2021年高考英語二輪精講精練講義-專題-書面表達(dá)新題型2020新題賞析(讀寫任務(wù);完成句子)-

書面表達(dá)新題型2022新題賞析(讀寫任務(wù);完成句子)主講老師：麻雪玲北京市英語老師讀寫任務(wù)命題特點任務(wù)分為兩部分，即TASK1、SummaryTASK2、Opinion“讀”和“寫”的有機(jī)結(jié)合“讀”的材料是為“寫”供應(yīng)情景“寫”是對“讀”的材料的思考和延長題一：閱讀下面短文，然后依據(jù)要求寫一篇150詞左右的英語短文。OseolaMcCartyspentmorethan75yearswashingandironingotherpeople’sclothes.Asalaundrywoman,shewaspaidonlyafewdollarseachtime.Certainlynobodywouldconsiderherrich,sotheywereallamazedwhenMissMcCartydecidedtodonate$150,000totheUniversityof Themoneywasinfactherlifesavings.Shecouldsavesuchalargeamountofmoneybecauseshelivedaverysimplelife.Sheneverlearnedtodrive,andwhenshewantedtogosomewhere,shejustwalked.Sheneverflewtoanywheretillthedonation（捐助），andin50yearsshehadbeenoutoftheSouthonlyonce.Thehouseinwhichshelivedwasalsoarathermodestoneherlastunclelefther.OnlyaftershebecameknowninAmericadidshebegintotravelalloverthecountry.Sincethen,shehadbeenthesubjectofmanyinterviewsandarticlesandwaseveninvitedtotheWhiteHouse. Herdonationwasforstudentswhoclearlyneededfinancialhelp.Sheherselfleftschoolinthesixthgradeandhadnevermarriedorhadchildren.Shesaidtothereportersthattheideaofhelpingsomebody’schildgotocollegegavehermuchpleasure.[寫作內(nèi)容】1.用約30個詞概括上文的主要內(nèi)容。2.用約120個詞就MissMcCarty的捐助談?wù)勀愕南敕?，?nèi)容包括：1.你如何看待她的捐助行為；2.你認(rèn)為她的捐助對受惠同學(xué)有哪些影響；3.假如你自己要捐助，你會選擇哪個群體并陳述理由。[寫作要求]1.作文中可以使用親身經(jīng)受或虛構(gòu)的故事，也可以參照閱讀材料的內(nèi)容，但不得直接引用原文的句子。2.作文中不得毀滅真實姓名和學(xué)校名稱。[評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)]概括精確，語言規(guī)范，內(nèi)容合適，篇章連貫。第一步：審題1.認(rèn)真閱讀要求，充分理解材料信息。2.體裁3.人稱4.時態(tài)5.要點體裁：敘議結(jié)合文人稱：三人稱為主，一人稱為輔時態(tài)：敘述部分：過去時為主談?wù)摬糠郑含F(xiàn)在時為主要點：4個其次步：分段Para.1要點一：用約30個詞概括上文的主要內(nèi)容。Para.2要點二：你如何看待她的捐贈行為。Para.3要點三：你認(rèn)為她的捐贈對受惠同學(xué)有何影響。Para.4要點四：假如你自己要捐助，你會選擇哪個群體并陳述理由。第三步：概括文章，提煉要點Para1：用約30個詞概括上文的主要內(nèi)容。OseolaMcCartyspentmorethan75yearswashingandironingotherpeople’sclothes.Asalaundrywoman,shewaspaidonlyafewdollarseachtime.Certainlynobodywouldconsiderherrich,sotheywereallamazedwhenMissMcCartydecidedtodonate$150,000totheUniversityofThemoneywasinfactherlifesavings.Shecouldsavesuchalargeamountofmoneybecauseshelivedaverysimplelife.Sheneverlearnedtodrive,andwhenshewantedtogosomewhere,shejustwalked.Sheneverflewtoanywheretillthedonation（捐助），andin50yearsshehadbeenoutoftheSouthonlyonce.Thehouseinwhichshelivedwasalsoarathermodestoneherlastunclelefther.OnlyaftershebecameknowninAmerica Herdonationwasforstudentswhoclearlyneededfinancialhelp.Sheherselfleftschoolinthesixthgradeandhadnevermarriedorhadchildren.Shesaidtothereportersthattheideaofhelpingsomebody’schildgotocollegegavehermuchpleasure. OseolaMcCarty,thoughlivingasimplelife,donatedallhersavingstoauniversitytohelpthestudentswithfinancialproblems,whichhasbroughtherwidespreadsocialrecognition.Akindlaundrywomanwithalowpaydonatedtoauniversityalotofmoneyshesavedbylivingasimplelifetohelpthestudentshavingfinancialproblems.第四步：填句、填詞Para.2:Ifeel…byherkindness…她的行為使我深受感動。她對有困難的人慷慨解囊。她對高校生表現(xiàn)出的關(guān)懷使她成為全部人應(yīng)當(dāng)學(xué)習(xí)的榜樣。 moved,touched,impressed,inspired,generous,beconcernedfor,beworthrespecting,madeherselfagoodexamplePara.3：Inmyopinion,thosewhoreceivedherdonationwill…她的救濟(jì)不僅使那些同學(xué)擺脫了經(jīng)濟(jì)負(fù)擔(dān)，并倍受鼓舞，他們會更加努力并獲得成功。更重要的是，他們會將愛心傳遞，連續(xù)去掛念其他有困難的人。 beencouraged,studyharder,achievesuccess,passloveandhelponto…Para.4：IfIhavethechancetodonate,Iwillhelp…,because…假如我有機(jī)會捐贈，我也會資助那些貧困高校生,由于他們是整個世界的將來。擁有了學(xué)問、以及和善和愛心，他們會把這個世界制造的更加奇怪。 thefutureoftheworld,knowledge,kindness,virtue,becomemorebeautiful第五步：連接，修飾、潤色、檢查高分主要來自：內(nèi)容，層次，連接臨場失分六大緣由：審題、內(nèi)容、連接、層次、錯誤、書寫完成句子命題意圖強(qiáng)化語法概念，積累學(xué)問儲備樹立結(jié)構(gòu)意識，規(guī)范表達(dá)方式題二：閱讀下列各小題，依據(jù)漢語提示，用句末括號內(nèi)的英語單詞完成句子，并將答案寫在答題卡上的相應(yīng)題號后。例：例：______wasthattheyoungplayerperformedextremelywellinthetabletennistournament.(delight)令球迷欣喜的是那位年輕的球員在乒乓球錦標(biāo)賽中表現(xiàn)得極為精彩。答案：Whatdelightedthefans/madethefansdelighted71.Thecommunitycollegehastocutdownonstaff______.(save)為了省錢，那所社區(qū)學(xué)院只好裁員。72.Sofarthewell-knownjournalist______morethan4,000interviewswithfamouspeople.(accumulate)迄今為止這位出名記者采訪名人已累積達(dá)四千余人次。73.Sometimes______touseexamplestoexplainabstractconcepts.(helpful)有時候舉例或許有助于解釋抽象的概念。74.Thepolicewillreward______usefulinformationtocatchtherobber.(provide)任何人供應(yīng)有用信息掛念抓住劫匪，警方將予以嘉獎。75.He’stheonlystudentintheclass______totakepartintheModelUnitedNationsconference.(select)他是班上唯一被選上去參與模擬聯(lián)合國大會的同學(xué)。76.Noothertechnologicaldevelopmenthashad______asthegrowthofelectronicsonsomanyaspectsofsocial,economic,andculturaldevelopment.(impact)沒有哪項技術(shù)的進(jìn)展像電子技術(shù)這樣，對我們的社會、經(jīng)濟(jì)以及文化等諸多方面產(chǎn)生過如此重要的影響。77.You______themeetingtotellmethat;youcouldhavecometotellmeafterwards.(interrupt)你不該打斷會議來告知我那件事，你本可以會后告知我。78.Thisnovelwasoncethe______bookinhighschoolsintheUnitedStates.(read)這部小說曾經(jīng)是美國高中閱讀最廣泛的書。79.ThePublicSquareisaneye-catchingsightofthecity.______manystonesculpturesoffamoushistoricalfigures.(stand)大眾廣場是這個城市引人注目的景點，很多歷史名人的石雕像矗立在那兒。80.Itwasseveralminutes______whathewassaying.(take)過了好幾分鐘，我才理解他說的是什么。書面表達(dá)新題型2022新題賞析(讀寫任務(wù);完成句子)講義參考答案讀寫任務(wù)題一：Onepossibleversion Fromthispassage,wehavelearntthatOseolaMcCarty,thoughlivingasimplelife,donatedallhersavingstoauniversitytohelpthestudentswithfinancialproblems,whichhasbroughtherwidespreadsocialrecognition. Whatshehasdonemakesmedeeplymovedandinspired,whichwellprovesherkindness.Beinghelpfulandgeneroustothecollegestudentswithfinancialdifficulties,shehasmadeherselfagoodexampletomotivateotherpeopletoparticipateinthesimilaractivities. Frommyperspective,thelady’sgenerosityisnotonlyameansofassistancetothosestudentsshortofmoneybutalsoitwillstrengthentheirfaithinfuturelife,leadingthemtoworkharderandachievesuccess.What’smoreimportantisthatthe