作文13 遼寧鞍山卷（滿分作文+同類作文+素材積累）-備戰(zhàn)2022年中考英語(yǔ)滿分作文+萬(wàn)能模板+熱點(diǎn)素材

2021年中考滿分作文特快專刊真題在線作文13遼寧鞍山卷真題在線（遼寧省鞍山市2021年中考英語(yǔ)試題）根據(jù)有關(guān)部門調(diào)查，我國(guó)部分青少年每天勞動(dòng)時(shí)間過(guò)少。假如你是李華，請(qǐng)根據(jù)表格的內(nèi)容提示，說(shuō)一說(shuō)你平時(shí)參加勞動(dòng)的情況，談一談對(duì)養(yǎng)成良好勞動(dòng)習(xí)慣的看法。提示詞：社區(qū)志愿者服務(wù)communityvoluntaryservices；生活技能lifeskills；責(zé)任感asenseofresponsibility要求：1.不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的校名、人名等相關(guān)信息；2.根據(jù)中文和英文提示，可以適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；3.內(nèi)容完整、意思連貫、符合邏輯、書寫整齊；4.詞數(shù)：80-100詞。開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。李華參加勞動(dòng)的情況養(yǎng)成良好勞動(dòng)習(xí)慣的重要性在校打掃教室……?提高基本的生活技能?學(xué)會(huì)照顧自己?擁有責(zé)任感在家清洗餐具，洗衣服，做飯……社區(qū)做社區(qū)志愿者服務(wù)，如去養(yǎng)老院看望老人……I’mLiHua.Asateenager,Iamsupposedtoformgoodworkinghabits.It’sgoodformydevelopment.Atschool,_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________考題解析考題解析1.題干解讀：本文是一篇材料作文。要求根據(jù)表格提示內(nèi)容，介紹平時(shí)參加勞動(dòng)的情況以及談一談對(duì)養(yǎng)成良好勞動(dòng)習(xí)慣的看法。注意要點(diǎn)齊全，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。2.寫作指導(dǎo)：寫作時(shí)要以第一人稱來(lái)介紹，時(shí)態(tài)用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。作文可分為三段，第一段引出話題；第二段介紹自己平時(shí)參加勞動(dòng)的情況；第三段介紹養(yǎng)成良好勞動(dòng)習(xí)慣的重要性。要保證語(yǔ)言連貫，無(wú)語(yǔ)法和拼寫錯(cuò)誤。滿分范文滿分范文I’mLiHua.Asateenager,Iamsupposedtoformgoodworkinghabits.It’sgoodformydevelopment.Atschool,Icleanmyclassroomregularlyandkeepourclassroomcleanandtidy.Athome,Idothedishesandwashmyownclothes.Ialsohelpmyparentscookanddothehousework.BecauseIamamemberofthisfamilyandtheyaremyduty.Atcommunity,Ioftendocommunityvoluntaryservicesatweekends,likevisitingoldpeopleintheoldpeople’shouse.Itisimportantforustoimproveourbasiclifeskillsandweneedtolearntolookafterourselves.What’smore,weshouldhaveasenseofresponsibility.名師點(diǎn)評(píng)名師點(diǎn)評(píng)2021年鞍山卷與前兩年相比難度變化不大，話題都比較貼近生活，但作文體裁有一定變化，2021年為介紹平時(shí)參加勞動(dòng)的情況以及談一談對(duì)養(yǎng)成良好勞動(dòng)習(xí)慣的看法；2020年為議論文，講述自己對(duì)體育鍛煉的看法；2019年為團(tuán)隊(duì)精神相關(guān)，并給出相關(guān)建議。要求學(xué)生能善于觀察生活，并對(duì)生活的中的某些話題發(fā)表相應(yīng)的看法以及給出對(duì)應(yīng)建議。建議學(xué)生在日常寫作練習(xí)中多練習(xí)此類作文，并對(duì)應(yīng)學(xué)習(xí)其范文寫作思路。佳句積累1.Asateenager,Iamsupposedtoformgoodworkinghabits.【亮點(diǎn)】“amsupposedto”意為“理應(yīng)”，“formgoodworkinghabits”意為“養(yǎng)成好的勞動(dòng)習(xí)慣”。2.Atschool,…Athome…Atcommunity…【亮點(diǎn)】本段落運(yùn)用排比類結(jié)構(gòu)，表明自己在各個(gè)地點(diǎn)參加勞動(dòng)活動(dòng)的情況。3.Itisimportantforustoimproveourbasiclifeskills【亮點(diǎn)】It’sadj.forsb.todosth.對(duì)于某人來(lái)講做某事…4.What’smore,weshouldhaveasenseofresponsibility.【亮點(diǎn)】What’smore：并且；另外asenseofresponsibility：一種責(zé)任感舉一反三相似題①勞動(dòng)(Labor)是我們的生存之本，習(xí)近平總書記也明確提出，要在全國(guó)中小學(xué)開(kāi)展勞動(dòng)教育(Laboreducation)，提高學(xué)生的勞動(dòng)能力，培養(yǎng)學(xué)生愛(ài)勞動(dòng)，會(huì)勞動(dòng)和尊重勞動(dòng)的優(yōu)良品質(zhì)。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下提示，圍繞勞動(dòng)這個(gè)話題，寫一篇英語(yǔ)短文。寫作要點(diǎn)：1、簡(jiǎn)述你對(duì)“勞動(dòng)”的看法。2、寫一件你參與過(guò)的印象深刻的勞動(dòng)活動(dòng)。3、發(fā)出一個(gè)熱愛(ài)勞動(dòng)，參與勞動(dòng)的倡議。寫作要求：1、結(jié)構(gòu)完整，層次分明，語(yǔ)句通順。2、文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的地名、校名和人名。3、90詞左右。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【參考范文】Laborisanimportantpartoflife.Bylaboring,wecanbuildupourbodies.Laboringcannotonlyteachstudentshowtodothings,butalsocultivatetheirabilitytotakecareofthemselves.Besides,studentscandosomehouseworkwithintheirpowertohelptheirparentslightentheirburden,suchassweepingthefloor,washingdishes,makingbedsandsoon.Lastweekend,mygrandfatherandIwenttotheparktoplanttrees.Mygrandfathertoldmethateveryoneneedstotakeresponsibilitytoprotecttheenvironment,whichleftmeadeepimpression.Ithinklaboringisgoodforstudentsbothphysicallyandpsychologically.Therefore,inlife,boththeschoolandtheparentsshouldcultivatestudents’workingconsciousnessandability.【考題解析】1.題干解讀：本文是一篇材料作文。圍繞勞動(dòng)這個(gè)話題寫一篇短文。2.寫作指導(dǎo)：本文主要采用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般過(guò)去時(shí)。分為三段式：第一段簡(jiǎn)述自己對(duì)“勞動(dòng)”的看法；第二段寫一件與過(guò)的印象深刻的勞動(dòng)活動(dòng)；最后一段發(fā)出一個(gè)熱愛(ài)勞動(dòng)，參與勞動(dòng)的倡議。寫作時(shí)保持主謂一致性，邏輯性要強(qiáng)，無(wú)語(yǔ)法和標(biāo)點(diǎn)錯(cuò)誤。相似題②熱愛(ài)勞動(dòng)是中華民族的優(yōu)良傳統(tǒng),也是新時(shí)代中學(xué)生必備的優(yōu)良品質(zhì)。通過(guò)勞動(dòng)我們可以體會(huì)到其中的樂(lè)趣,也會(huì)變得熱愛(ài)勞動(dòng),懂得尊重與珍惜他人的勞動(dòng)成果。近日,你班舉辦了“愛(ài)勞動(dòng)”的主題班會(huì),同學(xué)們紛紛舉例講述自己在家或?qū)W校所做的勞動(dòng)。請(qǐng)你用英語(yǔ)寫一篇短文,分享一次令你印象深刻的勞動(dòng)經(jīng)歷,并談?wù)剬?duì)于勞動(dòng),你有什么樣的看法。要求：1.詞數(shù)不少于80詞；2.首句已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。參考詞匯僅供參考；3.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名、校名。Thewholesocietynowpaysgrowingattentiontolaboureducation.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【參考范文】The__whole__society__now__pays__growing__attention__to__labour__education.__Asamiddleschoolstudent,Ithinklabourmeansalotinourdailylife.Onedaylastsummer,Iwasathomealone.Intheafternoon,whenIfelthungry,Ilookedthroughthefridge,onlytofindsomeeggsandvegetables.Intheend,IjustatesomebreadbecauseIwasnotabletocook.Atthatmoment,IrealizedifIjustcaredaboutmystudy,Ievencouldn'ttakegoodcareofmyself.Fromthenon,Ioftentakeanactivepartinallkindsofcleaningworkatschool.AndwhenI'mnotsobusywithmyschoolwork,Iwillalsotrytodosomehousework.Labourispartoflife.Wecanbetterunderstandthemeaningoflifethroughit.Ifpossible,everyoneissupposedtosharepartoflabourbothathomeandschool.Believeitornot,happinessfollowslabour.相似題③假如你是李華，你校陽(yáng)光英語(yǔ)社為積極響應(yīng)《關(guān)于全面加強(qiáng)新時(shí)代大中小學(xué)勞動(dòng)教育的意見(jiàn)》，發(fā)揚(yáng)勞動(dòng)精神，開(kāi)展了以勞動(dòng)為主題的英語(yǔ)征文活動(dòng)。請(qǐng)結(jié)合以下幾點(diǎn)寫一篇英語(yǔ)短文，談?wù)勛约簩?duì)勞動(dòng)的認(rèn)識(shí)。要點(diǎn)如下：1.參加課外勞動(dòng)；2.學(xué)做日常家務(wù)；3.養(yǎng)成勞動(dòng)習(xí)慣。注意：1.詞數(shù):80~100；2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；3.文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名及學(xué)校名稱；4.開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。參考詞匯:labor(n.勞動(dòng))Recently,laborspiriteducationisencouragedbythegovernmenttohelpthestudentsdevelopworkingspirit._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【參考范文】Recently,laborspiriteducationisencouragedbythegovernmenttohelpthestudentsdevelopworkingspirit.Asastudent,Istronglyagreetoit.Firstly,wecantakepartinout-of-classactivitiessuchasplantingtreesorgrowingvegetablestoenrichourlaborexperience.Secondly,weshouldlearntodosomehouseworkathome,liketidyingrooms,washingclothesorcookingdishessothatwecanhelpourparentsandimproveourpracticalability.Lastbutnotleast,weshouldformgoodworkinghabitsandrealizetheimportanceofworkinghardthroughourexperience.Inaword,laborhelpsusimproveourselves,whichwillmakeadifferenceinthefuture.【考題解析】1.題干解讀：本文是一篇材料作文，根據(jù)要點(diǎn)提示談?wù)剬?duì)勞動(dòng)的認(rèn)識(shí)。文章可從課外勞動(dòng)、日常家務(wù)、勞動(dòng)習(xí)慣三方面展開(kāi)。2.寫作指導(dǎo)：文章以第一人稱、一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主，注意主謂一致問(wèn)題；寫作時(shí)注意分段敘述，第一段開(kāi)門見(jiàn)山，點(diǎn)明文章主題；第二段談自己的具體做法；最后一段總結(jié)短文，升華主旨。相似題④生活中，勞動(dòng)是一筆難得的人生資源和財(cái)富，人生的絢麗和精彩，都是在不斷地勞動(dòng)并勇于創(chuàng)造的過(guò)程中寫出來(lái)的,所以勞動(dòng)最光榮！無(wú)論是幫父母做家務(wù)，還是為自己做事，在學(xué)校值日等都是勞動(dòng)。同學(xué)們，你覺(jué)得勞動(dòng)怎么樣？請(qǐng)按照下面提示和要求自擬題目記錄你的一次勞動(dòng)經(jīng)歷及收獲。要求：1.詞數(shù)不少于80.2.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名，校名。提示：1.Whatdoyouknowaboutchildren'swork?2.Describethemostunforgettablelabor（勞動(dòng)）withastory.3.Whathaveyougained(收獲)throughthework?_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【參考范文】MymostunforgettablestoryoflaborWhatislabor?Wesometimeshelpourparentswiththehousework,dothingsforourselves,andcleantheclassroomeveryday.Alloftheabovearelabor.Ihaveamostunforgettablestoryoflabor.Onedaymymotherwasnotathome.Isawalotofdustonthestairsandplanedtowipethem.Iwantedtobea"cleaner"sothatIcouldgiveasurprisetomymother.Ipreparedabucketofwaterandacleancloth.Iwipedthestairscleanandbright.ThoughIwasverytired,Ilaughedhappily.Whenmymothercamehome,shepraisedmeforbeingagoodchild.Throughtheexperience,Irealizedthatit'shardtodohousework.Ishouldhelpmymotherdomorehouseworkinthefuture,sothatthetiredmothercanhavearest.【考題解析】1.題干解讀：對(duì)于寫作題考生需認(rèn)真審題，全面了解寫作要求，理清思路，確定短文體裁、框架結(jié)構(gòu)和寫作內(nèi)容。題目要求自擬題目記錄自己的一次勞動(dòng)經(jīng)歷及收獲，屬于記敘文寫作，宜采用“總分總”結(jié)構(gòu)，以第一人稱和一般過(guò)去時(shí)為主展開(kāi)敘述。2.例文點(diǎn)評(píng)：作者首先明確什么是勞動(dòng)，Ihaveamostunforgettablestoryoflabor引起下文自己的勞動(dòng)經(jīng)歷；然后具體敘述自己清潔樓梯的做家務(wù)經(jīng)過(guò)，最后介紹勞動(dòng)感受Throughtheexperience,Irealizedthatit'shardtodohousework，照應(yīng)開(kāi)頭。本文內(nèi)容充實(shí)，結(jié)構(gòu)完整，表達(dá)流暢，是一篇優(yōu)秀的習(xí)作。3.高分亮點(diǎn)：高分短語(yǔ)：helpsb.with,everyday,alotof,plan/wanttodo,sothat,giveasurprisetosb.,helpsb.do,helpsb.do,inthefuture,havearest.高分句型：1)Iwantedtobea"cleaner"sothatIcouldgiveasurprisetomymother.（目的狀語(yǔ)從句）2)ThoughIwasverytired,Ilaughedhappily.（讓步狀語(yǔ)從句）3)Whenmymothercamehome,shepraisedmeforbeingagoodchild.（時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句）【點(diǎn)睛】書面表達(dá)題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開(kāi)思維，考查運(yùn)用所學(xué)英語(yǔ)知識(shí)準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)意思的能力。所以，考生不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語(yǔ)和句式，盡可能使用高級(jí)詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分?jǐn)?shù)。范文中多種從句結(jié)構(gòu)的運(yùn)用，顯示出作者扎實(shí)的語(yǔ)言功底。相似題⑤近年來(lái)，在一些學(xué)生中出現(xiàn)了不珍惜勞動(dòng)成果、不想勞動(dòng)、不會(huì)勞動(dòng)的現(xiàn)象。為此，國(guó)家最近印發(fā)了《關(guān)于全面加強(qiáng)新時(shí)代大中小學(xué)勞動(dòng)教育的意見(jiàn)》。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)思維導(dǎo)圖，結(jié)合實(shí)際，就如何培養(yǎng)勞動(dòng)精神，以“HowtoGetWorkingSpirit”為題，給校報(bào)英語(yǔ)專欄寫一篇短文。要求：1.內(nèi)容應(yīng)包含思維導(dǎo)圖中的主要內(nèi)容，語(yǔ)句通順，意思連貫，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；2.文中不得出現(xiàn)自己的真實(shí)姓名、學(xué)校及地名；3.詞數(shù)80~100詞，短文開(kāi)頭已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。參考詞匯：指導(dǎo)方針guideline；勞動(dòng)課ahardworkingspiritclassHowtoGetWorkingSpiritAguidelineonhardworkingspiriteducationcameoutrecentlyinordertohelpmorestudentsofdifferentagestogetworkingspirit.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________