專題08 書面表達(dá)15篇-2023中考英語逆襲沖刺名校模擬真題特快專遞（上海專用）

2023上海中考英語逆襲沖刺名校模擬真題特快專遞第二期專題08書面表達(dá)15篇一、話題作文1．（2022·上海楊浦·二模）Writeatleast60wordsonthegivensituation（根據(jù)以下情境寫不少于60個(gè)詞的論壇帖子及回復(fù)等，標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)不占格。）閱讀D篇的論壇帖子中談到了生活中發(fā)生的一些尷尬事件。假設(shè)你是Sandy，請(qǐng)?jiān)谡搲邪l(fā)帖，講一個(gè)發(fā)生在自己身上的尷尬事件，并設(shè)想你的朋友Jill會(huì)如何與你互動(dòng)，寫下你們之間的一問一答。注意：1．文中不得出現(xiàn)考生的姓名、校名等個(gè)人信息，否則不予評(píng)分。2．照抄閱讀語篇不得分。Sandy

25October9.00p.m._________________________________________________________________________________________________Jill

25October9.05p.m._________________________________________________________________________________________________Sandy

25October9.08p.m._________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：Sandy

25October9.00p.m.

Onmyfirstdayofschool,Ifoundeverythingwasstrange.Afterschool,Iwantedtogotoatoilet,butthereweresomanypeoplethatitwashardtofindoneforgirlsintheteachingbuildings.SoIhurriedoutofmyschoolandsuddenlyfindanemptytoilet.Noonewasinthetoilet.Itwassostrange.WhenIcameoutofthetoilet,Iknewthereason.Itwasatoiletforboys!Myfaceturnedredatonce.Jill

25October9.05p.m.Didsomeoneseeyourunoutofthewrongtoilet?Sandy

25October9.08p.m.No.Iwaslucky.Ifastranawayandnooneknewwhathappenedtome.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文為三段論壇帖子及對(duì)話，主要記敘生活中的尷尬事件；②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為“一般過去時(shí)”；③提示：寫作要求已給出，考生應(yīng)注意不要遺漏后兩段對(duì)話，且內(nèi)容要與帖子相互呼應(yīng)，符合邏輯，適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，并突出寫作重點(diǎn)。[寫作步驟]第一步，描寫帖子內(nèi)容。首先表明尷尬事件發(fā)生的時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)，闡述起因；然后具體描述事件的發(fā)生過程，同時(shí)通過動(dòng)作、心理活動(dòng)等方面進(jìn)行細(xì)節(jié)描寫。第二步，根據(jù)帖子中描寫的事件結(jié)果“我走錯(cuò)廁所”，進(jìn)行合理推測(cè)，提出疑問“有沒有人看到走錯(cuò)廁所”。第三步，回答提出的問題，表示“自己很幸運(yùn)”。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①onmyfirstdayofschool我第一天在學(xué)校②hurriedoutofmyschool匆忙趕出學(xué)校③atonce立刻，馬上④happenedtome發(fā)生在我身上[高分句型]①Ifoundeverythingwasstrange.（find后接賓語從句）②Iwantedtogotoatoilet,butthereweresomanypeoplethatitwashardtofindoneforgirlsintheteachingbuildings.（but連接兩個(gè)并列句，so...that...引導(dǎo)結(jié)果狀語從句）③WhenIcameoutofthetoilet,Iknewthereason.（when引導(dǎo)時(shí)間狀語從句）2．（2022·上海普陀·二模）Writeatleast60wordsonthetopic“Ilearnedalotfrom...”（以“我從……學(xué)到了很多”為題，寫一篇不少于60詞的短文，標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)不占格）提示：每個(gè)人都能通過不同的方式學(xué)到有益于成長(zhǎng)的東西，請(qǐng)結(jié)合具體事例談?wù)勀阕约旱母形颉?注意：短文中不得出現(xiàn)任何人名、校名及其他相關(guān)信息，否則不予評(píng)分。照抄語篇不得分)__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：IlearnedalotfrommyteacherRecently,I’velearnedsomethinghelpfulfrommyEnglishteacherMr.Liformyfuturelife.I’vehadachangeinmylife.Itmakesmerealizethathowimportantitisformetobeconfident.IwaspooratEnglishandmyEnglishscorewassodisappointingthatIbecamemadatmyself.ButmyteacherMr.LitoldmethatIcouldhavedonemuchbetterifIbelievedinmyself.EverytimeImetwithsomeEnglishproblems,Itoldmyself“Youshouldbeconfidentandyoucandoit.”Andoutofmyexpectation,Igotan“A”inmyEnglishexamamonthlater.NotuntilthendidIrealizeIhadagiftforEnglish.ThereisnothingthatIcan’tdoifIamconfidentenough.【詳解】1.題干解讀：該題目屬于話題作文。以“我從……學(xué)到了很多”為題進(jìn)行寫作，在寫作時(shí)應(yīng)根據(jù)題目要求講述自己學(xué)到有益于成長(zhǎng)的東西，需要結(jié)合具體實(shí)例敘述自己的感悟，可以適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。2.寫作指導(dǎo)：本文時(shí)態(tài)以一般過去時(shí)為主，人稱以第一人稱為主，結(jié)合具體事例講述自己學(xué)到有益于成長(zhǎng)的東西和自己的感受，要敘述完整，條理清晰。3．（2022·上海嘉定·模擬預(yù)測(cè)）Writeatleast60wordsaccordingonthetopicof“________mademeadifference”.生活、學(xué)習(xí)中的經(jīng)歷，我們親人、朋友或是陌生人等，都可能對(duì)我們產(chǎn)生影響，讓我們發(fā)生一些變化。這些變化往往會(huì)有助于我們的成長(zhǎng)。請(qǐng)結(jié)合一次自身經(jīng)歷，以“________改變了我”為題，寫一篇短文，標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)不占格。（注意：1.短文中不得出現(xiàn)姓名、校名等個(gè)人信息，否則不予評(píng)分。2.照抄閱讀語篇不得分。）________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】PersistencemademeadifferenceInourlife,ourfamilyorfriends,evensomestrangers,aswellaswhatwe’vegonethroughinourstudyordailylife,maymakeusadifference.Whatmademeadifferenceisthepersistencemymotheroncetaughtme.IcanwellrememberthedaywhenIfirstlearnttheEnglishword“valley”.IwasfiveyearsoldthenandmymotherwastryingtotaughtmeEnglishwords.Whenmymotherpronouncedtheword“valley”,Itriedoverandoveragain,butitwastoodifficultformetopronouncethevsoundcorrectly,soIfailed.Ibegantogetangryandwasunwillingtoutteranysoundanymore.Atthattime,mymotherjusttriedherbesttoencouragemetopronounceagain.ShetoldmethatifIcouldkeeptryingpronouncingtheword,Iwouldsucceedintheend.Nobodyelsecouldhelpme.OnlyI,myselfcould.SoIdidasmymothertoldme.ItriedhardevenifIwasmakingmistakesallthetime.Butsuddenly,Iheardmymothercheer,“Youdidit,myboy!”.Itwaspersistencethathelpedmesucceed.Iwasgreatlymovedindeed.Fromthenon,persistenceisalwayswithme,especiallywheneverIcomeacrossdifficulties.AndInevergiveupeasily.Persistencemademeadifference.【詳解】1.題干解讀：本文屬于話題作文寫作，以“……改變了我”為題，按照記敘文的格式，講述自己的一次親身經(jīng)歷，說明是“什么改變了我”，可以是某些人，也可以是某個(gè)物件或某個(gè)抽象概念。2.寫作指導(dǎo)：本文主要采用第一人稱單數(shù)來寫；在記敘親身經(jīng)歷時(shí)，時(shí)態(tài)以一般過去時(shí)為主；在陳述觀點(diǎn)時(shí)，時(shí)態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主。寫作時(shí)按記敘文的格式來寫，第一段開門見山，直接說明“改變了我”的東西是什么；第二段記敘自己的親身經(jīng)歷為主；第三段回應(yīng)主題并結(jié)尾。敘述親身經(jīng)歷是這篇文章的主體部分，講述時(shí)要說清楚事件的來龍去脈，適時(shí)抒發(fā)自己的感悟。4．（2022·上海青浦·二模）Writeapassageofatleast60wordsaboutthetopic“AdecisionImade”（請(qǐng)以“決定”為題寫一篇不少于60個(gè)詞的短文，標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)不占格。）在學(xué)習(xí)和生活中，我們會(huì)做出許多決定，有時(shí)會(huì)慶幸自己的決定是正確的，有時(shí)也會(huì)為錯(cuò)誤的決定而懊惱后悔。這些決定都會(huì)讓我們有所感悟。請(qǐng)結(jié)合你的經(jīng)歷，談?wù)勀愕母惺?。注意?)抄襲試卷中內(nèi)容不得分；2)文中不得出現(xiàn)任何姓名、校名以及其他相關(guān)信息，否則不予評(píng)分。__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】范文：AdecisionImadeOurlivesarethesumofallourdecision.Thedecisionswemaketodaymayplayanimportantroleinourfuture.WhenIwasthirteen,mymotherwantedmetobeagirlwhowasgoodatschoolwork.However,Iwaskeenonplayingthedrumalotanddidn’tlikestudyatall.Asaresult,wequarreledwitheachotheralot.Astimepassedby,Igraduallyfoundthatoneshouldbeknowledgeable,nomatterwhathewouldbeinthefuture.Idecidedtoworkhardandregardedplayingthedrumasmyhobby.IthinkthedecisionI’vemademustbewiseone.【詳解】1.題干解讀：題目要求以“AdecisionImade”為題，敘述自己所做過的決定，以及自己的感受。2.寫作指導(dǎo)：本文應(yīng)該用第一人稱為主來敘述內(nèi)容，時(shí)態(tài)采用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般過去時(shí)為主。在敘述內(nèi)容時(shí)，力求語句通順，語法正確，并且把故事發(fā)生的背景、起因和過程敘述完整，保證條理清晰，行文連貫。5．（2022·上海徐匯·模擬預(yù)測(cè)）Theschoolnewspaperisgoingtousethegivenphotointheculturesection.It’saphotooftwoexchangestudentsfromAmerica.Pleasewriteashortnewsarticleentitled“ExploringChineseCulture”basedonthegivenphotoforthenewspaper.校報(bào)準(zhǔn)備在報(bào)紙文化欄里用到所給照片做報(bào)道。這張照片主人公是兩位來自美國的交換生。請(qǐng)仔細(xì)看所給照片，并為報(bào)紙撰寫一篇題為“探索中國文化”的簡(jiǎn)單報(bào)道。不少于60詞。(注意：短文中不得出現(xiàn)考生的姓名、校名及其他相關(guān)信息，否則不予評(píng)分。標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)不占格)剪紙papercutting

書法calligraphyExploringChineseCulture______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：ExploringChineseCultureInordertoarousestudents’interestinexploringChinesecultureandenrichourschoollife,ourschoolheldaCultureDaylastweek.Hundredsofustookpartinit.Asscheduled,studentsgatheredattheassemblyhallat2p.m.Tuesday.15studentsdeliveredtheirspeechesintroducingdifferentChinesecultureinturn,whichwerewellreceivedbytheaudience.Later,somestudentsshowedsometraditionalskills,suchasknitting,makingkitesandperformingBeijingopera.SomeAmericanstudentswereinterestedinthepapercuttingandcalligraphy.TheylearnedChinesecharactersandtriedtowritesomeofthemwithwritingbrushes.Theactivitybenefitedusalot.NotonlydiditimproveourunderstandingofChineseculture,butitalsoprovidedagreatchanceforustoshowourselves.Whatawonderfultime!【詳解】1.題干解讀：該題目屬于記敘文寫作。在寫作時(shí)應(yīng)根據(jù)題目要求講述學(xué)校的文化節(jié)的具體過程。2.寫作指導(dǎo)：本文時(shí)態(tài)以一般過去時(shí)為主，人稱以第三人稱為主，講述文化節(jié)的活動(dòng)和中國文化的體驗(yàn)，要敘述完整，條理清晰。6．（2022·上海奉賢·二模）Writeatleast60wordsonthetopic“I’dliketopass________on”補(bǔ)全題目，以“我愿?jìng)鬟f________”為題，寫一篇不少于60詞的短文，標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)不占格。傳遞一種精神、一種品質(zhì)、一種態(tài)度、一種情感、一種能量……。請(qǐng)結(jié)合自身經(jīng)歷，談?wù)勀阍诩彝?、學(xué)?；蛏鐣?huì)中所愿?jìng)鬟f的東西。___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：I’dliketopassthehelpfulspiritonWefacemanydifficultiesatschool.Forexample,whenIplayedfootball,Ifelldownandhurtmyleg.Myclassmateshelpedmetogototheschoolhospital.WhenImetsomedifficultmathquestions,myclassmateshelpedmetoworkthemout.Thesethingsmademehappyandcomfortable.Iwanttopassthehelpfulspiriton.Ithinkhelpingothersistohelpourselves.【詳解】1、題干解讀：該題目屬于話題作文寫作，寫作時(shí)應(yīng)先補(bǔ)全題目，然后介紹傳遞樂于助人的精神，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。2、寫作指導(dǎo)：本文應(yīng)該以第一人稱和第三人稱來敘述內(nèi)容；時(shí)態(tài)綜合采用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般過去時(shí)，介紹傳遞樂于助人的精神時(shí)，應(yīng)詳細(xì)具體，語句通順，邏輯性強(qiáng)，保證條理清晰。7．（2022·上海金山·二模）Writeatleast60wordsonthetopic“Themostimportantruleinmyfamily”.(以“我家最重要的一條家規(guī)”為題寫一篇不少于60詞的短文，標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)不占格。)國有國法，家有家規(guī)(familyrule)。不同家庭有不同家規(guī)。如：做人誠實(shí)、尊敬長(zhǎng)輩、天天閱讀、人人做家務(wù)或吃飯時(shí)不能刷手機(jī)等等。在你家里，可能也有很多家規(guī)，那么你認(rèn)為你家最看重的家規(guī)是哪一條呢？為什么？請(qǐng)舉例說明。注意：1.短文中不得出現(xiàn)姓名、校名等個(gè)人信息，否則不予評(píng)分。2.照抄閱讀語篇不得分。_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文ThemostimportantruleinmyfamilyTherearenationallawsandfamilyrules.Differentfamilieshavedifferentrules,suchasbeinghonest,respectingelders,readingeveryday,notplayingonthephonewhendoinghouseworkoreating,andsoon.Inmyfamily,themostimportantruleistobehonest.Becausemyfatherthinks:losehonesty,alsoloseeverything.Honestyinvolvesmanyaspects,suchaskeepingpromises,strictlycarryingoutplans,nottellingliesandsoon.Honestyisveryimportantforeveryone.Ihopeeveryoneofuscanbeanhonestperson.【詳解】1.題干解讀：本文是一篇話題作文。要求以“Themostimportantruleinmyfamily”為題，寫一篇英文短文，介紹家中最重要的一條家規(guī)。2.寫作指導(dǎo)：本文運(yùn)用第一人稱；時(shí)態(tài)采用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。可采用分段的形式，使文章結(jié)構(gòu)清晰。最后保證語言通順，行文連貫；注意語法正確，無標(biāo)點(diǎn)和大小寫錯(cuò)誤。8．（2022·上海虹口·一模）Writeatleast60wordsonthetopic“Aperfectfamily”（以“完美家庭”為題寫一篇不少于60個(gè)詞的短文，標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)不占格）我們都和家人生活在一起，都希望擁有一個(gè)完美的家庭。請(qǐng)你描述一下你心目中的完美家庭。（注意：短文中不得出現(xiàn)任何人名、校名及其他相關(guān)信息，否則不予計(jì)分）__________（題目）________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：AperfectfamilyEverychildholdshisorherownviewsonaperfectfamily.Inmyopinion,perfectfamiliesalwayshavesomespecificqualities.First,familymembersalwaysloveeachother.Theyloveoneanotherwhethertheyhaveshortcomingsornot.Second,theyknowhowtorespecteachother,suchasparentsdonotinterferewithchildren’sprivacyandchildrencanunderstandtheirparents’difficulties.Third,theysupporteachother.Ifanyofthefamilymembersisintrouble,theothersgivehimorherencouragementandhelp.【詳解】1.題干解讀：本文是一篇話題作文。題目要求以“Aperfectfamily”為題，用不少于60詞描述一下你心目中的完美家庭。2.寫作指導(dǎo)：本文主要以觀點(diǎn)陳述或一般情況的描述為主，時(shí)態(tài)主要采用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)；人稱主要使用第三人稱；在文章內(nèi)容上可以結(jié)合日常生活從多角度闡述你認(rèn)為的“完美家庭”所擁有的特質(zhì)；寫作完成后需保證文章內(nèi)容符合題目要求，行文流暢，語言表達(dá)符合英文語法規(guī)則。二、材料作文9．（2022·上海崇明·模擬預(yù)測(cè)）Writeapassageofatleast60wordsonthetopic“Growupinlabour”（以“在勞動(dòng)中成長(zhǎng)”為題，寫一篇不少于60個(gè)詞的短文，標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)不占格。）在日常生活中，每個(gè)同學(xué)都會(huì)參與一些社會(huì)公益勞動(dòng)、學(xué)校組織的勞動(dòng)活動(dòng)或居家時(shí)的家務(wù)勞動(dòng)等，相信你們?cè)谶^程中都有所感悟和收獲。請(qǐng)你結(jié)合自身經(jīng)歷，談?wù)勀阍鴧⑴c的勞動(dòng)并分享一下你的所感所悟。注意：1.短文中不得出現(xiàn)任何校名、人名及其它相關(guān)信息，否則不予評(píng)分。2.照抄閱讀語篇不得分。_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文GrowupinlabourInourdailylives,weusuallytakepartinsomelabouractivities,suchasvolunteerwork,houseworkandsoon.Iwanttosharemyexperiencewithyou.Lastweekend,ourschoolheldanactivity.ItwastohelpelderpeopleinOldPeople’sHome.Wegotthereatabout9a.m.Thenwecleanedtheirrooms,toldfunnyjokesandsangsomesongs.Fromtheirsmilingfaces,Ifoundthatthisactivitywassomeaningful.Fromthisexperience,Irealizethatdoinglabournotonlymakesothersgetpleasure,butalsodevelopsourbasicskills.Ifyouwanttohaveatry,pleasetakeactionfromnowon.【詳解】1.題干解讀：本文是一篇材料作文。以“Growupinlabour”為題，寫一篇短文，談?wù)勀銋⑴c的勞動(dòng)經(jīng)歷以及所感所悟。2.寫作指導(dǎo)：本文應(yīng)采用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般過去時(shí)，人稱以第一人稱為主來敘述。分為三段式：第一段引出主題；第二i段介紹自己在老人院做義工的經(jīng)歷，并描述自己的感受；第三段呼吁讀者從現(xiàn)在開始做起。寫作時(shí)保持主謂一致性，做到無語法和標(biāo)點(diǎn)錯(cuò)誤。10．（2022·上海松江·二模）Writeatleast60wordsaccordingtothegivensituation(根據(jù)以下情境寫一篇不少于60個(gè)詞的倡議書，標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)不占格)在疫情防控的特殊時(shí)期，人們自覺落實(shí)各項(xiàng)防疫舉措，居家工作、學(xué)習(xí)和生活成為阻隔病毒傳染的有效方法之一。請(qǐng)你以學(xué)校學(xué)生會(huì)的名義，給全體學(xué)生寫一封倡議書，使大家明白疫情期間在線學(xué)習(xí)和規(guī)律生活的重要性，并給出合理可行的建議，號(hào)召全校學(xué)生遵守執(zhí)行，為防疫工作貢獻(xiàn)自己的力量。Somephrasesforreference:callon(號(hào)召);

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studyonline/haveonlinelessons注意：1.短文中不得出現(xiàn)任何真實(shí)人名、校名及其它相關(guān)信息2.不得照搬閱讀語篇內(nèi)容。Dearschoolmates________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________FromTheStudents’Union【答案】例文：Dearschoolmates,DuringCOVID,inordertoeffectivelypreventthespreadofthevirus,ourschooldecidedtodelaytheopeningtimeandadoptonlineteaching.Studentsshouldstudyonline.Atthesametime,makesureyoulivearegularlife.Foreveryone’sstudyandlife,wecallonyoutodothefollowing:1.Attendclassontimeandfinishonlinehomework.2.Takeyourtemperatureeveryday,andthenreportittoyourteacher.3.Washyourhandsfrequentlyanddrinkplentyofwater.4.Takemoreexercise.5.Wearamaskwhenyougooutanddon’tgather.FromTheStudents’Union【詳解】1.題干解讀：題目要求寫一封倡議書，告誡學(xué)生和老師疫情期間在線學(xué)習(xí)和規(guī)律生活的重要性，并給出合理的建議。注意要點(diǎn)齊全，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。2.寫作指導(dǎo)：本文應(yīng)以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)來行文，提建議時(shí)應(yīng)詳細(xì)具體，可以采用祈使句等句型；內(nèi)容要包含題目所給的提示內(nèi)容，行文要語句通順，符合邏輯關(guān)系；無語法、單詞拼寫和標(biāo)點(diǎn)錯(cuò)誤。11．（2022·上海黃浦·二模）Writeatleast60wordsaccordingtothegivensituation.（根據(jù)以下情境寫一篇不少于60個(gè)詞的短文，標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)不占格。）疫情期間，為了幫助同學(xué)們保護(hù)視力，避免過多使用電子產(chǎn)品，學(xué)校鼓勵(lì)大家閱讀紙質(zhì)書籍。老師決定招募志愿者，管理在線讀書俱樂部“Onlinereadingclub”。如果你有意愿承擔(dān)管理讀書俱樂部的工作，請(qǐng)給老師寫一封電子郵件，談?wù)勀阌?jì)劃如何做。郵件內(nèi)容可以包含以下幾個(gè)問題：1.Howoftendoyoumeetonline?2.Howwillyouchoosebookstoread?3.Whatactivitieswillyouorganizeforyourclub?_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：Dearteacher,Iamsodelightedtohearthatyouarelookingforavolunteertomanagetheonlinereadingclub.ResponsibleandorganizedasIam,IthinkIamtherightpersonforthisclub.IfIamchosen,Iwillsparenoefforttohelpmyclassmatesuseelectronicproductslessandreadpaperbooksmore.First,Iwillholdameetingonlineforeveryonetosharethebookstheylikebestandchoosesomeofthemasamustforeveryonetofinishinacertainperiodoftime.Then,wewillmeetonlineonceaweektoreportourreadingachievementsandshareourthoughts.Besides,IwillsometimesaskourChineseteacherstogiveussometipsonreadingbooks.Lastbutnotleast,Iwillinvitemycousin,averyfamouswriter,tosharesomeofherworksaswellassometipsonhowtowriteagoodarticle.Inaword,ifIaminchargeofthisclub,Iwilldoeverythingpossibleformyclassmates.

Yours,LiHua【詳解】1.題干解讀：本題目屬于應(yīng)用文寫作，同時(shí)寫作時(shí)要按郵件格式寫，要求按照三個(gè)問題的提示展開寫作，給老師寫一封自薦信。2.寫作指導(dǎo)：本文是向?qū)Ψ疥U述自己的計(jì)劃，因此應(yīng)使用第一人稱為主；時(shí)態(tài)采用一般將來時(shí)為主；根據(jù)三個(gè)問題，計(jì)劃至少涉及三個(gè)方面；結(jié)尾不忘進(jìn)行總結(jié)，表達(dá)自己對(duì)這份志愿者工作的向往。12．（2022·上海·模擬預(yù)測(cè)）Respectisafeelingofdeepadmirationforsomeoneorwhattheydo,especiallybecauseoftheirabilities,qualities,orachievements.Inthedailylife,respectisalsothegluethatholdsyourrelationshiptogether.Pleasewriteapassageaboutthepersonyourespectmost.Thefollowingpointsshouldbeincluded:(1)Basicinformationabouthimorher(looks,job...)(2)Thereasonwhyyourespecthimorher(oneortwoexamples)注意：1.語言正確，行文連貫，結(jié)構(gòu)合理，書寫工整；2.文中不得出現(xiàn)與考生相關(guān)的真實(shí)姓名、校名等信息；3.詞數(shù)100詞左右。ThepersonIrespectmost_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文ThepersonIrespectmostThepersonIrespectmostismyfather.Heistallandwearsglasses.Heisadoctor.Heisalwaysbusywithhiswork.Heneverspendsawholeweekendwithme.HegoestoworklongbeforeIgetupandhecomesbackhomeafterIfallasleep.ButIdon’tmind.Heismyhero.Henearlyspendsmostofhistimeonhispatients.Alotofpeopleweresavedbyhim.Hesays,“Apersonshouldhavedignity,integrity,honor,andaboveall,bewillingtohelpothers.”HeinfluencesmedeeplyandIhopetobeamanlikemyfather.【詳解】1.題干解讀：本文是一篇材料作文。要求根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容，介紹自己最尊敬的人。注意要點(diǎn)齊全，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。2.寫作指導(dǎo)：寫作時(shí)要以第三人稱來介紹，時(shí)態(tài)用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。作文要分別介紹他的基本情況以及尊重他的原因。要保證語言連貫，無語法和拼寫錯(cuò)誤。三、書信作文13．（2022·上海長(zhǎng)寧·二模）為了提高學(xué)生英語學(xué)習(xí)能力，李老師想要調(diào)查了解一下學(xué)生課外在記憶單詞、朗讀/背誦課文、做書面作業(yè)、讀英語書刊和故事，或者其他等等方面的學(xué)習(xí)情況。請(qǐng)你寫一封信給他，談?wù)勔陨蠋讉€(gè)方面你覺得哪個(gè)最重要，哪個(gè)方面你花時(shí)間最多，哪個(gè)做得最少；哪個(gè)方面你最感到困難或最有成功經(jīng)驗(yàn)；你將如何改進(jìn)學(xué)習(xí)方法才能取得更大的進(jìn)步。（注意：1、信的格式與開頭已給，這些文字不計(jì)入你所寫的總數(shù)。2、信中不得出現(xiàn)任何姓名、校名以及其他相關(guān)信息，否則不予評(píng)分。）DearMr.Li,Inresponsetoyoursurvey,I’dliketotellyousomethingabouthowIlearnEnglishafterschool._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,XXX【答案】例文DearMr.Li,Inresponsetoyoursurvey,I’dliketotellyousomethingabouthowIlearnEnglishafterschool.Personally,Ifindmemorizingnewwordsmostimportant,forvocabularyisthebasisofanylanguagelearning,notjustEnglish.Besides,readingoutloudiswhatIspendmostofmytimedoingwhileIseldomreciteanytexts,whichistooboringforme.Asforwrittenhomework,itistrulymybiggestheadachebecauseitseemsendless.ToprogressmoreinEnglishlearning,IthinkitnecessarytodosomepleasurereadingandthatisexactlywhatIamabouttodo.Yours,Helen【詳解】1.題干解讀：本題是一篇書信作文，談?wù)勛约河⒄Z學(xué)習(xí)的情況，具體包括單詞、課文、作業(yè)以及課外閱讀等方面。2.寫作指導(dǎo)：時(shí)態(tài)用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，人稱用第一人稱；寫作時(shí)承接開頭，具體敘述自己認(rèn)為英語學(xué)習(xí)哪個(gè)部分最重要、哪個(gè)部分還有所欠缺，以及將如何改進(jìn)學(xué)習(xí)方法來取得更大進(jìn)步。注意信件的寫作格式，要正確運(yùn)用語言句式和語法，注意標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)使用恰當(dāng)。14．（2022·上海崇明·一模）Writealetterofatleast60wordsonthetopic“Asuggestionforourschool”(以“給學(xué)校的一個(gè)建議”為題寫一封不少于60個(gè)詞的信，標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)不占格。)在近四年的初中校園生活和學(xué)習(xí)中，你學(xué)到和享受到了很多。但是通過你的觀察，學(xué)校有些地方還有提升和完善的空間，比如在課后服務(wù)、活動(dòng)項(xiàng)目、學(xué)生午餐、學(xué)校設(shè)施、校園文化等等方面。要求：請(qǐng)你結(jié)合自身經(jīng)歷，確定一個(gè)主題，給校長(zhǎng)寫封信，為學(xué)校提出一個(gè)合理化、可操作的建議，并說說你的理由或感想。注意：1.短文中不得出現(xiàn)任何校名、人名及其它相關(guān)信息，否則不予評(píng)分。2.照抄閱讀語篇不得分。__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________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