高考英語復(fù)習(xí)讀后續(xù)寫練習(xí)+獸醫(yī)+April+的暖心善意謊言+課件

高考英語讀后續(xù)寫語篇練習(xí)獸醫(yī)April的暖心善意謊言1題目分析讀后續(xù)寫題目再現(xiàn)范文呈現(xiàn)努力方向2Part1題目呈現(xiàn)3續(xù)寫原文Aprilhasbeenavet(獸醫(yī))formanyyears.Throughoutherpractice,therehavebeenmanyunusualcases.Somewerequitesadandsomewereevenfunny.Butmostofallsherememberedonetimeonarainydayalittlegirlcametoherwithherlittleguineapig(豚鼠).ShewasintearsandaskedApriltosaveherbelovedpet.“Thisismyonlyfriend.IreallylovemyDorothy,”thegirlsaid.Aprilexaminedtheanimalandrealizedthatitwasveryill.Thepiglookedyoung.Probably,itwasalreadysickwhenitwassoldtothegirl.Thevetsawmanychildren’stears,andeachtimeshefeltawful.Butshealwaysfoundstrengthtosaythatshecouldn’tsavethepet.4續(xù)寫原文However,thistimeshelookedatthegirlandcouldn’tsayanything.Aprilsawhowsimplythegirlwasdressedandthoughtthatherfamilydidn’tmakealotofmoney.Therefore,thepigwasn'tjustapetforher,butarealtreasure.“Tellmeyourphonenumber,soIcancallyouaftertheoperation,”Aprilsaid.“I’llgiveyoumygrandmother’sphonenumber,becauseIlivewithher.Myparentsweregone.Grandmasaidthattheyhadgonesomewherefarandforalongtime.Bytheway,theygavemethepigbeforeleaving,”thegirlsaid.Aprilwrotedownthenumber,andwhenthegirllefttheclinic,sheburstintotears.Sherealizedherparentshaddiedandthegirldidn'tknowthetruthyet.Howcouldshetellherthatherguineapigwasgoingtodie?Aprillookedattheanimalhelplesslyandwonderedwhatshecoulddo.Suddenlyshecameupwithanidea.Butbeforedoingitsheputtheguineapigtosleep,andwenttothenearestpetstoreduringlunchtime.Shewantedtobuyexactlythesameguineapigandgiveittothegirl.5段首句Paragraph1：However,findingitwasn'tsoeasy.Paragraph2：Hergrandmotherunderstoodeverything,butthegirldidn'tnoticetheswitch.6Part2題目分析7續(xù)寫原文分析8文章講述了獸醫(yī)April從業(yè)多年，見過眾多病例。一個(gè)雨天，小女孩帶著病重的豚鼠Dorothy來找她，請(qǐng)求救治。April發(fā)現(xiàn)豚鼠病情嚴(yán)重，本欲如實(shí)相告，但看到小女孩穿著簡(jiǎn)樸且父母雙亡，便決定設(shè)法救治。手術(shù)前，她讓豚鼠安樂死，然后去寵物店買了一只相似的豚鼠。雖尋找過程不易，但最終買到。女孩來領(lǐng)寵物時(shí)，April把新豚鼠給了她，女孩未察覺，開心離開，April的善意之舉令人感動(dòng)。點(diǎn)1：位于續(xù)寫第一段段首，流暢銜接前面的記敘文和第一段段首語；點(diǎn)2：位于續(xù)寫第一段段尾，流暢銜接第二段段首句；點(diǎn)3：位于續(xù)寫第二段段首，續(xù)寫銜接第二段段首語；點(diǎn)4：文章結(jié)尾升華，給予讀者正能量，揭示和強(qiáng)調(diào)主題。情節(jié)構(gòu)建的重點(diǎn)9續(xù)寫思路分析Para1：However,findingitwasn'tsoeasy.然而，找到一只一模一樣的豚鼠并非易事。April在寵物店里徘徊許久，眼睛不停地在各個(gè)籠子間掃視，卻始終沒有發(fā)現(xiàn)與Dorothy極為相似的那只。她詢問店員是否有新進(jìn)的豚鼠，店員無奈地?fù)u頭。正當(dāng)她心急如焚時(shí)，角落里一只躲在食盆后的豚鼠引起了她的注意。這只豚鼠的毛色和斑紋與Dorothy有幾分相近，April趕忙叫店員將其取出，仔細(xì)端詳后，雖然不是完全一樣，但也只能如此了。她帶著這只豚鼠匆匆趕回診所，心中默默祈禱女孩不會(huì)察覺出異樣。10續(xù)寫思路分析Para2：Hergrandmotherunderstoodeverything,butthegirldidn'tnoticetheswitch.女孩的奶奶明白了一切，但女孩并未注意到豚鼠已被調(diào)換。當(dāng)女孩滿心歡喜地來到診所接走“Dorothy”時(shí)，奶奶眼中閃過一絲復(fù)雜的神情，她輕輕地嘆了口氣，什么也沒說。女孩緊緊地抱著豚鼠，不停地跟它說話，臉上洋溢著幸福的笑容。April看著女孩離去的背影，心中既欣慰又有些許酸澀。她知道，這個(gè)善意的謊言或許能讓女孩在這段艱難的時(shí)光里感受到一絲溫暖和安慰，而這也是她作為獸醫(yī)，所能給予的不僅僅是醫(yī)療上的救治，更是心靈上的呵護(hù)。11Part3范文呈現(xiàn)12范文呈現(xiàn)However,findingitwasn'tsoeasy.Aprilwanderedaroundthepetstoreforwhatseemedlikeaneternity,hereyesscanningeachandeverycagemeticulously,yetaguineapigresemblingDorothywasnowheretobefound.Sheinquiredoftheshopassistantiftherewereanynewarrivals,onlytobemetwithahelplessshakeofthehead.Justasshewasonthevergeofdespair,aguineapighidingbehindafoodbowlinthecornercaughtherattention.ThecolorandmarkingsofthispigboresomeresemblancetoDorothy's.Hastily,sheaskedtheassistanttotakeitout.Afteracarefulexamination,thoughnotanexactmatch,itwastheclosestshecouldget.Sherushedbacktotheclinicwiththepig,prayingsilentlythatthegirlwouldn'tnoticethedifference.13范文呈現(xiàn)Hergrandmotherunderstoodeverything,butthegirldidn'tnoticetheswitch.Whenthegirlarrivedattheclinic,overjoyedtopickup"Dorothy",aflickerofmixedemotionspassedthroughthegrandmother'seyes.Sheletoutasoftsighandremainedsilent.Thegirlhuggedtheguineapigtightly,chattingawaytoitwithabeamingsmileonherface.Watchingthegirl'srecedingfigure,Aprilfeltasenseofbothreliefandatingeofsadness.Sheknewthatthiswhiteliemightofferthegirlaglimmerofwarmthandcomfortduringthisdifficulttime.Andthiswasherway,notonlyasavettoprovidemedicaltreatment,butalsotooffersolacetoayoungheart.14升級(jí)版范文呈現(xiàn)However,findingitwasn'tsoeasy.ThereAprilwas,pacingbackandforthinthepetstore,hergazedartingfromonecagetoanotherwithunwaveringintensity.Alas,aguineapigthatcouldpassforDorothywaselusive.Itwasasifthefateswereconspiringagainsther.Sheinterrogatedtheshopassistant,desperationcreepingintohervoice,onlytoreceiveadishearteningnegativeresponse.Butjustwhenhopewasallbutextinguished,aglimmerofpossibilityemerged.There,inthefarcorner,coweringbehindafoodbowl,wasaguineapigwithasemblanceofDorothy'sfeatures.Withbatedbreath,shehaditretrievedandscrutinizeditclosely.Thoughnotaperfectreplica,itwouldhavetosuffice.Hurriedly,shemadeherwaybacktotheclinic,herheartpoundingwithamixtureofanxietyandanticipation.15升級(jí)版范文呈現(xiàn)Hergrandmotherunderstoodeverything,butthegirldidn'tnoticetheswitch.Whenthegirlbouncedintotheclinic,hereyesalightwithexcitementtoreclaim"Dorothy",hergrandmother'seyesbetrayedawealthofunspokenknowledge.Abarelyaudiblesighescapedherlipsassheheldherpeace.Thegi