05 校園題材- 把脈2021年中考英語作文熱點(diǎn)【學(xué)科網(wǎng)名師堂】

05-校園題材（一）校園暴力

遇見或親身經(jīng)歷過校園暴力嗎？千萬別以為這是危言聳聽，在學(xué)校必須注意維護(hù)自己的人身安全。

【預(yù)測題目】近年全國發(fā)生數(shù)起嚴(yán)重的校園暴力事件，某中學(xué)初三8班圍繞校園安全問題召開主題班會(huì)。假定你是班長李華，以Howtoprotectourselvesincampusviolence為標(biāo)題寫一篇發(fā)言稿.主要包括如下內(nèi)容：1．校園暴力事件已引起廣泛關(guān)注。2．要求每個(gè)學(xué)生都學(xué)習(xí)相關(guān)知識(shí)，增強(qiáng)自身防范能力。3．遇到校園暴力時(shí)要采取適當(dāng)措施，包括：保持冷靜，判斷清楚自己的處境和可能的危險(xiǎn)；盡一切可能避免人身傷害；及時(shí)報(bào)警。注意：1．詞數(shù)100左右；開頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫好，但不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。2．可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。參考詞匯：增強(qiáng)—enhanceHowtoprotectourselvesincampusviolenceDearfriends,Thisyear,someseriouslyviolentincidentshappenedincampus,resultinginverybadresults.That’sall.Thankyou!

滿分優(yōu)秀范文：HowtoprotectourselvesincampusviolenceDearfriends,Thisyear,someseriouslyviolentincidentshappenedincampus,resultinginverybadresults.Theincidentsofcampusviolencehavedrawnwidespreadattentioninourcountry.Asastudent,weshouldlearnsomeknowledgeabouthowtodealwiththeviolenceandenhancetheabilityofself-protection.Ofcourse,ifwemeettheviolence,weshouldtakeappropriatemeasurestoprotectourselves.Atfirst,we’dbetterkeepcalm,judgethesituationandbeawareofthepossibledangers.Then,weshouldtryourbesttoescapeorpreventtheviolence.Atlastbutnotleast,weshouldcallthepoliceorteachersassoonaspossibletoavoidthephysicalinjury.That’sall.Thankyou.

（二）校規(guī)

除了家規(guī)，校規(guī)在各所中學(xué)也是普遍存在和熱議的話題。關(guān)于校規(guī)，你怎么看？

【預(yù)測題目】人們常說：“沒有規(guī)矩，不成方圓”，合理的校規(guī)對(duì)于學(xué)生的健康成長至關(guān)重要。請你根據(jù)以下所給內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，以“Ourschoolrules”為題寫一篇英文短文，談?wù)勀銈兊男Ｒ?guī)。內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)：1.你們學(xué)校有哪些校規(guī)；2.談?wù)勀銓?duì)這些校規(guī)的看法；3.請說說你的好建議；4.……要求：1.文中必須包括所給提示中1－3項(xiàng)內(nèi)容，可展開思路，適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；2.文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的校名、人名和其他真實(shí)信息；3.100詞左右。滿分優(yōu)秀范文：OurSchoolRules

Therearemanyrulesinourschool.FromMondaytoFriday，wehavetogettoschoolbefore7：00inthemorning.Wemustwearschooluniforms，andIthinkitisgoodforusbecauseuniformscanmakeuslooksmart.Wemustlistentoourteacherscarefullyinclassandfinishourhomeworkafterschool.Wearenotallowedtousemobilephonesinclass.Ithinktherulesareverystrictbutuseful，andweshouldfollowthem.However，wehavesomuchhomeworkthatwehavelittlefreetimetodowhatwelovetodo.Inmyopinion，weshouldhavemorefreetimetotakepartinallkindsofactivitiesandimproveourabilities.（三）榜樣（example）是一種力量，我們的成長都離不開榜樣的影響和帶動(dòng)。某校園英文網(wǎng)站以“Theexampleinmyheartis______”為題征文，請你根據(jù)下面的提示，為本次活動(dòng)投稿。寫作要點(diǎn)：(1)Whoistheexampleinyourheart?(2)Whyisheorsheyourexample?(3)Whatdoyoulearnfromtheexample?寫作要求：(1)補(bǔ)全標(biāo)題，參考所給詞語，也可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；(2)寫作內(nèi)容要包含所有要點(diǎn)，詞數(shù)80左右；(3)語言準(zhǔn)確，行文連貫，層次清晰，書寫規(guī)范；(4)文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名、校名和地名。Theexampleinmyheartis____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：

TheexampleinmyheartisateacherAroundustherearemanyexamplesworthlearningfrom.Amongthem,ateachersetsagoodexampleforme.Becauseshebringsmenotonlycouragebutalsoconfidence.Shelightsupmywaytosuccess.Iusedtobeshyandliveinavillagewithmygrandma.Afterenteringajuniorschool.Ibecameshyerandlostconfidenceinalmosteverything.MyEnglishteacherfoundthis.Shehadatalkwithmeoneday.SheencouragedmetoaskherforhelpanytimeifIneed.Sheoftensmiledtomeandofferedtosolvemyprobleminhersparetime.Ibegantostudyhardandbecameconfident.NowI’vemadegreatprogress.Iwanttobeateacherlikehertohelpmorestudentslikeme.AsfarasI’mconcerned,anexamplemeanspoweranddirection.Sheistheexampleinmyheart.Sheplaysanimportantroleinmygrowingup.【詳解】1.題干解讀：題目要求根據(jù)寫作要點(diǎn)及要求，補(bǔ)全標(biāo)題“Theexampleinmyheartis______”寫一篇文章介紹自己心中的榜樣人物，要包含所有要點(diǎn)，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。2.寫作指導(dǎo)：此題為半開放式命題作文。由于有三個(gè)方面（who，why，what）提示內(nèi)容限定，寫作的內(nèi)容不僅要顧全要點(diǎn)，還需要學(xué)生適當(dāng)自主發(fā)揮。要求用第一人稱進(jìn)行敘事，時(shí)態(tài)比較靈活，敘事要有條理，結(jié)構(gòu)要完整，過渡要自然，表達(dá)要連貫，書寫要規(guī)范。（四）為了配合“足球進(jìn)校園”活動(dòng)，你們班開展了一次主題班會(huì)。請你以足球迷的身份，根據(jù)下列表格中的要點(diǎn)提示，用英語向同學(xué)們介紹足球這項(xiàng)運(yùn)動(dòng)并談?wù)勛约旱膲粝?。常識(shí)

歷史悠久，深受喜愛

世界杯4年舉行一次

好處

男生女生皆可參加

利于培養(yǎng)團(tuán)隊(duì)精神

考生自擬(至少1點(diǎn))

偶像

梅西，有足球天賦

夢想

考生自擬(至少1點(diǎn))

注意：1.詞數(shù)90左右。短文的開頭已為你寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；1.短文須包括所有要點(diǎn)，不要逐詞翻譯，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，使短文連貫、通順；2.短文中不得真實(shí)的人名、校名等相關(guān)信息。參考詞匯：梅西MessiDearclassmates,I’mveryexcitedtohearthatChinawillbuild20,000football-themedschoolsby2020.Thankyouforyourattention.【答案】Dearclassmates，I’mveryexcitedtohearthatChinawillbuild20，000football-themedschoolsby2020．Footballhasaverylonghistory．Itislikedbypeopleallovertheworld．TheWorldCuptakesplaceeveryfouryears．Playingfootballhaslotsofadvantages．First，bothboysandgirlscantakepartinit．Second，ithelpsdevelopteamspirit．What’smore，playingfootballisgoodforourhealth．I’mafootballfan．Messiismyhero．Hehasagiftforplayingfootball．MydreamistobecomeafamousfootballplayerlikeMessi．IhopeChinawillholdtheWorldCupsomeday．Thankyouforyourattention．【詳解】試題分析：本題要求按提綱的提示，介紹足球運(yùn)動(dòng)并談?wù)勛约旱膲粝搿Ｒ笞屑?xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確本文主要從三個(gè)方面來寫：介紹足球運(yùn)動(dòng)及其好處；說說自己的偶像；談?wù)勛约旱膲粝搿Ｒ罁?jù)提示情景或詞語，按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來寫。根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時(shí)態(tài)、語態(tài)；語言表達(dá)要符合英語習(xí)慣。寫作亮點(diǎn)：本文語言精煉，像第二自然段的Footballhasaverylonghistory.Itislikedbypeopleallovertheworld.TheWorldCuptakesplaceeveryfouryears.ithelpsdevelopteamspirit.What’smore,playingfootballisgoodforourhealth.等等句子，簡潔，但是句意表達(dá)清楚；同時(shí)，本文用了被動(dòng)語態(tài)、動(dòng)名詞作主語、不定式作表語等等語法形式，使表達(dá)生動(dòng)；用了first,second等使得短文層次清楚。（五）初三年級(jí)將舉行“最佳班長”評(píng)選活動(dòng)，請你根據(jù)下列表格信息，以“OurClassMonitor”為題，寫一篇短文，推薦你們班的班長Betty參加評(píng)選。外貌thin,tall,longhair,wearapairofglasses性格kind,friendly,getonwellwith,help特長dowellin,beinterestedin,win,prize,competition…（寫作要求）1、短文應(yīng)包括以上信息，為使行文連貫可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)。2、文章詞數(shù)在70詞左右，開頭已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)，要求書寫規(guī)范。3、文中不得出現(xiàn)涉及考生真實(shí)信息的人名、地名或校名。OurClassMonitorNowI'dliketointroduceBettytoyou.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：OurClassMonitorNowI'dliketointroduceBettytoyou.Bettyisourclassmonitor.Sheisathinandtallgirlwithlonghair.Sheoftenwearsapairofglasses.Sheisfriendlyandshegetsonwellwitheveryoneinourclass.Bettyisalsokind.ShedoeswellinEnglish,sosheoftenhelpsuslearnEnglish.Sheisinterestedinplayingthepianoandhasalreadywonsomeprizesinpianocompetitions.Ithinkshewillbethebest.【詳解】1.題干解讀：本文是一篇材料作文，要求按照表格中的內(nèi)容介紹“我們班的班長”。根據(jù)題目要點(diǎn)，文章內(nèi)容需包括：外貌，性格以及特長，注意需涵蓋材料中所有信息。2.寫作指導(dǎo)：本文以“寫人”為主，重點(diǎn)介紹其外貌、性格及特長；人稱為第三人稱單數(shù)，時(shí)態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，注意主謂一致問題；寫作時(shí)注意要點(diǎn)齊全，條理清晰，使讀者一目了然。（六）假設(shè)你是李華，你校將要舉辦“勞動(dòng)實(shí)踐周”活動(dòng)。請根據(jù)以下提示，給你的英國朋友Scott寫一封信，邀請他參加。內(nèi)容包括1.活動(dòng)時(shí)間：……2.活動(dòng)內(nèi)容：校園環(huán)境美化、實(shí)踐基地勞動(dòng)、勞動(dòng)主題演講……3.活動(dòng)意義：……要求1.100詞左右（開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)人總詞數(shù)）；2.包括所有提示要點(diǎn)，并適當(dāng)補(bǔ)充，語句通順，意思連貫；3.信中不得出現(xiàn)個(gè)人真實(shí)姓名和校名。參考詞匯∶LabourPracticeWeek勞動(dòng)實(shí)踐周；practicebase實(shí)踐基地DearScott,_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【答案】例文：DearScott,How'sitgoing?I’mgladtotellyouapieceofgoodnews.OurschoolwillhaveaLabourPracticeWeek.Welcomeyoutojoinit.ThisactivitylastsfromSeptember1stto7th.Duringtheweek,we'llcleanupourcampuscompletelytomakeourschoolmorebeautiful.What'smore,wecanworkinthepracticebase.Itmustbereallyinteresting.We'lllearntodolotsofthings,forexample,doingsomecooking,drivingacar,evenshooting.Ican'twaittotakepartinit!Don'tforgettoprepareatalk,everyonehastogiveatalkabouttheactivityatlast.We'lllearnalotandopenourmindinit.Wemusthaveagoodtimetogetherthere!Yours,LiHua【詳解】1.題干解讀：該題目屬于書信寫作。在寫作時(shí)應(yīng)根據(jù)題目要求介紹勞動(dòng)實(shí)踐周活動(dòng)的時(shí)間、活動(dòng)內(nèi)容及意義。2.寫作指導(dǎo)：本文用第一人稱來寫作，時(shí)態(tài)采用一般將來時(shí)為主，介紹活動(dòng)的具體內(nèi)容敘述完整，條理清晰。（七）假如你是李明，你的英國筆友John對(duì)你們學(xué)校最近開展的“書香校園”活動(dòng)（theScholarlyCampusactivity）很感興趣，請用英語給他寫一封信，介紹此項(xiàng)活動(dòng)。內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)：1.活動(dòng)的目的：鼓勵(lì)多閱讀；2.活動(dòng)的形式：讀書班會(huì)、閱讀俱樂部、分享讀書感想（experience）；3.對(duì)活動(dòng)的看法；4.推薦中國名著：西游記參考詞匯：（僅供參考）要求：1.包括所有內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，不要逐句翻譯，可以適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。2.80詞左右，語法正確。（開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）3.文中不得出現(xiàn)考生真實(shí)的姓名、地點(diǎn)和所在的學(xué)校名稱。DearJohn,Howiseverythinggoing?______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Bestwishestoyou.Yours,LiMing【答案】例文DearJohn,Howiseverythinggoing?I'msogladthatyouareinterestedintheScholarlyCampusactivityinourschool.NowIcan'twaittotellyousomethingaboutit.OurschoolhasheldtheScholarlyCampusactivityrecently.Thepurposeoftheactivityistoencourageusstudentstoreadmorebooks.Wehaveorganizedseveralactivities,suchasholdingclassmeetings,openingrendingclubs,sharingreadingexperiencesandsoon.NowtheideaofScholarlyCampusissowell-receivedthatyoucanfindstudentsreadbooksallovertheschoolyard.Asforme,Ihavetakenanactivepartintheactivity.Ithinkitisveryimportantforusstudentstodomorereading.Atthesametime,I'dliketorecommendyoutoreadJourneytotheWest,oneofthemostfamousnovelsinChina.I'msureyouwilllikeit.Bestwishestoyou.Yours,LiMing【詳解】1.題干解讀：該題目屬于書信作文寫作，在寫作時(shí)承接開頭，點(diǎn)明寫作目的；第二段具體介紹了活動(dòng)的目的和形式；第三段說明了自己對(duì)活動(dòng)的看法；最后問候結(jié)尾。2.寫作指導(dǎo)：本文主要用第一人稱來介紹“書香校園”的活動(dòng)，時(shí)態(tài)采用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。在介紹活動(dòng)目的和活動(dòng)形式時(shí)，還介紹了活動(dòng)的影響，詳細(xì)生動(dòng)；在介紹自己對(duì)活動(dòng)的看法和推薦名著時(shí)，銜接流暢，條理清晰。（八）假如你叫李華，你的美國網(wǎng)友Peter打籃球時(shí)意外受傷，請你用英文給他發(fā)一封電子郵件。主要內(nèi)容包括：1.詢問病情；2.介紹一下你近期學(xué)?；顒?dòng)及學(xué)習(xí)情況；3.表達(dá)祝愿。注意:1.字?jǐn)?shù)控制在80-100詞左右；2.不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的校名和姓名；3.開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。DearPeter,How’sitgoing?I’msorrytohearthat._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours，LiHua【答案】例文：DearPeter,How’sitgoing?I’msorrytohearthatyougotinjuredwhileplayingbasketball.Youshouldhaveagoodrestathome.Andyou’dbettertakecareofyourselfwhenyoudosports.Everythinggoeswellhere!Ienjoygreatchangesinmyschool.Ontheonehand,theteachersmaketheirteachingstylescolorful.Inmyscienceclass,myteacheralwaysencouragesustothink,andcultivatesourabilitytostudyindependently.Ontheotherhand,wehaveplentyoftimetotrywhatwewanttodo.WehadourSchoolDaylastweek.Therearedifferentkindsofactivities,suchasspeechcontest,talentshow,volunteeringandsoon.ItookpartintheEnglishspeechcontest,andIwonthefirstprize.IwillsendyousomephotosaboutmySchoolDayifyoulike.Hopeyou’llgetbetter,andbebacktoyourschoolassoonaspossible.Bestwishes!Yours,LiHua【詳解】1.題干解讀：該題目屬于書信寫作。在寫作時(shí)應(yīng)緊接開頭繼續(xù)寫作，根據(jù)題目要求詢問病情，講述自己的學(xué)?；顒?dòng)及學(xué)習(xí)近況，并表達(dá)良好的祝愿。2.寫作指導(dǎo)：本文用第一人稱來寫作；時(shí)態(tài)采用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主，講述自己的學(xué)?；顒?dòng)及學(xué)習(xí)近況敘述完整，條理清晰。（九）預(yù)防近視現(xiàn)在，學(xué)生近視的越來越多，視力狀況堪憂。請你從用眼健康角度寫一篇預(yù)防近視文章。要求;語句通順，字?jǐn)?shù)100左右。

滿分優(yōu)秀范文：Protectoureyes

Nowadays,wearelivinginthedigitalage.Electronicproductsmakeourlifemorecolorful,buttheyalsodogreatharmtooureyes.Protectingoureyesightisnowbecomingmoreandmoreimportant.

Toprotectoureyesight,first,weshouldn’twatchthecomputersfortoolong.Weshouldrestoureyesbywatchingoutsidefromtimetotime.Second,wemustn’tusesmartphonesindark.It’sbadforoureyes.We’dbetterreadpaperbooksinsteadofe-books.Also,Weneedtotakemoreoutdoorexerciseandeatmoregreenvegetablesandfruits.Theyareallgoodforoureyes.Asthesayinggoes,eyesarethewindowofourminds.Let’stakeactions,paymoreattentiontothehealthofoureyesandformagoodhabit.Onlyinthisway,canwebeabletoenjoyabrightfuture.（十）學(xué)習(xí)方面的話題俗話說：活到老學(xué)到老。一個(gè)優(yōu)秀的中學(xué)生面臨著很多學(xué)習(xí)的困惑，如何探討、請求或者給與建議、學(xué)習(xí)的心得體會(huì)等，需要初中生經(jīng)過所學(xué)的英語融會(huì)貫通表達(dá)出來。要求100字左右。滿分優(yōu)秀范文：DearXiaohua,Gladtoreceiveyourletter.YouaskedmehowtouseadictionarytolearnEnglish.Herearesomeofmythoughts