08 書面表達(dá)14篇 -2023-2024學(xué)年八年級(jí)下冊(cè)期中滿分突破（重慶專用）

專題08書面表達(dá)14篇（八年級(jí)下冊(cè)Unit1-Unit6）1．（22-23八年級(jí)下·重慶九龍坡·期中）假設(shè)你是李華，你校正在為九龍坡區(qū)“雙創(chuàng)”活動(dòng)積極準(zhǔn)備，擬招募志愿者去“老人之家”開展一系列志愿服務(wù)活動(dòng)——聊天，講故事，表演節(jié)目，幫助做家務(wù)等。請(qǐng)你結(jié)合自身情況寫一封自薦信申請(qǐng)參加。參考信息：1.介紹你的個(gè)人能力（唱歌，跳舞，講故事，與人溝通……）2.描述你在家的家務(wù)情況以及對(duì)家務(wù)的看法……3.參加的原因或?qū)χ驹富顒?dòng)的認(rèn)識(shí)；4.其他……要求：（1）根據(jù)內(nèi)容提示進(jìn)行寫作，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；（2）80—100詞左右（文章的開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）；（3）字跡工整，書寫規(guī)范、正確，語句通順，注意單詞的大小寫和標(biāo)點(diǎn)等；（4）不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和班級(jí)信息。Dearteacher,IamwritingtovolunteerasahelperattheOldPeople’sHome.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【答案】例文Dearteacher,IamwritingtovolunteerasahelperattheOldPeople’sHome.Iamgoodatsinging,dancing,tellingstoriesandcommunicatingwithothers.Ioftenhelpmymotherwithhouseworkathome.Ithinkdoinghouseworkcanhelpusdevelopindependenceandlearnhowtotakecareofourselves.IthinkoldpeopleattheOldPeople’sHomefeellonelyandIwanttobringthemhappiness.Besides,volunteeractivitiescanalsoallowustospreadlove.Iwillhelptheoldpeoplesweepthefloor,takeouttherubbish,makethebedandfoldtheclothes.Yours,LiHua【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇自薦信；②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”；③提示：寫作要點(diǎn)已給出，要求根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容進(jìn)行寫作，適當(dāng)添加細(xì)節(jié)，并突出寫作重點(diǎn)。[寫作步驟]第一步，表明寫作意圖，申請(qǐng)做“老人之家”的志愿者；第二步，具體介紹個(gè)人能力以及家務(wù)情況；第三步，介紹自己對(duì)志愿活動(dòng)的看法和經(jīng)歷。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①begoodat擅長(zhǎng)②communicatewith溝通③takecareof照顧[高分句型]①Ithinkdoinghouseworkcanhelpusdevelopindependenceandlearnhowtotakecareofourselves.（并列結(jié)構(gòu)）②IthinkoldpeopleattheOldPeople’sHomefeellonelyandIwanttobringthemhappiness.（省略that的賓語從句和并列句）2．（22-23八年級(jí)下·重慶九龍坡·期中）習(xí)近平主席曾提到：“青少年在成長(zhǎng)和奮斗中，會(huì)收獲成功和喜悅，也會(huì)面臨困難和壓力?！蔽覀?cè)诔砷L(zhǎng)中改變，我們?cè)谧兓谐砷L(zhǎng)。為此，我校報(bào)刊英語欄目EnglishinMind就你成長(zhǎng)的變化，以及其中一個(gè)變化背后的故事發(fā)起征文。請(qǐng)你以“ChangesMakeaBetterme”為題，寫一篇短文參賽。參考信息：1.簡(jiǎn)述你的變化（學(xué)習(xí)、性格、人際交往……）；2.講述其中一個(gè)變化背后的故事；3.……要求：1.80-120詞。2.文中不能出現(xiàn)自己的姓名和所在學(xué)校的名稱。3.卷面整潔，書寫工整。ChangesMakeaBetterMeTherearealotofchangesinourliveswhichmakeusbetter.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文

ChangesMakeaBetterMe

Therearealotofchangesinourliveswhichmakeusbetter.Iusedtobeshort,butI’mthetallestinmyclassnow.Iusedtobeshyandquiet,butnowI’mmoreoutgoingandIliketomakefriends.Iusedtohatereading.However,nowIhavefalleninlovewithit.ThemostimportantchangeinmylifewasbecominginterestedinlearningEnglish.Lastyear,mynewEnglishteacher,MrsLiu,hadalongconversationwithme.Shegavemegreathelpandencouragedmenottogiveup.ShetaughtmesomegoodwaysoflearningEnglish.SoImadeadecisiontostudyhardatEnglish.Forexample,Itooknotesinclass.IwatchedEnglishmoviesasoftenaspossible.IspentmuchtimelearningEnglisheveryday.Besides,sheencouragedmetomakemorefriendsandbefriendlytoothers.Withherhelp,Ibecamemuchmoreoutgoingandhadgreatfriends.NowI’mgladthatIhavemadesomeprogressandcaughtupwithothersinmyclass.Ithinkyoucangetbetteraslongasyouworkhardenough.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇材料作文；②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般過去時(shí)；③提示：寫作要點(diǎn)已給出，應(yīng)注意不要遺漏，適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)完整表述內(nèi)容。[寫作步驟]第一步，介紹自己的變化；第二步，具體講述一個(gè)變化的背后故事；第三步，介紹從中得到的啟發(fā)。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①usedtodosth過去常常做某事②beinterestedin對(duì)……感興趣③begoodat擅長(zhǎng)④giveup放棄[高分句型]①Iwasnotgoodatcommunicatingwithothers,either.（動(dòng)名詞作賓語）②Besides,sheencouragedmetomakemorefriendsandbefriendlytoothers.（動(dòng)詞不定式作賓補(bǔ)）3．（22-23八年級(jí)下·重慶沙坪壩·期中）假如你是李華，你收到了美國(guó)朋友Mike的一封來信。在信中，他向你訴說了最近遇到的一些問題，請(qǐng)根據(jù)他的問題，給他提一些建議，以幫助他順利解決這些問題。Mike’sproblems:1.與家人關(guān)系不好；2.和好朋友產(chǎn)生爭(zhēng)執(zhí)；3.成績(jī)下滑。參考要點(diǎn)：1.描述Mike的問題；2.針對(duì)問題給出合理的建議；3.……要求：1.80—120詞，開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；2.文中不能出現(xiàn)學(xué)生、老師等真實(shí)的人物姓名和所在學(xué)校的真實(shí)名稱。DearMike,Igotyourletteryesterday.I’msorrytohearthatyouhavesomeproblemsthesedays.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Hopethingsworkout.Yours,LiHua【答案】例文DearMike,Igotyourletteryesterday.I’msorrytohearthatyouhavesomeproblemsthesedays.Youtoldmethatyourgradeshavedeclined.Youquarrelledwithyourbestfriendbecauseofsomelittlethingsandhadn’ttalkedwitheachotherfordays.Youalsosaidyoufelttiredandhadaheadache.Youcouldn’tgetalongwithyourparents.First,youcanlistentomusicafterstudyingforalongtimeandyouwillhaveagoodrest.Second,Ithinkyoushouldtrytobefriendlyandhelpfultoyourclassmates.Youcantalkwiththemafterclass.Ifyoujointhem,you’llbeamemberofthem.Third,whydon’tyoutalkaboutthesefeelingswithyourparents?Ithinktheywillunderstandyou.Hopethingsworkout.Yours,LiHua【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一封書信；②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般過去時(shí)；③提示：根據(jù)提示要點(diǎn)針對(duì)朋友的問題給出相應(yīng)的建議，適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)。[寫作步驟]第一步，描述Mike的問題；第二步，針對(duì)問題給出合理的建議；第三步，表達(dá)希望。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①quarrelwith和某人吵架②haveagoodrest好好休息③talkabout談?wù)揫高分句型]①Second,Ithinkyoushouldtrytobefriendlierandhelpyourclassmates.(賓語從句)②Ifyoujointhem,you’llbeamemberofthem.(if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語從句)4．（22-23八年級(jí)下·重慶江北·期中）最近，隨著初二學(xué)習(xí)任務(wù)逐漸加重，有一些班級(jí)選擇放學(xué)后不再自己做清潔，而是請(qǐng)其他人代勞。此舉引起了同學(xué)們的熱烈討論，一部分同學(xué)贊同，而一部分則表示不理解且反對(duì)。對(duì)此，你所在的班級(jí)展開了關(guān)于”ShouldWeCleantheClassroomOurselves?”的調(diào)查，并列出了調(diào)查表。請(qǐng)你寫一篇短文，描述調(diào)查結(jié)果，并提出你自己的看法。ShouldWeCleantheClassroomOurselves?OpinionNumberReasonAgree65%鍛煉，放松的方式……Disagree35%學(xué)習(xí)繁忙，時(shí)間有限……要求：(1)80-100字左右。(2)不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)信息。(3)書寫整潔。參考要點(diǎn)：(1)描述調(diào)查結(jié)果(2)提出你的看法及理由(3)……Thisterm,studentsarebusierwiththeirschoolworkandhavelessfreetime.Studentsmadeasurveyaboutwhetherweshouldcleantheclassroomsourselves.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：Thisterm,studentsarebusierwiththeirschoolworkandhavelessfreetime.Studentsmadeasurveyaboutwhetherweshouldcleantheclassroomsourselves.65%ofthestudentsthinkstudentsshouldcleantheclassroom.Thisisnotonlygoodforexercise,butalsoawaytorelax.35%ofthestudentsthinkstudentsshouldnotcleantheclassroom.Theythinktheyarebusystudyinganditwillwastetheirtime.Ithinkitiseverystudent’sresponsibilitytocleantheclassroom.Theycandevelopstudents’senseofresponsibilityandindependencebydoingthesethings.Ihopeeveryonewilltakeanactivepartincleaningtheclassroom.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇材料作文；②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”；③提示：寫作要點(diǎn)已給出，考生應(yīng)注意不要遺漏表格中給出的調(diào)查結(jié)果，并談?wù)勛约旱目捶?。[寫作步驟]第一步，根據(jù)表格內(nèi)容介紹調(diào)查結(jié)果；第二步，談?wù)勛约旱目捶ǎ坏谌?，收尾，希望大家積極參與打掃教室的活動(dòng)。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①notonly...butalso...不僅……而且……②bebusydoingsth.忙于做某事③takeanactivepartindoingsth.積極參與做某事[高分句型]Theythinktheyarebusystudyinganditwillwastetheirtime.（賓語從句；and連接并列句）5．（22-23八年級(jí)下·重慶南岸·期中）父母是我們最親的人，但處于青春期的我們有時(shí)會(huì)在與父母溝通時(shí)遇到困難。某英語網(wǎng)站正在就如何與父母溝通征集世界各國(guó)青少年的意見，請(qǐng)根據(jù)思維導(dǎo)圖提示，以“CommunicationwithOurParents”為題用英語寫一篇短文，談?wù)勀闩c父母溝通中出現(xiàn)的問題，以及你溝通的技巧和做法。要求：1.120~150詞，開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；2.文中不能出現(xiàn)自己的姓名和所在學(xué)校的名稱。CommunicationwithOurParentsCommunicationwithparentsisoneofthemostimportantthingswehavetododuringourwholelife.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文CommunicationwithOurParentsCommunicationwithparentsisoneofthemostimportantthingswehavetododuringourwholelife.Aswegrowolder,we’llfindit’snoteasytocommunicatewithourparentsopenlyandeffectively.Wealwayshavedifferentideasandtheyalwaysaskustodothisortodothat.Therearealwaysblackcloudshangingoverourhomebecausefightingbetweenusalwayshappen.Sowhatshouldwedowhencommunicatingwiththem?Herearesomeofmyideas.Firstly,wecanmakealistofthingsourparentsandwedisagreeaboutmost.Trytofindoutthereasonwhywedisagreewitheachother.Accepteachother’sideaslittlebylittle.Ifwestillhavedisagreements,we’dbetternotgettooangry.Secondly,weshouldtalkwiththemmore!Sharingideascancertainlymakeuscloser.Besides,weshouldalsolearnhowtoreallylisten.Listeningisaskillthatmustbelearnedandpracticed.Finally,besuretobepolite.Weareafamilyinwhicheveryoneislovedandcaredfor.Inconclusion,communicatingwithourparentscansometimesbechallenging,butbyfollowingthesetips,wecanimprovethequalityofourconversationsandstrengthenourrelationshipswiththem.【詳解】[總體分析］①題材：本文是一篇材料作文；②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)主要為“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”；③提示：文章應(yīng)該包括思維導(dǎo)圖中的要點(diǎn)，要適當(dāng)補(bǔ)充，使文章內(nèi)容充實(shí)；行文時(shí)多用第一人稱，盡量多使用短語和句型；寫作中適當(dāng)使用連接詞，使行文連貫、順暢。［寫作步驟］第一步，認(rèn)真閱讀文章的首句，注意內(nèi)容銜接；表明寫作意圖，引出下文；第二步，就如何與父母溝通，提出合理的建議；第三步，書寫結(jié)語，表達(dá)期待。［亮點(diǎn)詞匯］①littlebylittle逐漸地②inconclusion總之［高分句型］①Ifwestillhavedisagreements,we’dbetternotgettooangry.(if引導(dǎo)條件狀語從句)②Listeningisaskillthatmustbelearnedandpracticed.(that引導(dǎo)定語從句、含情態(tài)動(dòng)詞的被動(dòng)語態(tài)、動(dòng)名詞作主語)6．（21-22八年級(jí)下·重慶銅梁·期中）初中生在學(xué)習(xí)和生活中會(huì)遇到各種各樣的困難和問題，尤其是在八年級(jí)。因此21世紀(jì)英語報(bào)“成長(zhǎng)”專欄正在就八年級(jí)學(xué)生在學(xué)習(xí)和生活中遇到的問題進(jìn)行專題討論。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)，以“Peter”為筆名給21世紀(jì)英語報(bào)投稿，講述八年級(jí)學(xué)生會(huì)遇到的問題并提出解決問題的建議。參考要點(diǎn)：1.遇到的困難（學(xué)習(xí)方面；與同學(xué)相處方面；……）；2.給出的建議（尋求幫助；自信，友好……）；3.……參考詞匯：confident自信；optimistic樂觀的要求：1.80—120詞；2.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名和學(xué)校名；GradeEightisanexcitingtime,butwealsomeetsomeproblems.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】參考例文GradeEightisanexcitingtime,butwealsomeetsomeproblems.Forexample,somestudentsfeelworriedabouttheirstudyandfeelstressedoutbeforetakingtheexams.Somemayfindithardtogetonwellwiththeirclassmatesandtheymayfeellonely.Here,Iamgladtohavethechancetosharesomesuggestionswithyou.Firstofall,wheneveryouhavedifficulty,youshouldnotloseheartandyoucanturntoyourteachersandparentsforhelp.Sometimes,talkingtoyourclassmatesorfriendsisagoodwaytorelieveyourstress.Besides,tryyourbesttobeconfidentaboutyourself.Nomatterhowdifficultthesituationis,youshouldkeepanoptimisticattitudetowardsitandtrytofindawayout.Lastbutnotleast,you’dbetterbefriendlytootherssothatyoucanmakemorefriends.Ihopethesesuggestionscanbehelpfultoyouandyouwillhaveagoodtimeatschool.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇說明文，屬于材料作文寫作；②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”；③提示：文章開頭以及要點(diǎn)已經(jīng)給出，按照提示的要點(diǎn)逐點(diǎn)闡述，可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，并突出寫作重點(diǎn)。[寫作步驟]第一步，承接短文開頭，引出話題；第二步，先根據(jù)要點(diǎn)說明八年級(jí)學(xué)生在學(xué)習(xí)和生活中可能遇到的困難，再按照要點(diǎn)提示給出相關(guān)的建議，可列舉具體的事例；第三步，表示希望自己的建議能對(duì)同學(xué)們有所幫助并書寫結(jié)語。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①feelstressedout感覺壓力過大②getonwellwith和……相處得好③relieveone’sstress緩解壓力④beconfidentabout對(duì)……有信心[高分句型]①Somemayfindithardtogetonwellwiththeirclassmatesandtheymayfeellonely.（it作形式賓語，動(dòng)詞不定式作真正的賓語）②Firstofall,wheneveryouhavedifficulty,youshouldnotloseheartandyoucanturntoyourteachersandparentsforhelp.（whenever引導(dǎo)讓步狀語從句）③Sometimes,talkingtoyourclassmatesorfriendsisagoodwaytorelieveyourstress.（動(dòng)名詞作主語）7．（21-22八年級(jí)下·重慶九龍坡·期中）春回大地，重外校園四處春意盎然，生機(jī)勃勃。操場(chǎng)上，綠草如茵，陽光明媚。小道旁，花團(tuán)錦簇，姹紫嫣紅。教室里，書聲瑯瑯，朝氣蓬勃。在這美好的春日里，學(xué)校?？設(shè)urBeautifulCampus為題，開展征文活動(dòng)。請(qǐng)你寫一篇作文，為活動(dòng)投稿。要求：1.條理清楚，意思連貫，語句通順，邏輯清晰，書寫規(guī)范，卷面整潔；2.文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名、學(xué)校名；3.不少于80詞；必須包含下列要點(diǎn)：1.我們的校園美在哪些方面？（環(huán)境美、品德美……）2.如何讓我們的校園更美？3.……OurBeautifulCampusWiththespringcoming,ourcampushasanewlook.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】參考例文OurBeautifulCampusWiththespringcoming,ourcampushasanewlook.Springisintheairandeverywherewelook,it’sfullofvitality.Onsunnydays,thetreesandthegrassontheplaygroundlookmuchgreener.Whilewearewalkingaroundthecampus,wecanseetherearemanycolorfulflowersalongthepaths.Withwarmwindswayingourfacesoftly,everyonecansmellthesweetflowersinthefreshair.Thecampusisbigandtidy.Everyearlymorning,wecanhearstudentsreadloudlyintheclassroom.Boththeteachersandstudentsarefriendlyandpolite,andtherearealwayssmilesontheirfaceswhentheymeeteachother.Asstudents,it’sourdutyforustobuildamorebeautifulcampus.Tofulfillthistask,weshouldbearthefollowinginmind.Tobeginwith,weshouldsticktothehabitofgoingtoschoolonfootorbybike.Inaddition,weshouldprotecttheenvironmentofourcampusbynotthrowingrubbisharound.Remembertoturnofftapsandthelightswhenwedon’tusethemandit’simportanttorecycleeverythingthatcanberecycled.Lastbutnotleast,weshouldcareforplantsandtreesinourschoolyardandbecivilizedstudents.Onlyinthiswaycanwemakeourcampusmoreandmorebeautiful.Let’stakeactionnowandcontributetothebeautyofourcampus.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇說明文，屬于材料作文寫作；②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”；③提示：文章標(biāo)題、開頭和要點(diǎn)已經(jīng)給出，按照提示的要點(diǎn)逐點(diǎn)闡述，可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，并突出寫作重點(diǎn)。[寫作步驟]第一步，承接短文開頭，引出話題；第二步，先描述春日里的校園美景，如環(huán)境整潔、綠化優(yōu)美、學(xué)生們的瑯瑯書聲、師生們待人接物的傳統(tǒng)美德等，再對(duì)建設(shè)美麗校園提出幾點(diǎn)建議，要列舉具體的事例；第三步，呼吁大家行動(dòng)起來共建美麗校園并書寫結(jié)語。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①bearsthinmind牢記某物/某事②sticktothehabitofdoingsth堅(jiān)持養(yǎng)成做某事的習(xí)慣③takeaction采取行動(dòng)④contributeto為……做出貢獻(xiàn)[高分句型]①Springisintheairandeverywherewelook,it’sfullofvitality.（and連接兩個(gè)并列分句，第二個(gè)并列分句中含有everywhere引導(dǎo)的讓步狀語從句）②Whilewearewalkingaroundthecampus,wecanseetherearemanycolorfulflowersalongthepaths.（while引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語從句，省略引導(dǎo)詞that引導(dǎo)的賓語從句）③Asstudents,it’sourdutyforustobuildamorebeautifulcampus.（it作形式主語，動(dòng)詞不定式作真正的主語）④Onlyinthiswaycanwemakeourcampusmoreandmorebeautiful.（only+狀語位于句首，句子采用部分倒裝結(jié)構(gòu)）8．（21-22八年級(jí)下·重慶南岸·期中）父母是世界上最愛我們的人。作為中學(xué)生，我們可以做一些力所能及的事情關(guān)愛父母。請(qǐng)以“Howtocareforourparents”為題，根據(jù)下列要求，聯(lián)系實(shí)際，寫一篇介紹關(guān)愛父母的文章。1.和父母一起鍛煉，一起做家務(wù)。2.告訴父母吃健康的食物，保持充足睡眠3.分享自己的校園生活，與他們更親密。要求：1.80-100詞(開頭已寫出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù))；2.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)地點(diǎn)和姓名HowtocareforourparentsAsweallknow,ourparentsloveusmorethananyoneelseintheworld.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文HowtocareforourparentsAsweallknow,ourparentsloveusmorethananyoneelseintheworld.Theytrytoofferthebestlifeandeducationtous,sotheyhavetoomuchpressure.Astheirchildren,learningtocareforourparentsiswhatweshoulddo.Firstly,wecandosportswiththemtohelpthemkeephealthyanddohouseworkasmuchaspossibleathome.Secondly,weshouldtellthemtoeathealthyfoodandnottostayuplatesothattheycangetenoughsleep.Lastbutnotleast,weshouldshareourschoollifewiththemandgetclosertothem.Allinall,weshouldcareforourparentsandlovethemastheyloveus.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇材料作文；②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”；③提示：要求以“Howtocareforourparents”為題，結(jié)合提示內(nèi)容進(jìn)行寫作，適當(dāng)添加細(xì)節(jié)，并突出寫作重點(diǎn)。[寫作步驟]第一步，描述父母的辛勞和不易；第二步，介紹作為孩子，我們能為父母做什么；第三步，書寫結(jié)語。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①toomuchpressure太多的壓力②carefor關(guān)心③asmuchaspossible盡可能④stayuplate熬夜[高分句型]①Theytrytoofferthebestlifeandeducationtous,sotheyhavetoomuchpressure.（so連接并列句）②Secondly,weshouldtellthemtoeathealthyfoodandnottostayuplatesothattheycangetenoughsleep.（sothat引導(dǎo)目的狀語從句）9．（21-22八年級(jí)下·重慶沙坪壩·期中）巴菲特（WarrenBuffet）是全球最著名的投資家之一。在6歲時(shí)，他就開始了自己的第一筆生意，他通過從爺爺?shù)碾s貨鋪進(jìn)貨并將口香糖賣給鄰居掙得了第一筆錢。根據(jù)2017年公布的調(diào)查一份報(bào)告，10至19歲的學(xué)生之中，有40%的學(xué)生有自主創(chuàng)業(yè)的計(jì)劃。但是，中學(xué)生學(xué)業(yè)任務(wù)比較重、空余時(shí)間較少，創(chuàng)業(yè)對(duì)于中學(xué)生來說有諸多挑戰(zhàn)。根據(jù)你的個(gè)人理解和生活感受，你認(rèn)為中學(xué)生是否應(yīng)該創(chuàng)業(yè)呢？請(qǐng)結(jié)合以下寫作提示，以“Shouldmiddleschoolstudentsrunbusiness?”為題寫一篇短文并針對(duì)該話題闡述你的個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)。寫作提示：贊同的理由反對(duì)的理由1.中學(xué)生通過創(chuàng)業(yè)可以提高自身能力和獨(dú)立性；2.中學(xué)生通過創(chuàng)業(yè)可以提前適應(yīng)社會(huì)生活；3.……1.中學(xué)生學(xué)習(xí)壓力大、時(shí)間緊；2.中學(xué)生當(dāng)前最重要的事是在校學(xué)習(xí)；3.……寫作要求：1.字?jǐn)?shù)：100~120詞，標(biāo)題已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；2.短文應(yīng)有明確的個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)并結(jié)合寫作提示適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；3.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱。

Shouldmiddleschoolstudentsrunbusiness?__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：Shouldmiddleschoolstudentsrunbusiness?Accordingtoonesurveyin2017,fortypercentofthestudentsfrom10to19yearsoldhadplansforrunningbusiness.Shouldmiddleschoolstudentsrunbusiness?Somepeopleareforit.Theythinkithelpsmiddleschoolstudentsimprovetheirownabilitiesandindependence.Byrunningbusiness,theycanadaptthemselvestosocietyinadvance.Theycanalsomakesomemoneyfortheirschooling.However,someareagainstit.Theythinkmiddleschoolstudentshavelittletimeandhavemuchpressureinstudy.Nothingismoreimportantthanlessonsforthem.What’smore,theycanneitheraffordthecostoffailurenortaketheriskoffailure.Inmyopinion,middleschoolstudentscanusepocketmoneytostartbusinessatalowcost.Theyshouldspendenoughtimeonstudyatthesametime.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：這是一篇材料作文，為議論文；②時(shí)態(tài)：主要是“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”；③提示：需要表明贊同與反對(duì)的理由，“寫作提示”已經(jīng)給出，并適當(dāng)補(bǔ)充；另外，還需要表達(dá)個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)，注意不要遺漏此項(xiàng)內(nèi)容。[寫作步驟]第一步，通過舉例引出寫作的主題與中學(xué)生創(chuàng)業(yè)有關(guān)。第二步，對(duì)于中學(xué)生是否應(yīng)該創(chuàng)業(yè)，分別闡述贊同和反對(duì)的理由，需要適當(dāng)補(bǔ)充。這部分內(nèi)容是重點(diǎn)。第三步，表達(dá)個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①haveplansfor有……的計(jì)劃②adaptthemselvesto使自己適應(yīng)③what’smore更重要的是④taketheriskoffailure承擔(dān)失敗的風(fēng)險(xiǎn)[高分句型]①What’smore,theycanneitheraffordthecostoffailurenortaketheriskoffailure.（“neither...nor...”句型）②Nothingismoreimportantthanlessonsforthem.（比較級(jí)句型）10．（2019·重慶·中考真題）你正在組織一項(xiàng)暑假期間到山區(qū)為期一周的游學(xué)和幫扶活動(dòng)。作為發(fā)起人，請(qǐng)你寫一篇發(fā)言稿，在你?！坝⒄Z時(shí)光”廣播中號(hào)召更多的同學(xué)參加。要求：1.80—100詞，開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。2.文中不能出現(xiàn)自己的姓名和所在學(xué)校的名稱。參考信息：1.活動(dòng)緣由（孤獨(dú)、幫扶、游學(xué)……）2.活動(dòng)構(gòu)想（時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)、內(nèi)容……）3.……Hello,everybody.Iamplanningasummertripcalled“BeaKidintheMountain”.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Thankyou!【答案】Hello,everybody.Iamplanningasummertripcalled“BeakidintheMountains”.Itwillprovideuswithameaningfulweekstayingwiththestudentsinthemountains.Asmanyoftheirparentsleaveforthecitytowork,thosestudentsmightfeellonelyandsomemayevenfindithardtogoonstudying.Sowecanbringthemsomeschoolthingslikebooksandpensfortheirstudy,andpreparesomeinterestingstoriestoshare.Inthedaytime,wecangohikinganddosometeamwork.Intheevening,wecandosuchactivitiesaspopulargamesandgroupdancearoundthefire.Isn’tthatexciting?Comeandjoinus.Let’sbe“akidinthemountains”.Ibelieveitwillbringsunshinetothechildreninthemountainsaswellasmoreconfidencetous.Thankyou!【詳解】這是一篇發(fā)言稿，也就是材料作文，根據(jù)材料中的相關(guān)信息介紹一下在暑假期間到山區(qū)為期一周的游學(xué)和幫扶活動(dòng)的情況。目的是：號(hào)召更多的同學(xué)參加。主要從活動(dòng)緣由（孤獨(dú)、幫扶、游學(xué)……）；活動(dòng)構(gòu)想（時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)、內(nèi)容……）和其他方面來介紹。時(shí)態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，人稱為第一人稱。注意作文中必須包含材料上的所有信息，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。寫作時(shí)，避免使用漢語式的英語，盡量使用我們熟悉的句子或短語。語法要正確，表達(dá)要符合英語習(xí)慣，注意時(shí)態(tài)、時(shí)間狀語的搭配及主謂一致問題。寫作中適當(dāng)使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系，表達(dá)具有條理性。【高分句型一】Asmanyoftheirparentsleaveforthecitytowork,thosestudentsmightfeellonelyandsomemayevenfindithardtogoonstudying.由于很多父母都去城市工作，這些學(xué)生可能會(huì)感到孤獨(dú)，有些人甚至覺得很難繼續(xù)學(xué)習(xí)。ithardtogoonstudying.中的it是形式賓語?！靖叻志湫投縄believeitwillbringsunshinetothechildreninthemountainsaswellasmoreconfidencetous.我相信它會(huì)給山里的孩子們帶來陽光，也會(huì)給我們帶來更多的信心。句子itwillbringsunshinetothechildreninthemountainsaswellasmoreconfidencetous.是賓語從句。做believe的賓語。11．（21-22八年級(jí)下·重慶渝中·期中）學(xué)校正在組織英語作文比賽，請(qǐng)以A/An________Day為題，寫一篇短文參賽。內(nèi)容包括：1．簡(jiǎn)述這一天發(fā)生了什么事；2．你對(duì)這個(gè)事件的感想。注意事項(xiàng)：1）字?jǐn)?shù)：80-100詞；2）短文內(nèi)容應(yīng)包含提示的要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)增加情節(jié)，以使行文連貫；3）文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱；________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】范文AnUnluckyDayTodayisanunluckyday.IkeptonwatchingTVlastnightanddidn’tgotobeduntil12.Myalarmdidn’tgooffinthemorning.SoIgotupquitelate.Andmymotherdidn’tbuymebreakfast.Irushedoutofthedoorwithoutbreakfast.WhenIhurriedtothebusstop,thebushadalreadyleft,soIhadtoruntoschool.Luckily,Tom’sdadsawmeonthestreetandgavemealiftinhiscar.WhenIreachedschool,Ifoundourteacherhadbegunclass.AfterIsatdown,IrealizedthatIhadleftmybackpackathome.AtnoonwhenIgotreadytobuylunch,IfoundthatIhadn’ttakenanymoneywithme.WhenIgothomeafterschool,Icouldn’tfindmykeytothedoor,becauseIhadleftitinthedesk.WhatanunluckydayIhad!Iwillneverstayuplate.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇材料作文；②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為“一般過去時(shí)”；③提示：要求補(bǔ)充好題目，結(jié)合提示問題進(jìn)行寫作，適當(dāng)添加細(xì)節(jié)，并突出寫作重點(diǎn)。[寫作步驟]第一步，介紹這一天發(fā)生了什么事；第二步，描述自己對(duì)這個(gè)事件的感想；[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①keepon繼續(xù)②gooff（電器設(shè)備）停止運(yùn)轉(zhuǎn)③hurryto趕往④stayuplate熬夜[高分句型]①WhenIhurriedtothebusstop,thebushadalreadyleft,soIhadtoruntoschool.（when引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語從句）②AfterIsatdown,IrealizedthatIhadleftmybackpackathome.（after引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語從句和that引導(dǎo)的賓語從句）12．（21-22八年級(jí)下·重慶沙坪壩·期中）為了更好地促進(jìn)初中學(xué)生英語口語能力的提升，新華中學(xué)決定將英語口語納入平時(shí)考試中，請(qǐng)以TestingSpokenEnglishIsontheWay為題，發(fā)表自己對(duì)此項(xiàng)改革的看法，說明理由，并對(duì)如何提高中學(xué)生的英語口語提出建議。要求：1.80-100詞:開頭已給出。2.文中不出現(xiàn)自己的真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱。參考要點(diǎn)：1.發(fā)表你的看法，并給出理由。2.提出如何提高中學(xué)生的英語口語的建議(至少三條)。3.……TestingSpokenEnglishIsontheWayRecently,XinhuaMiddleSchoolhasdecidedtotestspokenEnglishintheexam.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：TestingSpokenEnglishIsontheWayRecently,XinhuaMiddleSchoolhasdecidedtotestspokenEnglishintheexam.Ithinkthisisagoodmeasure.Becausenowmoststudentsonlypayattentiontowriting,butignorespokenEnglish,andtheycan’tcommunicatewhentheyreallymeetforeigners.Soit’snecessarytoimprovespokenEnglish.HerearesomewaystoimprovespokenEnglish.Firstofall,practicespokenEnglishbyreadingEnglisheveryday.Second,makeforeignfriendsandhaveconversationswiththemoften.Third,joinanEnglishclub.Inaword,it’simportanttoimproveourskillsofspokenEnglish.TestingspokenEnglishisontheway.Let’spracticeEnglishtogether.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇記敘文寫作，為材料作文；②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”為主；③提示：寫作要點(diǎn)已給出，學(xué)生應(yīng)注意不要遺漏相關(guān)要點(diǎn)，適當(dāng)添加細(xì)節(jié)，并突出寫作重點(diǎn)。[寫作步驟]第一步，發(fā)表自己對(duì)此項(xiàng)改革的看法，說明理由。第二步，對(duì)如何提高中學(xué)生的英語口語提出建議。第三部，最后總結(jié)，再次強(qiáng)調(diào)口語的重要性。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①payattentionto注意②makeforeignfriends交外國(guó)朋友③haveconversationswith和某人交流[高分句型]①Ithinkthisisagoodmeasure.(省略that的賓語從句)②HerearesomewaystoimprovespokenEnglish.(倒裝句)13．（21-22八年級(jí)下·重慶沙坪壩·期中）日前，加強(qiáng)中小學(xué)生勞動(dòng)教育這一話題受到社會(huì)各界廣泛關(guān)注。為積極響應(yīng)國(guó)家政策，今年3月1日起，全國(guó)各地不少中小學(xué)開設(shè)諸如插秧、種地、烹飪等勞動(dòng)課程。同學(xué)們也通過這樣的課程感受到了勞動(dòng)的樂趣與滿足感。校刊英語專欄以“Laboristhemostglorious(勞動(dòng)最光榮)”為主題，向全校學(xué)生征稿。請(qǐng)你結(jié)合自己一次勞動(dòng)經(jīng)歷，寫一篇英文征文。參考要點(diǎn)：1.自己的一次勞動(dòng)經(jīng)歷（過程、感受）2.你對(duì)勞動(dòng)教育的看法（觀點(diǎn)、原因）3.……要求：1.80-120詞，開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù);2.文中不能出現(xiàn)自己的姓名和所在學(xué)校的名稱。提示：labor

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n.勞動(dòng)LaboristhemostgloriousPrimaryandsecondaryschoolsinmanycitieshavesetupatleastonelaborclasseveryweekstartingfromMarch1.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________