高考英語(yǔ)復(fù)習(xí)讀后續(xù)寫練習(xí)+特別的暑假經(jīng)歷：從尷尬到自豪+課件

高考英語(yǔ)讀后續(xù)寫語(yǔ)篇練習(xí)特別的暑假經(jīng)歷：從尷尬到自豪1題目分析讀后續(xù)寫題目再現(xiàn)范文呈現(xiàn)努力方向2Part1題目呈現(xiàn)3續(xù)寫原文IchewedonmypencilasIwalkedbackandforthacrossmybedroom.WhatwasIgoingtodo?ItwasbadenoughthatIwasthenewkid.ButnowIwassuretogetlaughedrightoutoffifthgrade.Howcouldmyfirsthomeworkbesuchadisaster?“MynameisAnna,andthissummerI——”Istopped.HowcouldIstandinfrontofmyclassandsaythatI’dspenttheentiresummerhandlingsomethingthatmostpeopledon’tevenliketotalkabout?Poop(糞便).I’dspentthreemonthsshoveling(鏟),collecting,andanalyzingcowpooponmygrandparents’farm.ItriedtothinkofadifferentadventureIcouldshare.MaybeIcouldsayI’dspentthesummerontheWeatherControlTeampreventingfloods.4續(xù)寫原文“Timefordinner,”mymomcalled.Iwalkedslowlydownthestairsandslidintomychair.“You’vebeeninyourroomsinceyoucamehomefromschool,”Momsaid.“Whatareyouworkingon?”Isighed.“IhavetotelltheclasswhatIdidthissummer.”Myyoungerbrother,Seymour,begantolaughuncontrollably.“Noonewillwanttositnexttoyouaftertheyhearyouwerecoveredincowpoopallsummer!”“OK,that’senough,Seymour,”Dadsaid.“Anna,”saidMom,puttinggreenbeansinabowl,“beproudoftheworkwedidthissummer.Ourplanetwouldbeinsadshapewithoutscientistslikeyourgrandfather.”5續(xù)寫原文It’struethatmygrandfatherdoesimportantwork.Hedevelopedaneasywaytousepoopasasourceoffuel.Usingthepoopisnoweasy,economical,andenvironmentallysafe.“Iknow,Mom,”Isaid,staringatmymeatloaf.“Butit’snotexactlysomethingpeoplewanttohearaboutbeforelunch.”ThatnightIdreamedaboutmoresplendidadventures:cavedivinginMexico;hikingthroughtheAmazonrainforest.Atschoolthenextday,Ibentovermydesk,listeningtoeachkidspeak.Mypalmsweresweaty,andtheknot(結(jié))inmystomachgrewtighter.“AndthatwasmyjourneytoMountEverest,”EmberAdamssaid,finishingherreport.Shebowedandtookherseat.6段首句Paragraph1：“It’syourturn,Anna,”Ms.Hammondsaid.Paragraph2：TheclasscheeredasIreturnedtomydesk,andsomeofmyclassmatesapproachedmewithadmirationintheireyes.7Part2題目分析8續(xù)寫原文分析9文章講述了安娜作為轉(zhuǎn)校生，面臨首次作業(yè)分享暑假經(jīng)歷的難題，因暑假在農(nóng)場(chǎng)處理牛糞而不知如何開口，試圖編造其他經(jīng)歷。晚餐時(shí)與家人提及此事，媽媽提醒她應(yīng)自豪，祖父的工作意義重大。第二天上學(xué)，安娜聽(tīng)著同學(xué)們分享精彩冒險(xiǎn)經(jīng)歷愈發(fā)緊張，輪到她時(shí)，她鼓起勇氣講述農(nóng)場(chǎng)工作及祖父將牛糞轉(zhuǎn)化為燃料的成果。同學(xué)們聽(tīng)完后鼓掌歡呼，有的還投來(lái)欽佩目光。點(diǎn)1：位于續(xù)寫第一段段首，流暢銜接前面的記敘文和第一段段首語(yǔ)；點(diǎn)2：位于續(xù)寫第一段段尾，流暢銜接第二段段首句；點(diǎn)3：位于續(xù)寫第二段段首，續(xù)寫銜接第二段段首語(yǔ)；點(diǎn)4：文章結(jié)尾升華，給予讀者正能量，揭示和強(qiáng)調(diào)主題。情節(jié)構(gòu)建的重點(diǎn)10續(xù)寫思路分析Para1：“It’syourturn,Anna,”Ms.Hammondsaid.“輪到你了，安娜，”哈蒙德老師說(shuō)道。安娜緊張地站起身，走向講臺(tái)，她看著同學(xué)們，深吸一口氣，開始講述。她先提到暑假在祖父母農(nóng)場(chǎng)度過(guò)，起初她因處理牛糞而覺(jué)得難以啟齒，但想到祖父的工作意義非凡，便鼓起勇氣繼續(xù)。她詳細(xì)說(shuō)明祖父研發(fā)出利用牛糞作為燃料的方法，既經(jīng)濟(jì)又環(huán)保，強(qiáng)調(diào)這看似平凡的工作實(shí)則對(duì)地球意義重大，她越說(shuō)越自信，聲音也越發(fā)洪亮。11續(xù)寫思路分析Para2：TheclasscheeredasIreturnedtomydesk,andsomeofmyclassmatesapproachedmewithadmirationintheireyes.同學(xué)們歡呼著，安娜回到座位。她剛坐下，幾個(gè)同學(xué)就圍了過(guò)來(lái)，眼中滿是欽佩。他們夸贊安娜的經(jīng)歷獨(dú)特且有意義，一個(gè)同學(xué)說(shuō)沒(méi)想到牛糞還能有這么大作用，另一個(gè)同學(xué)則表示安娜的祖父很了不起。安娜開心地笑了，她意識(shí)到原本讓自己尷尬的經(jīng)歷，現(xiàn)在卻成為自豪的資本，也讓她更加懂得平凡工作背后的偉大價(jià)值，她決定以后也要像祖父一樣為環(huán)保貢獻(xiàn)力量。12Part3范文呈現(xiàn)13范文呈現(xiàn)“It’syourturn,Anna,”Ms.Hammondsaid.Annastoodupnervouslyandwalkedtothefrontoftheclass.Lookingatherclassmates,shetookadeepbreathandbegan.Shefirstmentionedthatshehadspentthesummeronhergrandparents’farm.Atfirst,shefeltembarrassedtotalkabouthandlingcowpoop,butthinkingofthegreatsignificanceofhergrandfather’swork,shesummonedupthecouragetocontinue.Sheelaboratedthathergrandfatherhaddevelopedamethodtousecowpoopasfuel,whichwasbotheconomicalandenvironmentallyfriendly,emphasizingthatthisseeminglyordinaryworkwasactuallyofgreatsignificancetotheearth.Themoreshespoke,themoreconfidentshebecameandhervoicebecamelouder.14范文呈現(xiàn)TheclasscheeredasIreturnedtomydesk,andsomeofmyclassmatesapproachedmewithadmirationintheireyes.AssoonasIsatdown,severalclassmatesgatheredaround.Theypraisedthatmyexperiencewasuniqueandmeaningful.Oneclassmatesaidthathedidn’texpectcowpoopcouldhavesuchagreateffect,andanotherclassmatesaidthatmygrandfatherwasamazing.Ismiledhappily.Irealizedthattheexperiencethathadembarrassedmebeforehadnowbecomeasourceofpride,anditalsomademeunderstandthegreatvaluebehindordinarywork.IdecidedthatIwouldalsocontributetoenvironmentalprotectionlikemygrandfatherinthefuture.15升級(jí)版范文呈現(xiàn)“It’syourturn,Anna,”Ms.Hammondsaid.Tremblingslightly,Annarosetoherfeetandmadeherwaytothefrontoftheclass.Gazingatherclassmates,sheinhaleddeeplyandcommenced.Sheinitiallydisclosedthatshehadspentthesummeronhergrandparents’farm.Admittedly,shewasinitiallyhesitanttomentionhandlingcowpoop,yetuponreflectingontheprofoundsignificanceofhergrandfather’swork,shemusteredthecouragetoproceed.Itwashergrandfatherwhohaddevisedamethodtotransformcowpoopintofuel,whichwasnotonlyeconomicalbutalsoenvironmentallyfriendly.Emphasizingthatthisseeminglymundaneworkwas,infact,ofimmenseimportancetotheplanet,shefoundherselfgrowingmoreconfidentwitheachpassingword,hervoiceresonatingwithnewfoundassurance.16升級(jí)版范文呈現(xiàn)TheclasscheeredasIreturnedtomydesk,andsomeofmyclassmatesapproachedmewithadmirationintheireyes.HardlyhadItakenmyseatwhenseveralclassmatesflockedaround.Theylaudedthatmyexperiencewassingularlyuniqueandhighlymeaningful.Oneclassmateexclaimedthathehadne