.""Thedesiretobeaparentisafundamentaldrivethattranscendsspecies.""Anewlifecanbringoutthebestineventhemostunlikelyofparents."兩篇寫作示范:示范一:ThechickwouldgiveArnoldachancetobearealfather,butitwouldalsobeachallengeforhim.Theintegrationprocesswasfilledwithanticipationandcaution.Ericandhisteammonitoredtheirinteractionsclosely,ensuringthatArnold'snewrolewasacceptedgracefully.Totheirdelight,Arnoldshowedimmediatesignsofacceptance,gentlyextendinghiswingoverthechickasiftoprovideshelter.ThisheartwarmingsceneconfirmedthatArnold'smaternalinstinctswerenotmisplaced,andhewasreadytoembracefatherhood.WhenthechickgotclosetoArnold,awonderoccurred.Theoncesolitaryeagletransformedintoadotingparentrightbeforetheireyes.Arnold'sprotectivestanceandthesoftcoosheofferedthechickwereatestamenttohisnewfoundrole.Thestaff,whohadbeenfollowingArnold'sjourney,wereoverjoyedtoseehimfinallygetthechancetobeafather,andArnoldseemedtorevelinhisnewresponsibilities.示范二:ThechickwouldgiveArnoldachancetobearealfather,butitwouldalsobeachallengeforhim.Theteamatthereservehadtoensurethetransitionwassmooth,fearingthatArnold'sterritorialinstinctsmightbetriggered.However,asthechickwasplacednearArnold,aremarkablesceneunfolded.Arnold'sinitialcuriositysoongavewaytoagentleacceptance,ashebegantopreenandcarefortheyoungoneasifitwerehisown.WhenthechickgotclosetoArnold,awonderoccurred.ThetransformationinArnoldwasnothingshortofmiraculous.Hetookontheroleofafatherfigurewithease,providingwarmthandsecuritytotheorphanedchick.Thebondthatformedbetweenthemwasabeautifulsighttobehold,anditwasclearthatArnoldhadfoundanewpurposeinlife.ThestaffandtheonlinecommunitythathadbeenfollowingArnold'sstoryweretouchedbythisunexpectedturnofevents,andtheyeagerlyawaitedthenextchapterinArnold'sjourneyasafatherfigure.【答案】ThechickwouldgiveArnoldachancetobearealfather,butitwouldalsobeachallengeforhim.ItwaspossiblethatArnold,whohadnoexperienceofraisingyoungeagles,wouldpossiblydislikethechick,orevenworse,hemighthurtit.ButEriedidn’tchange
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